Part 8 -
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-- All the friends were having a good time, that too now that everyone became friends with each other on New Year's Eve... --
-- Everyone was standing outside, just chatting... --
Bala : Dei... Nee ellam ennada Kadhal mannan? Oru ponna pesa theriyudha unnaku?
Vishnu : Ama ivangalluku Aishwarya rai , Kareena kappor,, Priyanka chopra nu girlfriend nu list vechi irukkanga paru...
Bala : Dei dei avangallam en range ku vara matanga da...
Vishnu : appdi partha un range ponne kedaikkadhe da... Vazhakka full ah bramachariya ve vazha vendiyadhu dhan...
Karthik : Dei dei... 11:58 pm aagudhu da... Two minutes left...
Janani : Hey super... Let's have a countdown from 10 and ore time la Happy New Year sollalaam...
All : Deal..
Vishnu : Here it starts... 1O... 9... 8...
Karthik : 7... 6... 5...
Azhagar : 4... 3... 2...
All three : 1!!!!
"Happy New Year!!!!!"
-- All start giggling about the countdown and enjoy the fresh moments of the New Year... --
-- After a while... --
Raji : Okay Guys... Naan kelamburen... Veetula wait pannuvaanga...
Lakshmi : Yeah, late aaiyuduchu... We should get going...
Dhivya : Hmm... we are leaving too... Vidhya polaama? Haripriya enga?
Haripriya : Inga dhaan irukken... Come let's go...
-- The boys come there... --
Vishnu : Enna pa ellarum kelambiyaacha?
Janani : Amaa pinna ingaye irukka solriyaa?
Vishnu : Ada yarara indha ponnu? Ippa parthallum counter kudthukitte irukku... Nee ellaru kittaiyum ippdi dhana illa enkitta mattum ippdiya?
Janani : Nallavangallta nalla vidhama dhan nadanthupen... Silla loosu kitta dhan ippadi pesuven...
Vishnu: Oh... Appdiya... kk...
Karthik : Dei ava unna dhan da loosu nu sonna...
Vishnu : Adinga... Ena enna partha loosu nu sonna?
Janani : Unna parthu dhan da loosu nu sonnen...
Vishnu : Seri pona pogudhu nu manichi viduren...
Janani: Naa unkitta manipuu kekkave illaye...
Vishnu : Irunthalum naanga manippom... Engaluku andha aalvu periya manasu irukku...
Lakshmi : Shabbahhaaa... Mudiyala... Late ayiduchu kellambalam...
Azhagar : Ama ivangal vitta ippdiye pesikitt poyiduvanga... namba kellambalam...
Vetri : Naaliku college la parkkalam... bye...
Azhagar : Ama ippadi povinga?
Vetri : Idhu enna kelvi? Eppadi vandhomo, appadi dhaan povom...
Azhagar : Unna poi ketten paaru... Enna sollanum... Sari sari... Naalaikku paarpom...
Karthik : Bye bye...
-- Everyone leave happily with the fresh mood of the New Year... --
-- Next Day in College... --
-- Raji is walking while Karthik comes behind her and taps her left shoulder but comes to the other side... As a reflex, she turns to her left to find no one and turns to the right and sees Karthik... He starts giggling... --
Karthik : Emandhaiyaa...
Raji : (Laughs) Adhellam ill--
Karthik : Pch... Othuko...
Raji : Sari fine... (Frowns) Idhe trick oru naal unnaku pannuren iru...
Karthik : Naan laam emaara maaten...
Raji : Paarkalaam paarkalaam... (Both laugh)
Karthik : Ama enna innaiku romba azhaga theriyura?
Raji : Adapaavi... Appa naa ivlo nallu azhaga illa nu solluriya?
Karthik : Adhuku adhane artham...
Raji stares at him...
Karthik : Moraichi parthalum unnmai adhu dhan...
Raji : Appdiya seri othukurom... Nanga azhagu illa nu...
Karthik : Good... Ipdi dhan unnmaiya othukanum... Also...
Raji : Hey Karthik... Anga paaru... (She points to a tree)
Karthik : Enna?
Raji : Pch... Anga paaru oru squirrel tree mela earuradhu kku it's struggling...
Karthik : Adhukku enna?
Raji : Nee ellam oru aalu... Pesaama vaa...
-- They both walk up to the squirrel and Raji picks it up on her hand... --
Raji : Hey it's got hurt...
Karthik : Amaa... Ratham varudhu...
Raji : Enna pesaama nikkuraa?
Karthik : Enna panna solra?
Raji : Straight ah class kku poi Lakshmi kitta first aid kit vaangittu vaa... Fast...
Karthik : (Confused) Hmm varen... (He leaves)
Karthik : (On the way) Paravala... She cares so much for a little creature...
Raji : Seekiram vaa...
Karthik : Indha first aid kitta lama
Raji : Thanks...
-- She starts treating the squirrel's leg... Ties it with a bandage and puts it down for it to go... --
Raji : Done... Ippo adhu seekiram heal aagum la... Adhaan...
Karthik : (Simply smiles at her)
Raji : Enna appadi paakura?
Karthik : (Just nods a no')
Raji : Sari... Ippadi ingaye ninnutu sirichutu irukaama seekiram class kku vaa... I am leaving...
-- She walks away... --
Karthik : Nee romba romba azhagu dhaan... Even at your heart...
-- In the classroom... --
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Cha.. Enna ponnu da ava... Oru chinna uyir mella kuda avlo anbaa irukkale... Romba azhagu dhan... Avala nenaichale ennaku edho feeling irukke... Ana pudichu irukku...
Vishnu : Dei ennada silent ah irukka?
Karthik : (No response)
Vishnu : Dei ennada aachu ivanukku?
Azhagar : Theriyalaye... Innaiku morning kudiyum normal ah dhaan irundhaan... Nadula Raji ah paarka ponaan la? I mean thirumba vandhu first aid kit laam vaangittu ponaane...
Vishnu : But adhukkum idhukkum enna sambandham? Sari iru, test panniduvom...
"Dei Raji unna koopiduraanga daa" Vishnu tells loudly...
-- Karthik comes out of the trance in a sudden shock... --
Karthik : Ah enga??
-- Vishnu and Azhagar exchange confused looks with a slight smile... --
Azhagar : Dei ennada aachu unnaku?
Karthik : Ennaku ennachu? Onum illaye... Seri raji enga koopiitta?
Vishnu : Dei adhu naa unnoda love dream kalaikkaradhukaga vitta pella da...
Karthik : Pongadang...
Azhagar : Adha vidu modhala... Raji pathi enna nenaichittu iruntha?
Karthik : Adhu eppdi da unnaku theriyum?
Vishnu : Ama idhu periya chidambaram ragasiyam paru... Yenda unn uyir namban inga kattu kathhu kathurom... Unnaku kadhulla vizhalla... Ana raji nu peru sonna udane avanga enga nu kekura... Idhulaye theriyalaya?
-- Karthik smiles... --
Azhagar : Ada chi... Sirichadhu podhum enna nu sollu...
Karthik : Ennaku edho mathiriya irukku da...
Vishnu : Dei naa appave sonnen la... Andha nayar kadailla ivanuku tea vangi kudukkadha nu... Ippa ivanuku vaayiru sari illama poyiduchu paru..
Azhagar : Illaye avaru kadai la ellame quality ya dhana irukkum... 2 naaliku munnadin iruntha dhellam vechikka ve mattaru...
Karthik : Enna da nakkal la?
Vishnu : Seri seri... Unnoda love story ya sollu...
Karthik : Love story lam illa... Idhu verum story dhan...
Azhagar : Seri da... Adha sollu...
--Karthik explains everything briefly...--
Vishnu : So mudinchu pona scene dhan un mandaikkula nee ooti parthuttu irukka?
Karthik : Ama... Ennaku romba pudichi irukku da...
Azhagar : Edhu? Raji yava?
Karthik : (Stares) Dei...
Vishnu : Pinna andha squirrel ah?
Karthik : Unga kitta laam poi sonnen paaru... Enna sollanum...
Vishnu : Unmai ah othuko da... Oru second nee attract aaniyaa illaiyaa?
-- Karthik looks away trying hard to control his smile... --
Karthik : Adhellam illa... Ippo road la cute ah oru baby ah paartha naa thonum la? Andha maadhiri dhaan idhuvum... Neenga nenaikura alavukku laam kedaiyaadhu...
Azhagar : Ada ada... Enna oru explanation... Irundhaalum nee malupura... Naanga namba maatom...
Karthik : Aiyeya... Idhukku mela naan inga irundhen naa ippadi mokka pottae enna kondruveenga... Me escapeee...
-- Karthik runs out of the classroom... VA sit there laughing... --
-- At the end of the day... RLJ go to their homes, pack all their stuff, get on a taxi and come to the place... --
Raji : Finally... Pudhu veetukku vandhaachu!!
Side View of the HouseEntrance Interior of the HouseLakshmi : Yup... Happa naan varadhu kulla Amma vum Appa vum over advice and care... Ippadi irundhuko, samaikka kathuko, veedu neat ah vachuko... Shabbah...
Janani : Ingayum adhe dhaan... Appa oru pakkam advice, Maha oru pakkam advice, Bharathi oru side... Mudiyala...
Raji : Sari sari... Ivanga advice panninadha pathi pesinaa pesitte irukka vendiyadhu dhaan... Vaanga ulla poi uncle and aunty ah paarpom...
-- All three go inside to be greeted by their family friends, Uncle and Aunty... --
Uncle : Hey, welcome...
Lakshmi : Thanks Uncle...
Janani : Enna uncle, airport kku ready aaiyaacha?
Aunty : All packed maa... Will leave in an hour... Ungalukaaga dhaan waiting...
Raji : Thanks Aunty... Most importantly, indha house engala rent panna vittadhu kku romba romba thanks...
Uncle : It is the least we could do ma... I mean unga college pakkathula irukku, besides naanga US la poi settle aaga porom... So veedu shut aaiyu irukuradhu kku it is better for trustworthy people to stay right? Adhaan...
-- RLJ smile --
Aunty : And mainly the house should be neat... Adhu people irukka veetula dhaan irukkum... Not a house shut for years... Adhaan we implemented this idea...
Janani : Thanks Aunty... We'll make sure the house is neat... Anyway... Neenga eppo thirumba varuveenga?
Aunty : (Laughs) Adhu maybe once in a while for vacation... Otherwise... Paiyyan angaye irukkanum nnu solraan, so mostly there only...
Janani : Oh okay... That's good Aunty...
-- They all chat for a while... Later Uncle and Aunty leave to the airport... --
Raji : Veedu semmaiyaa irukku la... So comfortable...
Janani : Amaa amaa... Romba perusu veraa... Namba moonu peru mattum irukuradhu oru maadhiri bore adikum...
Lakshmi : But poga poga pazhagidum... Sari what's up with dinner?
Raji : Already Amma veetulaye kuduthutaanga... So ennaku vendaam...
Janani : Appo vaa namba light ah saaptu let's sleep...
-- The girls take a tour of the whole house and decide to take the right side of house... They took the master bedroom which had three beds... --
Janani : Indha side dhaan ventilation jaasthi ah irukkum nnu nenaikuren...
Lakshmi : Adha nee morning la dhaan decide pannanum... But this side looks more warm... So we'll take this one...
Raji : Hey ennaku first bed to the wall...
Lakshmi : Sari appo I am in the middle...
Janani : Fine, I will be towards the door...
-- All three sit on their respective beds and unpack their stuff to put in their cupboards... --
"Ch... ch... ch..."
Janani : Hey edho satham ketkala?
Lakshmi : Illaye... (All three listen keenly)
"Ch... ch... ch..."
Raji : Hey aama... (Nervous) Enna satham?
Lakshmi : (Scared) Oru vela pei ah irukkum oh?
Janani : Chi chi... Edhavadhu robbers ah irukkum...
Raji : (Panics) Robbers ah? Aiyayo ippo enna pannuradhu?
Lakshmi : Shhh... Be quiet... Silent ah attack pannalaam...
-- They go around upstairs silently and gather wooden rods... All three sneakily go downstairs and hide on both the sides of the door... --
"Ch... ch... ch... ch... ch..."
Lakshmi : Kittaka vandhutaanga...
Raji : Ennaku bayama irukku...
Janani : Shhh...
-- They hear the door unlocking... And all three get ready to point the rods towards the door... --
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Edited by Abinaabi - 9 years ago
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