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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good one bro...

Neengalum final touch vaikaa aarambichiteengala, nadathunga nadathunga πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all ..Welcome to this forum 😊😊
I have read the two parts... no words.. its really good..πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Hmmm..ippadi mattum office la nadandhal...romba nalla irukumπŸ˜‰ . What do you think guys?😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Karthik : Porukkadhe evanukkum namma nalla jolly a irundha. Yaaru adhu? Nenachen ivana thaan irukkanum nu. Party la iruppan adhaan ippa thanniya pottukittu enakku phone panraan. Innikku ivana..

When he was about to answer the call Raji asks for the phone. Karthik gives the phone to her.

Raji : Hello.

Vishnu (drunk) : Yaaru pesuringa Karthi kitta phone a kudunga. Avan kitta thaan pesanum.

Raji : Avaru ellam pesa maattaru edhunaalum enkitta sollunga naan avarukitta vishayatha solliduren.

Vishnu : Adhu eppadinga ungala yaaru nu theriyadhu. Vishayatha sollu na naan eppadi solradhu?

Raji(laughing silently) : Appo solla venam phone a vainga.

Vishnu : Idhu ellam konjam kooda nalla illainga. Evalavu varushama naanga friends a pazhagi irukkom. Innikku vandha unga kitta phone a kuduthu avan enna avoid panraana? Sari irukkattum vidunga naan avan kitta naalaikku pesikkiren. En saarba avanukku puthaandu vaazhthu sollirunga. Phone a vaikkiren.

Raji & Karthik laugh. Now in the bar Vishnu with anbu.

Vishnu : Annan indha Karthi panra velaiya paathingala? Phone panna avan edukkama ippa pudhusa kedachirukka oru mukkiyamaana aala vachu enna kalaikkiraan. Cha indha friends a mukkiyamaana nerathula nambave koodadhu. Yaaro oru figure kaaga ippadi enna asinga pada vachutaane annan. Aduthu oru large oothunga annan appo thaan indha yemaatratha thaangikira sakthi enakku kidaikkum.

Anbu : Indha saapdu pa. Dei Vishnu un friend Karthi venum na appadi pannalam aana en thangachi Raji ku ippa phone pottu pesuren paaru. Adhu eppadi enakku madhippu kuduthu mariyaadhaiya pesa pogudhu nu unakku speaker phone la pottu kaatturen paaru.

Now Anbu calls Raji's number. This time Karthik gets the phone from Raji and answers the call.

Karthik : Hello.

Anbu(blinking at Vishnu) : Hello neenga yaaru pesuringa?

Karthik : Oru number ku call pannittu neenga yaaru pesuringa nu ketta enna artham? Yaaru venum nu kelunga.

Anbu(hesitating) : Illa Raji irundha avanga kitta pesanum.

Karthik : Raji irukkanga aana avanga kitta ippa pesa mudiyadhu enna pannalam? Vishayatha sollunga enna nu.

Anbu : Illa puthaandu vaazhthu sollanum. Adhaan...

Karthik : Sari sollunga puthaandu vaazhthu enkitta naan solliduren.

Anbu : Happy New Year.

Karthik : Thanks wish you the same. Naan avanga kitta solliduren. Phone a vainga.

Now both Karthik & Raji laugh crazily. In the bar Anbu slowly looking towards Vishnu.

Vishnu : Enna annan Raji ku phone panni vaazthu sollitingala?

Anbu : Solliyachu pa unakkum vaazhthu solla solluchu.

Vishnu : Appadiya nambitten annan nambitten. Kadaisi varaikkum speaker phone la podavae illaiyae annan neenga. Edhukku bulb vaangittu meesai la mannu ottadha feel a kudukkuringa ippa? Phone la pesinadhu oru aambala thaana? Kadaisi varaikkum Raji kitta pesa vitturukka maatane. Enga illa nu mattum sollunga paapom.

Anbu : aama pa why blood same blood.

Vishnu : Vidunga annan avanga rendu perukkum avangaloda mukkiyamana aalu thaan nammala vida mukkiyama pochu. Adhaan kandukka maatinguraanga. Aduthu paakkum podhu rendu peraiyum onna nikka vachu naakka pudingikira maadhiri naalu kelvi ketkanum.

Anbu : Vishnu aana enkitta phone la pesina voice namma Karthi oda voice maadhiriye irundhuchu pa.

Vishnu : Annan enakkum naan ketta voice Raji voice maadhirye irundhuchu. Aana adhu ellam verum brammai annan . Namma Karthik - Raji onna irukka maadhiriye feel panrom la adhaan appadi yaaru pesinaalum avanga voice maadhiriye kekkudhu vera onnum illa.

Anbu : Empa oru vela avanga rendu perum onna irundhu nammala kalaikkiraangalo?

Vishnu : Annan summa bodhai la comedy pannadhinga. Avanga rendu perum ippa appadiye onna sendhutaalum. Adhu ellam ippodhaikku kanavula kooda nadakkadhu. Avangala thaan namma romba naala paathuttu irukkome. Oru prachanai na adha kadaisi varaikkum kondu poi onna seruradhu thaan avanga style. Ippa poikittu irukkira prachanai la divorce ku court la theerpu varum podhu thaan onna sera poraanga. Adhu varaikkum namma velaiya amaidhiya paapom. Advance Happy New Year annan.

Anbu : Advance happy new year pa. Nee solradhum correct thaan. Naan thaan thappu kanakku pottutten bodhaila.

Now in the beach. Karthik & Raji standing in the beach as the waves wash their feet. Karthik tries to lift her but she pushes him and he fell down. She tries to pull him back by giving her hand. But he pulls her towards him and she fell down this time on him. Their dress now becomes wet and they come to the place where they have been sitting before.

Raii : Poda naan appavae sonnen la anga vandha en saree ellam nenanju eeram aayirum nu ippa paaru eppadi irukku nu.

Karthik(laughing) : Unakku enna fulla nenanju innum amsama irukka ippa paarkiradhukku.

Raji : Adi vaanga pora indha eerathoda mannula ukkaandhu ezhumbum podhu en saree ellam manna irukka pogudhu po. Vaa namma veettukku kelambuvom mani 11'o clock aaga pogudhu.

Karthik : Iru di polam. Oru 10 mins innum oru mukkiyamaana matter irukku. Adha mudichittu pogalam.

Raji : Enna andha mukkiyamana matter?

Karthik : Un chellathukku nee restaurant la vachu gift kudutha. Naan en chellathukku beach la vachu feeling oda kudutha thaana nalla irukkum.

Now he takes a small tiny box from his pant pocket and opens it. It was a gold ring.

Raji (excited) : Idhu eppada vaangina suspensa? Hmm periya aalu thaan nee. Restaurant la kettadhukku edhuvum theriyadha maadhiri feel a vera kudutha nalla.

Karthik (smiles) : Indha ring naan last week vaangiyachu. Eppadiyum 31st night unakku veetla vachu kooda surprise kudukkalam nu irundhen. But nee mundhikitta so idha suspense a irukkattum nu maintain pannen. Ippa indha azhagaana kadal alai nila velichathukku munnala unakku idha kudutha nalla irukkum nu thonuchu. Sari kaiya kaattu.

Raji shows her left hand. He puts it in her finger and says "I Love You". Raji gives him a kiss on his hand which put the ring and says "I Love you so much".

Karthik : Iru finishing touch onnu irukku.

He takes dairy milk chocolate from his pocket and gives it to her.

Raji (happy) : adhaana paathen eppavum unkitta irundhu idhu mattum miss aagadhe nu yosichen.

She opens it and puts a piece in her mouth tastes it and asks him by pointing towards her mouth whether he wants to take it right from there. He smiles and takes it gently from where he wanted and tastes it. Now his turn to take a piece and ask her. She takes it but before that she intentionally bites his lips.

Karthik : Naan eppadi soft a endha vidha damage um illama eduthen la. Aana nee ippa edukkuren nu ennoda udhatta damage pannitta. Enakku eriyudhu ippa andha idathula po.

Now she gently kisses where she had bitten him and asks him to get up as it is getting late. They both get up and start to move out.

Raji : Paaru ennoda saree eppadi eeram aagi fulla manna irukku nu. Pudhusa innikku thaan kattinen.

Karthik : Vidu bike la thaana poga porom eeram ellam kaanju dry aagidum. Aana eppadi nalla enjoy pannom la romba naal kazhichu adhu thaana mukkiyam.

Raji : Aama romba naal kazhichu romba santhoshama irundhen . Loved each and every moment of the time spent with you today.

Karthik : Paaa vara vara English la ellam feel panni pichu udharura.

Raji : Poda Office la meeting la ellam appadi pesi pesi unkittaiyum sila neram English kaathu adikkudhu. Romba artificial a irukko appadi pesuradhu?

Karthik : Appadi ellam illa nee eppadi pesinaalum azhaga thaan irukku. Adhuvum unnoda feelings ku kekkava venum.

Raji smiles at him as they reach the bike. Karthik starts the bike as the time is 11.15. They leave the beach. Now Raji opens the door at home goes towards the fridge takes a bottle of ice water drinks it.

Raji : Karthik unakku ice water venuma?

Karthik : Illa venam.

Raji : Vera tea alladhu coffee edhum podava?

Karthik : edhuvum venam.

Raji : Ok appo naan poi thoongava?

Karthik : Sari poi thoongu. Good Night.

Raji (mind voice) : Ada paavi innum 12 mani aaga 2 nimisham thaan irukku . Correct a enakku first wish pannanum nu kooda thonalaiya ivanukku. Waste ippadi thaan adikadi sothappuraan ivana namba koodadhu.

Raji : Sari naan thoonga poren. Good Night kaalaiyila paakkalam.

When she was about to take a step he grabs her hand and pulls towards her.

Karthik : Avalavu seekkiram unna innikku thoonga vitturuvena enna? Innum correct a 60 secs thaan irukku. Adhu varaikkum ennoda kanna aadama asaiyaama paathukittu iru.

Raji looks at him straight into his eyes. Now the clock shows the time exactly 12'o clock as the sound of crackers coming from outside Karthik kisses her and says I Love You & Happy New Year. She says "I Love You & Happy New Year" and when she starts to kiss him he lifts her up gently and takes her to the upstairs. (To be continued)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey..wow..another update.. Super Super..

As usual an awesome update
Edited by Rajee71 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Thanks a lot everyone for the support. My 4th part will take sometime. Moreover i want to finish the parts featuring KR spending together on 31st New Year night with out any long gap. That is why i have given the continuous updates of the first 3 parts. Will update the 4th part maximum in a week's time. Thanks once again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pdineshprabhu

Thanks a lot everyone for the support. My 4th part will take sometime. Moreover i want to finish the parts featuring KR spending together on 31st New Year night with out any long gap. That is why i have given the continuous updates of the first 3 parts. Will update the 4th part maximum in a week's time. Thanks once again.



We will wait... Thank u so much for the wonderful storyline
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Good job bro... πŸ‘

Take your own time, no probs...πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum join in the discussions and games hope you enjoy
Nice Start really liked how you made karthi trim his hair and beard
good jobπŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice part athuvum KR in the beach really nice
thanks for the second part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice updateπŸ‘
No worries take your own time
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