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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 3

both kr were staring at each other
lakshmi signalled madhan to leave the room and give them privacy, so they both planned to go out immediately while vishnu was busy eating the orange brought for raji
v : raji yaro sathi panitanga
r broke d eye lock and looked at vishnu
r : ena vishnu
v : ungaluku pulicha orange kuduthu inum konjam naal bed la iruka vechu kaasu pudunga plan panranga raji, epppudi kandu pudichen patheengala
indha vishnu ta irundhu yarum thapika mudiyathu,
ithuku thaan solren adutha tharava parvathy la serunga nu...
r : vishnu ithelam ungaluke overaa ila
v : enna raji rendavathu orange thaan sapdaren athukulla over nu solrengala
m : dei sumave iruka matiya
v : nan engada summa iruken,, m busy eating
lak mind voice : indha mari oru jandhu va na pathathe ila..itha enga pudichanga???
v : athaan ipo pathuteengala...pothuma?? btw itha enga irundhum pudikala,, senjathu...
lak : senjatha?? wat????
v : enga amma senjathu nu sola vandhen...
v laughs, lak gets irritated..
v : do u want orange ???
vishnu poked her
lak got angry and requested madhan to leave kr alone and she went outside angrily...
madhan dragged vishnu outside the room leaving kr along finallyyy

kr looked at each other, r tried much to ignore him, but his intense gaze dint let her...

k ku kannula aandha kanneer lesaa...wife kannu muzhichadhum...

k : ipo epdi iruku
r dint luk at him
r nodded her head
k : thala vali iruka?
r : hmmm...lesa
k realised that she is feeling uncomfortable and dint ask her any further questions,
on hearing no questions being asked by him , she turned towards his side, he was not luking at her...
r mind voice : korangu korangu etho formality ku epdi iruka nu kekanum nu kekaran paru chaaa
k gave her a look as if he caught her mind voice..
r : nee epdi??...
k : enna??
r : ila neenga epdi enna inga...
k clearly understood dat she is treating him like a third person, she termed him as "neenga",.
dat thought pricked him and he felt bad
r : keta kelvi ku inum badhil varla...
k : athu vandhu...

nurse enters the room...(wrong timing)...
nurse : raji how do u feel??
r : better ...
nurse : inime keela vizharapa glass door ila rod ilatha edama pathu vizhunga,,
nurse giggled for his own joke
kr were in no mood to react
nurse : ok karthik neenga unga wife a iniki eve ilana naliki discharge panikalamnu doctor sonnaru...
k : ok .,.. thank u so much
r : wife aaa???
nurse : yes neenga ivaroda wife thaana...
r : yaaru sonna..engaluku 2 days munadi divorce agiduchu... r said luking at k
k got angry and stared r...
nurse : itha neenga enta solave ilaye,form la husband nu solitu thaana sign paneenga...
she questioned karthik
k : athelam ila ...avaluku inum mayakam seriya theliyala pola, ilana oruvela adi pathathula moola kolambirucho,..
neenga ethukum doctor ah kootitu vanga check pani pathuruvom..
nurse : aama aama irukum, mandaila adipata palasellam marakum nu solvanga, irunga na doctora kootitu varen
r : nurse athelam ila m perfectly alrite,...nurse ,,nurseee
nurse ignored her call and left
r burned k alive with her gaze
k glared at her in return
k : unaku enna paithiyama??
r : unaku thaan paithiyam
k : ipo namaku divorce aana matter andha nurse ku theriyalaina enna koranja poirum???
r : athaan divorce aagiruchula apram en urima kondaditu vara marubadi..
po po nee poi kudichutu veetuku po., enna pathuka enaku theriyum..
instead of getting angry k bursted into laughter..
avlothaan serious ah thititrukarapa sirichathum raji ku inum kobam
r : ipo ethuku da sirikara
k was shocked and laughed again
r twisted her tongue
r : sry...ipo ethuku neenga sirikarenga
k : en vaai en urimai...
r : hello aana pakrathu en kannu...
k : nee enna "da" podama vera yaru d enna "da" poda pora...
r : hey enna mariyadha koraiyudhu, ithelam un pondati ta vechuko ,,ilana andha sethupona susan ta vechuko, enta venam
k : en pondati thaana neee
r : athu pona masam ithu indha maasam...
k : summa nadikatha chellam
r got irritated to listen to all these
r : ipo ungaluku ennathaan venum...ena nimadhiyave iruka vida mateengala
unga sangaarthame venamnu thaana thalli vandhen, vaazhavum vidama saagavum vidama ennathu ithu
k : raji athu vandhu..m really sorry,...na panninathu periya thappu thaaan..
r : pothum saami enaku endha velakamum theva ila
k : ipdi thaan anikum ena pesa vidama panina, marubadi andha thappa panna na thayara illa
r : nanum ketka thayara ila
k composed himself,,, held her hands,,
she frst hesitated,, but she couldnt oppose further as his grip was very firm
k : raji enna paru
r dint luk
k : raji en kanna paru
k :
m reallly sorry, nejama na panina thappa elam unarndhuten, enaku indha jenmathula manipe kedaiyadhu
ipo kooda nee enna ethukite aaganum nu solave maten, apdi ketkara thagudhi kooda enaku illa nu theriyum..
nejama solren na paninathu correctu nu thaan na nenaichutrundhen...nee unga appa ta pesinatha ketkara varaikum..
aana athuku aprame,,uravu na enna..athu evlo avasiyam,.mathavanga feelings ku epdi mathipu kudukanumnu elame purinjathu..
epo nee ena adiyoda verukarandra vishayam enaku theriya vandhucho apo la irundhu thaan enaku un mela kathal adhigam aachu..
adhigamaachunu solratha vida enakula un mela ivlooo pasam iruka nu enake apo thaan therinjathu,..nanthaan unna thooki potuten nee sonna mari..
atha mathikanum nu nenaiken,,enaku oru chance kudupiya raji plz...
k cried while saying ds so does raji,,but she dint want him to see her crying so she controlled...

k : na enna panina ena manipa?? ilana na senja thappuku enaku manipu unda?? ilaya?? ethuvume enaku theriyathu...
kaalam poora nee en koodave irundhu itha kuthi katinalum paravala...santhoshama ethukaren...
aana en koodave irundhana athu pothum..elathaiyum manichu ena ethupiya raji plzz?/..
r remained silent...

k : oruthavanga irukara varaikum avangaloda arumai puriyathunu nalla purinjukiten, puriya vechutanga en APPA AMMA...nanum purinjukiten
neeyum thalli poi ninnu enaku atha marubadi unarthatha raji...
tears from his eyes wet her hand...
ena adi...thittu...vetti kooda podu aana koodaye iru raji...un piriva thangara sakthi kandipa enaku ila..
divorce vaangitu nee ilatha andha veetukulla nozhayave mudiyala...sethuralama nu irundhuchu/..
r stops him...
k proceeds
k : ipdi oru arumaiyana ponna pathuka theriyalaiye nu enna patha enake kevalama iruku raji...kandipa unakum apdi thaan irukum..
indha oru tharava ena manika matiya???
r culdnt stop crying...she felt something choked her throat...she wanted him to relax,,
she diverted the topic...
r : enaku thanni venum...
k immediately goes out to get water..
r cries whole heartedly after he left...
she cried because she couldnt bear that his karthik was going through ds mental trauma for 2 days.. she immediately wanted to be in his arms..
but her mind dint let her
k comes in gives water
r drinks it..
r : nee thappa unarndhuta nu enaku puriyudhu... manika mudiyatha thappu onnum nee panidla... apdi patha nan kooda thaan
susan ku aniki thappu paninen... prachana athu ila
indha vishayam nu ila..oru prachana vandhuchuna atha epdi solve panrathunu thaan pakanum..orutharuku oruthar yaravathu thappu panina
aaruthala irukanume thavara...kuthi kaati vedhana padutha koodathu... nee vedhana paduthinathoda... na venamndra mudivuke vandhuta.
athu epdi apdi oru mudivu nee edupa...??...avasarathulayum aatharathulayum edukara mudivu kandipa thappa thaan irukum karthik...
k couldnt face her...
r continues
r : kandipa inime namma life la prachanaiye varathunu renduperalayum uruthiya solla mudiyathu
k : illa athu vandhu
r : enna pesa vidu karthik...
k remained silent
r : indha prachana mudinjathu..adutha prachana vandha ivan epdi react panuvan, kochipana, manipana, namala ethupana ila thooki potruvana??...
apdinu ovoru muraiyum enala yosichutruka mudiyathu..
urimaiya unta vandhu indha thappu paniten karthik..vazhi sollu...pannina thappu epdi seri panlam nu na unta pesara mari irukanum namma relationship..
atha vitutu..ayayo thappu pantome ivan enna solvanu theriyalaiye nu, student teacher ku bayapadra mari irundha athelam enna uravu neeye sollu...
r : ipo pirinjachu...ipdiye irundha nalla irukumnu enaku thonudhu..
k feels sad
r has already forgiven him but her ego dint let her to confess dat to him...she wants him to plead more...
k dint speak a word..
r : namma nalla narbargala irupom..atha thaandi ethuvum seriya varathunu thaan enaku thonudhu...papom
silence prevailed for next 5 mins...
k : apram kamal ta i still lov him nu ooruke kekara mari kathina athuku enna artham??
r was super shocked, omg k heard t?? she culdnt speak anything...
r remained silent
k asked again
r : athu apo avanta irundhu thapikarathuku sonnen pothuma...athelam advantageaa eduthukatha...
k : enna paathu sollu papom...
r remained silent.,, she felt bad as he heard her confessing her lov...
k was about to say something..
doctor entered the room and asked k to wait outside as he wanted to check r...
kr looks at each other...
again office bgm (sad version)...


to be continued...



plz let me know if u liked ds part..
thanks
will update the next part on thursday...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
So emotional dhivya. Solla varthai illa pa. Oru oru words shows millions of emotion. Hats off to you dear. You have drag me into the story itself.Thank you .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Read both back to back...nice

Keep up the good work
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Hi, very emotional one... ..

No words to explain my feelings...

Raji kekra kelvi - correct thaan.. Ana innum Karthik badhil sollalai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"indha prachana mudinjathu..adutha prachana vandha ivan epdi react panuvan, kochipana, manipana, namala ethupana ila thooki potruvana??...

apdinu ovoru muraiyum enala yosichutruka mudiyathu..

urimaiya unta vandhu indha thappu paniten karthik..vazhi sollu...pannina thappu epdi seri panlam nu na unta pesara mari irukanum namma relationship..

atha vitutu..ayayo thappu pantome ivan enna solvanu theriyalaiye nu, student teacher ku bayapadra mari irundha athelam enna uravu neeye sollu..."

Super lines idhuu... 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Rajee71

"indha prachana mudinjathu..adutha prachana vandha ivan epdi react panuvan, kochipana, manipana, namala ethupana ila thooki potruvana??...

apdinu ovoru muraiyum enala yosichutruka mudiyathu..

urimaiya unta vandhu indha thappu paniten karthik..vazhi sollu...pannina thappu epdi seri panlam nu na unta pesara mari irukanum namma relationship..

atha vitutu..ayayo thappu pantome ivan enna solvanu theriyalaiye nu, student teacher ku bayapadra mari irundha athelam enna uravu neeye sollu..."

Super lines idhuu... 👏 👏

Thanks sis.. Enakum indja dialog apram appa amma puriya vechutanga. Neeyum athaye thalli ninu unarthatha...
eludharapave romba rasichu eludhinathu
Thanks fr d cmnts sis.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
@Dhivya, really good one, dear..

Ungha kadhaiyila vara Raji kum maathiram illai- namma serial Raji charaterukkum poruthamana lines... vaarthaiya solla mudiyakai pa... But hats off to u to bring and given a shape to our ( my) feelings...

Idhukku K oda reply alladhu how is he going to convince or give confidence to Raji... Idhudhaan en manasula odikittrukku...

Waiting for ur update...

Edited by Rajee71 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Rajee71

@Dhivya, really good one, dear..

Ungha kadhaiyila vara Raji kum maathiram illai- namma serial Raji charaterukkum poruthamana lines... vaarthaiya solla mudiyakai pa... But hats off to u to bring and given a shape to our ( my) feelings...

Romba romba romba nandri for the comment.
N indha part dialogs eludha time eduthukiten..
Normal a ipdi nadandha oru couple epdi pesipanga nu yosichu...
I tried my best..
N m happpy DAT u liked t...thx again
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Dhivya...ennapa ippadi asathareenga...updateku update story supera poguthu.👏👏...super...super...
vishnu...OMG...too funny🤣

karthik lastla than manasula ullatha rajitta kottitan...

but raji ketkarathu ellame romba seri...loved it...

nursetta raji karthika aval hsband illaninu sonna pothu,karthik's lines...


athelam ila ...avaluku inum mayakam seriya theliyala pola, ilana oruvela adi pathathula moola kolambirucho,..
neenga ethukum doctor ah kootitu vanga check pani pathuruvom..

seriousa pesum pothum comedy panran...sema...😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
osom update dhivya 👏👍🏼 the dialogues between raji * karthi wer so practical & lively ,indha office serial dialogue writers idhe dialogues use panlam kr serthu veikkum bodhu lolz avlo apttana dialogues 👏👏 k yepdi rajiya convince panna poraan eagerly waiting for the nxt update
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