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Originally posted by: Gayathri30
Waiting Shiny😊
sis...innum ready pannave illai...diwalinala busya irunthen...u want to wait...😉
Originally posted by: Gayathri30
Waiting Shiny😊
Originally posted by: shiningstar77
sis...innum ready pannave illai...diwalinala busya irunthen...u want to wait...😉
CHAPTER 5(A)
Andru deepavali thirunaal...ellorayum mazhichiyin uchathiru kondu pokkum nannaal...ellor vazhkaiyilim irulai pooki pragasathai kondu varum punitha naal...
Morning 4.00 am
"Vishnu...dei Vishnu...eluthuruda...time aachu..."K vishnvin kaiyai thatti kondu irunthan
"adaaa varenda..."V sollikitte elunthu utkarnthu kannai thotachukittan...
"Happy Diwali my sweet friend"...K says happily..
"oh...Happy Diwali my Cute Bro.."V kusiyaga sonnan...
"seri vaa...kulichuttu velaiya parpom...seekaram"K
"itho vanthutenda..."V sollikonde beda irunthu elunthu vanthan...
"inga paaruda...namma dressalam venki photo keezha vechuruken...kulichutu vanthu eduthu pottuko...seriya"K
"kandipada...avar blessings illama eppadi..."V perumaiyudan sonnan...
Vishnu bathroomkula kulika nuzhainthan...appo..
"dei,Vishnu..appadiyeva kulika povaya...itho intha ennaiya thelichu kuzhi...iniku diwalilala...ennai thechu kuzhikanum..."K
"aaamala...Ganga snanam pananumla...en ammvavum solluvanga...karthik...nee pinrada...ovuvaru nalla visayathayum enaku solra...very proud of u..."V kangalil perumai therinthathu karthik nanabanai..
"aamada...intha mathiri vishayanagalam naam marakudathuda evalavu modern a aanalum... K
"seriya sonneda...seri naan poi kuzhichutu varen..."V
"okda...poi kuzhi...aduthu saapitu,vettulam vedikanumla"K vishnuvai viratinan
"itho...only 15 mins...oodi vanthuruven..."solikitte V runs into the bathroom...
Karthiku santhosam vishnuvim kuthugalathai parkum pothu...
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After 2 mins...
"karthikkk...dei karthik...."V shouts from inside the bathroom..
"ennachu...en katharan ippadi.."karthik yoschukitte bathroom vasala vanthu "ennada enna venum,ethuku ippadi kathara"K asks V
"illada...naan maatum vedi vedika poromnu kushila inga oodi vanthuten...inga vantha udanathan nyabagam varuthu...enaku ennailam thechu kuzhika theriyathuda...ammathan thechu viduvaanga..."V pavampola sonnan...
"appadiya...seri,ippa naan enna pannanum...unaku thechu vidanuma?K questions V...
But no sound from Vishnu...
"Vishnu..ennda soundaye kanom"karthik asks doubtly...
"illada...athu vanthu...."V alatha kuraiya sonnan...
Karthiku purichu pochu...vishnu kuralai ketathum avanuku ethopol irunthathu...
"dei Vishnu...mothala doora open pannu...seekaram...ithu en orderum koda..."K
After hearing karthik's words...sorry, order...door automatically gets opened...karthik ulla ponnan...anga Vishnu towela idupula katikittu kaila ennai kinnathu vechundu pavampola utkarnthu irunthan...karthiku avana parkum pothu...oru chinna kuzhanthai pol irunthathu..
"ennda Vishnu ithu...ippadi utkarnthukittu iruka..."k siruchukitte ketan...
"ahhh...en kolatha paarthu sirikathada...enaku vetkama iruku..."V kuchapattukittu sonnan...
"aama,ivan periya azhagan paaru..."K nakkala sonnan...
"en naan azhagu illaiya..."V
"haan...azhaguthan...seri...antha kinnatha kodu...seekram"K
"intha ...methuva thechuvidu...seriya"V
"hmm...ithula condition veraya...seripa...appadiye seiyaren..."sollikitte K Vishnu thalaiku ennai thechu vittan...
But Vishnu amaithiya irunthan...karthiku doubt...
"ennada...amaithiya iruka...unaku ithu set aagalaida..ethavathu pechu...appathan enaku kusiya irukum..."K
But Vishnu pesalai...silentavae irunthan...
"Vishnu...vishnu...thoongitaya..."sollikitte karthik Vishnu mugathai kunichu paarthan...vishnu aluvathu pol karthikai paarthan...
"dei,Vishnu...ennada azharaya...ethukuda"K
"illada...enaku evalavu seiyara paaru...enaku oru annan iruntha koda ippadi paanamaatan pola...paarthu paarthu seiyara enaku..."V unarchi vasa paatan
"hmm...sir rombathan pesararu...en naan unaku annan illaiya?"K
"che...che...neethan enaku ellame...en friend,en brother...ennaku innoru amma maathiri...ellame neethan...enna ennalathan unaku ivalavu imsai.."V
Karthik nezhinthu poitan Vishnu pecha ketaudana...
"che loosu...enaku imsaiya...neeya?..sollapona unnalathan enaku santhosame...en lifela unna maathiri oru super friend thedinaalum kidaikathu..."K avan thalaiyai thadavi koduthu sonnan
"enakum than...thanks da..hari"V
"haha...serida...rombalam pesa venam...itho thechu vittachu ennaiya...nee kuzhitu vareeya?...naan poi ellathayum ready panren..."K
"hihi...kandipada...inime naan parthukaren...nee pooda...poi allayathum ready pannu,..."V
Karthik anga irunthu velile vanthan mugathil santhosathudan...konja nerathil vishnuvum velile vanthachu...KV iruvarum poojai araiku poi venkiya vanginaanga...they chant some slokas too...
"seri.dressa pottukalama..."V
"hmm...tharalama pottukalam...naanum ready aaitu varen..."K
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In Raji's home...
"raji...raji...inga vaa...vanthu un dressa eduthu po...time aachu paaru"R's mom
Raji came to pooja room...
"vaama raji...saamiya kumbitu dressa potukittu ready aagu..intha dressa renu kuttykum pottuvidu...."Meesai
"seripa...appurampa.laxmi ava athai veetuku poirukapa...night inga vanthuduva"R
"appadiya...ava rathirithan varuvala...seri...appa nee poi readyaagu...naama kovilku poitu vanthuralam"Meesai
"okpa...itho vanthudren"R sollikonde vegamaga sendral
Raji than roomku renu kuttya kondu vanthal...avaluku powder poosi,pottu vechu vital..
"acho...romba azhaga irukada...chellam.."sollikonde renuvuku thirsti kalithal...renu than kutty valai aati kondu irunthal rajiyin paaratuku...
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In KV home:
"cha...intha veshti idupula nippenanguthu..."Vishnu thanoda veshtiyai seri seithu konde aluthukondan...
Karthik than roomil ready aaikittu irunthan...vestillam katikittachu...shirt buttonai podum pothu,
"enaku first wishes rajita irunthuthan vanthuchu intha varusham...unmaiyave puthu anubavama iruku avala ninaikum pothu..."Karthik thanakullaye sollikondu sirithan...
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In Raji's home
Raji sareelam kattikittu kannadi munnadi vanthu nindral..summa sollakudathu...unmaiyave romba azhaga irunthal...jewelslam pottukittu...kadaiseeya bindhi vaika ponnal...appothuthan avaluku avalin karthik nyabagam vanthathu...
"enaku avanta irunthu diwali wishes...athuvum avan than firsta sonnan... ippa avan dresslam pottu azhaga irupanla...athuvum sema handsomea...yei...raji...enna ithu...ippadilam ninaikra onum puriyala po"Raji than kannathi adithu kondal sirithu konde
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In KV home...
Time 8.00 am
"Vishnu...amma,appata pesitaya...naan pesitenda.."K
"hmm...pesitenda...unga diwali wishes solla sonnagada.."V
"aamada...unakumthan solla sonnagada..."K
Naama parentse good parentsda...illa"V
"aama...illaiya pinna?...seri...saapida va..unaku sweet tharen..."K
"dei,sweeta...eppada panna?...enta sollave illai"V kochukittu ketan
"aamamda...unta sonna...nee appave kaali paanirupa..athan sollalai.."K sirichukitte sonnan..
"adapaavi...enda..ippadi iruka...seri vidu...ippa oru pidi pidicharen...enna sweetsda"V aavaloda ketan
"gulab jamun,laddu..appuram kaarathula...kaarasevu...muruku..."K
"konda...konda...naan iniku oru kaatu kaatuven..."v
KV oruvazhiya saapadu kadaiya mudichachu...vishnuku mayakam varatha kuraithan...appadi thinrukan...
"dei,inga paaruda...ellorukum poi sweets koduakanum...itho neraya platesla eduthu vechuiruken paaru..."K
"serida...kodukalam...seetha akka,thamodaran,ramesh...naama pakkataathu maaami...mukiyama padhuku...correctthana?"V
"aamamda..va poi koduthutu varalam"K
KV ellorukum poi sweets koduthanar...pakataathu maami, avargalukum neraya sweets koduthal...
Paathu veetuku sendranar KV...
"paathu...pathu..."K
Door open aagi pathu vezhila vanthan...pattu veshti sattaiyudan..
"anne,vaangane...vaanga...ulla vaangane..."padhu KVya ulla kuttitu poi utkara vechan...
"Happy Diwalida pathu.."KV said in chorus...
"Happy Diwali to u Too ne.."padhu says happily
"appuram...intha pathu, sweets...nalla saapidu"K pathuvidam sweets plateau neetinan
"oh...thanksne...enaku pidicha sweets"Padhu kangalil kushi therinthathu..
"seri,nee oru sweetsum pannalaya?"V
"illane...enaku athalam panna theriyathu...saapidrathu mattumthan ennoda velai"Padhu mugahhil kuzhanthanai thanam therinthathu sollumpothu
"athan,paarthale theriyuthe..."V
"vishnuuu"K vishnuvai pesama iruka sonnan...but Vishnu ketkara maathiri illai.
"serida pathu...intha veshityalam ippadi vaangina...bedspread alavuku stitch panni pottupaya"V asks in a mocking tone...
"Vishnuuu...enda ippadi pesara"K kadinchukitan vishnuva...
"anne...vidungane...namma Vishnu annanthana ketar...solren...vishnune...eppadine ippadi correcta kandu pidikareenga...naanum appadithan stitch pannipen...hihi"Pathu
"hmm...athana naan sonnathu ethu thappa irunthuruku un vishayathula"V
Karthikum sirichan atha kettu...
"serida,pathu... vettu vedikapolama"K
"kandipane...enta neraya vedigal iruku...appa neraya vaangi anupirukaar...itho konduvaren,paarunga"sollikonde pathu ulle sendran...
Pathu neraya boxes kondu vanthan...
"dei,ennada ithu...ivalavu vedi vechuruka...haiya...hydrogen bomb...dei,karthik paarthaya...enna bomb vaangakodathunu sonnela...ippa paaru enta athuve thedi vanthuruchu..."V
"hmm...appadiya...appo only two bombsthan vedikanum...solliten.."K orders V
"pathu,naan intha boxeslam thookittu oodi poidren vasalku...nee karthika konjam inga pidichu vai"sollikonde Vishnu vasalku ooditan...
"dei..vishnu...nilluda...dei...cha...solradha ketkarathe kidaiyathu"K salichukittan
"eppadine,ivara neenga saamalikarenga...romba kurumbu panraar"Padhu
"aamam pathu...but athuvum jollyathan irukum...seri..vaa polam...time aaiduchu"K
KV,Pathu morning supera vediyalam vedichaanga...appuram konjam rest ellorukum..
"karthik...naan konjam velila poi vettalam eppadi podraanganu paarthutu varen...seriya"V
"paarthupoda...seekarama vanthudu"K
"kandipada...poitu varen.."Vishnu sollikitte vasalku vanthan...
.methuvaaga kaalara nadanthu sendran... siridhu thoorathil chinna chinna pasanga vedilam vechukittu irunthaanga...avangakoda oru azhagana ponnum irunthal...vishnu avangaloda kuthukalathai paarthu konduirunthan...antha girl bomba vechutttu oodi vanthal...aanala ethirpaaratha vidhamaga anga oru stone iruka...kaal thaduki kizha vila ponnal...aana...anga yaarume illai...kutty pasangal ellam thoorathu oodi poirunthanar bomb vechathala...
"amma...."sollikitte laxmi tharaiyai thoda ponnal...
Sudden oru kai aval kaiyai kediyaga pidithathu...aval antha kaiyai pidithu kondu seriyaga ninnal...aanal antha pathatam innum avalavi vittu pogavilai...nimirnthu paarthal...paarthathum athirichi atainthal...yaarai kurunganu sonnalo...antha kurungu ange ninukittu irunthuchu siricha mugathudan...
"intha kuranga enna kaapathichu...."Laxmi manathukul ninaithukondal...
"ennaga...paarthu vedika maatengala..bomblam vaikum pothu paarthu irukanumnga..."V sollimudikum munn...bomb DAMALnu vedichathu...
"ennaga ithu...intha bomb romba slowa vedikuthu...dubakoor bomba irukum pola..."V laughs...
Laxmiku antha siripai paarthudan oru vidha aanantham...en siripukoda vanthathu avaluku...aanal siripai adaki kondu..."thanksnga...enna keezha vilama thaduthathuku..."
"ithuku ethuku thanksla...freeya vidunga"V
"appuram aniku ungala kurangunu solliten...sorry..."L
"hmm...paravilla vidunga...yaara koranganu sonnengalo,antha kurunguthan unga kaiya pidichu kaapathichu...enna naan solradhu"V sollikitte than stylea sirithan...
Laxmiyum sirithu vital..."neenga eppadi ivalavu jollya pesareenga..."L
"athu appadiye pazhaki pochunga...en ithuthan ennoda real characterakoda..."V
"hmm...unmaiyave nallathan iruku"Laxmi methuvaga sonnal..
"ennanga ...enna sonnga"V
"onnumillainga.."L samalichutaal..
"seringa...naan kilambaren...paarthu vedinga...athuoda mukiyam paarthu oodunga...seriya"V sirichukitte sonnan..
"seringa...neenga solramaathiri nadanthukaren...happythana"L
"athu...appuram Happy Diwalinga..."V
"ungalukum ennoda Diwali vazhuthukal..."L
"thanksnga...appa naan varen"V sollikitte nadaka aarambichutan...laxmi avan porathaye paarthu kondu irunthal siritha mugathudan...vishnuvukum etho oru maatram laxmiya kandavuden...
"hmm...enna Vishnu...double madangu happya iruka pola...seri nalla vishayamthan...polam va.."V mounamaga sirithan thanakullaye sollikondu..
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Night time 7.00 pm...
Vaana vedikaigal vaanathil minni kondu irunthana...
"dei Vishnu...paarthu vedida..."K
"serida...intha saravediya paarthayada...pathikave maatuthu..silathu pathukittalaum vedika maatengathu...cha.."V salichukittan..
Vishnu saravediyai patha vechan...
"dei..vishnu...oddivada..vedi pathikichu...seekram"Karthik alrainan..
"illada...pathikalada...iru naan parkaren"V
Karthik viru virunu poi avan kaiyai pidithu illuthutu vanthan...appothu saravedi padapadavena vedithathu...
"paarthaya..naan sonnenla..pathikichunu..paarthu vedipa...yeppa..."K kavalaipatan
"serida...paarthu panren..."Vishnu sollikitte pakkathula parkum pothu...pathu laxmi vediya patha vechutu irunthan...
"dei pathu..paarthuda...unnala oodi vara mudiyuma...kaathala koda oru vediyum vaikama dimki kodutha...ippa vedilam vaikara"V asks pathu..
"anne...ennala mudiyumne...naan oodi varuvenne"Pathu
"eppadiyo...keezha vilama iruntha seri..appadi aana floorukuthan setham agum,solliten.."V
Atha kettu pakathu aathu mama,maami sirichanar...but karthik...
"Vishnu...suma iruda...avana eppapaarthalum noondikittu..."K
"aama naan unmaiya sonna unaku porukathe..."V
siithu nerathil Pathu Vishnu pakkam methuvaga vanthu...
"anne...inthanga neenga keta bomb..karthik anne antha chandru annanoda pesikittu irukar...poi seekrama vedinga"Pathu
"kondada..kondada...avan parkathukula patha vechuruvom..."Vishnu sollikitte bomb vediyai patha vechan...
bomb DAMALnu vedichathu...bayangara pogai vera...pogai kalanchathum konja thoorathil pakkathu maama etho bramai pidichavar pol nindru kondu irunthar athuvum puthu konathil...oru kai mel nooki...innoru kai idupil...moonchi pei arancha maathiri nindru kondu irunthar...ellam bomb vecha effectthan...aana entha baathipum illai...thalli vanthu kondu irukum pothuthan,ippadi aaitar bayathula...KVku ore shock...padhuvuku sema shock
"ennada karthik ithu...maama etho dance aadra maathri posela nikararu...parka sema comedya iruku. Vishnu vaiya moodikittu sirichan..
"maamuvuku nalla dance panna varumpolaye...enakum dance kathakanumnu romba naal aasaida...pesama ivarta sishyana povada?"Vishnu kusiyaga ketan
"summa iruda...nee vera..nerankata nerathula loosu mathiri pesikittu"Karthik vishnuvai adakinan
"cha ippanu paarthu enta phone illaiye...dei..karthik unta cell iruntha koduda...maamava different differenyta photo edupom...ithalam thirumba kidaikuma enna..."Vishnu karthikai imasai pannan sollikitte
"nee adankaraya...illa palarnu onnu vaikava kannathula"Karthik vishnuvai morachu paarthu ketan..
"aama...enaku ethuku antha araiya...mammavuku kodu...usefulavathu irukum"Vishnu laughs with his trademark style..
"Vishnu...ithukumela nee vaiya thorantha...appuram maama maathiri nika vechuruven solliten..."Karthik told strictly...
"aiyoo venamda...appadilam pannatha...naan pesama iruken"V bayanthukitte sonnan..
KV mama pakkathula porathukulla...angu...
"naarayana...enna kolam ithu...ennaaa en ippadi nikarel...'maami pathari kondu oodi vanthu maamavidam
Aana maamavidam oru chinna asaivu koda illai..maami kangal kalanga aarambithana...
"maami..enna ithu nalanaal athuvuma en kan kalangarel..."V
"pinna ennda ambi...ivara paartha neku bayama irukuda"Maami kavali patal..
"avalvuthana...ippa paarunga en thanthiratha...maama ippa takkunu suya ninaivuku vanthuruvaar..."sollikonde Vishnu innoru bombai eduthu mama pakkkathil vechu..
"maama ...inga paarunga innoru bomb veika poren...konjam dancea steps pottu aadina nalla irukum..."sollikitte bombai patha veikara maathiri act pannan...
Bomb nu worda keta udana maam thulli ninnu..."ada paavigala...enna pottu thakama vita matengala...pongoda neengalum unga vediyum"sollikonde veetukula ooditar...
"mama ...oodathaeengo...nilungo...maama...enaku dance kathukodungao maama...inilenthu unagaluku sishayana iruken..."Vishnu maamavai thorathi kondu oodinan
Angu ore siripu sathamthan ketuchu vedi sathathai vida...maamiku ega santhosam...karthikum sirithan...miga azhagaga...enna siripuda athu...no chance...
Oruvaliya maamvin problem nalla badiya solve aayachu...KV,padhu thirumbavum crackers vedika aarambichanar...karthikthan ippothu vedika poran...12 shots...carefulla thiriyai patha vechan...vechuttu pinnala oodi vanthu Vishnu pakkathil nindru kondan...12 shots vaanil pala vannangalai kaati kondu irunthathu...ellorum athai than paarthu kondu irunthar...karthikumthan..pokkal siripathu pola azhagaga vaanathai alankarithu kondu irunthathu 12 shots...4th shot vaanathil poi pookalai polinthathu ...karthik santhosamaga paarthu kondu irunthan...appothu athil theedernu rajiyin mugam...karthikal than kangalaiye namba mudiyavilai...thirumbavum paarthan...raji punmuruvaludan azhagaga therinthal...karthik thirumbavum kangalai nandraga kasaki kondu paarthan..raji angeyathan irunthal...
"raji..."karthik methuvaga thanaku mattum ketpathu maathiri methuvaga sonnan avan rajiyin perai...
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In raji's home...
"haan...athu...athu.,..karthikin kural...inga eppadi avan kural...athuvum pakkathil ketpathu pola iruke.."sollikonde raji thirumbi paarthal...
Angu meesai...amma...laxmi...appuram L'S parents...ellorum mazhichiyaga mathaapu kolluthi kondu irunthanar...laxmi flower pot vechu kondu irunthal..angu avargalai thavira vera yaarum illai...
"inga avanai kanome...oruvela veetukul poirupano..."raji sollikonde veetukul ponnal..
Aval kangal avanai thediyathu...thediyathu...thedi konde irunthathu...aanal avanai kanavillai...ethiril kathavu irunthathu...raji theriyamal athu pakkathil poi moothi kondal...
"amma..."lesaga kathinal...rajiku lesaga valithathu...appothuthan avaluku suya ninaive vanthathu...
"cha...raji...enna ippadi iruka nee...avana thedi ippadi loosu maathiri thiriyara...avan eppadi inga vara poran...unaku paithiyam than pidichuruchu...confirm"raji thanaye thittikondal...
Aval avalai thitti kondalum...than muttalthanathai ninaithu sirithal...piragu avalin karthikai ninaithu sirithal...vetkamum pattal...Athe nerathil...karthik than kangalai paarthathai ...rajiyai vanavedikaigalil paarthai ninaithu lesaga avan pin thalayil adithu kondu sirithan...
Iruvarum oruvar oruvari ninaithu ninaithu sirithu konde irunthanar...iruvarin mugathilum aananantham thaanadavamaadi kondu irunthathu...avargalin intha azhagana tharunathudan Deepavali thirunaal inithe niraivadainthathu...
THODARUM
sorry for the delay ,friends...diwalinala sir konjam busya irunthuten...ok...intha update eppadi irukunu sollunga😊
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