SS:Azhagana Tharunangal :CHAPTER 11(B) UPDATED IN PG 80 - Page 12

Originally posted by: vithurshi95

Hii bro
Your story is awesome :)
Will the next part be first meeting of KR
Waiting for your next update ;)
Carry on 😃

Thanks vithurshi...

KR meetingthana...that's suspense...hihi..😆..

Very Nice Shiny! 😃

Originally posted by: SushK16

Very Nice Shiny! 😃

I enjoyed RL's friendship a lot! 😛 Next KVRL meeting at shops right? 😉

Waiting for more! 😃

Thanks Sush...

KRVL meeting?...May be or may not...hihi..😆.

will try to update soon😊

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Thanks Sush...

KRVL meeting?...May be or may not...hihi..😆.

will try to update soon😊

Originally posted by: SushK16

Oh! 😕 I thought they might meet while shopping! Let's see! 😉

oh...dont worry sush... nalathuthan nadakum..😉...but dono how it would be

nice and smooth flow of the story Shiny...

Originally posted by: sweety16

nice and smooth flow of the story Shiny...

I'm loving it...

Thanks a lot,sweety😊...

unga storya eppa update panna poreenga...romba naala wait panrompa😃

CHAPTER 4 (A)

FRIENDS,hereafter i am going to divide all the chapters into 2 parts...enjoy reading😊😊

Veethigalellam kootathal nirambi vazhinthana...engum kootam...ethilum kootam...KV dress kadaikula oruvaliya enter aayachu...

"appa,enna kootamda sami...mudiyala...enna inneram nachurupaanga"....V polambinan...

"pinna irukadha...diwaliku innum koncha naalthana iruku...kootam ippadithan irukum...serivaa...ulla pogalam...first veshti sectionku polama? "K questions V...

"hmm...polamda...vaa...enaku azhagana vesthiya eduthakanum...athuvum ramraj cotton veshti...enna okva?"V aaravamaga ketan...

"nee iruka paaru...mothalla poi parpom vaa"...saying this Karthik vishnuva kuttikittu veshti sectionkulla ponnan...

anga ennadana,nerya kootam...aazhkal nika mudiyala...

"ingayum athethana...sutham "...V nonthukittan...

eppadiyo veshtiya select panradhuku poi ninnachu...

KV r busy in selecting their dhoties...

suddena our kural... K pakkathula

"appa,intha pattu veshti ungalauku supera irukumpa...appadiye raja mathiri irupeenga..itha eduthonga...seriya?"...one girl's voice

hearing that voice...K got surprised..

"ennama ithu,ithalam ethuku enaku...verum veshti pothuma."..that girl's dad..

"ennapa neenga,diwaliku neenga jolika venama,ithathan neenga pottuakanum...en appava naan azhagu padutha vendama?"...that girl asks

"sonnatha ketaka maatiye nee...enakulam vayasu aairuchuma...ithalam venam."..girl's dad

"enna...vayasa?..ungaluka.?...summa irukangapa...neenga ippathan youtha irukeenga...vayasu aairucham vayasu"...that girl says angrily...

"kochukathama...seri naan nee select pannathaye pottukaren...seriya"....girl's dad asks the girl

santhosathudan that girl says..."ithuthan en appa...samathu"...

karthik antha voice solradhaye sharpa listen pannikittu irunthan...antha kuralin sonthakarar vera yaarum illai,rajiyethan

"appa,namma renu kuttiku dress eduakanumpa...midi,tops edukalamnu iruken...enna solreenga?"R

"oh...tharalama eden,naam renuku illathatha...ava antha dressa pottukitu nadanthu varathe thani azhaguthan...athuvum antha chella kutty than vaala chiku chikunu aatradhu atha vida azhagu"...meesai says happily..

"aamampa...avaluku chinna pottu vechuvidanaum...kalla anklet,ellam pannanumpa...appa ava innum azhaga irupa."..R...

meesai nodes with a smile...

karthiku athu yaarunu purinchuruchu...oru puppykutty than antha rennunu...avan lesaga sirichan atha ninachu...ivalavu anbu vechurukala antha ponnu than familymela...very nice...karthik thanakullaye antha girla(avan rajiya) praise pannikittan...seri yaaru athunu thirumbi parakalamnu partha...oh...avalai kanavillai...angu neraya gentsthan irunthaanga...no girls...karthiku ematram...but avan atha onnum perusa eduthukalai...avalin varthayaikalai manathil asai pottu kondu irunthan...

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"dei,karthik...ennada thoongitaya...intha veshti okva paaru..".V karthikidam ketan...

"haan...okda...nalla iruku"...karthik suya ninaivuku vanthan vishnu kural keta udan...

"appadiye venkikum oru veshti eduthuruvomda...pattu dhoti...ennada."...K asks curiously...

"sureda,avarku illadhatha...itho eduthuruvom."..V kusiyaga sonnan...

oruvaliya ivanga selections over...shirt,pantum eduthachu...

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"ellam mudinchuthu...billa poda solliruvoma"...L's dad asks everyone...

"oh..potrulam."..Meesai..

theedernu "appa,en chappala kanompa."..R shouts lightly..

"ennama solra..enga vittutu vantha..intha kuttathula enganu poi thedurathu"...meesai padharikitte ketar..

"appa.plspa..athu en fav chappal...saree sectionlathan vitttennu ninaikeeren...poi eduthutu vanthurenpa..pls..pls"...Raji pleads...

"appa laxmiya kuttitupoma."..meesai...

"appa.ava phone pesikittu irukapa...naane poi eduthu vanthudren."..saying this raji runs fasts...

"parthu po ma"...meesai..

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in saree section...

"enga poten kanome."...raji than chappala thedikittu irunthal...

antha kootathulayum aval than thedalai kaividavillai...

"dei,inga ethukuda kootitu vanthuruka...unaku ethukuda saree"...V asks with a doubt...

"loosu vishnu...namma Momsku da...avanga nammakoda illanenalum...avangaluku sarees eduthu vechuruvomda...inga eppa varangalo appa koduthupom...enna naan solrathu."..K

"aana diwali mudinchu poirumeda avanga varathukulla"...V

"dei,loosu...athathana ippa sonnen...diwali festival oru naaltha varuthu...but naamatha nammaloda oru oru naalayum diwaliya aakikanum...athuvum namma amma vara naalthanda namaku diwaliye"...K santhosamaga sonnan...

"appuram...perumalku veshti eduthachu...thaayarku(padamavathi ) eduka venamada"...K

"enna thaayara...yaaruda avanga"...V kulapamai ketan...

"maramandaiya...enda thirumalaila venki iruparna, avar koda,athavathu keezhl thirupathila padmavathi thaayar irupaangalada...avangalukum edukanumla...avangathan naamma ellorukum thaai.(world's mother)"..Karthik unarchi vasapaatu ketan...

"aamada...kandipa edukanum,.:..V

intha uraiyadala naama raji ketukondu irunthal, thaan vantha velaiya maranthu poi...athuvum karthikin arugil...athavathu oru five steps thalli ninukittu

"ada...intha kalathula ippadi oru payana...chanceaillai...perumalkum,thaayarukum dressa...so sweet..".

avar udathugalil uthirtha muthukal ivai (avaloda karthika pathi)

ippadi siruchukitte avana parkanumnu aarvam erpatathu rajiku...takkunu thirumbinal,oru naal per serntha kumbal avargal idaiyil vanthu vitathu...rajiyala parka mudiyalai than karthika...

appothuthan nyabagam vanthathu thaan ethukaga inga vanthurokomnu...partha aval nindru konda idathuleye chappals kidanthana...aanal aval ninaipo vero engauo irunthathe...

appuram rajiyala antha kuralin sonthakaararai kandu pidika mudiyavillai...enna angu niraya gents vanthutaanga...so no chance for her...

aanal avanin kural avalin manathil nandrai pathinthu vittana...avan manathilumthan...

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"dei,karthik...naan oru dress eduka maranthenda"...V shouts...

"ennada athu,seekaram sollu...kootam bayangarama iruku"...K

"enaku lungi edukanumda...adhuvum nandu brand lungi."..V

"ennathu,lungiya?...uanku atha pottu pazhakame illaiyeda...appuram ethuku athalam."..K

"illada,namma dhamodaran illa...athanda, 1^st floorla irukaane,avan color colora,poo poova lungiya pottukittu en munnadi vanthu scene kaamikaranda...athan naanum pottukittu avana nosecut panna poren"...V perumaiyaga sonnan..

"ada kadavule,ithukuthan ippa lungi venuma,seri poi eduthu tholai...seekarama va."..K thalaila adichukatha kuraiya sollikittu vishnuvuku lungi eduthu koduthan...

KV dress purchase oru vazhiya mudinchuthu...

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next day

KV home

"appada,dresslam eduthachu...aduthuthan iruku purchase...naan list pottu vechuruken paaren...en mindla...ippa solren paaru...belt,shoe,chappal,watch,thotika towel,baniyan,appuram saapida oru chinaa bowls,cellphone,tie,perfumes,bathing soap,appuram,oru mug venumda...appuram...appuram."..vishnu sollikitte ponnan...

"dei...dei...ennada ithu...etho hanuman vaal mathiri neendukitte pothu...

aama,ippa thuku unaku cellphone,watchlam...nallathane iruku rendume"...K questions V.

"illada,diwaliku neraya offers potrupaangala...athan...hihi"...V

"pichupiduven,badava...vetti selavalm pannatha,enaku athu suthama pidikathu...aama athu enna tie,perfumeslam...veetula neraya kumichu kidaku...athalam use pannu mothalla"...K shouts at V...

"ennada ithu,ithukukoda enaku urimaillaiya...pls da...konjam irakam kaaten."..V pleads...

"sonna keluda V,samathu payanla nee...naama ithula moneya selavau panradhuku vera ethulayavathu selavu pannalamda...haan...namma venkiku oru kutty stool vangipom,appuram avarku azhagana malaigal plasticla...appuram plastic poo...athalam vena vaangalam"...K

"athana parthen...ennada ivana innum venki pathi pesalenu...seri...seri...nee solradhum correctthan...but naan baniyan aavadhu vaangikarenda..pls da...athukulam thadai potrathe"...V pavampola ketan...

"cha...cha...athalam nee vaangikoda...no problem...ok...va"...K siruchukitte sonnan

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In crackers shop

"haiya,neraya patasukal iruku...naan neraya vaanga poren."..V kuthichukitte shop kulla ponnan...

K konjam busy phonela...athan avan ulla varalai...after some mins...ulla vanthu

"Dei,enna vedilam vaangiruka...sollu."..K

"haan,kambi mathapu,bushvanam,thara sakkaram,pencil vedi,laxmi vedi,kuruvi vedi...appuram etho puthusa vedi vanthurukanda,athula irunthu color colora ballon varuma,atha vaangiruken...appuram 10000 wala saravedi,appuram bomb"...V kusiya sonnan...

"ennada ithu,ivanalvu...seri...ippa ethuku bomb...mothalla atha vechudu...enaku bomb naale pudikathu...satham kaathai kizhuchidum."..K orders V

"ennada nee,enaku bomb pidikum...plsda"...V

"no way...athan saravedi irukula...athu pothum...olungu mariyathaiya bomba vechuttu va...athalam venam."..K

"seri,po...vechudren...appa mathathallam ok thana?"V questions k

"okthan...vaa kilambalam."...K

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that day evening,

in krishnar temple

"Raji,ennadi pannikittu iruka...drawinga...atha konjam enaku kaatradhu."...L salichukitte sonnal...

"haan...fulla mudincha udanathan unaku kaatuven,",,R

"seri,nee yaaroda pics draw panranu konjam sollen"...L pleads...

"athu suspense laxmi...konjam wait pannen."..R

"seri,seekaram finish pannitu kaatu...ok..".L

"ok di.".R

after some mins,raji finished her drawing activity...

raji perumaiyaga antha picturea parthal...theedr endru kaatru balamaga veesitru...veesina vegathil raji kayil iruntha antha paper paranthu poiduchu...kan imaikum nearathil ellam nadanthana

"ada kadavule,athu paranthu poiruche...laxmi vaadi atha poi theduvom"..R laxmiyai virattinal...

RL searched that paper...but engayum kidaikalai...kaatru veesuvathum nirka villai...

anga iruntha ellor kittayum poi inga ethavathu oru paper paranthu vanthatha partheengalanu RL visaruchukittu irunthaanga ...but answer from all is "NO"...

but antha nerathil...thendral antha paperai oruvan kaiyil poi serthu vittathu...athu namma karthikthan...

"enna paper ithu...engayo irunthu paranthu vanthuruku pola"....saying this he saw that...

avan kangal aacharyathil virinthana...antha paperil...venki padam azhaga varaya pattu irunthathu...miga thathrubamaga...

"wow...supera iruku paaruda V..".karthik athai vishnuvidam kaatinan...

"aamada,romba amsama iruku...itha yaaravathu draw pannangala, illa trace eduthaangala?"...V asks with a doubt...

"illada,yaaro intha picturea draw pannirukaangada...athu nallave theriyuthu...venkiku sila necklacelam ivangale drawa pannirukaangada...athu melum azhakootuthu..".K says with smile...

at that time...one voice...

"excuse me"....

antha kuralai kettaudan,karthik mugathil oruvithamana aanantham,en romba santhosamnu kooda sollalam...karthik taakunu nimirnthu paarthan...avan kangalai avanala namba mudiyavillai..antha kuralin sonthakararai parthu vittan...parthu kondu methuvaga elunthan...

"yes...sollunga...enna venum"...K

rajiku oru nimisathil vantha velaiyaiye maranthu poivittal..."athe kural..naan keta kural."..rajiyin manathil ella sambavangalum thoondri marainthana...

iruvarudaya kangalaum paarthu kondana...kangalai avargalal sirithu neram simita mudyavillai...theedernu raji suya ninaivuku vanthaval pol...

"onnumillai,inga ethavathu oru paper paranthu vanthuchannu ketka venthom...athulakuda perumal padam irukum"...R

"oh..appdiya...athu intha paperanu paarunga"....K shows that to R...

"aama,ithethan...thanksnga"....raji santhosamaga sonnal...

en kailathan irunthathu...kaatru athai thooki kondu poiduchu...athan ithai thediittu irunthom"...R says...

"neenga thappa ninaikalena naan onnu unglai ketkalama"...K asks R...

"kelungalen...enna vishayam.?".R

"intha drawing neenga pannatha?"K

"aama,naanthan varanchen...en nalla illaiya?"R kavalaiyga ketal...

"enna ippadi ketkareenga...oru varthaila sollanumna...perfect...."..k

rajiiyin santhosathirku alave illai..."romba thanksnga en drawinga paartinathuku."...R thanks K...

k smiles for that...

"excuse me,nan ungalta onnu ketkalama."..V asks L who stands in front of him...

"enna ketakanum enkitta?"laxmi santhengathudun ketal...

"illa,ungaluku drawinglam varatha?"V

"atha therinchu neenga enna panna poreenga?"...L asks angrily

"dei vishnu,ennada,panra nee...pesama irukuda"...K methuvaga avan kaathil sonnan...

"iruda..iruda...onnumillai...nee tension aagatha"...V consoles him n cont his talk with L...

"illa ungalukum drawing therincha paaratuvomla...athan..".V

"thanks...but enaku unga paartulam onnum venam...athku avasiyamum illai..."L

"appa ungaluku drawing vaarathu...athu confirm aiduchu...hihi..".V says in mocking tone...

KR ku athirchi aaiduchu...

"illaye,enaku korangu padam nalla varaiya varum...drawing varamalam illa...different different monkeys padamlam varaiven."..L kusumbudan sonnal...

KR laughs lightly on hearing her words...avangaluku purinchu poiduchu...laxmi vishnuvathan indirecta kuranganu sollaranu...

"appadiya...appa super."..V laughs at L...

lamiku sema erichala irunthuchu...

"vaa raji polam,time aaiduchu"....L

"seri appa naanga varaom,anyway romba thanks intha padatha engalta koduthathuku...naan varen"...R says to K...

"thankslam ethukunga...athalam venam...neenga kilambunga.".K says with a smile...

RL anga irunthu kilambitaanga...but rajiyim manam angaye than irunthathu...

karthiku rajiyai parthathil avalavu santhosam...avanuku vaaanthil parapathu pol irunthathu

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KV home

"dei vishnu...enda ippadi avangala pottu summa nondi edukara un loosu questionala.?"..K

"summathanda keten...athuku enna kuranganu sollraangada"...V pavampola sonnan...

"oh..athu unaku purinchurucha...appa seri"...K laughs at V loudly...

"sirida...siri...nalla siri...ellam en neram."..V thaanye nonthukittan...

"serida...naan thoonga poren...goodnight"....V

okda...goodnight..".K

but karthik thoongavilai...rajiyai patriya sinthanaiyil irunthan...

"ithuthan avala...cuteana voice...azhaga iuka...aval kangal summa pseikitte irunthathu pol irunthuchu... ivalavu azhaga drawing panniruka...venki padatha...nalla thiramai iruku avalta...romba calm type pola...athu seri,nee ethuku avala pathi ninachukittu iurka karthik...pesama thoongu po."..karthi sirichukitee avanidame pesi kondan...

theedernu venki photo pakathula poi ninukittu...

"venki,ennanu theriyala...intha ponna partha udana en manam romba santhosam adaiyuthu...avala pathi ninaika thoonthu...ennanu theriyalapa...romba kulapama iruku...neethan atha seri seiyanum...seriya...naan thoonga porenpa...GN.."karthik venkikitte than manathil patathai sollitu thonga poitan..

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In raji's home...

"cha...enna azhagu...chanceaillai...avan voice athukumela...avan en drawinga parthu perfect sonnane...enaku thalakaal puriyala appa...athu seri,nee en raji yaaro sonaa varathaiku ivalaku santhosam padra...ennnene theriyalaiye...seri..thoongalam va...itha pathiye ninachukittu iruka kudathu."...Raji avalidame pesi kondal...

kathik...raji...iruvarin manathil etho oru maatram...enna endru avargaluku puriyavilai...poga poga puriya varuma.?...thirumbavum santhipaargala?...parpom

THODARUM

Dear Shiningstar, thanks for an excellent story line. Your strong and clear characterization, natural conversation style, presentation of wonderful friendship of KV and RL, family bonding, platform for introduction of lead characters to each other...and so on are superb. Excellent imagination and vivid presentation. 👏

Shiny... Super update..

Introducing both KR are superb... Rendu perum voice vechi kandu pidichitaangale.. Great...

Nicely expressed...

Big WOW for ur story and the characterisation ... 👏