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Raji : (Mindvoice) Romba over ah dhaan irukku...
Karthik : Inga edhuvum vaika kudaadhu... And that's final...
K tells and leaves...
Raji : Thimuru thimuru... Idhukku oru vazhi pannuren...
At the living room...
K mom : Raji... Appa call panni irundhaanga... Safe ah reach aaiyutaanga laam...
Raji : Okay Athai... Appa ennakum call panni irundhaaru...
K mom : Apparom un friend eppa ma varuva? Kaalaila marriage ah mudichuttu two hours la kelambitaale...
Raji : Ava Chennai kku permanent ah shift aaganum... Monday la irundhu work irukku la... So packing and shifting kaaga poi irukka athai... Naalaiku morning dhaan vara...
K mom : Enga ma thanga poraa?
Raji : Flat paarthu irukka Athai... Inimel night dhaan naan phone panni details laam ketkanum...
K mom : Sari... Edhavadhu help venum naa, ketka sollu ma...
Raji : Sure athai...
Vishnu arrives...
Vishnu : Amma.. veedu kku advance kuduthutten... Indha flat kku left veedu booked aam... Nalla vela naan ketaa opposite veedu irundhuchu... Also, already naan book panni irundha house ah cancel panniaachu...
K mom : Sari da... Seekiram dinner mudichuttu poi padu... Ellarum kaalaila seekiram ah elundhirikanum...
Vishnu : (Nods) Karthi enga ma?
K mom : Maadi la irupaan poi paaru...
V nods...
In the terrace...
Karthik stood leaning on the wall... Looking at the sky...
Vishnu : Dei inga ninnutu enna da pannura?
Karthik : Chumma dhan... Kaathu vangitu irundhen...
Vishnu : Enna da kalyanam aaiduchu un face la andha sandhoshame theriyalaye?
Karthik : Adhukku enna panna solra?
Vishnu : Illa da sirichukite irundhaa dhaane nalla irukkum...
Karthik : Hehehehe... Podhuma...
Vishnu : Machan... Dhaivu senchu inimel sirichudadhe da...
Karthik : Enna da nakkal ah? Naane kadupula irukken idhula nee vera...
Vishnu : Unnaku enna kadupu ippo?
Karthik : En unnaku theriyadhaa?
Vishnu : Theriyum... Ippo enna aachu... Andha matter ah sollu...
Karthik : Dei ava paatuku en room la vandhu irukka da...
Vishnu : Yaaru?
Karthik : Adhaan... Ava dhaan...
Vishnu : Ava dhaan naa... Eva?
Karthik glares at him...
Vishnu : Sari moraikadha da... En da un pondatti un room la thangama vera yaru room la da irupaanga?
Karthik : Ava onnum en pondatti kedaiyaadhu...
Vishnu : Sari vidu... Un wife...
Karthik : Dei naan serious ah pesitu irukken... Nee paatuku mokka potutu irukka...
Vishnu : Naa onnum mokka podala... Unmai ah dhaan solren... Raji kazhuthula nee moonu mudichu potu irukka... Adhanala avanga un wife dhaan...
Karthik : Nee ivalo easy ah solitaa... Anaa ennala avala wife ah ethukka mudiyala...
Vishnu : Adhaan ketkuren... En da?
Karthik : Dei... Unnaku theriyaadha? Idha pathi kalyanathukku munnadiye pesittom...
Vishnu : Pch... Adhu appo da... Ippavum nee adhe sonna naa eppadi?
Karthik : Eppavum adhe dhaan...
Vishnu : Purinjuko da... Veetukku therinjaa periyaa pretchanai aaiyudum...
Karthik : Yaarukum theriyaadhu...
Vishnu : Dei sol--
Karthik : Plus, avangalukaaga kalyanam panniaachu... Ippo vaazhradha naan dhaan decide pannanum...
Vishnu : Unnaku laam advice panna vandhen paaru... Enna sollanum... Edho pannu... Keela dinner ready nnu nenaikkuren, vaasanai varudhu... Vaa polaam...
Karthik : Naan varala da...
Vishnu : Haiyoo... Vaada please...
Vishnu drags K to the dining room...
K mom : Vaanga vaanga... Oru two minutes la food table kku vandhudum...
Vishnu : Innaiku enna special?
K mom : Venn Pongal, Sambar, Dosai, Vadai, Chutney, Phulka, Vegetable Kuruma...
Vishnu : Ada ada... Super menu ma... Idhu ellam paarkum bodhu, ennakum cook pannanum nnu aasai varudhu...
K mom : (Looks up) Venkateshwara indha pullai kku nalla budhi ah kudu... (To Vishnu) Dei, nee samaikuradha nee mattum dhaan saapidanum... Adhuve doubt dhaan...
Vishnu : Maa neengale ippadi sonna naan enna pannuradhu? Sari, ellaroda nallan ah karudhi indha plan ah naan stop panniduren...
Everyone laughs...
Karthik : Maa pasikudhu ma...
K mom : Iru da... Appa apparom Jo varattum...
Karthik : (Shouts) Appa vaanga... Ey Jo... Vaa...
K dad and Jo come after a few minutes...
Jo : Edhukku daa kathitte irukka?
Karthik : Avan avanukku pasikudhu neenga rendu perum hai ah nadandhu vareenga...
K dad : Adhaan vandhuttom la...
K mom : Raji food ah kondu vaa ma...
Raji : Sari athai...
Raji brings everything and places it on the table...
She and K's mom serve everyone...
Karthik : Saapadu super... Amma unga kai pakkuvome thani dhaan...
K mom : Dei innaiku Raji dhaan samaichaa da...
Karthik starts coughing...
Raji : (Mindvoice) Thimuru... Enna pannuren nnu paaru...
K mom : Amaa da... Super ah cook panni irukka... Raji kalakeeta... Unga Amma unnaku samaikka theriyaadhu nnu sonna udane, naan kudiyum nambitten... Anaa rusi ah samaikura ma...
Raji : Thanks athai... Avalo laam ennaku theriyaadhu... Amma va paarthu kathukitten, apparom cooking books laam padipen...
K mom : Parava illai ma... Nalla dhaan panni irukke... Poga poga experience varum...
Raji : (Nods) Avaru onnume sollalaiye... (Looks at K teasingly)
Karthik starts coughing again...
Raji : Ennanga aachu... Paarthu saapudunga... (Pats K's head)
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Ennadi kalaikuriyaa?
Raji : Sappdunga... Chutney vaikkatuma?
Karthik : No vendaam... Venum naa naane ketkuren...
Vishnu : (Mindvoice) Ulaga maha nadipu da saami...
Jo : Anni avanuku venam ennaku podunga... Chutney romba nalla irukku Anni... Athai ungaluku samaikka varadhu nu sonnanga... Anaa ippave neenga ippadi samaikkureenga... Kathukitta... Innum super ah irukkum...
Raji : (Smiles) Idho vaikkuren... Thanks ma... Unnaku enna venunaalum kelu... Naan senju tharen...
Jo : Kandipaa Anni...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Ennaku thangatchi ah irundhuttu ippadi irukkale... Cha...
Vishnu : Amaa Raji... Neenga super ah samaikureenga... Pakathu veetula vera irukken ah... So adikadi inga dhaan vadhu saapiduven...
Raji : Daily ungalukku naan samaichu kudukuren Vishnu... Oru aalu kku dhaane extra...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Saapuda kaaga ice vaikkuraane...
Raji : Nalla saapdunga... Ippadi laam saapta udambu la ottadhu... Irunga sambar vaikkuren... (She looks at him teasingly...)
She pours sambar on Karthik's plate...
Karthik : Naan saaptukuren... Podhum podhum...
Raji : Hmm...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Iva ingaye ninnutu irundhaa enna embarrass paduthuvaa... So avalaiyum saapida solla laam... (Talks) Neeyum utkarndhu saapudu...
Raji : Illainga... Naan apparom saapiduren...
K mom : Neeyum utkaaru ma... Avan dhaan paasama solraan la...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Sutham...
Vishnu : (Whispers to K) Enna machaan... Over nadips ah irukku...
Karthik : Dei pesaama iru daa... Saaptu mudikura varaikkum dhaane...
Vishnu : Nadathu da nadathu...
Everyone finishes having dinner...
K dad : Super saapadu ma... Banglore la irundhu adikadi un saapadu kaagave vara poraen...
Raji : (Smiles) Kandipaa vaanga Mama... Ungalukku naan samaichu tharen...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Naan iva sappada daily sapptu inga irunthu oda poraen...
K mom : Naanga laam samaikura aal maadhiri theriyalai oh?
K dad : Adhu illa... Raji style of cooking different ah irukku la... 25 varushama un saapada dhaane saaptu irukken...
Raji : (Laughs) Athai athai... Kadaisi varaikkum unga saapada dhaan Maama saapuduvaaru... Chumma solraaru...
K mom : Chumma va? Nee vera ma... Saapidum bodhu sathame podaama saaptaare... Appo ve theriyalai ah? Avalo rasichu saapitu irukaar...
Raji : Thanks Mama... Neenga vara appo laam naan samaichu tharen...
A few hours later...
K mom : Vishnu nee guest room la paduthuko... Alarm vachuttu thoongu...
Vishnu : Sari ma...
Vishnu leaves...
KR go to their room...
Raji : Ennaku luggage unpacking velai laam irukku... The light will be on for a while...
Karthik : Naan mela poraen... Kaalaila dhaan varuven... Nobody wants to be here...
Raji : Adha modhala sei... Goodbye...
Karthik goes to the terrace... Raji finishes everything and heads to her bed...
Soi Soi... Soi Soi... Her phone rings...
Raji : Noor aaiyusu di unnaku...
She picks up the call...
Caller : Hello... Naan Lakshmi pesuren...
Raji : Sollu di... Ippo dhaan unna pathi nenaichutte room kulla vandhen... Correct ah call panure... Adhaan noor aaiyusu nnu sollite phone eduthen...
Lakshmi : Sari sari... Eppadi irukke?
Raji : Ennadi pudhusa ketkura?
Lakshmi : Unna idhu varaikkum oru naal kudiyum paarkama irundhadhu illa... Adhaan...
Raji : Sari idhuve first and last ah irukkatum... Inimel dhaan daily office la paarpom la...
Lakshmi : Hmm... Sari enna solraaru un husband?
Raji : Onnum sollala... Idhe maadhiri pesaama irundhaa kodi namaskaaram...
Lakshmi : Ey appo...
Raji : Pch... Adhaan kalyanathukku munnadiye idha pathi pesittom la...
Lakshmi : Sari sari... Cool... Veetula edhuvum ketkalaiyaa?
Raji : (Laughs) Adhukku oru master plan ah execute panniaachu...
Lakshmi : Ennadi solra?
Raji explains everything that happened at the dining table...
Lakshmi : (Laughs) Adipaavi... Kedi di nee...
Raji : Un friend ah irundhuttu pinna?
Lakshmi : Haan... Of course...
Raji : Sari nee saaptiyaa?
Lakshmi : Aachu di... Amma idli kuduthu vitaanga... Saapten...
Raji : Okay di...
Lakshmi : Enga irundhu call pannura?
Raji : Veetula...
Lakshmi : Adhu illa... Un pakkathula...
Raji : Cha cha... Naan en room la irukken... Avan maadi kku poi irukaan...
Lakshmi : Oh okay...
Raji : Un veetu address laam kudu di... Naalaikku varen...
Lakshmi : Naan veetukku poittu call pannuren di...
Raji : Sari okay...
Lakshmi : Hmm... Apparom unnaku anga comfortable ah dhaane irukku?
Raji : Ellam okay dhaan di... Athai Maama apparom Jo, ellarum paasama dhaan irukaanga...
Lakshmi : Ennadi solla vendiyaa person ah vittuta?
Raji : Avan ah pathi pesaadhe di...
Lakshmi : Ey adhu illa... Naa--
Raji : Please Lakshmi... Kadupu aagudhu... Avan--
Raji looks towards the door... Shock...
To Be Continued...
Precap :
Who/What is at the door?
Another surprise/shock on the way...
Stay Tuned...
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