NEW FF- PIRIYATHA VARAM VENDUM PART 5 CLIMAX UPDATED,PG 10 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Nice storyline dhivya. Current issue use panni storye konduporinga. Pls continue pa. Waiting .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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woww Divya...superb start ma...in line with the present track...
And welcome to the forum...do participate in discussions in other threads divya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
dhivya.. aarambame chummaa adhirudhu.. πŸ₯³

matched with ongoing track... as others said, kandippaa serial la indha maadhiri kondu varra maattaanga.. ego, jealous, self pity nu maathi maathi murungamaram yeruvaanga...

Really Superb !! Keep rocking πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
solla marandhutten.. u've chosen apt title for this plot πŸ‘πŸΌ and it's one of my favorite movie as well that has a touching emotional song at the end.. semma lyrics..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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and kamal turns and gets shockd...his eyes met with a pair of angry and furious eyes...


PART 2

as soon as he turned ,within fraction of a second, he fell down with a force, his nose was bleeding,..
karthik dint hit him, he just slapped him n he fell down for dat slap... karthik cant take if he sees any injustice being done to women r kids
and now its his own wife,,,he culdnt bear dat,, how dare kamal slaps his dear wife,, he was fuming...
he would hav hit kamal when he spoke ill off her but then he was in pool of emotions hearing his
wife confessing her feelings for him,, before he was completely out f t, he heard a thuddd sound and saw his wife falling down...


kamal struggled hard and stood up but again fell on the floor after being hit by karthik again.
karthik thought of dealing him later...as he has to check what had happend to raji...

karthik rushed to his wife, his lov, his life,...and made her face him,,..droplets of blood oozing out from her rosy lips..
he felt d pain as if he was hurt.. he could feel how she would hav felt when kamal slappd her..
raji is fragile and weak usually and he knew ds would hav hurted her much,...

he tapped her on d cheeks, she dint respond..
his heart beated faster,...
he shook her...she dint gain conscious...
he got tensed even more...
he went to fetch water...he sprayed t all over her face..
she dint respond... he started shouting her name...
RAJI RAJIII...ELUNDHIRI RAJI...ENNA PAARU RAJI ...
his heart started to fill wid wierd emotions+fear... tears started to ooze out from his eyes..the water he sprinkled along wid d salty water(his tears) wet her face...
she dint respond...
he lifted her as soft as he could...and ran downstairs...he hired a call taxi...entered into it
raji was on his lap...no one was der to console him..he knows dat she would b alrite soon and nothing serious would happen to her..
but his mind failed to accept the fact,..he turned into a child...
a child longing for its MOTHER... he was badly needing rajiii,,,his raji to open up her eyes and open up her feelings to him...
firstly he wanted her to get well soon then the much awaited confession...
but dat ws not happening soon... dey wer struck in d traffic...
k holds raji's hand...carasses her hair using the other hand...

k : unaku romba kashtam kuduthuten... poo mari thaanga vendiya unna poi kudichutu vandhu ...cha..
thappa unarndhuten raji..inime kandipa kashtam kuduka maten unaku,. enala namakulla inime sandandrathu varave varadhu..

he gets emotional

enna ezhundhu paaru d.. koodave irundha varaikum theiryala, epo veliya poniyo ,epavum un nenapave iruku d...
na thappu paniten., nee aasapatatha tharanumnu thaan aniki sign panna sammadhichen, anike na solirukanum,,..
enoda ego va vitutu pesirukanum...apo manipu ketrundha kooda nee enna manichurupa nu enaku theriyum..
ipdi moonavathu manushanga moolyama nammaku irukara kathala orutharuku oruthar puriyudhey nu nenaichale enaku asingama iruku..
sathyama solren d...inime kudika maten,..una ethuvume solla maten...enna manichu ethupiya??
ethukitu thaan aaganum unaku vera vazhi ila...vera vazhiye ila...
he paused...he couldnt continue further...

he was speaking to her continuously..stilll she is unconscious...he was talking so much dat he dint notice the blood coming from her head...
she was bleeding profusely , he dint note dat... her dense hair covered the blood so he was unaware of dat...
when kamal slapped her,, she fell down and while falling down her head hit the glass table der and dat was the reason f bleeding...

dey reached hospital...

he explained to doctor what exactly happended, doctor was testing her...
he was waiting impatiently ...he was restless... he looked through the small transparent portion of the glass door...

madhan reached the hospital and k explained him everything... madhan too dint note the blood mark n his shrt..
madhan said ds was only out of shock so she would b normal soon and karthik too felt the same..

laskmi entered her house and shocked to see some unknown person lying n d floor...she called raji but her phone was der in the floor...
she tried calling karthik and he said her all that happened and she rushed to the hospital..

doctor's room...

k : enachu doctor?? normal thaana?? shock naala thaan mayakam potuta?? anything serious:??
doctor : shock naalaya??
k : aama doctor adicha andha force la,,keela vizhundhuta...athana mayakam?? ilaya ?? apram vera ena reason doctor?? (he guessed)(he dint let the doctor to speak)
doctor : no no,..avangaluku pinanthalaila adi patruku lesa... (doctor was pursuing but nothing fell on k's ears)
k shocked...
doctor : karthik?? karthik ?? u der??
k : enna doctor solreenga pinadi thalaila adipatruka?? vaaila irundhu thana lesa ratham vandhuchu...(stil he couldnt believe...)
doctor : ila..blood loss agiruku...aana neriya ila..lesana adi thaan nothing to worry...
(all these fell in d deaf ears)
doctor : nanga thaiyal potrukom...prachana ila.. thalaila normala thaiyal potrukom,pain konjam jaasthiya irukum, take good care of her,
inum unga wife mayakama thaan irukanga...
she ll gain her conscious soon..u no need to worry...inime pathukonga badhrama..
k was still in shock...
he wnt outside..lakshmi ,vishnu and mathan enquired ...and finally lakshmi noticed the blood strain in his shirt and informed him..
k saw dat and was even more upset... he cursed the god... he cursed himself.. he started to break down...
k felt bad..he could hav avoided kamal beating his love..as he was only inches away from them but he failed..
he wanted his wife to open her eyes immediately..but nothing happened as per his wish...



he stayed in the hospital in the room where r has been admitted, admiring his dear wife and longing for her to open her eyes..
the only thing he wanted at that moment s to see her pair of dark eyes opening up...
he carassed her head,,, hold her hand and closed his eyes wid her hand..
he promised that he wont leave her hand hereafter forever...
when they were alone, she dint open her eyes...

2 hours later, vishnu, laskmi and madhan joined karthik and all 4 were discussing...
slowly raji murmured, she was shaking her head out of pain..
all 4 went near her... she slowly opened her eyes and saw lakshmi first
l : epdi d iruka??
r shook her head indicating that she is fine...
l kissed r's forehead..
m : enanga ipdi bayamuruthiteengale ...seekram kan muzhikama..
r : na enna pana madhan,, she recollects the incident and kamal's cheap words and starts feeling
m : freeya vidunga, pathukalam avana,, u relax
v : enanga raji ipdi paniteenga
r : enna vishnu neengalum ipdi kekreenga
v : ada na enna kekarenu purinjukonga... ipdi nurse, lady doctor yarume ilatha kaanju pona hospital la vandhu admit agirukeengale atha keten..
after asking ds he alone laughed for his mokkka joke
lak gets irritated
r smiles...
r : ponga vishnu
v : ilainga raji pakathulaye parvathi hospital iruku,, pere parunga mangalagarama parvathy nu iruku anga serndhurukalamla,,,
he continues his mokka
v : apdi panirundha ungala paka vara saakula kannuku kulirchiya enaku time pass agirukum... ponga raji..
/*****

lak would hav hit him but she controlled as she was in hopital
lak and madhan r school friends...
lak : madhan yaru ivaru..vandhadhula irundhu gap eh vidama olarite irukaru??
m : ivanum enga office la thaan vela seiran..
lak : ivana elama vechu office nadatharanga..unga office urupdrathu romba kashtam..
m : hey avan enoda clge frnd d..konjam mariyadhaiya pesu...
lak : school la nalla irundha nee clg la en nut kalandhu lusu agita nu ipo theriyudhu...

*******/


r : seri manichurunga vishnu next time adipatukuta parvathylaye katiralam ok va???
v : seri ponga manichu vituten
r : aama motha nana epdi vandhu admit agiiruka mudiyum, ena admit pannavangala ila neenga thitanum...
saying this she stares at lakshmi
lakshmi nods her head in negative and points to karthik
raji luks at karthik, karthik was stood rooted to the spot as he wasnt out of the fact dat his lady love has opened her eyes and is normal

kr eyelock ...
the eyelock dat happend at the court was completely diff from this one, dat one was filled wid the sour feeling of going to miss each other, and here
k's look was a satisfactory one while r's look was filled wid surprise +happiness.

r widely opens her eyes and looks at him as if questioning how come he admitted her?????
bgm : office bgm lolπŸ˜›
to be continued...


sry if i hav bored u all πŸ˜•
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Posted: 10 years ago
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haiyaa 1st to comment πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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wow it's a fantabulous one πŸ‘πŸ‘

pahh K adicha vegam inga theriyudhupa 😎 yevvalavu angry pinna irukkadha avan luvable wifeala kamal adichutan 😑😑

K R ah elupuradhum den water kondu vandhu sprinkle senju den taking her to hospital was sooo nice 😳😳

pavom paiyan romba thaan bayapudaraan closeah irukkurapo aruma purila distancela irukkarapo KR r feeling for each other

OMG thailaila kaayama is anything serious 😲

den RVML scene a fun to see V as usual dhaan " pavom avan kashtam avanukku " lolzz πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

den KR eyelock sooo lovely ☺️

thnks for ur speed update πŸ˜ƒ it's too early to ask πŸ˜› by the way when is ur next update






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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sizzling78

wow it's a fantabulous one πŸ‘πŸ‘


pahh K adicha vegam inga theriyudhupa 😎 yevvalavu angry pinna irukkadha avan luvable wifeala kamal adichutan 😑😑

K R ah elupuradhum den water kondu vandhu sprinkle senju den taking her to hospital was sooo nice 😳😳

pavom paiyan romba thaan bayapudaraan closeah irukkurapo aruma purila distancela irukkarapo KR r feeling for each other

OMG thailaila kaayama is anything serious 😲

den RVML scene a fun to see V as usual dhaan " pavom avan kashtam avanukku " lolzz πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

den KR eyelock sooo lovely ☺️

thnks for ur speed update πŸ˜ƒ it's too early to ask πŸ˜› by the way when is ur next update



i thank each n everyone for ur valuable comments... ds ff contains 5 parts and m done with all 5...
as iam a newbie m restricted to post only 10 cmnts within 24 hrs..dats d reason fr d late update..
ll update part 3 tonite or tom..as u wish.
thanks again...
and @sizzling78 thx a ton fr d long commnt..m happpyπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super update. Loved each bit of it the emotions portrayed simply super. Could visualise it all.

karthik slapping kamal and him falling over 🀣 kamal deserves this

Karthik going towards raji and lifting her and trying to wake her up bless him he got so scared then the conversation in the taxi finally his emotions and feelings coming out and the scene at hospital karthik not realising the blood and waiting for raji to wake up soo cute... vishnu and his comedy hahaha loved that

lastla their eye lock 😳
thanks for the update.
Whens the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Wow...beautiful update,Dhivya..πŸ˜›πŸ‘.
karthik adicha vegathula kamal keezha viluntha satham inga ketkuthu...super...πŸ˜†

. karthik cant take if he sees any injustice being done to women...intha linea padicha udane,enaku siripu vanthuruchupa...athuvum karthika ninachu...namma serial karthik appadiya irukan?...hihi..(lol ,for fun only)πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

K kastapatatha unara mudiyuthu...pavam payan ...romba thavichu poitan...rajitta avan pesina ellame so cute.😳..

rajiku thalailayum adi pattruka,nalla vela onnum aagalai...

vishnu...sema comedy.πŸ˜†...oh..Lku Vya yaarunu theriyaatha?...nalaa iruke...

KR eyelock with our fav bgm...lovely.😳❀️

fist part oda this part padu super...keep it up...Dhivya...

waiting for the next part...😊
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