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It was a breezy day...both kr strted from house..k in his bike n r in an auto... they started deir journey together 1 year bck...but now dey r not travelling together...
dey failed in winning all d hindrances dat come across ...
deir love n affection wer overpowered by deir ego...though dey hav d same lov fr each other tilll now,,it is deeply burried inside ..surrounded by their ego...
both kr rchd d same destinaion.,..no NO ITS not office...its court...
As per d rules dey stayed n d same house fr an yr...n now a yr has passd n both wer sure to get divorce...
al formalities r over n now dey r n no way related to each other.. they lukd at eachother fr d last time ...
n dat eyelock dint last long as thy wr sure dat f t coninues dey ll fall fr d other ...dey shook hnds...wished each other all success in life n left...
raji went to her frnd's home...
n k returned home...
he stared at her room ...automatically her face was n his memory..though they dint speak to each other...he knows wat s she doin every min...
he tried to b norml but..culdnt...his mind was wavering..
km
k cals mathan
k : na karthik pesaren...
m : sollu machan
k : inga variya da plz??? (he dint speak much as he s n d verge f breaking down)
m : na kalambi varen pesikalam...
m understands k
k was n his room : enada machan
k : ava koodave irundha varaikum theriyala da...ipo valikuthu...enna senjalum en raji enna vitu poga maatanu nenaichen ...thapputhaan.
m slaps him hard..
m :panrathellam pantu po maatanu nenaichiya..ava enna nee vechu vilayadra bommaiya..ipo kooda ava mela thappu solra???
k hugs m n cries..apdi solala mathan...en mela thaan thappu ..na na..he culdnt continue...
m asks wat hppnd...m calms him
m :y she tuk ds suddn decision.?
k : i realized my mistake..avala romba koduma paduthiten..kudichutu vandhu kolakaari nu solli chaa ena paaka enake pudikala..
ava aniki mama ta feel pannapa thaan i realized enaku avala face panave mudiyala,
i felt ashamed f myself, but 2 weeks la ava bday apo sry sollidalam nu irundhen, kandiipa avala manikanum nu kataya padutha maten
ava kitta thappa unarndhu unoda karthik ah vandhuruken nu solalamnu irundhen, ethukarathum ethukathathum avaloda virupam
m : sry kekarathunu agipochu apram enna poranndha naal podalanga naalunu, anike ketka vendiyathu thaana
k : avala pakara thairiyame enta ila da, athaan enaye samathanam paduthitu thalli potuten ponen, ena ethupalo matalonu enakulla oru bayam
m : mannagatti nee avata solirundhana odane she would hava forgiven you, ivaru bday varaikum wait pannaram,
ava athukula pirinju poita..seri dhideernu raji indha mudivu eduka yaru karanam
k : kamal
m : wat??? kamalaaa?
k : aama kamal and vishnu avanoda innum en serndhu irukenga nu solli ava manasa kolapi pirichu vitutanga
m : avanga sonna ivaluku enga da pochu arivu ...cha enaku theriyum kamal munnaal kathalan na odane ivanala prachana varumnu,
ipo thaan avan mela paasam pothukitu varutho un pondatiku ...mathan dint finish ..
k slappd him hard...he then apologised ..mathan was shockd
silence prevailed
k : sry da
m : paravala
m : ava divorce keta nee apove manipu ketrukalam la
k : na solalam nu thaan irundhen, aana ava keta vidham apdi..
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r : enaku divorce venum
k : athaan unga appa oru varusham iruka sonaru la
r : oru varushathula onnum mara porathila
k : ila avara mathikatha mari irukum..
r : petha amma appa va mathika theriyatha unaku romba mariyathaiya pathi theriyuma?? avaru en appa na pathukaren
r : nee kai ezhuthu matum pota pothum
k hesitates...thinks
r : na santhoshama iruka koodathunu mudive panitiya karthik,,..enaku viduthala kudu nu kekaren athu kooda mudiyatha
r : neeyum thana divorce venumnu uruthiya irundha..un kooda irukara varaikum en vaalkaila nimmathiye kedaiyathu
r : unna kenji kekaren othuko
k : ila nan vandhu ...na paninathu thappu thaan enna...
r : inime endha nadagathukum namba enala mudiyathu karthik,.nee solra poi elam ketka na palaya raji ila
r : petha appa amma oda feelings purinjukatha nee elam epdi inoru ponnoda feelings purinjupa??
r : unoda entha nadagathaiyum namba na thayaara ila...nee inum marala...nee nejama marirundha en munadi nikka kooda unaku koosirukum
r : poiya nadikatha karthik...indha kolakari oda nee kashta patu vaazha venam..pirinjuralam...
r : apdiye nee marinatha na nambanum naalum enaku oru help panu...
k : ??
r : divorce paper la sign panu...
saying ds she got back to her room...k was shell shockd...tears started rolling down his cheeks...
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k : ava ena adiyoda veruthuta da...enakunu yarume ila..elathaiyum tholachutu nikaren..avalavathu santhoshama irukatumnu thaan da na othukiten..
k cries...
m : athaan ivlo paasam irukula po da anga rajiyum unna pirinju ipdi thaan varutha paduvanga mothala avangata poi mannasu vitu pesu po plz
lr
r : elame mudinchu pochu lakshmi
l : hey relax nalla yosichu thaana indha mudiva edutha ipo en indha kolapam
r : kolapam elam ila
l : raji enaku onnu sollu
r : enna
l : indha mudivu muluka muluka unodatha ilana yaravathu solli indha mudiva eduthiya
r : piriya porom nu rendu perum serndhu thana mudivu paninom
l : athaan unga appa one year paaka sonaru la athukum thaana othukuteenga
r : hmmm
l : apo indha dhideer mudivu yarodathu
r : na onnum chinna pulla ila lakkshmi enaku yarum soli thara theva ila..avan ena enalam panirukan nu unakum thaana theriyum ipo en ipdi kekara
while sayign so r cries
l : apo en kan kalannguthu unaku?? elam mudinju pochunu freeya irukalam la
r : mudiyalaiye
l : unaku ena thaan d venum? karthik vennuma venama??
r : theriyalaiye she hugs lakshmi n cries hard
lr were sleeping, l heard r whispering something, she observed t keenly
r : karthik saaptana nu theriyalaiye, kudichurupano ?? karthik kudichuruka koodathu kadavuley plzzz...
she repeated dis again and again, l felt bad for r
next day...
kamal was aware dat kr divorced and obviously he was happy. kamal called raji, she was in noo mood to pick up d phone, as he was calling contnuously
she picked up n accepted to meet him in the evening...
kamal raji
kamal : hi raji..
r : hi
kamal : oruvazhiya thappichuta...m happy fr u..
r simply stares ..
kamal : hey divorce agiduchu la apram en inum thali ya potutruka??
r touches d thali and remebers d moments wid her hubby...n cries
kamal : hey inuma indha sentiment elam pakra..mothala nee atha thooki podu avan nenape iruka koodathu
r doesnt reply
kamal : na solite iruken nee enna...
r : enaku theriyum kamal na pathukren...enna vishayama vara sonna?
kamal : athaan motha naale sonene?
r : enna?
kamal : unna kalyanam panratha pathi thaan..
r is shocked..
r : athaan anike enaku andha mari plan ethum ilanu sonen la unaku enachu kamal?
kamal : ipothaan divorce agiduchula raji apram wat d hell is ur prob??
r : mind ur words ...
kamal : m sry raji ..i dint mean t...wats ur damn prb.? nanthaan yosikanum divorce aana ponna katika
r : apdi elam en nee en kasta padra kamal?? unaku irukara padipuku sambathyathuku nalla ponnu kedaika ..na venam..vitru
kamal : inga paru...dont u understand? i lov u n i want to marry u..did u get me?
r : silllyyy
r moves frm there
kamal rches her
kamal : na pesite nee patu poite iruka..enna d overa panra??
r : mariyathaya pesu
kamal : ipo enna sola vara
r : oru marriage la na patathey pothum.. avana mari oruthane marum pothu na yarayum namba thayara ila
kamal : ipo unaku marriage la interest ila nu solriya??
r : aama,,, en life la yarum venam...enaku theriyum ena pathuka
kamal : marriage la interest ilaya?? ila avan mela irukara interest inum polaya?
r : wat????? come again?!!
kamal : apram ethuku d divorce vangina??do u stil lov him??
r : ds is my life,,,enaku unna pudikala, unaku velakam tharanumndra avasiyam enaku ila...na kalambren
kamal : unna epdi othuka vekanumnu enaku theriyum
r walks fast...
vr
v : enga kamal nallavan thaanga...neenga en avana mrg panika koodathu?
r : neenga koodaya vishnu??
v : ilanga karthik mari ilanga kamal,,avaru unga nalathu pathi matum thaan nenaikraru..neenga yosichu parunga
r : enaku ipo vaazhka thunai elam theva ila vishnu,,,mana nimmathi pothum
v : apram unga ishtam...
r : karthik enna panra vishnu??
v : enna keta??
r : ila avan office kooda varla pola
v : avan office varana varlaya nu pakalam enaku neram ilanga raji
r : athukilla vishnu...
v : avana pathi pesi ena tension panathenga..na kalambaren..
mathan finds that r is wid l and informs k...he prays to god and gets ready to go to l's house...
kamal r
r is unpacking her stuff, k's tshrt comes, she hugs t and cries...
kamal comes to lakshmi's home...
lakshmi is not der, he meets raji...
r : enna dhideernu, athuvum veetuku elam
kamal : en vara koodatha
r : vara koodathu
kamal : enna patha matum en ipdi erinju vizhara?
r : apdi ila, ithu frnd oda veedu, nee patu vandha nala pinna avaluku prachanai agumnu sonen
kamal : enna mudivu paniruka?
r : etha pathi?
kamal : na sonatha pathi..
r : athaan sonene..nee enaku nalla frnd, unaku oru nalla ponnu kedaipa
kamal : enaku neethaan venum
r : vilayadatha kamal
kamal : yaru vilayadrathu?? vandha anike lov panrenu sonnna, kalyanam agiduchu nu sonna, velagi polam nu patha
divorce aaga poguthunum serthu sonna, enakaga samachu kondu vara?..na sonen nu un husbanda divorce panna...
r stops him
r : motha naale unta na sonen la, namma frnds thaanu
kamal : unaku en mela ethuvume ilaya?
r : ila...ilave ila...
kamal : seri vaa kalyanam panikalam
r : unaku enna paithiyama? na solite iruken nee patu pesite pora., indha mari ennam unakula inum irukunu therinja unoda pesirukave maten
kamal : ipothaan pesita palagita,..vaa kalayanam panikalam,unga appa amma kooda othukuvanga,,,vaa polam
kamal grabs her hand..r comes out of his grip
r : chiii thodatha...enaku una pakave pudikala
kamal : en porumaiya romba sothikara d...seri enna venamndrathuku oru reason sollu...
r cries
kamal : enna karthik prachana panuvanu pakriya,,.sollu avana oru vazhi panidalam
r doesnt reply
kamal : apdina avanthaan prachana...seri na pathukaren
r : inga paaru enaku un mela abiprayam ila..veena karthika ithula ilukatha... nee kalambalam...
kamal : ena d bayapadriya avanuku ethavathu agidumnu?? enna lov panirya??
r : aaamaaa... yes i still lov him...pothuma...kalambu
kamal : apram ethuku d enta vandhu vazhinja?? ethuku sapadu pani kudutha ...vandhu vandhu pesina
r : na vishnu ku kooda thaan sapadu kondu varen thenaikum..athukaga avara lov panrenu arthama??
kamal : nee senjalum seiva..inum ethana perta ipdi irukiyo ...kamal dint finish...
r slaps him hard...
kamals slaps her hard... she faints...
and kamal turns and gets shockd...his eyes met with a pair of angry and furious eyes...
to be continued...
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