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Chapter 10

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In canteen..

Abishek:appada oru vazhiya workalam complete pannitom..inime konjam freeya irukalam..

Koushik:dei,rombathanda...freeya irupaya?..officela free time a?..appadinu onnu iruntha athu canteenla spend panra time mattum thanda..mind appathan entha tensionum illama food a pathiye ninachukittu irukum..vaai atha rusichukittu irukum.

Abishek:hello boss...naangalum atha than solla vanthom...aana neenga munthikeeteenga..

Laxmi:aamampa,ivanga solradhu than correct,lunch time,interval timela than konjam relax aaga mudiyum..

Susan:seri ippayum worka pathiye peanuma?..seri ellorum enna enna saapadu kondu vanthurukenga?

Raji:naan thayir sadham..

Koushik:inikum athe thana raji??..vera ethuvume ungaluku pidikatha?

Laxmi:nalla kelu koushik..

Raji:koushik...enna panradhu?..ithu than enaku romba pidicha food e..

Susan:rajiya pathi pesina pesikitte irukalam...avalavu comedyana vishayamlam varum.but athuku munnadi mathavangaloda food ennanu sollunga...

Koushik:briyani

Abishek:sambar rice

Laxmi:lemon rice

Susan:naan bisibelabath..

One voice interrupts:naan rasam sadham kondu vandhuruken

All surprised to see Vishnu there

Laxmi:Vishnu...neengala?

Vishnu:aama sakshath vishnuve than..naanum ungaloda utkaarnthu lunch saapidalama?

Susan:oh...sure..vaanga..

Vishnu:thank u..thank u..

Vishnu sat on the chair..

Koushik:vishnu...enna ithu enikum illatha puthumaya iniku engakoda saapida vanthurukeenga?

Vishnu:en vara kudatha?

Laxmi:illa ramar illama laxmanar mattum vanthurukarenu ketom..

Vishnu:oh..puriyuthu...puriyuthu...neenga karthik a pathithana ketkareengala?

Raji:oh...ungaluku theinchurucha?..

Vishnu:aama...hehe

Abishek:ithu naanga vecha peru illai Vishnu...ithu officela ellorum ungaluku vecha peru...atha naangalum follow panrom...avlothan..

Vishnu:ithula enna iruku guys,neenga tharalama ippadi koopidalam...ramar-laxmanarodalam compare panrathu satharana vishayama enna?

Susan:but appadi thana neenga irukeenga...

Vishnu:thank u..thank u..etho engala mudinchathu..

Laxmi:seri neenga eppavum karthikoda than saapiduvenga..iniku en saapidalai

Vishnu:athuva...avaru romba busy...meetingla irukaru chairman oda..naanum wait panni panni paarthen...but vara maathiri theriyalai..athan saapida vanthuten..

Raji:irunthalum sir mattum thaniya saapiduvare..

Vishnu:yaaru sonna appadi?..enaku ippa kolapasi..vitta mayangi vizhunthuduven ippa...athan ippo konjam saapitu apuram karthikoda innoru thadava sapiduven avanuku company koduka..hehe

Laxmi:wow...its beautiful..

Vishnu:aamanga...karthik ennoda best friend,avana thaniya vitruvena enna?

Koushik:good...good..seri Vishnu ungalukulla eppadi ivalavu strongana friendship uruvaachu?...ungaluku problem illaina sollunga illati venam.

Vishnu:ithula enna maraika iruku...naanum karthikum china vayasula irunthulam friends illai..6th grade padikara appothan enaku karthik friend aanan..appuram colglayum sernthu padichom...appuram avanodathan velai seivennu mudivu panni inga vanthen...appadiye vazharntha enga natpu ippa strong basement oda bramaandamai nikuthu avlothan..

Raji:oh...super Vishnu...unga rendu perayum ninaikum pothu,romba perumaiya iruku

Vishnu:thank u ,raji..then neenga ellorum work a kuripitta date ku munnadiye mudichuteenga ...well done..am very happy...ippadi unityoda iruntha pothum,naamathan best teamnu name vanguvom

Abishek:kandipa Vishnu...naanga antha name a kandipa vaanguvom eppavume..

Others in chorus:yeah...naangalum atha than ninaikarom

Vishnu:oh...ippadithan confident a irukanum,guys...seri ippa namma saapadula gavanam seluthuvoma,athu romba varutha paduthu thanna yaarume gavanikalainu..

Laxmi:hahaha...vishnu eppadi ippadilam pesareenga?...

Vishnu:hehe...athuva thonuthu solren..

Susan:neenga romba jolly type nu kelvi pattom..

Vishnu:aama...jolly type than...appadi iruntha than enaku pidikum..but appa appa konjam seriousaavum irupen...ennna lifela jollyave iruntha bore adikumla..athan...hehe...

Koushik:paartheengala guys,namma assistant PM thathuvamlam pesararu..

All giggled a little n starts to relish their lunch..

Vishnu:ok guys..supera pochu lunch time..naan romba enjoy pannen...ippadi time kidaikum pothulam naan ungaloda join pannikaren..ok..

Raji:Vishnu..appadiye sirkum free time iruntha engaloda join panna sollunga...

Vishnu mv:hehe...puriyudhu...puriyudhu...enaku theiryum ithalam nadakumnu...

Vishnu:oh...sure..sure raji...karthika oru naalaikavathu unga elloroda lunch saapida vaikaren..but ippa kilambaren..velai iruku...bye...

All in chorus:bye Vishnu..

Vishnu left the place..

Laxmi:parava illai..nallavar a than irukaaru..

Susan:eppadi appadi solra?

Laxmi:ithula enna aaraichi iruku..avar pesarathe veche theriyuthe...avar eppadi pattvarnu...

Koushik:athu eppadi,oruvara avar pecha vechu nallavrnu mudivu pannalam..

Laxmi:hey..ennaku appadi thonichu sonnen...avlothan..

Abishek:naanga nambitom...

Raji:yei...ennapa ithu ellorum laxmiya ippadi kalaikareenga..vidungapa..

Laxmi:nalla sollu raji...overa than panranga ellorum

Susan:seri...seri...kochukatha...summa than kalaichom...vaanga ellorum namma cubiclesku polam

Koushik:ok polam..


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In cosmetic shop...

Raji was busy searching for gokul sandal powder...meanwhile,she heard some voices near her...there stands mom n daughter talking busily regarding the products...

Daughter:amma,enaku nail polish venum..

Mom:athalam onnum venam...un nagathuku ippa enna kuraichal?...ippadi irunthathan nalla iruku..

Daughter:aana amma...enaku nail polish kandipa venum...aasaiya iruku..

Mom:aana enaku istam illai..

Daughter:aama...pls..

Mom:no way...

Daughter:seri appa lipstick vaangi thaanga..

Mom:lipstick a ?..intha vayasula unaku lipsticklam avasiyame illai..un uthadu innum ketu porathuka?

Daughter:amma u r really too much...intha vayasula podama vera entha vayasula poduvaangalam?

Mom:entha vayasulayum poda kudathu...avlothan..

Daughter:grr...ennamo ponga...but ungala pathi annata complain panniye theeruven...paarunga..

Mom:pannen...avanukum ithalam pidikathunu unaku theriyathu?..hehe

Daughter:cha..appa dad ta solluven.

Mom:avar en pecha than ketpaaru..

Daughter:cha...kudumbame enaku ethira iruke ...naan enna than panrathu ippo?

Mom:hahaha...ellam un nalathukuthan solrendi..seri vera enna venum sollu?..

Daughter:onnum venam..veetuku polam ,vaanga..

Mom:kochukathadi...vena eyeliner eduthukaraya?..super brand a?

Daughter:parava illaiye,ithayathu eduthukalamnu sonnengale...athu varaikum santhosam..

Mom:seri eduthukittu vaa...bill a poda sollalam..

Daughter:ok ma..

Raji keenly listened to their convo...that mom n daughter was none other than K's mom n sister(Maala)

Raji's mv:hmm...romba anbana,akkaraiyana amma,romba settai panra ponnu...azhagana uravu..aana enaku than amma...

Raji's eyes become moist..

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In Raji's home..night time..

Raji dialled meesai no..meesai attends the call.

Meesai:raji..ennama?...innum nee thoongalaya?...mani pathu aaga pothu..

Raji:appa enaku thookam vara maatengathu..

Meesai:en ma...thookam varalai?..saapitaya illaiya?

Raji:saapiten pa..aanalum thookam varalai..

Meesai:raji..un kuralla vithayasam theriyuthe..ennama aachu?..onnum prachanai illaiye?

Raji:appa...

Raji started to sob..meesai gets shocked..

Meesai:raji kannu...ethukuma azahara ippo?...enna aachu?..officela yaarvathu unna ethavathu sonnagalama?

Raji:...

Meesai:solluda...enna aachu..appata sollamaataya?

Raji:appa athu vanthu...

Meesai:kannu...nee ippadiye aluthukitte iruntha enaku romba kasatama iruku ma..thayavu seithu ennanu sollu..

Raji:appa naan oru kadaila...

Meesai:kadaila?enna aachu?..

Raji started to sob again hardly..

Meesai:raji...raji...ethukuma ippadi azahara?appata solla ethuku unaku ivalavu thayakam?

Raji:thayakamlam illaipa...manasuku varuthama iruku..athan..

Meesai:appa ta sonnena un manasu lesa aaidumpa...sollu..

Raji:appa...antha kadaila oru ammavum ponnum porulagala select pannikittu irunthanga..appo antha amma irukaanga paarunga romba strictavum irukaanga,pasamavum irukaanga...appuram antha ponnu padu sutti pola..avangaloda pechu romba azhaga irunthuchu...atha keta udana,enaku ...

Raji cries very hardly now...meesai eyes filled with tears on hearing that news n he could read what is going on in raji's mind

Meesai:raji...ennama ithu?..unaku amma illainu yaaru sonna?..haan?...naan than irukenla unaku ammava,appava...appuram ethuku azhara nee?...

Raji:athu theriyum pa...neenga enna eppadi oru amma paarthupangalo atha vida parthukittu iruntheenga,en ippavum irukeenga... ...aana ammaoda kazhika vendiya antha china china azhagana tharungala naan illanthutene pa..athuthan enaku varuthame...

Meesai:raji..un vedhanai enaku puriyuthuma...

Raji:appa..enpa amma enna vittutu ponanga?...en kodave irunthuruntha naan avangala nalla gavanichukittu irupenla..

Meesai:raji...un amma enga ponna ippa?...kadavulata thana poiruka...kadauvul avala nalla paarthupaar ma...nee kavalaipadhada kannu...

Raji:kadavul ammava nalla paarthuparapa?

Meesai:aamama..kaduvul bathirama paarthupaaru ammava nammalavida...

Raji:aaanlum appa enaku manasula oru oorama varuthamathan irukupa...

Meesai:seri iru...appa udane kilambi varen ippo...thaniya iruklarathunala manasa pottu romba ulatikittu iruka...nee appava paartha udana seri aaiduva..iru ippa poi thuni maniyalam eduthu varikaren...

Raji:appa...athalam venampa...intha rathirilalam neenga traval panna kudathupa...unga udambuku athalam othukathu..

Meesai:illai ma..appa kandipa vara than poren...ne phone a vai seekarama...

Raji:appa..appa...sonna kelunga pa...pls..

Meesai:illai ma,nee romba kavalaiya iruka...nerla vanthu aaruthal sonna than seripadum..

Raji:appa...appa..ippa enaku onnum illai...nalla iruken...manasukulla iruntha ella kavalaiyayum thooki erinchuten...en kurallaye ungaluku athu therinchurukume...

Meesai:appa nee santhosama iruka?

Raji:aamapa...aama..enaku than neenga irukeengale,appuram enna kavalai enaku...

Meesai:athu than en kannu raji..nee ippadi santhosama iruntha than appaku manasu niraiva irukum..

Raji:iruken irukenpa...ungalukaga...aana appa appadi naan irukanumna enaku neenga oru help pannaum..

Meesai:ennama athu?

Raji:neenga enaku oru kathai sollanum...athai irunthapa avanga solluvaanga...ippa avanga oorla irukarathunala neenga than iniku kathai sollanum...enna ithuku sammathama appa?

Meesai:hahaha...seri...seri samathakiren unaku kathai solla..aana ivalavu naala eppadi ma thoongina?

Raji:atha en ketkareenga...ennaye naan samathanam pannipen...thookam avalavu seekaram varathu...aana konja nerathula enna ariyamaiye thoongi poiruven

Meesai:veguliyana ponnu...seri unaku enna kathai venum?...sollu

Raji:enaka?...hmm...takkunu nyabagathula vara maatengathupa...neengale oru nalla kathaiya sollungalen..

Meesai:appadiya?..seri...pesama nee china vayasula enna enna seshtaiyalam pannanu sollava?

Raji:oh...sollungalen...ketkaren..

Meesai:seri kelu..nee chinna paapava irunthapa romba suttiya irupayam..oru naal namma veetu thotathula oru thirudan pugunthutanam...apponu paarthu appa vayalku poi irunthenam...nee mattum than anga irunthayam..avana nee paarthutayam..avan un pakkathula than irunthanam,sedikadila maranchukittu...udane enna pannaiyam,thakkaliya parichu avan moonchila peechi adichayam,...avan ennadana kuyoo muiyoo nu kathinanam avan moonchila etho onna bayangarama oothina maathiri...takkunu enna pannayam podalangaiya eduthu avana saathu saathunu saathinayam...avan bayathula oodiye poitanam nee yaarunu koda theiryama...

Raji laughed louder..

Raji:appa..ivalavu velaiyalam chinna vayasula pannirukena?

Meesai:aamama...innum neraiya iruku..

Raji:eppadipa naan avana adichen..avalavu balasaaliyava irunthen?

Meesai:pinna,nee yaaru...en ponnula...balasaali mattum illai buthisaliyum koda..

Raji:appa enaku sema comedya iruku atha ninachu paarkum pothu...hehe...

Meesai:aamama...nee panna chinna chinna vilayatuthanathalam naan dhinamum ninachu paarpen..athu ninaikum pothu en manasuku aananthama irukum...

Raji:appa...appa...enaku innoru kathai venum...pls...pls...sollungalen..

Meesai:kandipa ma solren...athuvum unna pathi than.enna aachuna,appalam kozhaila thanni adikanum...appatha than thani adipanga...aana nee enna pannayam naan than thanniya adichu kodupeenu romba pidivatham pannayam...serinu vittutangalam...unnala adikave mudiaylayam..moochulam muticham...aanalum nee manasu thalarama thaniya adichu kodathula ropinayam..avalavuthan intha kathai...enna nalla iruka?

Raji:...

Meesai:raji?...unna than ketkaren...nalla iruka ma?

Raji:...

Meesai couldn't hear her voice,but he heard her snoring sound clearly..

Meesai:oh...kannu thoongi poitala...nallathu than...

Meesai cuts the call..

Meesai:munisaami unaku theriyathathu illai...en ponnu rajiku amma pasame kidaikalai...athu evalavu periya illapunu enaku theiryum...aana antha kastatha ava unarathabadi naan avala nalla vazharthen..aanalum avakulla antha ekam neryave iruku...pavam chinna ponnu...romba varutha pattu azhara..ennala atha thaangika mudiyalapa..en usire oru nimsham poidumonu iruku ava azhugaiya kettu...etho ennala mudincha varaikum avaluku oru ammava,appava nadanthukitten...aana naan ponathukappuram rajiya santhosama paarthuka oruthar varanumpa...avar yaaruna rajiya kattika pora paiyan than...avan rajiya kankalangama,kaila vechu thaanganumpa.. ...en usiru porathukulla naan rajiya antha nalla paiyanta opadaikanum.. avar enga irukaro,eppadi irukaro theiryala...aana appadi patta maapillaiya en kanla seekaram kaatirupa...

In the meanwhile,The scene shifted to karthik's room where karthik was sleeping like a handsome prince in his own bed..

The scene ends here showing karthik n raji's sleeping faces with meesai in the middle..

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In k's home..

K's phone buzzed..its none other than his friend,vishnu..K attends the call..

K:Vishnu...ennada theedernu ippa call panniruka?leave naalula rest eduka vendiyathuthana?

V:ahhh...

K:vishnuuu...nee azharaya?

V:aamada aama...azharen..

K:enda?...ennachu?veetula ellam ok thana?

V:veetula ellam ok than enna thavira..

K:ennada solra.olunga than sollen..

V:ennatha solrathu...ellam en neram..

K:Vishnu...en porumaiya romba sothikara...seekarama sollu..enna vishayam?

V:atha en ketkara...enna house arrest panni vechurukangada..

K:enna solra Vishnu?..house arrest a?...yaaru pannanga?..ethukaga pannanga?..

V:vera yaaru ellam en amma than..

K:enna ammava ?...ennada solra?

K smiled a little..

V:adapaavi sirikarya?

K:hehe..illai illai nee sollu..

V:enna nadipu paaren...solren kellu...nethu raathiri naan book a padichukite appadiye thoongi poiten dining table a..en pakkathula amma suuda paalla tumblerla vechu irunthanga..atha naan kudikamaye thoongi poiten..appanu paarthu en appa antha pakkam vanthurukaaru...udane ammata pottu koduthurukaaru..

K:haha...oh ...nee thoonginatha pottu koduthurukara?

V:enaku nalla vaila varuthu solliten..

K:enda kochukara?

V:naan kochukarathu irukatum..neeye kochupa paaru naan solra vishayatha ketu..

K:oh...innum kathai mudiyalaya?

V:aamada mudiyala...inimethan mukiyamana vishayame vara pothu...avaru ammata pottu kudatarnu sonnenla...athu naan thoonginathuku illai..

K:appurom?ethuku?

V:enaku kachal adichathuku..

K:ennada solra?..unaku kachal poiye naalu naal aacheda..

V:naalu naal aagi enna use?... thirumbavum veetula, imsai than

K:ennada solra?..puriyumbadiyave solla maataye?..

V:enna aachuna,en pakkathula paal tumbler irunthuchunu sonnela..

K:aama

V:athu vera suda irukunu sonnenla

K:ada aamada..appuram ennanu than ketkaren..

V:ivar enna koothu pannar theriyumada, enna thottu paarkarathuku badhila paal tumbler a thottu paarthurukaar..athu kothika kothika irunthuchula...atha vechu enaku than udambu kothikuthunu ammata poi ularitaaru...avar appanu paarthu mooku kannadi podala...athala vantha vinai..ammavum avar solradha nambi enna roomla pottu adachu vechutaangada..naan evalavo eduthu sonen enaku kachalum illai,kuchalum illanu,anna amma ketkara maathiriye illai...adachu vechathu koda parava illiada...alopathy,homeopathy,sabapathy,ambikavathi,amaravathi nu etho etho marunthulam koduka porangada...ennala mudiyalada...naan thapikarathuku ethavathu vazhi sollen...pls..

Karthik burst into laughter...

K:Vishnu...ennala...hahahaha...aiyoo saami...sema comedy unga veetula..

V:sirikathada..enaku vairu erinchukittu iruku..

K:athu appadida unga veetula ellorum comedy panreenga ?..

V:venamda...naan kadupula iruken...

K:hahaha...

V:dei...innum nee sirpa niruthalya?...dei karthi..

At that time,v's mom interrupts..

V's mom:yaartada phone pesikittu iruka?

V:hehe...athu vanthu...wrong call ma..

V'smom:wrong call a?...avangalta ivalavu neramava pesuva?

V:hehe...athu illama inime ippadilam call pannatheenganu advice pannikittu iruken..

On the other side,karthik was laughing silently..

V's mom:advice?...athuvum nee?..poi sollatha...konda phone a...naan pesaren..

V:illama...neengalam pesa kudathu..

V's mom:kudunu solrenla..

V's mom grabbed that phone from v..

V's mom:hello...yaarunga neenga?

K:amma ,naan than karthik pesaren.

V's mom:karthik..neeya?...athukuthan ivan ivalavu scene pottana?...seripa eppadi iruka?...veetula ellorum eppadi irukaanga

K:ellorum nalla irukangama ennayum serthu...neenga eppadi irukeenga?

V's mom:enakenapa..nalla iruken...vishnuku than..

K:amma...vishnukulam onnum illama...avan nalla than irukan..

V's mom:appadinu avan sonnana?..nambatha karthik...athanyaum vesham..

V's mv:aama enna vesham athu?..puli vesham a..illa panni veshama?

K:haha...amma tension aagtheega.vishnuku ellam seri aaidum..

V's mom:athu illaipa..otha pullaiya poitan..avana naama thana parthukanum...ivan appa than sonnaru,ivanuku udambu nerupa kothikuthunu..

V:aama avar nerupukulla kaiya vittu paarthurukarakum?

K laughs...v's mom stares at v..

K:puriyudhuma..aana enna nadanthuchunu fulla kelunga avanta..

V's mom:ivanta ketkarathuku ketkamale irukalam..poi than solluvan eppa vaaiya thiranthalum..

Now,V snatched the phone from his mom...

V's mom:appadi enna avasaram vanthathu?..kaachakara paiyanava nadanthukara...cha..karthika pottu imsai paduthatha...olunga thongara vazhiya paaru...solliten...

V's mom vacates the place..v began to spoke to k.

V:karthik...neeye paartheela en nilamiya?...oru nalla ideava koduda pls..

K:neeye samalida atha...ennala onnum panna mudiyathu...amma vera romba sentiya pesaranga...pavamda avanga...pesama nee arrestlaye iru...

V:ada paavi...adapaavi..ethana naal aasaida unaku ippadi enna arrestla vaikanumnu?..

K:paaru Vishnu...samatha thoongara vazhiya paaru...solliten.

V:appa antha karumanthara marunthukitta irunthu epadi thappikarathu?...athayavathu sollen..

K:atha nee than paarthukanum...naan phone a vaikaren...enjoy ur day..

K cuts the call n laughed a little by bitting his tongue..

V:hello...hello...dei...dei...karthi...padupaavi phone a vechutane...ivanta pesinathuku summave irunthurukalam...oru idea koda kodukalai..ivanlam PM a irunthu enna use?..aana karthik iru unna naan appurama gavanichukaren ...

V's mom came there with a plate of breadslices...

V's mv:aiyayoo...adutha kodumaiya?...vaiku rusiya koda saapida mudiyala...ithula irunthu eppadiyavathu thappikanume?...enna panradhu...

V's mom:Vishnu..intha itha saapidu..unaku pasikumla...seekaram..

V's mom:enaku pasiye poiruchu itha paartha udana..

V:kodungama saapdiren

V's mom:samathu..appadiye intha marunthayum kudichuruvayam,..ok?

V's mv:ellam en thazhai eluthu...aana intha vaati naan than jeipen..

V gets that glass from his mother.. but suddenly he becomes fainted gushing that medicine on the floor..v's mom appalled for a second n patted his cheeks..but no response from Vishnu..

V's mom:aiyoo...kanna thoraka maatengarane..iru.,..thanni kondu varuvom...

V's mom raced fastly from there for bringing some water..after 2 mins,she came to v's room,but Vishnu was missing..

V's mom:enna ithu?aalaye kanome?...enga ponna?...mayangila kidanthan..

She heard bike sound outside the house..she rushed to the balcony..her eyes got widened on seeing that glimpse..it was none other than Vishnu sitting on his bike...

V:amma...naan kilabaren...tata..

V's mom:dei ...ammava ematharaya?..olunga vanthudu ulla..

V:mudiyathe..naan ippa free bird...varen..

V's mom:engada pora?

V:vera enga appa officeku than..inikum avar serious a work panrarame...athan

V's mom:ethukuda anga ponnum ippo?

V:appava nalla kelvi ketka poren avar panna akkaporuku...mukiyama avara eye glasses a kalatave kudathunu solla poren en pakathula varum pothu...iniku oru mudivu eduthe theerven ellathukum...varen ma...love u...

V's mom:dei...dei...solratha keluda...dei..

But Vishnu didn't even paid attention to her words n drove dashly

V's mom:veetku thana varuva...appa vechukaren unaku kacheri..

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It was a early morning time..all people were busy doing jogging on the wayside..karthik too was plunged in this morning activity,wearing the headphone on his ears...he enjoyed listening to the music,but he had the habit of keeping the volume in a minimum extent,so that he could hear the happenings of surroundings...within few seconds,his back got hit by someone heavily n he was about to fell,but he balanced himself

K:arivu illai...kanna enga vechuthu vareenga?..

Saying so,he turned to that side...there rests that person on the road due to that sudden jolt.. On seeing that person,his eyebrows automatically raised to the forehead.. after few seconds, his expression changed suddenly into an enraged one

K:unaku vera velaiye illaiya?...ethavathu loosuthanam pannikitte irupaya?

Raji:sir...neengala??...

K:aama naane than..

R:enna oru coincidence paartheengala?

K:un moonchi..intha coincidencenala evalavu tension paarthaya ippa?...kannu enna un muthugulaya iruku?...munnadi yaar poranganu paarthu oodi vara kudathu?..

R:sorry sir,oodi vantha vegathula ungala naan gavanikalai..

K:oho...pramatham..nee jogging panraya illati running competitionla sernthuruakya?...rendukum vithaysam theiryumla?

R:sir...puriyama pesathenga sir...naan ippadi oodi varavendiya katayama poiruchu sir..

K:enna solra?...

R:aama sir...solren...aana athuku munnadi enna konjam thooki vidreengala?..

K:mudiyathu...naan entha riskayum eduka virumbalai..

R:pls sir...enaku kaal vazhikuthu,takkunu elunthuruka mudiyalai..

K:kaal vazhichalum parava illai...neeye elunthuru...naan onnum panna maaten..

R:irunthalum ungaluku ivalavu kozhupu iruka kudathu sir..

K:aama nee thana daily enaku sooru vadichu podra..

R:sir pls...pls...help me..kaiya kudunga pls...

K:cha...ellam en neram...ivalata eppavum maatikitte irukanumnu vidhi pola..

K gave his supporting hand towards raji...raji hold his hand n tried to get up...but she couldnt...instead she looked at k with her childish pout...karthik nicely perceived her indication..

K:enna unna naan thooki vidanuma?

R:aama..

K slowly bents n lifts raji with his two arms clenching her shoulders..while doing so,their face came closer n they could feel the proximity between them...karthik turned his face to the left side leaving a redden faced raji in a twinkling of an eye as he felt embarrassed a little...he made her stand on her unsprained foot...

K:ippo ok va unaku?

R:irunga paarkuren..

Raji tried to put some steps ,but unfortunately she coudnt..

R:mudiyala sir..

K:seri,ippa naan enna pananum.

R:enna nadathi kootitu ponum,..athuvum seekarama..

K's mv:cha..kalankathakye imsaiya start pannita..

K:vaa polam..

Karthik gave her support by his arms n made her to walk ...raji walked some few steps..

K:ippo parvaa illaiya?

R:haan...konjam ok..

K:seri etho oodi varavendiya nirbanthamnu sonnaye...enna athu?

R:solren kelunga...naan en oodi vanthena,enna oruthan follow panikitu varan..

K:enna?

R:aama sir...athanala than thalai therika oodi vanthen...appadiye unga mela moothiten..

K:seri enga avana?...aala kanom?

R:varuvan sir..kandipa naan irukara idatha moopam pidichu vanthuruvan...

K:appadiya?...varatum ...oru kai paarkaren..

R:aiyoo...sir,avana adikalam seiyatheenga...avan pavamla..

K:pavam a?...illai theriyamathan ketkaren...nee ena loosa?

R:sir...ippa pesarathuku neram illai...vaanga naama antha car pinnadi poi olinchukalam...seekaram..

K:nee vena po...naan ethuku varanum?

R:sir...pls..avana neenga parka venama?

K:venam...neeyachu..avanachu..naan kilambaren..

He was about to move..

R:ippadi adipata ponna thaniya vittutu poreengale,neengalam oru manushan thana?

K:enna sonna?..

R:hehe...kochukathenga...vaanga car pinnadi polam...vaanganu sorlenla..en kaiya pidichukonga..

Raji gripped his hand..

K's mv:kodumai..iva illukara illupukulam naan poikittu irukene..ithula kaiya vera pidichukitta paarkaravanga thappa ninaika maatanga?..cha..

KR hid behind one Maruti car..

K:naan maatum sivanenu poikittu irunthen...nee vanthu...en nimathiya keduthuta..

R:sir...pesama irunga..avan en kuralla kandupiidchuduvan..

K:athu eppadi kandupidipan...nee avanata pesinaya?

R:pinna pesama?

K contained his fury..he even don't know why he is behaving weird..after few mins..

K:yei...raji...evalavu neram than inga irukarathu?...avana innum aalye kanome..

R:varuvan sir...kandipa varuvan...

K:ithuku pesama namma inga irunthu oodi poitomna,probleme illai..

R:athu eppadi...neenga avan moonchiya parka venama?

K:naan ethuku paarkanum?enaku enna thazhai elutha?

R:enakaga parka kudatha...?

K remained silent..

K:seri avan eppadi irupan...ethavathu adayalam sollu..

R:avan parka romba azahga irupan..unmaiya sollanumna ungala vida azahga..hehe..

K bit his teeth harder on hearing that line..

R:appuram avan kannu iruku paartheengala...round shapela cute a irukum...meesailam irukum avanuku..paarka nalla velai vellenu irupan...appuram...

K:konjam vaya moodreeya?...he yelled at her wildly which clearly shows his exasperation

K:unna avana varnika solli ketkalai..chinna adayalam than keten..cha..en mood a nee nalla spoil panra...poo..

He got up with irritation but in a very next minute he was stopped by a tug on his pant..it was raji who pulling his pant with her hand..

K:enna panra nee?...kaiya edu...

Raji didn't spoke,but simpy pulled his pant in a childish manner..his anger got completely vanished after seeing her cute poutful face...

K:kaiya edu...naan ingaye iruken..

R:appadiya?..thank u so much,sir.

K:aana innum avana ala kanome...oruvela vera routela poirupano..

R:illai...kandipa avan varuvan...wait panunga...ok

K:night varaikum wait pannanuma?

R:sir...summa irunga sir...neenga vera..

After 3 mins,raji's face lit up with glee..

R:sir...anga paarunga...avan vanthutan..

K:enga enga??...

R:sir...atho...atho...keezha paaruga..avan vanthutan...haiyaa...jolly...

On seeing that person,karthik became gobsmacked widening his eyes,with his mouth agape..

Ivan than rajiya follow pannikittu vanthavan..hehe..


To be contd..

Friends...i dono whether this update is upto the mark...waiting for ur likes n feedbacks..


Edited by shiningstar77 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful and a cute tane lengthy update πŸ‘ πŸ‘.. round table conference in d canteen was nice.. oh eppadi dhan VK friendship start aicho..

Supermarket convo between mom daughter was nice.. ena da ithu yara irukum nu think pannite iruda athu K ode sister and mom.. even R liked der convo poliye.. M R convo was heart touching nandhu rombe azhaga irunduthu...

Der cums KV convo omg i juz cant stop 🀣 🀣 🀣 V dad touched d hot milk glass and told V hve high fever nu sonathum athuvum alopathy homeopathy ambigavathy amaravathy nu sollum pothu i burst out into laughter.. V real ah pesare madiriye irunduchu 🀣 Pavam V nalla matikitan but oru vazhiya escape aiyachu... all dis s coz of V dad na 😊..

K ku day supera start aidichu pole sema start..ena da innum aduthe competitor varelenu parthen K ku der cums d hero cute puppy 😊 R is testing K patience too too much... K mv izhuthe izhupuku ellam K poi dhane aganum πŸ˜† R: avan rombe azhaga irupan mukiyama ungale vide azhagu K kite sollum pothu 🀣 K face reaction sema.. pavam paiyan future la ena nadake poguthu nu theriyame irukane 😊 i enjoyed reading dis update thoroughly and thanks for d pm nandhu 😊
Edited by Archana03 - 9 years ago
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Shiny bro, what a breeze like update ☒️!! I couldn't stop laughing reading KV convo about his fever...🀣. OMG, feeling the hot milk tumbler and concluding that V has fever and the resultant treatment...hilarious!!! πŸ˜† Real icing on the cake is your last pic...Raji was chased by a sweet little puppy!!!! "Cuteness unbound" is the caption for your update. Thanks very much, made me feel so much light after reading it...πŸ‘πŸ˜†
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semma ya comedy panreenga bro, superb

Vishnu appa, milk glass ah thottu paarthutu vishnu ku fever nu amma kitta potu kudukuraaru πŸ˜†

raji ya ninaichaaley πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† varudhu bro

iva kitta maatikitu namma hero paduraaney oru paadu appa appa paaπŸ˜†
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Thanks for the awesome update bro...πŸ‘πŸ‘

Friends ellarum onna sernthu arratta adikkurathu superr irunthuchu... Vishnu kuda serntha udanae kalakattunuchu... Karthik dhan missing...

Shop scene... Cutee fight between mother and daughter... nice... Raji ku avangala romba pudichi pochu... Romba sandhosham...

Messai raji convo raji feel pannuradha parthu ennaku kashtama irukku...😭 Amma illana kashtam dhan... Messai paasamana appa dhan... Avanga convo ennaku romba pudichi irunthuchu...

KV convo vishnu 🀣 Semma comedy dhan... Adhuku mella avanga appa 🀣 Paavam jolly ya free bird suthi tu irunthavan house arrest panna kashtama dhana irukkum...

Vishnu ku enna moolai? easiy ya emarthittan...πŸ˜† Naa semaya sirichen...🀣

Raji 🀣 Eppdi indha mathiri yellam yosikiringa bro? Ennala mudiyala🀣 Naa unnipa yara varanu parthttu irunthen... Kadaisilla πŸ˜†

Raji so sweet...

Waiting for ur next update...


Edited by Abinaabi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shiny, hilarious update- KV conversation as well as KR scene... πŸ˜† ..

Super...

Lipstick , nail polish pathiyellam pichi odhaereengha... Hmm...

Engiyo idikkuthey... πŸ˜‰ .. Just joking
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha bro superb raji fan followers ellaam superb hehehe so cute
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Shiny my god sirichu sirichu i was crying in tears after reading your update
i have no words at the moment to say about your update emotional and jokes too

raji watching karthis mom and sister in the shop and feeling about her mum and meesai consolling her all so nice to see was emotional for me 😳

vishnu🀣 my god pavum paiyan ippadiya pothu paduthavanga? seriously i felt really bad for him but it was sooo funny πŸ˜†πŸ˜† and on top of it karthi loool too funnyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

shiny where do you come up with such ideas i was literally crying my eyes out for the last scene🀣 i was thinking that raji was being chased by someone like a guy aana kadisila vachinga paaru bulbu 🀣 my god oru dogku poi evalavu buildupπŸ˜†πŸ˜† pavum karthi always getting into situations because of raji and this love love her innocence such a cute bubbly character adore her 😳

meesai saying the things she has done when she was young🀣 my god intha ponnu innu yennathan seiyalaπŸ˜† approm the description about the rooms zooming in and out of rajis and karthis face 😳 so kr will join soo

karthi becoming jealous when raji said the paiyan was azhagu πŸ˜†πŸ˜† so jealousy startedπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

waiting for karthi to become possessive over raji and their romance to start soon

loved how vishnu came and joined everyone at lunch and the talk about kv friendship was too good =D and vishnus mind voice when raji asked him to join againπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Shiny hats off for this update i thoroughly enjoyed it and was laughing so much today so thank you for a feel good part and this is for youπŸ‘
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