Hi Sush, wow long update this time. KRVL first day in Office very nice. KRVL adapting the life of working nicely explain. KR and VL having their private moment so cute. KR start fighting. Looking forward for the party have feeling will be awesome. Let see. Patch up ?😉
Part 5 -
*The party is hosted by KVRL's parents as their children are taking over the company... The Party Hall was decorated extremely elegant... The whole place was covered with dark blue carpet...comforting red lights (not too bright nor too dull) and everyone was dressed in black -- the dress code for this evening... Very uplifting as well as soothing atmosphere...KVRL enter*
The Host: Look up folks! The stars of tonight have arrived! Guys u r looking magnificent in the pool of black!
KVRL: (Smile) Thank you!
L dad: Hey guys! Dashing looks, children!
Raji: Thanks a lot Uncle!
Vishnu: What is the reason for black exactly?
K dad: We planned out the hall and we thought red lights shining on black will make the hall exquisite!
R dad: It sure does! Welcome guys... Look around and meet everyone... The dance floor will be open after a few announcements...
Karthik: Thank u!! This is exciting! Very rich this room looks...
V dad: Of course... Holding Nettech, we should arrange for such party right?
Lakshmi: Absolutely Uncle! It holds up our pride... Our pleasure to be here...
V dad: One last thing...This formal ceremony will end by 7:00 pm... Then u all have a surprise! As you see this will be a very formal party...
K dad: The people present here are our official alliances ... Ur party will start from 7:30 pm... All your friends will be arriving while we are leaving... then u all are free... Party can go as long as you guys wish... Have fun and congrats...
Raji: Whoa! Wait Wait... U guys are giving way too many shocks!
Vishnu: She is right! What in the world...?
V dad: (KVRL dads start laughing) This is the SURPRISE!!! That we told u... Do u like it?
Karthik: Of course Uncle! How can we be free with a group of oldies?
K dad: Oldies? Fine my child! We caught your mindset...
Lakshmi: I am spellbound! Ever so grateful!
V dad: Make sure that u guys don't end up in a hangover... Vishnu...especially u Mr. Driver...
Vishnu: Adhellam mudiyaadhu... Either hangover for all of us or none of us...
R dad: (Laughs) Appo if anything like that happens... taxi koopittu ponga... Nobody will drive if it is hangover...
Lakshmi: Why Uncle? Naanum Rajium drive pannalaam la?
L dad: Do u really think u two will be alert while the rest is drunk?
Raji: Enna Uncle? Neengale ippadi solreenga?
R dad: One day dhaane hangover... Paravaillai...
Karthik: Oh my gosh! R u parents?
K dad: Of course we are... Make sure that NONE I mean NONE of your moms know about this... Vishnu especially unnakku dhaan... Amma nnu sollitu if u blabber... apparom u will forever have to drive after parties... Understood? (All laugh)
Vishnu: Sari Uncle! I am excited!
R dad: And please don't drink until the first half of the party is over! (KVRL nod)
K dad: Go on now... Meet the people...
*KVRL meet many authorities and form a good bonding with a lot of them... Sooner or later it will assist them in future... It is almost time for the acquaintances to leave... Many started leaving... KVRL are seated at a table*
Vishnu: Machaan... That was so cool!
Karthik: Hey naan poi coke vaangittu varen... Unnakku venumaa daa?
Vishnu: Raji appove kettanga daa... Bring it for her...
Karthik: (Turns Angry) Mudiyaadhu... Podaa... If someone wants something they have to go get it...
Raji: (Looks up from her phone) En Vishnu? Naan ungala dhaane ketten... (Glares at K)
Karthik: (Mindvoice - Idiot... Evalo thimiru paar... podii...)
Raji: (Mindvoice- Monkey Donkey! Muraikudhu paar...)
Lakshmi: Iru... Inga enna nadakudhu? I am lost...
Vishnu: Dei Raji oda sandai pottiyaa?
Karthik: Adha anga kelu...
Raji: Excuse me... I have a name...
Karthik: Amaa correct... Monkey... Adhaan unnoda name...
Raji: (Fumes) Nee mattum? Donkey...
Vishnu: Just shut up! What happened?
Raji: Nothing important... Don't waste time... Vidunga...
Karthik: Ohhoo... Appo veetilaa nadandhadhu ellam not important?
Raji: Amaa!
Karthik: Apparom en dii kovam patte?
Raji: Ennaa nee panninadhu ... chii po...
Lakshmi: Oh appo u both are fighting from home?
Vishnu: Vidu Lakshmi... Karthik nee po... (K leaves and R goes to talk to someone)
*20 mins later...*
R dad: Bye guys... Have fun and enjoy...
K dad: Keep in mind about what we said...
Vishnu: Sure Sure Uncle...
L dad: Take a taxi and be careful...
Lakshmi: Sari paa... Bye now...
V dad: Rest tomorrow and be at Office on Monday...
Karthik: Okay Uncle thanks...
Raji: Bye!!
*Now the real party has begun...Friends are here...*
*The DJ puts ears blasting party music...*
Vishnu: (Starts dancing) That's more like party music! (Enjoys dancing and bumps into a girl)
Girl: Whoa! Excuse me...
Vishnu: Hey Ally! (Still dancing) How r u doing? (L comes by)
Ally: Great... Until u bumped into me and messed up my makeup...(Frowns)
Vishnu: Come on darling... U r as beautiful as ever even without makeup...
Ally: Really? Thanks Vish... Will drop by later... (Notices L) Hey Lakshmi!!
Vishnu: (Stops dancing and turns around to see L staring at him) Hii Laksh...
Lakshmi: Ennadaa idhu?
Vishnu: Hey avala pathi dhaan theriyumlaa? She will be mad if her makeup is gone... That's why...
Lakshmi: Lame excuse podaa...(Frowns)
Vishnu: U r acting... (Looks into L)
Lakshmi: Nope I am not... I am mad at u really...
Vishnu: Someone's starting to smile... maybe... a little... come on come on... and...
Lakshmi: (Starts laughing)
Vishnu: It's here!! (Starts dancing again) Vaa Laksh... Join me for some blast!
Lakshmi: Po I am still mad at u...
Vishnu: Hey no sweetheart... Come on.. A hug? U will feel better...(Goes and embraces L)
Lakshmi: Vidu Vishnu... I am cross! Vishnu plea-
Vishnu: Shhh... Enjoy the moment... (L smiles)
Lakshmi: Podhum... Thank u...
Vishnu: That is it... Good girl! Come on start dancing... (Raises his voice) DJ Hip Hop please...
DJ: Sure thing... Here it comes!
*All the people start dancing for Hip - Hop...*
Lakshmi: Vish? Karthik Raji enga?
Vishnu: Raji is with Kevin...(Points towards them) and Karthik...(Searches) oh there... in the DJ laptop...
Lakshmi: Ivanga en fight pannunaanga nnu theriyummaa?
Vishnu: I dunno... But Karthik Raji naa fight and compromise dhaane?
Lakshmi: Correct dhaan... They will patch - up soon...
The Host: Guys it is 8pm!! Dinner time... Relish all this food here! Thanks to all our sponsors...
*Everyone is seated at fancy tables... KVRL and their table...*
Karthik: Food is good! Mmm...
Vishnu: Yeah! Real party will be loaded with energy...
Raji: Let the party run...
Lakshmi: Everyone seems to like the food... Great!
Vishnu: Dei servers are busy serving others so konjam water kondu vaa daa...
Karthik: Three glasses right?
Lakshmi: Unnaku vendaama Karthik?
Karthik: No No... For me, u, and Vishnu...
Raji: (Glares) Enna engalukku ellam kondu vara mudiyaadha? Poda! I can get it for myself...
Lakshmi: Ey Vishnu? Unnala poi edukka mudiyaadha? Paar enna pannina nu...
Vishnu: But...
Karthik: Lakshmi... Tell ur friend to stop...
Raji: Who r u to tell?
Vishnu: Sari poi water eduthuttu vaa daa...
Karthik: Only three (Walks away)
Vishnu: Thanks
Karthik: (Comes back) Indhaangaa... (R is staring)
Raji: Excuse me Kevin?
Kevin: Yeah Raji?
Raji: Can u please get me a glass of water? (Smirks at K)
Kevin: Sure Sure... Anything else? Coke? Mountain Dew?
Raji: So sweet of you... Sure anything is fine... (K is glaring now)
Lakshmi: (Whispers) Hey Vishnu paathiyaa?
Vishnu: Amaa... (VL smile seeing this)
Kevin: Here u go Raji! Enjoy your meal...
Raji: Thank u Kevin... u too...
Karthik: Pch...
Raji: Enna sir?
Karthik: Onnum illai...
Raji: Okay whatever.. (Smirks)
Vishnu: Endaa unnakku idhellam thevaiyaa?
Karthik: Amaa daa... Amaa.. Ennaku idhellaam venum... Ippo idha vidu please...
*All finish dinner... People are back to dancing... some are near the talent stage watching people's talents*
Karthik: (Walking while talking to someone behind him) Oh okay... Alright... Bye... (Bumps into Raji)
Raji: Hey paathu walk panna maata?
*KR actually see each other completely for the first time this evening...*
Karthik: (Stands there blinking) Uh... well.. Sorry...
Raji: Hmm... (Walks past)
Karthik: (Mindvoice - Habbahh... Enna alagu...Pppahh!)
Raji: (Mindvoice- Eppadi paakaama vitten? Cha! He is HOT in the Black suit with a Red tie)
Karthik: (Ohhh I am not normal... Oru glass wine kudiyum kudikkala... I already feel drunk by just looking at her...)
Raji: (Enna Raji nee... Munnadiya pathirindir kanum... HOT HOT HOT)
Karthik: (Oru second la ava mela irundha kovam ellam poiduchu... She has magic...Pppahhh!)
Vishnu: Enna machaan? Ippadi lost ah irruke?
Karthik: Yesss Vishnu! Lost Lost Lost! (Goes to the floor and starts dancing)
Vishnu: Enna aachu ivanukku? Ivalo neram ah urru urru irundhaan? (Joins K and starts dancing)
Raji: (Looking a K from a long distance) Oh he is just melting... I can't take it anymore! (Sighs)
DJ: Guys now some melodramatic music! Enjoying dancing with a pair...
*V looks for L and finds her...*
Lakshmi: Vishnu vaa let's dance...
Vishnu: I came to call u too...Come on...
*VL start dancing in a graceful manner... Both are just staring into each other even without a blink...*
Lakshmi: (Mindvoice- I can feel it Vishnu... U saying I love u)
Vishnu: (Mindvoice- That comfort with u... Gosh... I love u)
*V takes L for more twists and turns... Now holds her by the waist...*
Vishnu: (Whispers in L's ears) Gorgeous Laksh...
Lakshmi: U too... Extremely classy...
*VL continue to dance while Kevin asks for R to dance with him...*
Kevin: Will come for a few steps Raji?
Raji: (Looks at K being possessive) Oh sure let's go... (Smiles)
*Raji and Kevin are dancing... While K is sitting on the high chairs with a glass of wine... Staring at Raji*
Raji: (Dancing) (Mindvoice - Enadaa poramai yaa? Be so... I want that...)
Karthik: (Mindvoice- Kevin is just a total hipster... U didn't even feel like telling sorry... Cha...)
Raji: (Mindvoice - Just look at him... dashing with a glass of wine... So fit to do anything right now... I love u... but I am still angry...)
Karthik: (Mindvoice- I love u... I love u... Anaa nee innaku panninadhu is horrible...)
*K goes near Kevin and says...*
Karthik: Kevin?
Kevin: Yeah?
Karthik: Look Julie is calling u...
Kevin: Okay let me see...
Karthik: (Pulls Raji aside) Inga paar... Enna thaviraa if u dance with anyone else... I will bash u!
Raji: Ey enna problem unnakku? Huh?
Karthik: I told u and that is it... Bye! (Walks away)
Raji: (Mindvoice - U get mad at me when u r wrong? Podaa dei... Let me show u this Raji...)
*R goes and greets many of her male classmates from college... K is standing there watching...*
Raji: Hello Aust! How r u?
Aust: Great thanks... Seeing u after a long time... (Gives R a hug)
Karthik: (Mindvoice- Idiot... Grrr...)
Raji: Hey Andrew...
Andrew: Hola Raji! How are u?
Raji: (Smiles looking at K) Great thanks... (Gives a Hi - Fi)
Karthik: (Mindvoice - That is it girl... Ippo paar... (Goes near R and drags her in front of everyone...)
*K takes R to the lawn on the backside of the hall...R is shivering... It is cold at night here and she is wearing a short dress... K is standing there...*
Raji: Inga paar Karthik... I don't understand why u r doing this... Decency maintain pananum nnu unnakku arivu illai yaa? Idiot... U just drag me all the way here? I am going...
Karthik: If u move another step I will kill u...
Raji: Shut up Karthik... Just shut up!
Karthik: And there is nothing wrong about the call of Kacy today...
Raji: I know everything... Kacy herself told me... U were talking about her web designing course and that red hot matter was about her drawing and the picture u saw was her photo from her DSLR...
Karthik: Then why the heck are u mad at me?
Raji: Because u have been insulting me idiot... Ever since the beginning of the party...
Karthik: Well I don't give a crap about your explanations...
Raji: Really? Wow... Apparom why were u just glaring at me the whole time?
Karthik: These are my eyes and I can do whatever with them...
Raji: R u trying to be funny? It is more irritating...
Karthik: Ennadi romba over ah persure?
Raji: Amaa naan pesuven... Naa yaar kitta pesinaalum... Endaa ivalo possessive ah feel pannure?
Karthik: Adhelaam onnum illai...
Raji: Stop lying... U were angry at everyone... I saw...
Karthik: Well u assumed that... I am not responsible for that... I am leaving bye...
Raji: Karthik nillu... U dragged me out here... I need a correct reason for why u behaved like that...
Karthik: Behaved like what?
Raji: Irate towards everyone including me
Karthik: I don't have to answer that... Bye... (Starts walking...)
Raji: Look... Ippo nee sollatii I will not come home...
Karthik: Varadha... po...
Raji: Sari... I will go now itself... (Starts walking the opposite direction...)
Friends - I am looking forward for your feedback!
NOTE : Please make sure to tell your constructive comments too... This will help me catch your mindset and make me a better writer as well... 😉
Originally posted by: ammukuty
Teddy what is this ? Nice update lastla twist vachiteengale
Please update soon know am eagerly waiting to read your next part
Originally posted by: ramyvijay
Good one Sush 👍🏼
like the closeness with their dads..
hmm... possesiveness... like this kutti fights.. 😉
waiting to see their work at office...
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