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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: SushK16



Hehe... Kandipaa vendumaa? πŸ˜†


Adaa sush yenna kelvi ithu? of course we do 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Naangha eppovathu vendaamnu solluvomah ?

enna doubtuu idhu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sush...rombathan...engalauku update kandipa venum...ithula entha doubtum ilaiπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5 (Filler Part) -



FYI: All parts are created with equal contribution from Sush and me!


Person: I am the one and only Hunter of this College...
Vishnu: Ayyaiyaa hunter lam yaru college kulla vitta?
Vettiyan: Hello Vettaiyan dradhu en pasanga paasama vecha peru daa...
Vishnu: Oh... Paaka Chinna Payan mathiri iruka unaku pasangalam irukangala?
Vettiyan: Enna nakkala? Pasanga na indha college la padikaravanga...
Vishnu: Oh Appadiya...
Vettiyan: Amaa adhu pasanga ennaku paasam ah vechu peru...
Vishnu: Thu.. Boss... Paasam ah vaikuradhuna Thala Thalapthy Superstar Ulaga Nayagan... Idhellam dhan...
Vettiyan: Andha peru ellam dhan erkanave vechitangalae...
Vishnu: Andha peru laam nee thirupi vechalum... Ellarum unna thirupi pottu adipanga... Naa enna solla varana... Andha mathiri pudhusa vechikanum nu sollurean... Hunter-u bunter-u nnu... Chi...

A and K: Dei naangalum inga irukkom da...
Vettiyan: Ama neengalam yaru?
Azhagar: Hello ennaiya yaru nu ketta? Naanga ivanoda Soul friends-u
Vettiyan: Ennadhu?
Karthik: Uyir thozhana dhan appdi solluran...
Vettiyan: Oh.. Sir english la bright oh?
Azhagar: Ama boss nalla tube light mathiri bright erieevean
Vettiyan: Parthalaye theriyudhu...

Karthik: Ama ippa varikum un peru thavira vera edhuvum solla layae...
Vettiyan: Soluurean... Ennoda unnmaiayana peru Saravann Perumal naa 3rd year Mech dept...
KVA: (Stands up) Anne...
Vettiyan: Ennada dhideerunu ezhundirichilam nikkiringa?
Vishnu: Illa anna ellam oru mariyadhai dhan
Vettiyan: Mariyadhai? Neenu? Ennaku? Ivalo neram ah vaa poo... nee sollu... nnu pesittu ippo ennada vandhuchu?
Karthik: Bo- Boss... Adhu sorry boss... Neenga paarka romba young ah irukeenga... Adhanaala dhaan appadi pesinom...
Vettaiyan: Enna moonji munnadi paaraturadhu ennaku pudikaadhu...

Vishnu: (Whispers to Azhagar) Thu... Nammaku vandha nelamai ah paarudaa...
Vettaiyan: Dei thambi... Anga enna pechu?
Vishnu: Onnum illai eh boss...
Vettaiyan: Olunga sollidu... Illa velaiye unna nalla rag panniduven...
Azhagar: Dho naan eh solren boss...
Vishnu: Dei...

Azhagar: Adhu vandhu... Usual ah seniors naa rendu moonu per irupaangale... Neenga mattum thani maram ah irukeengalae... nnu kettan boss...
Vettaiyan: Oh adhuvaa... Ennakum rendu darls irukkanga...
Vishnu: Darls ah?
Vettiyan: Adhan darlings...
Vishnu: Kashtam da...
Vettiyan: Dei...

Karthik: Bro neenga modhala andha darls yaru nu sollunga bro...

Vettiyan: Solluren... Muruganu ku valli deivannai mathiri avanga ennaku...
Vishnu: Wife ah?
Vettiyan: Future la...
Azhagar: Ana bro rendu peru ah? sanda varadhu?
Vettiyan: Varavae varadhu yena avanga rendu perum romba romba close soul friends-u...
Azhagar: Ennadhu?
Vettiyan: Nee sonnadhu dhan pa uyir thozhigal...
Azhagar: Bro neengalum enna mathiri nalla bright-ah irukinga... Avanga peru enna bro?

Vettiyan: Meenakshi & Myna...
Karthik: Adaddda... Meenakshi Myna peru poruthamae nalla irukkae...

Vishnu: Sorry bro konja unarchi vasa pattutom...
Vettiyan: Adhu seniors dra bayam irunthukittae irukkanum...
KVA: Kandippa bro...

--Vettiyan phone rings...--

Vettiyan: Hello chella kutty... Dho vandhutean ma... Edhu parking area ku dhana dho mamma innum 10 seconds vandurama... phone vechidurean...
Vettiyan: Appram thambingala ennoda darls kitta irunthu alaipu vandhuduchu so naa kelamburean... Andha bayam mattum irunthu kittae irukkanum enna?
KVA: kk bro kk...

Karthik: Nalla velai andha loosu kitta irundhu thapichom...
Azhagar: Inimel kannula maatave kudaadhu...
Vishnu: Sari vaanga daa polaam...

-- First day of College was a huge memorable experience for our characters... It just marked the day that their lives would actually start... --

-- A few weeks later... The guys and girls, really don't acquaint with each still... A lot of moraichufying going on... Seniors have ragged somewhat... Not much to say that it was real ragging or it was fun yet... Our characters are enjoying in college just as youth would... Let's go to a world of more fun... --


-- Part 6 Walking --


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Edited by abinayaabi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6 -


FYI : All parts are created with equal contribution from Abi and me!


~~~ December 31... ~~~


Janani : Enga pochu? Cha... Naanum arrah manneram ah thedittu irukken... Anaa kannula theriyave maatengudhu... Saapitu inga dhaan water bottle la kai kaluvunen... Apparom dhideernu kaanom? Hmm... Vera vazhi illa... Keela erangi mannu la theda vendiyadhu dhaan...

-- Saying so J gets on the ground and starts searching --

Azhagar: Enna iva edho serious thedittu irukka? Enna nu poyi parpom... Ennanga ground ah kaaiyala perukittu irukkinga? Adhukellam ver aalu irukkanga...

Janani: Mariyadhaiya moodittu poyidu illati edhachum asingama thittida poren...

Azhgar: Adhu enna ennaku pudhusa? Vandha mudha naale dhan engala keeluchittiyae...

Janani: Nee vera erichal ah kelaapadhe... Please konja edatha mokka podaama, gali pannuriya?

Azhagar: Ada mudhala ennatha thedura nu sollu...

Janani: Adhu edhuku unnaku?

Azhagar: Chumma naanum oru company kuduthu theda dhaan...

Janani: Eppa saami aala vida ennaku ring kedaikalai naalum paravalla... Nee onnum help panna vendam...

Azhagar: Appo endha ee kaakka vum unna edhuvum pannama naan ingaye ninnu paarthukuren...

-- Janani glares at him and continues searching... Without noticing, she steps on a rock under her foot while half-sitting, and she hits her elbow on the sand, with a force... --

Janani : Ahhh...

Azhagar: Ennachu ennachu?

Janani: Adippatuduchu... Ahh...

Azhagar: Avalodhana? Naa kuda vera ennamo nenaichuten...

Janani: Yenda adipattuduchu nu solluren... avalodhana nu kekkura?

Azhagar: Nee enna lorry adillaya vizhundha? Lesa oru scratch dhaane?

Janani: Lesa oru scratch ah? Paavi blood varudhu da... Ahhh... Valikudhe...

Azhagar: Enna blood ah? Kattu... ayoo enna ponnu nee parthu panna matiya... Iru na water bottle um cotton um eduthuttu varen...

Janani: Eh-- (Azhagar runs)

Azhagar: Kattu enga adi pattuchu? Lesa water la clean pannu...

Janani: (She follows) Ahh.. Eriyudhu...

Azhagar: Kattu naa cotton vechi bandaid pottu viduren... (He does it)

Janani: Ahhha... Eriyudhu da pakki...

Azhagar: Pakki ah? Yen solla matta paavam friend nu help pannuren paru enna sollanum...

Janani: Sorry...

Azhagar: Ippa ok va?

Janani: Hmm... Ippa paravalla...

Azhagar: Vaai mattum dhan irukku... Enna nee... chinna pulla mathiri azhugura?

Janani: Yen chinna pulla mattum dhaan valicha azhuma? Engaluku ellam vallikadha? Engullukum vallikum... Engalukum Kannu irukku kannula kanner irukku... Nangallum azhuvom...

Azhagar: Shhabbaa... Mudiyala unnaku kaaila adi pattadhuku badhilla vaai la adi pattu irukkanum... Naa nimathiya irunthu iruppen...

Janani: Iru unna enna pannuren paru...

-- J searches the ground and picks up a "kattai" --

Azhagar: Ey ennadi pechu irukkombdhu katai ellam edukkura...

--J starts hitting him with that kattai... --

Azhagar: Ey adi kaadha di...

Janani: Enna kindal pannuriya?

Azhagar: Ey vallikudhu di...

Janani: Nalla vallikattum...

Azhagar: Ponna di nee? Seriyana pisasu di...

Janani: Poda kaataeri...

-- Both look at each other and laugh at the same time... --

Azhagar: Ippa edhuku sirikira?

Janani: Nee edhuku siricha?

Azhagar: Chumma dhan...

Janani: Paithiyam dhan chumma sirippanga...

Azhagar: Ayoo enna enna poyi nee nu sollura?

Janani: Adinga... (Raises the kattai..)

Janani: Achachoo... En ring marandhuten...

Azhagar: Enga tholaicha?

Janani: Inga dhan hand wash pannum bodhu...

Azhagar: Inga irukkadhu unnoda table kitta poyi thedu kedaikkum...

Janani: Naa inga dhan tholaichen nnu solluren appram anga eppdi kedaikkum?

Azhagar: Kedaikkum maa... poyi thedu...

Janani: Hmm... Sari naan poyi paarkuren...

~~ AJ Leave to that table ~~

-- Raji's is suffering to walk with a torn sandal... So she picks it up and starts walking barefoot... --

Raji: Amma... Kaal suduthe... Cha inneram nu parthu chappal vera pinjiduchu...

-- She spots a person walking in front of her... --

Raji: Ivaroda shadow la nadakalaam ah? At least hot ah irukaadhu la? Pakathula irukka shoe shop kku poraa varaikkum...

-- She starts walking on the shadow that moves in front of her... --

Raji: (Thinks) Paravaillai... Aalu nalla fit ah dhaan irukkaan... Anaa yaaru nnu theriyalai eh... Kaduvule... Yaarum vilangam ah irukka kudaadhu... Be silent Raji... Shh...

-- After a while, she tries to change foot, but she loses balance... --

Raji: Aahhh...

-- The person turns around in a jiffy, and leans forward to catch her waist... --

Raji: (Still looking at her feet) Thank u...

-- Raji looks up to see the person's face... Shock... --

Raji: Hmmm... (Thinks) Ivan ah? Cha... Poiyum Poiyum Karthik ah?

Karthik: Are you okay?

Raji: Hmm...

--There is a sudden breeze of wind... It gets faster and faster... The sand around KR starts swirling... They enjoyed the wind... Secretly, they were admiring each other--

Karthik: (Mind voice) Ppah... Andha wind ava face mela adikuradhu... So cute...

Raji: (Mind voice) Aalu semma smart... Life la indha maadhiri oruthana paarthadhe illa seriously...

-- While both were in a trance, just admiring each other... Karthik's phone buzzes... And both come back to their senses... K lifts R up now, and speaks for a while... --

Karthik: Ey... Amaa nee edhukku en pinnadiye vara?

Raji: Adhu... (Shows her torn sandal) Idhu naala dhaan unga shadow la nadandhaa kaal sudaadhe nnu...

Karthik: (Starts laughing) So cute...

Raji: (Frowns) Is he trying to flirt?

Karthik: Adhu ellam illa... Nee sonna idea cute ah irundhuchu... Adhukku dhaan sonnen...

Raji: Hmm... Nambittom...

Karthik: Sari ippo enna panna poraa?

Raji: Unnaku edhukku adhu? Un velai ah paarthuttu po...

Karthik: Romba dhan thimiru unnaku...

Raji: Theriyudhulla appram edhuku inga ninnutu irukka? Edatha gaali pannu...

Karthik: Aiyee... Paavam nnu ninna romba dhaan pannure? Peh...

-- K starts walking... --

Raji: (Mind voice) Podaa... Nee illainaa engalala nadandhu poga mudiyaadha?

-- Few seconds later --

Raji: Habbah... Mudiyala... Yaaraiyum kannuku ettura dhoorathu la kuda kaanome... Ippo enna pannuradhu? Indha veil vera... Mandai ah polakudhu... Sari vera vazhi? Ippadi nadandhu poga vendiyadhu dhaan...

-- After a while of walking... A bike zooms to her and stops... --

Raji: Edhukku vandhe?

Karthik: Vandila earu... Pakathula irukka shoe shop la viduren...

Raji: Unnoda help onnum ennaku vendaam... Kelambu...

Karthik: Un pecha laam naan ketkaradhukku inga illa... Vandila earu...

Raji: Mudiyaadhu daa...

Karthik: (Raises his voice) Vandila earu di... Oru dhadava sonna puriyaadhu?

Raji: (Gets startled) Hmm... Grr...

-- She gets on his bike... Both start going... --

Raji: (Thinks) Semma style ah dhaan vandi oatturaan... Paravaillai... Oru alavukku nalla paiyyan ah dhaan irukkan... Thirumbi vandhu kootitu laam poraan...

-- After a while, Raji debates within herself to hold Karthik's shoulder... She raises her hand... But doesn't hold... She doesn't the same thing over and over again... Karthik notices this from the side mirror... --

Karthik: (Smiles) Paravaillai... Pudichukalaam...
Raji: (She too smiles secretly) Hmm...

-- The second after he takes hold, he accelerates the bike, and it zooms in a jiffy... Raji's goes and bumps into him... Holds him tighter... --

~~~ Munbe Vaa Enn Anbe Vaa... Song plays from Karthik's phone... ~~~

--Both silently enjoy the song... Raji still holding him... Something sparks in between them... Then after a few mins, Karthik parks the bike in front of the store--

-- Raji buys her pair of sandals... Soon they both head back... Just in the few minutes, not even an hour, together, there was something sweet between KR... They feel as if a new bonding has formed in between them... --

~~~ Next scene ~~~

Lakshmi: (Riding her scooty) Grrr... En ippo vandi ninuchu? Innum twenty mins la naan college la irukkanum... Sethen... Fresher ah irundhuttu late ah poyi naane en image ah damage pannikanum ah? Shabbah...

-- She calls R and J, but no response from the other end... So without an option, she stands there waiting to ask for a lift... Suddenly a car parks in front of her... Lakshmi tries to see who it is, with a confused face... The person get's out... --

Person: Naan dhaan nga... Vishnu, unga classmate...

Lakshmi: Hmm... Theriyudhu... Unnaku enna venum?

Vishnu: Hello, idha naan ketka vendiya kelvi... Inga enna pannitu irukkinga?

Lakshmi: Illa chumma kathu vangalam nu ninnuttu irukken...

Vishnu: Ennanga over kalaikuringa...

Lakshmi: Pinna naa edhuku nikkaranu theriyala?

Vishnu: Scooty repair ayiducha?

Lakshmi: Theriyudhula appo mu--

Vishnu: Moodittu poo nu dringa correct ah?

Lakshmi: Poda dei... Nee vera enna verupaetha dha...

Vishnu: Serious ungala verupaetha varala nga help pannalam nnu...

Lakshmi: Ennada help panna poraa?

Vishnu: Lift kudupen... Mechanic ah koopuduven...

Lakshmi: Vendaam po...

Vishnu: Saringa... Naan appo kelamburen...

-- Vishnu starts walking towards his car... --

Lakshmi: (Thinks) Avasara pattuteno? Ippo enna pannuradhu? Marubadiyum koopiduvom... (Calls) Uh... Vishnu...

Vishnu: Ennanga?

Lakshmi: Andha lift kedaikumaa?

Vishnu: (Smiles cutely) Why sure... Edhukku nga ippadi veembu pudikureenga?

Lakshmi: (Smiles) Chumma dhaan...

Vishnu: Oru nimisham...

-- He calls a mechanic to see her scooty, and tells him to drop it at the college after the work is done... --

Vishnu: Vaanga polaam...

Lakshmi: Thank u...

Vishnu: Nammakula edhukku thanks laam...

Lakshmi: Edhu? Excuse me?

Vishnu: Uh... Never mind... Vaanga...

-- Both go to college on time... --

~~~ This day, last day of the year, turned out to be extremely special for all the heroes and heroines... Wanna know how the night of New Year's Eve was? Stay tuned with us... ~~~


^^ -- New Year's Special Part 7 Walking -- ^^


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Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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New Year Special Chapter Will be served later on Guys... πŸ˜ƒ


The main reason being, that Abi and I are expecting a lot of New Year updates from our writers, so ours will be after the other updates... πŸ˜› Also for the fact that many of us would be celebrating New Year with family and friends, we'd like to update after everything has settled... 😊


But it is a fantastic chapter for you all (New Year's Treat) ... Stay tuned !! πŸ˜‰



Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy new year my dear friends...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey... Wow...

U have introduced vetaiyan and his darlings... So nice..

Waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...Sush and Abi...

Dec 31st annaikku our heroes and heroiens had a special moments..

Very nice thought and super storyline line ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww so lovely updates dears.
Vettaiyan my favorite.
Pavam nama heros matikitu tavikiranga 🀣 🀣 .
J&A , K&R , V&L - so cute 😳
Nice storyline dears .
Different situation for each couples and its apt for their characters . Really enjoyed it . Super Abi & Sush dear.

Waiting for New Year Special pa
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