Nalla thoru aarambam...
Pls update regularly
Originally posted by: sizzling78
wow semma start Dewi sis πππ
ur way of imagination is vry nice πVichu sir K part was gud nicely portrayed ππΌKV scene comedyah start aagi knjm serious ah finish aachu π ana K L ah pathi sollarane appo L entry ah π²KR scene ... ada yen sis suspense vechiteenga πK R oda bangalora ponnara illa R bangalore vandhu surprise kuduthangala can't guess πeagerly waiting for ur next one when it is sis
Nice..
Nalla thoru aarambam...
Pls update regularly
Super start Devi π
Simple and apt beginning... Great... πEvery scene was fit and apt... Good Job... πDo continue... π
Originally posted by: Smiles-20
Happy to see you writing Devino, I like the start and how it connects with the show. Wonder what Karthik will say when he sees Raji. Like Anitha was mentioning, I think if you write in the commonly used Tamil that might help especially for readers like me you are not so fluent in Tamil lol. Waiting for the next part.
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