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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb Shiny...👏...
Welcome to the Writer's club...⭐️..

Loved the Tirupati background😉
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By the way... when are you starting a FF?????
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Its a very nice start shiny..👏👏

chosen a lovely location for the story...

KV sharing an apartment...and K planning something for V...interesting...

I think K has woken up V in midnight lolzz😛

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Originally posted by: SushK16

Sorry! For being late! 😒


Great Start Shiny!! 😃 Looking forward for more... Very different concept! 😉



Its ok,sush...no problem😊...

Thanks a lot...yeah...it would be very different from the real storyline😉
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Originally posted by: sweety16

Superb Shiny...👏...

Welcome to the Writer's club...⭐️..

Loved the Tirupati background😉



Thank u so much,sweety😃...

ada,naan ungala mathirilam periya writerlam kidaiyathu...etho ennala mudinchathu...ennalam writers clubla serthukarathu romba over😆...

aama sweety,tirupathinale lovely placethana...athuvum tirumala...no words to express😳
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Originally posted by: sweety16

By the way... when are you starting a FF?????



ada,FFlam no chance,sweety,ithuve theedrnu thoonina idea...ippa SS mattumthan...time iruntha FF pathi yosipen😆
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Originally posted by: sathyakrs

Its a very nice start shiny..👏👏

chosen a lovely location for the story...

KV sharing an apartment...and K planning something for V...interesting...

I think K has woken up V in midnight lolzz😛



Thank u so much,sis.😛..

aama,yosichu yosichu parthen,takkunu tirupathithan super placenu thonuchu intha storyku...athan...

@bold,hmm...sis...atha neenga next partla check pannikonga,ok?😆
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F
riends,i am really overwhelmed by ur huge responses...this is enough for me.😳..many friends r asking for next update...i think of updating on Monday...but ungalukaga iniku update panren...here the chapter 2 of azhagana tharunangal😊...

CHAPTER 2

lights of many houses switched on suddenly on hearing this unknown thundering voice...

"enna satham athu,oru vela nai kie oolai idutho,but etho manusa voice maathiri iruke"...pakath aathu maami thikkunu elunthu, thanakuthaana pesi kondu irunthal...

"ennaaa,elunthuringo,yaaro kathara satham ketkuthu paarungo.elunthurungona..."maamavai thatti elupinal maami...

"adaadada...enna nimathiya koda thoonga vida maatiya...ennadi venum unaku"mama thookuthla irunthu muzhucikittu ketar.

"Enna,etho bayangara sathamna,athan ungalai elupinen"

"Enaku onnum ketkalaiyedi,unaku mattum eppadiidi antha satham ketkum...ethavathu keta kanavu kandrupa...theerthatha kudichutu paduthu thoongu,polambama".. mama maamiya samathanpaduthitu thoonga aarambichutar..

But maamiku doubtave irunthathu...athukumela maamiyala enna panna mudiyum...avaalum thoonga aarambichuta...

Oru anchu veetuku aduthu veetula kudirukarathu, husband n wife...

"Intha sathatha keta pei kathara mathiri iruke,ennanga enaku bayama irukunga"veetukaramma purushana pottu thatti kondu irunthal

"nee pesama thoongaraya,illati naan velila poi padukava,nightvela pei cinemalam parkathanu ethanavaati solradhu,pesama thoonguma,naaliku office iruku"...avan aluthukonde thoonga poitan..

Ippadiye neraya veetula uraiyaadal nadanthurukum...ivalavu koochal,amarakalama irukarapo,namma hero mattum romba amaithiya irunthar...athu ippadithan nadakumnu avanukuthan muthalye theriyume...

Vishnuvoda watch rendu maninu kaatkittu irunthuchu...athan intha alaral,amarkalam ellam...

"Padupaavi,enna ippadi kolarane,ippa iruku paaru avanuku saravedi"perum kovathula V karthik roomku ponnan

There,Karthik wearing his watch,silently...

"Dei karthik,ithu unake aniyayama theriyala...kalam kabadam illatha payana midnight rendu maniku elupi kulika vechu,athuvum intha dressalam poda vechu...enda ...enda...ippadi enna pottu padapaduthara...unaku ennada naan keduthal senjen...etho sila naal unnoda tiffina naan konjam thirudi thinnuten...athukuthan pazhi vangaraya enna"...vishnu pavam pola ketan konjam kovathudan...

Karthiku siripu vanthuruchu...but he tried to control his laugh n calmly answered V"Ennada Vishnu,ippadi loosu mathiri pesara...naan unna pazhi vanga porena??...eppadida unnla matum ippadi yosika mudiyathu.,...konjam moolaiya use panni think pannu,ethuku ippadi panrenu"...

Vishnu oru nimisham think panni"enaku theriyalada,onnum strike aagala mindla...neeye solli tholaiyen,ethukunu"

"Dei,evalavu surprise aana matter ithu...ippadi irukayeda...unna ennanau solradhu".karthik thalaiya adichukatha koraiya ketan.

"Ennathu,surpriseana vishayama,ada paavi,evanavathu rathiri rendu maniku surprise kudupanada...ithalam romba overda."..vishnu thanaye nonthukittan

"Vishnu ,unaku nyabagam illaiya?.konja naal munadithana suprabatha seva,tomala sevakulam ticket eduthuom tirumalala...athuku innikuthan naama poganmunda...nee koda pogannumnu romba aasai patella...maranthu poitaya,athukulla"...karthik aarvama ketan...

"Oh..athu inikuthana,serida...athuku ethuku rendu maniku ready aaganum...5 manikuthana venki elunthuruparu...ivalavu seekarama naam poganuma?"..vishnu romba innocent kelvi ketan

"Vishnu...vishnu...avarlam 2.30ke eluthuruvarda...nammala mathiri illai...seekarama netrila santhanatha vechukittu vaada...venki namakaga kaathukittu iruparla"...

"Enna,oh...oho...athana parthen iniku ennada suprabatham slokava podave illainu...ked ithanda nee"..vishnu seerinan

"Aamamda...suprabathatha kovilaye ketukalamnu podalai"...perumaiya sonnan K

"Adapavi...adapavi...intha time change vishayam enaku theriyatheda...munnaleye therinchu iruntha naan ticketa book panniruka maaten...en thukathaiyum keduthu,venki thugathayum keduthu...romba imsaida unnnoda"...vishnuku alatha kuraithan itha sollumbothu...

"Vaya mooduda...enna pechu pesara nee...perumala parka unaku avalavu vazhiukutho...olunga naan sonnatha seekaram senchutu vaa...unna naan ingalam iruka vidammaten...neeyum kovilku vanthuthan aara...understand?"...karthik order potta mathiri sollitu veshtiya seri senchukittu irunthan...

Vishnu nonthukittu avan roomku poi,venki photovu ethire

"Venki inga parthaya ivan panra kodumaiya...enna paathi thukathulaye elupivittutan...ithu nyayama,dharmamaa"...sollu venki sollu??"...venkikitta complain pannikittu irunthan

"yaarukittada pesikitta iruka...sonna velai aacha, illaiya??...karthik than roomla irunthu ketan...

"Venkikitte unna pathi complain pannikittu iruken"...V said proudly

"Inga panrathuku kovila vanthu complain pannu,seekaram saaviya eduthukittu vaa...time aachu."..karthik viratinan vishnuva...

"Kandipa anga vanthum pannuvenda...athula entha maatramum illai...venki naan solradhayum ketpar...mindla vechuko.".vishnu saval vittukitte, saaviya eduthukittu vasalku vanthan..netriyil santhanathodu..

Seri,Vishnu azhaga avane varnichukittan...but karthik...atha naanthan pannanum...

Karthik veshti sattaila,jollikaranthanu sollanum...konjam karupu niram...but kalaiyana mugham..athula oru amaithi...uthatula eppavum siru punmuruval...netriyil santhanam...ippadi irunthan karthik...enna romba alaguthana?

Bikela karthik utkarnthukittu..."dei Vishnu,seekaramava,busstandku poganum"...vishnuva romba veratinan

"Vanthutenda,doora lock pannirukanu check panna vendama" saying this Vishnu sits at back...

" seri,polamada Vishnu... readya"...

"Hmmhmm...ithuku onnum kuraichal illai...vandiya kilapalam...start pannitholai"...

"Vishnuuu...kovilku pogum pothu nalla varthai pesu,enna puriyutha?...appuram naan readya ketathu,vandiya start pannradhuku illai,athuku munnadi pannuvome athuku readyaanu keten"...

"Oh...unnoda fav line thana...ready...one ...two...three"...V counts the numbers

"Om namo venkateshaya"....they two chant in chorus...

"Ippa vandiya start pannuda...ellam nallabadiya nadakum"...vishnu nambikayai sonnan...

Karthik bikeai start panni kilambitan...perumaalai dharisanam panna..

Kovila nerungiyaachu...there KV stands in queue... there plays the "om namo venakateshaya"chanting...

Theedernu oruvar,"ezhu kondalavada,venketramana,govinda,govinda"nu uraka sonar...

Udane oru kural"ganapathy bappa mourya"..nu ketkuchu...athu vera yaarum illai...vishnuthan..avan ninnukitte thoogi vazhinthukondu irunthan...theedernu slogan keta udana,avanum than pangagu solla aarmbichutan...athuvum vera slogan...that too repeatedly

But athu theriyama Karthik venki chantingla muzhgi poiirunthan...but yaaro adicha mathiri unarvu erpattu thirumbi partha...shock...

Vishnu "ganapathy bappa morya"nu kathi solikittu irunthan...anga iruntha ellorum vishnuva oru mathiri parthu kondu irunthargal...

"Dei,Vishnu...vishnu...enna pannikittu iruka nee",...Karthik konjam atrichiya ketan

"Naamavali sollikittu irukenda...nallalaillaiya?...illa ketkalaiya...vena kathi sollava"...V questions K in halfsleep

"Vishnu...mothala araikurai thookathulairunthu elunthukittu enna paaruda"...K orders him

Vishnu methuva kana thirunthukittu,ketan..."ennada,naan correctthana chanting pannikittu irunthen,ethuku enna disturb panra?"

"Yei,venkiodatha solludana,pillaiyarodatha sollikitu iruka...athuvum sathama"...saying this K stares at him

Vishnu athirchiaaikitte,"appadiya sonnen...hihi...but avarthana mutharkadavul...sonna ennada thappu"...

"Dei,thappunu sollalaida,inga chanting oodikittu iruku..but un soundthan atha vida balama iruku...ellorum unna etho mathiri parkuraangada."..K points his finger towards the people stands behind them

"Appadiya,iru naan parkaren."..sollikite vsihnu thirumbi partha,ellorum avanaye uttru parthu kondu irunthargal vithyasama

"Hihi...sorida hari,ippaparu...".balaji,enna kaaputhupa"nu sollikitte thoopukaranam poda aarambichutaan. V..

Atha parthu rendu college boys sirichukittu irunthanga...

Karthik thirumbi parthu nonthukittan...vera enna panna mudiyum avanala...but he warned Vishnu"Vishnu inga paaru ippa main gatekula poga porom,un seshtaiyalam konjam moota katti vechutu swamiya sevi...purinchutha?"...

Vishnu nods his head silently...


Venkiya nera parka poranga KV...

Avara KV kangal parthagi vitttathu...

"OM NAMO VENKATESAHAYA"-chanting heard everywhere around there

karthikala vecha kanna eduka mudiyalai...pinna enna azhagu...enna brahmandam...chanting olika...KVyin kaigal thanagave avarai vangina...karthik mattum illai,ivalavu neram comedy panikittu iruntha vishnuvum ala aarambichutan...avarta onnum ketka thonnalai rendu perukum...avar dharisanam kidaithu vittathu,ithuve periya bakiyam illaiya...ippadithan rendu perum ninaithu kondargal...

Dharsan mudinchu velila vanthutaanga KV...suddena karthik venki irukara side thirumbi itha vendikittan

"govind,unna parthathe enaku periya varamthan ,ithukumela enaku onnum venam...but ennoda nabana nee nallabadiya parthuko...avan life romba smootha,jollya poganum,entha kastamum illama"...after saying these lines,he turns to V n Shared his views about his "best" friend

"Vishnu,venkiya parthayada...enna azhazgu...enna swarubam...hmm...avara vittu piriya manase illaida"...karthik perumoochu vittukitte sonnan..

"Appa nee archagara aaganumda...appadiaana avarkodaye irukalam"...V comedy panninan

"Appadiya...appa naan archagar aaidava,."..unarchivasapattu ketan K

Vishnuku enna solrathune theriyalai...unmaiyave aachariyapatu poitan V...,"dei,athukalam sila rules irukuda,konjam amaithya iru...athuseri..unaku enna kavalai, neethan avara manasula vechuirukaiye...ithavida enna venum sollu"..vishnu avanuku urchagam ootinan...

K smiles widely on hearing his words...

"dei,anga parthaya,antha kadaila enaku balaji image pathitha ring venum,poi paaru,itho vanthudren"...vishnu karthiku order potan...

"Serida poi parkaren...nee seekrama vaa"...K moves from there with smiling face...

Karthik ponathum,Vishnu gopuratha parthu kaigala koopi

"perumale,ivana parthaya, evalavu bhakti vechurukan unmela...neethan avana nalla parthukanum entha kastamum kodukama..pls pa atha mattum pannu enaku."V mansara venkita pray panikitan


Bus amaithiyaga poi kondu irunthathu...

"Vishnu ennada summa vara?"K questions him

"Hmm...enna pesa solra,nee kaalaila panna kaariyathuku,sollu?"...V konjam athatalave ketan

"Ennada,kovila orumathiri,inga orumathiri pesara"K pavampola ketan

"Athu punithamana idam,anga poi naan unta moonchiya thooki vechuiruntha,nalla irukuma?athan appadi irunthen."..moonchila adichamathiri pesinan V

K remains silent on hearing these words...then silence prevails there...

Veetuku vanthachu...

"Dei,iruda,enga pora...enna escape aaga parkariya...nee panna kaariyathuku punishment koduka vena?"...V kuthala ketan...

"ennada ippadi pesara...naan appadi enna thappu pannen...seri,paravailli ,un punishmenta kodu,naan ethukarenda"K reply silently..

"appadi vaa vazhiku...kanna muudu,seekaram"by commanding ,V takes the steal scale

Without thinking for a second,k closes his eyes...nanban ennavena thanna pannatumnnu amaithiya irunthan K

Suddenly V hugs Karthik tightly throwing the scale on the sofa...karthik experienced some touch,but surprised to the core while opening his eyes,for he didn't expect this surprise...he too noticed V is crying...

"Dei Vishnu,ennada ithu,chinna kuzhantha mathiri aluthukittu iruka",karthik avana anboda ketan..

"Illada...nee iruka paaru,chanceaillada...unna mathiri friend kidaika naan koduthu vechurukunumda"...sollumpodhe Vishnu kanngal kulammai irunthana

"Dei,ethuku ippadilam sollikittu iruka,V"...karthik avana thattikoduthu kondu ketan..

"illada...intha kalathula evan ,avan frienda ippadi kalaila swami seivakalam elupi vidran sollu...athuvum evan avan frienda nalla vazhila kondu poran,sollu..evan avana amma mathiri paathukapanga,sollu...aama sila per irupanga...but unna mathiri oruvanalayum iruka mudiyathuda...truely naan luckythanda...naanlam sathiyama unna mathiri iruka mudiyathuda"...V than manasula ullatha kooti theerthutan...sollumbothu avan kangala kanner ariviyai kooti kondu irunthathu...

Karthik nezhinthu poitan Vishnu pecha ketu"dei,unaku enna koraichal sollu,unnalathan enaku happiness,jollyness ellame...nee illama naan eppadi iruka mudiyum sollu"K aluthukitte ketan...

"But neethan best,no doubt in it"V said firmly n warned him not to speak further...n they got separated from their hug...

"aama ennoda ladoos engada",k siruchukitte ketan Vishnu mooda matha

"Hihi...atha naan buslaye saapitenda,neekoda kanna muudikitu irunthaye...appathan"...sollumpothe V moonchila asadu vazhincnuthu...

"Adapaavi ivalavu pannikittu irunthaya nee, busla...seri,ippa saapida mudiyuma illa mudiyatha."...K questions V with doubt...

"Pinna patni kidaka solriya,naan saapida ladooslam digest aairukum naan pesina pechuku...ippa am so hungryda,...vishnu replies naughtily

"Seri sapda polam va."K siruchukittte sonnan

"seri,iniku enna senchuruka,Idli,dosai,pongal?"...V enquired K

"Moonu dishum illai...poori senchurukenda"...

"ennathu,Pooriya?...ippave enaku naa ooruthuda...vaa sapidalam,moreover enaku pidichatha senchuruka...athanala"...V stops in middle...

"Athanala...ennada,sollu"...k aarvamai ketan...

"i love u da,hari"...V anbodu sonnan

"Hahaha,appadiya...appa naanum love u da,Vishnu"...K kushiyaga sonnan...


antha araiye ivargalin sirupu sathathal sulnthu irunthathu...but anga inorutharum ivargalai parthu sirithu kondu irunthathu ivargaluku theriyathu...avar yaaruna... venkiyethan,wall photovil...pinna kuzhainthagal ippadi irupathai parthu entha thanthaikuthan santhosamaga irukathu?...athuvum ivar ulagathin thanthailaya😳...


THODARUM


Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago
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Hi bro...
Sorry for the late comments pa.
Yennala nambave mudiyala pa. Adhuvum thirupathi superb pa
Yeppavume indha Karthi Ku Vishnu via tourcher pandradhey velaiya pochu pa...
Waiting for the next part bro...👏
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Appada...friends,oruvaliya long update koduthuten😊...eppadi irukunu konjam sollunga...ethaavthu thappa irunthalum sollunga...ok...oruvela ungaluku intha story aruthuchuna sollunga,i will stop it immediately...then RL intro next updatela ...ok..😃..

then,unga ellorukum suprabatha seva,tomalai seva pathi therinchurukum...but atha naan konjam breifa solla aasaipadren...here it is.

Suprabhata Seva:

Suprabhatam is the ritual performed at Sayana Mandapam to wake up the main deity and his consorts from His celestial sleep by chanting of the sacred Suprabhatam hymns consisting of :


  • Suprabhatam (Waking the Lord): 29 slokas
  • Strotram (Hymns to the Lord): 11 slokas
  • Prapatti (Surrender to the Lord): 16 slokas
  • Mangalasanam (Prayer to Lord's Glory): 14 slokas

The Suprabhatam is the first seva performed to the deity every day and starts with the opening of the main entrance by golla - cowherds. The cowherds or shepherds were given this honor to recognize their services of providing millk when Lord Srinivasa was in Penance. Descendants of Annamacharya recite Annamayya's kirtan. In Dhanurmasa, Tiruppavai is recited instead of Suprabhatam. The archakas (priests) offer a mixture of cow's milk, butter and sugar as Naivadyam (offerings) to the Lord. On completion of the Seva, the mixture is provided to the devotees as prasadam.


Tomala seva:

Thomala Seva: Sometimes also written as "Tomala Seva", this form of Worship is the most sought after "Seva (service to The Lord) at the Holy temple of Tirumala in Andhra Pradesh, India. The Indian Basil (Tulasi leaf) is considered the most sacred of leaves for a worship, especially considered very dear to Lord Vishnu.

Hence the word "Tho" for Thulasi leaves, and "Mala" for garland. The whole worship during this Seva is done by offering Thulasi leaves to Lord Venkateswara, and then garlanding Him with a specially prepared Tulasi garland. Historically, the 30 stanzas of Sri Aandaal's Tiruppavai (Tamil hymns scripted by a female devotee of The Lord Sri Ranganatha of Srirangam in the 7th century) have been recited during this worship.


This Seva is not performed during the months of May through July and again in the month of "Margazhi" (Margasira in Telugu) which roughly falls anytime between the English months of mid December through mid January. Devotees are allowed to sit all along the corridor leading to the Sanctum sanctorum at Tirumala, from the second doorstep, extending into the foyer area where the imposing idol of Sri Garudalwar (Lord Vishnu's steed) kneels in obeisance to His Lord.

The Enchanting Tiruppavai is sung and the chief deity is worshipped with the Sacred Tulasi leaves for about 45 minutes





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