~*~ FF - Sernthirundhe Kathirundhom... (AbiSh) ~*~ Part 6 - Page 56 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey abi and sush.. its a good strt.. andha cupboard scene is like kalyanam mudhal kadhal varai scene..just thonuchu dt scene... strtingae differenta erukku pa.. keep it up!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abinaabi

Adhana... Nalla kellunga sis... Anna na pola dhan thangachiyum irukkum...πŸ˜†


lily sis...en sis ,ippadi enna kaala vaarurenga...hehe...πŸ˜†

Abi...nee irukalam thappu illai..but naan ippa than slow...athanala naan appa eppadi iruntheno appadi iruunga pa rendu perum πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey

Yaaru pa en friend ah kalaikuradhu? πŸ˜†

Update laam ippo kedaiyaadhu... Hehehhe... πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you Sushk and Abi for starting another FF together and one that revolves around KVRL also. First chapter was really interesting and sets a different tone for KR, I'm really looking forward to the story and how their relationship goes!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank You so much for your comments Friends... We hope to fulfill your expectations... πŸ˜ƒ

Since the first chapter was more like a prologue, we are updating today itself... Part 2 would progress a little more and it reveals a couple of things... Looking forward for your feedback Guys... πŸ˜ƒ


FYI : All parts are created with equal contribution from Abi and me!


Part 2 :


Karthik : That's not my problem...

Raji : (Mindvoice) Romba over ah dhaan irukku...

Karthik : Inga edhuvum vaika kudaadhu... And that's final...


K tells and leaves...


Raji : Thimuru thimuru... Idhukku oru vazhi pannuren...


At the living room...


K mom : Raji... Appa call panni irundhaanga... Safe ah reach aaiyutaanga laam...

Raji : Okay Athai... Appa ennakum call panni irundhaaru...

K mom : Apparom un friend eppa ma varuva? Kaalaila marriage ah mudichuttu two hours la kelambitaale...

Raji : Ava Chennai kku permanent ah shift aaganum... Monday la irundhu work irukku la... So packing and shifting kaaga poi irukka athai... Naalaiku morning dhaan vara...

K mom : Enga ma thanga poraa?

Raji : Flat paarthu irukka Athai... Inimel night dhaan naan phone panni details laam ketkanum...

K mom : Sari... Edhavadhu help venum naa, ketka sollu ma...

Raji : Sure athai...


Vishnu arrives...


Vishnu : Amma.. veedu kku advance kuduthutten... Indha flat kku left veedu booked aam... Nalla vela naan ketaa opposite veedu irundhuchu... Also, already naan book panni irundha house ah cancel panniaachu...

K mom : Sari da... Seekiram dinner mudichuttu poi padu... Ellarum kaalaila seekiram ah elundhirikanum...

Vishnu : (Nods) Karthi enga ma?

K mom : Maadi la irupaan poi paaru...


V nods...


In the terrace...


Karthik stood leaning on the wall... Looking at the sky...


Vishnu : Dei inga ninnutu enna da pannura?

Karthik : Chumma dhan... Kaathu vangitu irundhen...

Vishnu : Enna da kalyanam aaiduchu un face la andha sandhoshame theriyalaye?

Karthik : Adhukku enna panna solra?

Vishnu : Illa da sirichukite irundhaa dhaane nalla irukkum...

Karthik : Hehehehe... Podhuma...

Vishnu : Machan... Dhaivu senchu inimel sirichudadhe da...

Karthik : Enna da nakkal ah? Naane kadupula irukken idhula nee vera...

Vishnu : Unnaku enna kadupu ippo?

Karthik : En unnaku theriyadhaa?

Vishnu : Theriyum... Ippo enna aachu... Andha matter ah sollu...

Karthik : Dei ava paatuku en room la vandhu irukka da...

Vishnu : Yaaru?

Karthik : Adhaan... Ava dhaan...

Vishnu : Ava dhaan naa... Eva?


Karthik glares at him...


Vishnu : Sari moraikadha da... En da un pondatti un room la thangama vera yaru room la da irupaanga?

Karthik : Ava onnum en pondatti kedaiyaadhu...

Vishnu : Sari vidu... Un wife...

Karthik : Dei naan serious ah pesitu irukken... Nee paatuku mokka potutu irukka...

Vishnu : Naa onnum mokka podala... Unmai ah dhaan solren... Raji kazhuthula nee moonu mudichu potu irukka... Adhanala avanga un wife dhaan...

Karthik : Nee ivalo easy ah solitaa... Anaa ennala avala wife ah ethukka mudiyala...

Vishnu : Adhaan ketkuren... En da?

Karthik : Dei... Unnaku theriyaadha? Idha pathi kalyanathukku munnadiye pesittom...

Vishnu : Pch... Adhu appo da... Ippavum nee adhe sonna naa eppadi?

Karthik : Eppavum adhe dhaan...

Vishnu : Purinjuko da... Veetukku therinjaa periyaa pretchanai aaiyudum...

Karthik : Yaarukum theriyaadhu...

Vishnu : Dei sol--

Karthik : Plus, avangalukaaga kalyanam panniaachu... Ippo vaazhradha naan dhaan decide pannanum...

Vishnu : Unnaku laam advice panna vandhen paaru... Enna sollanum... Edho pannu... Keela dinner ready nnu nenaikkuren, vaasanai varudhu... Vaa polaam...

Karthik : Naan varala da...

Vishnu : Haiyoo... Vaada please...


Vishnu drags K to the dining room...


K mom : Vaanga vaanga... Oru two minutes la food table kku vandhudum...

Vishnu : Innaiku enna special?

K mom : Venn Pongal, Sambar, Dosai, Vadai, Chutney, Phulka, Vegetable Kuruma...

Vishnu : Ada ada... Super menu ma... Idhu ellam paarkum bodhu, ennakum cook pannanum nnu aasai varudhu...

K mom : (Looks up) Venkateshwara indha pullai kku nalla budhi ah kudu... (To Vishnu) Dei, nee samaikuradha nee mattum dhaan saapidanum... Adhuve doubt dhaan...

Vishnu : Maa neengale ippadi sonna naan enna pannuradhu? Sari, ellaroda nallan ah karudhi indha plan ah naan stop panniduren...


Everyone laughs...


Karthik : Maa pasikudhu ma...

K mom : Iru da... Appa apparom Jo varattum...

Karthik : (Shouts) Appa vaanga... Ey Jo... Vaa...


K dad and Jo come after a few minutes...


Jo : Edhukku daa kathitte irukka?

Karthik : Avan avanukku pasikudhu neenga rendu perum hai ah nadandhu vareenga...

K dad : Adhaan vandhuttom la...

K mom : Raji food ah kondu vaa ma...

Raji : Sari athai...


Raji brings everything and places it on the table...


She and K's mom serve everyone...


Karthik : Saapadu super... Amma unga kai pakkuvome thani dhaan...

K mom : Dei innaiku Raji dhaan samaichaa da...


Karthik starts coughing...


Raji : (Mindvoice) Thimuru... Enna pannuren nnu paaru...

K mom : Amaa da... Super ah cook panni irukka... Raji kalakeeta... Unga Amma unnaku samaikka theriyaadhu nnu sonna udane, naan kudiyum nambitten... Anaa rusi ah samaikura ma...

Raji : Thanks athai... Avalo laam ennaku theriyaadhu... Amma va paarthu kathukitten, apparom cooking books laam padipen...

K mom : Parava illai ma... Nalla dhaan panni irukke... Poga poga experience varum...

Raji : (Nods) Avaru onnume sollalaiye... (Looks at K teasingly)


Karthik starts coughing again...


Raji : Ennanga aachu... Paarthu saapudunga... (Pats K's head)

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Ennadi kalaikuriyaa?

Raji : Sappdunga... Chutney vaikkatuma?

Karthik : No vendaam... Venum naa naane ketkuren...

Vishnu : (Mindvoice) Ulaga maha nadipu da saami...

Jo : Anni avanuku venam ennaku podunga... Chutney romba nalla irukku Anni... Athai ungaluku samaikka varadhu nu sonnanga... Anaa ippave neenga ippadi samaikkureenga... Kathukitta... Innum super ah irukkum...

Raji : (Smiles) Idho vaikkuren... Thanks ma... Unnaku enna venunaalum kelu... Naan senju tharen...

Jo : Kandipaa Anni...

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Ennaku thangatchi ah irundhuttu ippadi irukkale... Cha...

Vishnu : Amaa Raji... Neenga super ah samaikureenga... Pakathu veetula vera irukken ah... So adikadi inga dhaan vadhu saapiduven...

Raji : Daily ungalukku naan samaichu kudukuren Vishnu... Oru aalu kku dhaane extra...

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Saapuda kaaga ice vaikkuraane...

Raji : Nalla saapdunga... Ippadi laam saapta udambu la ottadhu... Irunga sambar vaikkuren... (She looks at him teasingly...)


She pours sambar on Karthik's plate...


Karthik : Naan saaptukuren... Podhum podhum...

Raji : Hmm...

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Iva ingaye ninnutu irundhaa enna embarrass paduthuvaa... So avalaiyum saapida solla laam... (Talks) Neeyum utkarndhu saapudu...

Raji : Illainga... Naan apparom saapiduren...

K mom : Neeyum utkaaru ma... Avan dhaan paasama solraan la...

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Sutham...

Vishnu : (Whispers to K) Enna machaan... Over nadips ah irukku...

Karthik : Dei pesaama iru daa... Saaptu mudikura varaikkum dhaane...

Vishnu : Nadathu da nadathu...


Everyone finishes having dinner...


K dad : Super saapadu ma... Banglore la irundhu adikadi un saapadu kaagave vara poraen...

Raji : (Smiles) Kandipaa vaanga Mama... Ungalukku naan samaichu tharen...

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Naan iva sappada daily sapptu inga irunthu oda poraen...

K mom : Naanga laam samaikura aal maadhiri theriyalai oh?

K dad : Adhu illa... Raji style of cooking different ah irukku la... 25 varushama un saapada dhaane saaptu irukken...

Raji : (Laughs) Athai athai... Kadaisi varaikkum unga saapada dhaan Maama saapuduvaaru... Chumma solraaru...

K mom : Chumma va? Nee vera ma... Saapidum bodhu sathame podaama saaptaare... Appo ve theriyalai ah? Avalo rasichu saapitu irukaar...

Raji : Thanks Mama... Neenga vara appo laam naan samaichu tharen...


A few hours later...


K mom : Vishnu nee guest room la paduthuko... Alarm vachuttu thoongu...

Vishnu : Sari ma...


Vishnu leaves...


KR go to their room...


Raji : Ennaku luggage unpacking velai laam irukku... The light will be on for a while...

Karthik : Naan mela poraen... Kaalaila dhaan varuven... Nobody wants to be here...

Raji : Adha modhala sei... Goodbye...


Karthik goes to the terrace... Raji finishes everything and heads to her bed...


Soi Soi... Soi Soi... Her phone rings...


Raji : Noor aaiyusu di unnaku...


She picks up the call...


Caller : Hello... Naan Lakshmi pesuren...

Raji : Sollu di... Ippo dhaan unna pathi nenaichutte room kulla vandhen... Correct ah call panure... Adhaan noor aaiyusu nnu sollite phone eduthen...

Lakshmi : Sari sari... Eppadi irukke?

Raji : Ennadi pudhusa ketkura?

Lakshmi : Unna idhu varaikkum oru naal kudiyum paarkama irundhadhu illa... Adhaan...

Raji : Sari idhuve first and last ah irukkatum... Inimel dhaan daily office la paarpom la...

Lakshmi : Hmm... Sari enna solraaru un husband?

Raji : Onnum sollala... Idhe maadhiri pesaama irundhaa kodi namaskaaram...

Lakshmi : Ey appo...

Raji : Pch... Adhaan kalyanathukku munnadiye idha pathi pesittom la...

Lakshmi : Sari sari... Cool... Veetula edhuvum ketkalaiyaa?

Raji : (Laughs) Adhukku oru master plan ah execute panniaachu...

Lakshmi : Ennadi solra?


Raji explains everything that happened at the dining table...


Lakshmi : (Laughs) Adipaavi... Kedi di nee...

Raji : Un friend ah irundhuttu pinna?

Lakshmi : Haan... Of course...

Raji : Sari nee saaptiyaa?

Lakshmi : Aachu di... Amma idli kuduthu vitaanga... Saapten...

Raji : Okay di...

Lakshmi : Enga irundhu call pannura?

Raji : Veetula...

Lakshmi : Adhu illa... Un pakkathula...

Raji : Cha cha... Naan en room la irukken... Avan maadi kku poi irukaan...

Lakshmi : Oh okay...

Raji : Un veetu address laam kudu di... Naalaikku varen...

Lakshmi : Naan veetukku poittu call pannuren di...

Raji : Sari okay...

Lakshmi : Hmm... Apparom unnaku anga comfortable ah dhaane irukku?

Raji : Ellam okay dhaan di... Athai Maama apparom Jo, ellarum paasama dhaan irukaanga...

Lakshmi : Ennadi solla vendiyaa person ah vittuta?

Raji : Avan ah pathi pesaadhe di...

Lakshmi : Ey adhu illa... Naa--

Raji : Please Lakshmi... Kadupu aagudhu... Avan--


Raji looks towards the door... Shock...


To Be Continued...


Precap :

Who/What is at the door?

Another surprise/shock on the way...

Stay Tuned...


~~ Sush and Abi ~~
Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sush and Abi..You have rocked in making me visualize KR here.,Cold war between KR..loving it..I especially loved Raji teasing game with karthik while having rock..
I dont see the serial for more than 3 months..This story made me to read again...

I am not active now still loving it..

Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Wow.. Superb update...

Semma faaastah varuthu update... Thank u so much, Dears..


Indha storyline super ah irukku... Indha KR kullah appadi enna sandai... Very curious to know... Lakshmi vandhaachu... Super... Super...

Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update.. dinner table was scene.. karthik and raji kula ennathapa agreement orae confusinga erukkuπŸ˜•πŸ˜•.. raji orae nakkal pidichavala eruppa polaiyae... vishnu left side flat booked nu sonnanae apo lakshmi anga tha varaporala??.. thanks for gvng the update soon..
Edited by srithu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
What a surprise ? Update super fasta kuduthurukanga pulinga.

KR ku sandaiya and its look like an agreement marriage .

Dinner table scene super . Raji cookingku elam support , pavam Karthik πŸ˜†
Karthik expression nenaichi partha πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

KV pesurathu konjam confusea iruku πŸ˜•


Lakshmi !!!!! . So avalukum teriyudu KR matter .

Athu yena matter dears . πŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
First thanks for d pm abi and sush.. superb title totally a different one..

I really enjoyed dis story and totally a different track which made me to visualize d scene as i was reading.. starting lines wer so picture perfect which made me to imagine a real wedding great job by both of u πŸ‘ πŸ‘. I was wondering y K is behaving to R like dis and y dnt he like her though they love each other. But after reading d next part i came to knw even R is in d same position of K..

So except K all r happy for R.. dinning hall scene super wen R was teasing K πŸ˜† πŸ˜†.. nice cold war s gng between KR.. So VL knws wat has happened in KR life before der marriage na..

Eagerly waiting to knw wat has happened between them.. waiting for d next part abi and sush..
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