SS:Azhagana Tharunangal :CHAPTER 11(B) UPDATED IN PG 80 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajee71

Shiny, adutha venture SS pola... Congrats Bro !!!

Character sketch padichadhume expectations jaasthi agiduchi... So wait lam panna muditadhu pa...

Seekira first partaa kudungha...



Thanks a lot,sis😊...

ok...ok...i will try to update within tonight...dont worry...πŸ˜†
Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting for the first part πŸ˜ƒ
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Chapter 1:

Miga azhagana oor thirupathi...thirupathinu pera ketaudane,ellorum manathulayum,en oru china kuzhanthai manathulayum takkunu nyabagathula varubavar namma venkithan...avaranalathan intha ooruku sirape...avar kovila irunthu konjam thooruthula irukarathuthan Balaji vikas apartment...bramandamai...athula oru flat namma rendu heroes vodhathu...

"Vishnu,Vishnu...elunthuruda...vidinjachu...hmm...seekaram"...karthik konjam athatalave kathikittu irunthan

"haaa...varenda...,but athukullaya vidinjuchuruchu...konjam neram thoongina unaku porukathe...ippathan thoongina mathiri irunthuchu..time romba fasta poguthupola"...vishnu araithookathula ketan,,,

"aama..aama...seekaram poi palla thechuttu,kulichuttu vaa...naan boost kondu varen"...

When Vishnu got up,not only the room ,outside place also shrouded with darkness...

shockaaikitte,"dei ennada ithu...innum suriyan varave illaipola...iruta irukeda"...

Karthik while moving outside,stands there hearing vishnu's dialogue...

Then Karthik samalichukittu,"athu illaida,climate konjam supera irukulada...athuvum rainy season vera...athan konajam late aaguthupola...but mani aairuchuda"

"appadiya solra...ennala namba mudiyalaye da"...vishnu asks with surprise look

"nee,ippa poi kulichutu varaya illaiya??"..kovapadra mathiri ketan k ..

"seri,seri...kochukatha,itho,oru nimishathula fresh aaitu varen"...

Vishnu enters the bathroom with a towel...there he sings continuously while bathing...that too very louder

"dei,Vishnu...kalankaahthala paatu thevaiyada...methuvavathu paaduda...pakkathula irukara maami vanthu satham poda poraanga"...K tells from the kitchen...anga varaikum Vishnu padra satham ketkuthu..

"poda...ithukukoda oru manaunaku urimai illaiya...nama naatuku freedom kidaichachu, theriyumla?...antha maamiya vidava naan satham poten...neeye sollu...nethu koda avanga aauthukararkitta kathinatha naan ketene,en room varaikum ketuchuna parthuko...ethuku eduthalum bayantukitu,poda"by saying this,vishnu starts to sing again...

karthiku ithukumela enna solradhathunu theriyala...avanuku avan velai aanum...athulathan avan kuriya irunthan...

Vishnu bathroomla irunthu velila vanthan..karthik boosta eduthu avantta kuduthan...

"Ppahh...intha kulirla ippadi chuda chuda boost kudikarathula,oru thani aananthame irukuda...enna solra karthik"...

" hmm...Correctthan,Vishnu...seri seekarama kudichutu...intha dressa

pottukittu va"...

avan kamicha dress...veshti,sattai...

Vishnu athirchiyagi..."dei,ennada ithu jogging porathuku entha madayanavathu intha dressa podukuvanada??...ithu konjam unaku overa theriyala??"..."athu seri,nan onnu ketka maranthuten...jogging poitu vantha udana than boost kudupa...ippa enna athuku munnadiye kuduthuta?."...

Karthik malupikitee...".athu vanthu...haan...illada,iniku kulir konjam jaasthiyamda...athan konjam chuda boost kuduthen"...payan samalichutan...

"Seri...seri...vettithanama kelvi ketakama naan kudutha dressa pottukittu ready aagu...soliten"...strictly saying this, k moves from that room...

But vishnuvuku ore kulapam...

"Enna aachu iniku ivanuku,loosu pidichurucho??... seri...intha dressaye pottutholaivom...ivantta pesi jeika mudiyathu,oruvela kovilku irukumo??..seri seri,appadi irunthalthan enna...kovilku poitu veetuku vanthu dressa maathikalamla...oh...appa jogging illaiya...jolly"..vishnuvuku ega kushi...(Vishnu arivaalithan,but karthikapathi ivanala muzhusa purinchuka mudiyathu...)

Vishnu dressalam pottukittu,kannadi munnala poi ninukittu,

"Aaha...enna azhaguda Vishnu nee...enna kalar...enna height...enna unaku konjam hairstylethan serillai...kuruvikodu mathiri konjam asingama iruku...but ithuvum oru new stylethan...unna parthu,ella pasangalum intha styleku maaraporanga...nee jamaida Vishnu"...he praises himself..

But when he look at the dressing table,he shocked to the core...

"Ithu aniyayum,akiramam,arajagam...itha ketka yaarume illaiya??"...avan apartmente idinchu Vilara mathiri kathinan...

Thodarum...

Ennada ivanga thaniya irukaangalenu parkureengala...aama...ivanga rendu perum oru flat eduthu thangirukaanga...karthiku thirupathithan native palce...but vishnuvuku Bombay...avan momku thirupathina kollai ishtam...athanala Vishnu chinna papava iruntha appave,thirupathila settla aaitaanga avan parents...vishnu serntha schoolalathan karthik irunthan...appadiya aarambicha friendship,college varaikum thodarnthuchu...they studied B.com there...karthik padipu CA...vishnu ICWA...they completed their studies...karthik CAla second rank holder...vishnu ICWAla third rank holder...ivanga gunathula mattumillai,padipulayum thanga katikathan...

karthik dadku bombayku transfer aiduchu...vishnu dadum Bombay than best place bussinesskunu, bombayku poga mudivu pannitaru...avanga poitaangana,avanga wives...they too decides to go...avanga rendu pasangalayum bombayku vara solli evalavo kenchinaanga...but karthik stricta no sollitan,enna avan thirupathilaye irunthu velai parkanumnu kolla aasai...raamar irukara idamthana,laxmankum...so vishnuvum karthiku support..parentsaala ithukumela pesa mudiyala...so avangaloda rendu dadsum sernthu money pottu,kovil pakathulaye oru flat vaangi kuduthutaanga...ammakaluku romba varutham,thangaloda Magana vittu poromnu...but enna panradhu,pasangaloda irukalamnu partha,hubby thaniya kastapaduvaarnu,karthika Vishnu porupla vittutanga k mom...visnhu momum athe mathirithan...karthiktta Vishnu nalla irupannu avangaluku oru periya nambikai...athupadithan rendu perum samatha irukaanga...ippavaraikum...

Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Shiny a completely different start you have left it in a suspense... thanks enjoying it.
vishnu hahaha omg singing in the bathroom which everyone can hear. soo funny loved it to the core. karthik what is he planning?
now waiting for next part already... please update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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super update annaπŸ‘ karthik vishnu ore apartment πŸ‘πŸΌ ana karthik enna thittam poduran vishnu va veshti sattaiyalam poda soluran enna suspense adhu anna so 1st chapter karthik vishu 2d chapterla raji lakshmi intro dhanae thirupathi venki yoda thunaila arambichi irukinga ellam correcta dhana nadakum πŸ˜‰ seri udanae sollunga adutha update eppa πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Shinny bro, super update. Karthik & vishu staying together - best friends. Startingle suspenseah . Karthik plan something for Vishnu mari iruke. Yenapa short update . Its ok next update long pls.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shiny, Superb update, pa...

Adaaadaada... KV line is super.. That too Vishnu is very interesting character here...

Adutha update la RL pola... Suspense oda mudichuteengha...

Seekiram adutha update venum, bro...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice part shiny KV friendship superb by I believe RL friendship Wii also be good in your own way I am waiting tho read next partygood start.Congrats for first part shiny way to goπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super start Shiny πŸ‘πŸΌ

hmmm.. different location.. πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start Shiny! Looking forward to how things go.
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