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I'm done.. 😳 again a feel good part... so... now they are going to start their professional life... good...

by the way.. any specific reason.. for KRVL to stay away from their parents? did I miss anything here. ?
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Originally posted by: ramyvijay

I'm done.. 😳 again a feel good part... so... now they are going to start their professional life... good...

by the way.. any specific reason.. for KRVL to stay away from their parents? did I miss anything here. ?




Thank uuu!!! πŸ˜› Now that I think about it...



I will clarify that for u on the next part! πŸ˜‰
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teddy when's the next part?
waiting for your update eagerly
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Part 4 -


NOTE: I have NO idea about an IT company!! This is fiction and purely my imagination! So please don't expect logic here!! Thank u Friends!! πŸ˜‰

On the first day of Office... KVRL in the car in front of Nettech Solutions Building...V parks the car...


Karthik: We are here! I am nervous!!

Lakshmi: And excited!

Vishnu: Yup our lives will be so different from today!!

Raji: I know... Ivalo naal namba Office ku varum bodhu ippadi feel aagadhu...

Lakshmi: Amaa... Idhu edho pudhusa irruku... Namba Office dhaan nnu believe panna mudiyala...

Vishnu: Correct... We have to make this company the best!

Karthik: This year our ranking is top third in Europe... Let's make sure to take it to the first place!

Raji: Right... Our parents will feel proud...

Lakshmi: Appa ulla vara solli message pannunaga... Come let's go...

Vishnu: Sari... Oh I am excited!!


*KVRL enter their Office Building...All look dashing in formal attire...*


*All the parents are present... Other officials are there as well... Start clapping and welcome KVRL...*


K dad: Hi Hi Hi children!

KVRL: Hey!

L dad: Welcome Welcome...

Vishnu: Thank u Uncle...

V dad: Welcome guys... We will have a short meeting at the conference room, then u all are free...

Karthik: Sure Uncle... Let's get going...


*All the parents, other officials, and KVRL are seated...*


R dad: Okay guys so this will be the first day for u all... This meeting is just to get yourselves familiar with the officials after us... After that... U will have a whole day to ask questions and to familiarize the place and atmosphere...

Lakshmi: Okay and can we get more details of the training for the month?


Vice President: Firstly, I am Mr. Hall the Vice President of Nettech Solutions... Okay the training for u guys will start from Thursday of this week. Until then, u are absolutely free to acquaint yourselves here... The training period will consist of you learning your responsibilities here and how well u apply them at critical situations... Remember that you have been weighed upon for being the presiding committee of Nettech in a month... U will observe what your parents are performing and innovate their principles in order to run this company successfully in your hands... Your training will be of four parts... First Week will be Observation of the Environment... Next Employee Training... In this week, u will learn how to be a basic employee first so that u can understand an employee's role while being the presidents... Third Week will be Management Week... This is where u develop the skills of managing a company and its branches... Final week is Conclusion... U will be refined and furnished to take up this responsibility in a skillful manner by the end of your training...Throughout the training, you will have several sessions of learning with your parents...a few or all at the same time... That is all... Any Questions?


Karthik: Okay so obviously we are freshers and we don't have a whole lot of hands-on experience... Since it will be hard on us for a few months just to take care of this headquarters, will it be possible for us to manage our other branches throughout the world as well?

Mr. Hall: Well, there are Vice Presidents like me in each of the branch to run the corporation but obviously the headquarters will have to manage all of it...So your parents will take care of that for a few months until you guys are full- fledged... Anything else?

Raji: What about our seating?

Mr. Hall: Oh thanks for reminding... It will the Presidents' cabin... U may ask your way around... So there will be 4 special areas for each of u with all facilities... All of u will be in the same cabin... But it is sized for four people... Your parents were in there... But we reshaped it for four instead of eight of the parents...

Raji: Thank u very much we are eagerly waiting to start...

Mr. Hall: Any other questions/comments/ or concerns?

Vishnu: We will be more than happy to ask questions during the training...

L dad: Alright guys...that is the end of the meeting... Please do familiarize, and we are leaving home...

V dad: Good Luck and make us proud... Bye

R dad: We are counting on you are will always be there to assist u all any time...

K dad: That's it! Bye... Thanks Mr. Hall for your time...

Mr. Hall: Sure, it's my job and my pleasure as well... I am looking forward to working with u all from now on... I had an excellent experience with your parents and am excited to work with u all... Bye...

KVRL: Bye and Thank u!


*All the officials leave and KVRL are still in the conference room...*


Karthik: Wow... Everything here is so systematic

Vishnu: Amaa daa... Namba Officekku ethana dhadava vandhirukom... Appo ellam technical ah think panninadhe illa... Different perspective...

Raji: Okay so namba cabinkku polaamaa?

Lakshmi: Sure! I want to see it and pick out my seat...


*KVRL are inside their cabin... There are four places two on one side...then two on the opposite... Each place has a HUGE table and chair already set with all the electronics needed...*


Lakshmi: OMG!!! This is amazing! I love our parents!!

Raji: I know right!! I am taking this seat where I can enjoy nature while working... (Sighs)

Lakshmi: Perfect Raji! I was planning to take this seat right next yours.. Now we both are together! (RL Hug)

Vishnu: Dei Karthi naa indha seat right across my darling...

Karthik: Appo naa idhu right across my sweetheart...

Lakshmi: Hello enna idhu? Neenga paatukku engala darling, sweetheart solereenga?

Raji: Adhaane... What is this?

Karthik: Do u want me to tell? (Looks at R teasingly)

Raji: Sari Sari vidu pa...

Vishnu: Adhu...

Lakshmi: Unga rendu peraium apparom vachikirom...

Vishnu: My pleasure Laksh! (KVRL laugh)


Karthik: Guys we should go to the cafeteria!

Vishnu: Amaada polaam vaanga... Let's check it out!

RL: Hmm


*At the cafeteria...KVRL are seated...*


Vishnu: Innimel nammakku inga dhaan food illa?

Raji: Yes Vishnu... I am not sure how the food here is though...

Karthik: So what? Order panni samples paathutaa pochu... If we like it great!

Vishnu: If not... Parents kitta solli maathidalaam...

Lakshmi: What foods do the offer here?

Raji: Hmmm I think French, Italian, American fast food, and Indian...
Vishnu: Every Wednesday you will have another variety of cuisine...

Karthik: Interesting...How do u all know this?

Vishnu: I gathered the info from this staff

Raji: Uh I have looked at the menu long back

Karthik: Oh okay... Let's call the server... (Raises his voice) Excuse me? Can u come here please?

Server: Hello everyone... So u guys are the new chairmen... Welcome to Nettech Cafeteria!

Vishnu: Thank u sir...Ur name? Sorry we never bothered to ask your name before times...

Server: No problem Sir! I am Fred... U may call me Freddy... and u all are?

Raji: Oh I am Raji and (points to everyone) this is Lakshmi, Vishnu, and Karthik...

Freddy: Fantastic... I will provide with a few of our samples today... Give me a minute...

Lakshmi: Sure Freddy...

Freddy: (Comes back with a whole platter of samples) Try it guys! (KVRL start tasting)

Vishnu: Mmm... What a wow!

Karthik: Just melts in my mouth

Raji: Fantastic Freddy! Amazing!

Lakshmi: Incredible...I just love it! R u the chief of the cooking department?

Freddy: I sure am...uh Lakshmi...right? (L nods) Oh okay and thank u very much!

Vishnu: Best cafeteria food ever...

Freddy: Anytime guys! Bye now...(KVRL wave bye to F)


*KVRL are all happy about the cafeteria being good...Now they look around the HUGE building...*


Vishnu: Habbahh! Huge building... I wonder how we didn't even bother to go around our OWN office...

Lakshmi: Seriously...We only know how to get to a certain places...Hmm...

Raji: Wow though...Now I feel proud of having such parents

Karthik: True True True...They have worked their lives into this...

Lakshmi: All eight of them were a great team and we should be as well!

Raji: Of course...



Raji: I think we should call for a meeting with our direct team and get to know them...

Karthik: Hmmm... Anaaa...

Vishnu: Enna daa?

Karthik: Um well... Namba laam experience illama Presidents agarom... But nammakku under work pannuravangalakku literally 10-15 years experience irukku... I don't think this will be correct...

Lakshmi: I can understand... But doesn't everything matter in how we act?

Raji: Lakshmi is correct... Konjam think pannu Karthik... We are not cruel or anything right? Our company's success' main secret is equality right? So why don't we call the meeting and see how it works out? We will proceed from there... (KV nod)

Mr. Hall: Well done guys! I was walking by and dropped to listen to your talk... Very kind, yet strong and assertive... I will arrange for the meeting... Please report to the Conference Room in 30mins...

Vishnu: Sure thank u Mr. Hall... (H leaves)


*30 minutes later... In the conference room... All the reporting employees are present... KVRL walk in and take a seat...*


Karthik: Welcome guys! I am Karthik... One of the soon to be presidents of Nettech

Vishnu: I am Vishnu and pleased to meet you all...

Lakshmi: My name is Lakshmi... Part of the Presidents group as well...

Raji: And I am Raji... Looking forward to working with u all...Please introduce yourselves...


Person 1: Hello everyone... I am Jem Lott, the head of the business analytics in Nettech... I have a whole of 15 years experience in the IT field and 10 years in Nettech! I have loved working here and am planning to do so until retirement... Not so far away! (Everyone laughs)


Person 2: I am Chan Dao , the head of Telecommunications here... My experience is 8 years and all in Nettech... I have worked as a .NET developer for 4 years in China before Nettech... Pleased to meet u all...


Person 3: I am Matt Drew, the webmaster of the web developer team in Nettech... I absolutely cherish my job and one of my main responsibility is to travel to different branches of Nettech to monitor and conduct virtual as well as in -person training. I have a whole of 20 years experience and have been here with Nettech for 15 years... I used to work for the Apple headquarters in California. Getting old, you can say with my grey hair, and learning everyday... Looking forward big time to work with u guys! (KVRL smile pleasingly)


Person 4: Hey guys! I am Emily Phan... Also referred as Melly... I am the advertising and promotions head here... Not so much of an easy job...BUT... Melly is always upto challenges! (Sarcastically) I know I am the best! (All have a good laugh!) I have had 11 years of experience in this field! I love it as much as anything!!


Person 5: Hi !! I am Alice Just... Melly and I joined at the same time in Nettech... We have the same amount of experience... Though...I am the lead of the Web designing sector of Nettech... I have majored in Engineering Design... I have a special bonding with all of your parents... About five years ago, web design was the heart of IT...at that time I was the one who reported to your parents... So that is me... My job is interesting and am very open-minded with all the job duties... Waiting eagerly to work with u guys... Thanks..


Lakshmi: Wow... We are actually mindblown... U guys are very diverse and versatile...

Vishnu: Of course! Great pleasure meeting you all... Very talented...

Raji: Yup! Okay we obviously are amateurs in IT... and we are handed a HUGE responsibility... We are greatly counting on such a team to assist us...

Karthik: Of course guys... Technically u all are seniors and we will follow a mutual relation with each of u... As we progress, we expect you to teach and guide us... I think you all make a great team in Nettech and the you all sure do share a huge part in the success..

Lakshmi: We all will work as a team from now on...

Matt: Perfect! U will all do absolutely great and we are ready to work with you...

Chan: As you said, it will be a mutual relation... I am excited!

Melly: Oh yeah yeah! By the way, I am not as formal as the others... I love to be friendly...

Raji: We sure see that... And we expect all of u to feel comfortable with us... We are the main team of Nettech Solutions itself!

Lakshmi: Thank u very much for being very professional towards us... Meet you soon... Bye...


*All shake hands and leave...*


*KVRL meet a few of the employees...they have attended the meeting...and looked around...Now they are back home with the satisfaction of their official first day*


Karthik: (On his laptop) Dei Vishnu ennadaa pannure?

Vishnu: Instagram daa... Nee?

Karthik: Inga vandhu idha paaru...

Vishnu: Hmm...(Goes to see the screen) Semma creation machaan...

Karthik: Thank u daa... Nee dhaan namba group la the best photographer...Adha express panna dhaan unnoda photos plus mine ah sethu collage create pannine...

Vishnu: Unnakku vera velai illiyaa? Menakettu endhuku da idhelaam panre?

Karthik: Ennoda BEST FRIEND has incredible talents and I want to show it to the world... Idhu my responsibility and my pleasure...

Vishnu: Pinnre po... Computer techniques la unna adichuikave mudiyaadhu... Affection kamikaradhu la kudiyum dhaan...

Karthik: Feel avadha da... Free ah vidu... We will be the best of friends on Earth... (KV hug)


Vishnu: Ennapaa ladies...Is dinner ready? Shall we dine?

Lakshmi: Almost...Come to the dining table please!

Karthik: Coming... (KV go and sit at the dining table)

Vishnu: What special today darlings?

Raji: Mmm... Guess panninga a patpom...

Karthik: Edhuvaa irundhaalum naana sapidovom... I am Hungry!!

Vishnu: Yes me too! Sari... Edhavadhu clue on what type of food?

Lakshmi: Uh sari... Umm Italian cuisine...

Vishnu: Seriously? Eppo did u both learn to cook different cuisines?

Raji: Vishnu we both have an incredible passion for cooking...mm...like photography for u...

Vishnu: Appo ennakum en machaanukum life full ah super food nu sollunga...

Lakshmi: We will not answer this Vishnu...(Smiles)

Karthik: Okay let's eat !!


*RL serve the food and everyone enjoys the food*


Karthik: Semma pinnitinga! Vishnu next time evanga cook pannaradha photo edudaa...

Vishnu: Hmm...I was also thinking that...

Karthik: Super ah dhaan cook pannuringa... I miss my mom's cooking...

Vishnu: Amaa daa...Enna pannuradhu... Marseille was closer to the college and Nettech...So we all decided to stay here and will continue...

Lakshmi: We have to leave some things in life to gain something... But I guess it's okay...

Raji: I too miss my family but now... this is my family!! (KVRL smile and finish dinner)


*The following weekend after the second training session...*


Karthik: Morning ladies! Weekend seems fun when u don't have training!

Vishnu: GM people! Yay! Semma training sessions machaan! I thought it would be boring...but so interesting...My passion towards the job is increasing...day by day...I love it...

Raji: Yup same here...Sari innaku enna naal nu nyabagam irukka?

Lakshmi: Adhane...Ivalo cool ah irrukeenga?

Vishnu: Enna Lachu? Is it someone's birthday?

Karthik: (Thinks for sometime...) Oh Sh*t... Today is the party that the parents are hosting right?

Raji: Correct...Adhukaaga endaa ippadi ellam pesure?

Karthik: Sorry about that...I haven't even done purchase for clothing yet!

Vishnu: Me neither... What about u two?

Raji: Enna solreenga rendu perum? Remember that day when Laksh and I went to the library? We went shopping right after that...

Karthik: Endii engalayum kupidala?

Raji: No Vishnu said last saturday that he was going shopping...so we thought...u guys went already...

Vishnu: Adhu chumma sonnadhu Raji...Ippo enna pannuradhu? We r screwed!

Lakshmi: Idea... Skip breakfast and go to the store to so shopping...Be back in like 3 hours and we all can have a brunch meal...

Karthik: This is the best we can do...We will do it...(Sighs)

Vishnu: Sari...what r u two wearing?

RL: Surprise!!

Karthik: Fine...Vaa Vishnu namba polaam...Car key mattum eduthittu vaa please... (KV leave)


Lakshmi: Ennadi idhu? They r so careless...

Raji: Uh this is the second time they are going shopping on the party day...

Lakshmi: Seriously true... I am excited Raji! (L's face is gleaming and bright)

Raji: (Looks tensed and confused) Yeah...

Lakshmi: Enna aachu ? Why are u all...tensed?

Raji: Illa Lakshmi...adhu vandhu...

Lakshmi: Hmm?

Raji: I have a strong feeling that something will happen today... I can't understand it... Dilemma...

Lakshmi: Ennadi olre? Correct ah sollu...

Raji: I don't know how to say... I feel as if... something...will happen...either first bad then to good or from good to then bad...

Lakshmi: Calm down...Nothing will happen...If it does...u will face it correctly...I believe in u...

Raji: Thanks Lakshmi...Ippo konjam better ah feel pannuren...(Smiles)
Lakshmi: (Smiles) That is my bestiee... Venumnaa onnu pannu...Karthik vandhadhu kku approm go somewhere with him...Maybe u will feel better...

Raji: Hmm... Sari dii... Vaa cook pannalaam...


*KVRL finish their brunch...*


Raji: Karthik? Enna beach kku kuttitu poriyaa please?

Karthik: Enna beach ah? Hey anga poradhukku one hour aagum...eppadi? We have the party...

Raji: Well namba house la irundhu 20 mins la the isolated side of the beach will come right? We will go there

Karthik: (Thinking)

Raji: Karthik please please ippo oru walk beach la polaam please please Karthik...

Karthik: Sari vaa namba polaam...We will be back in an hour...

Raji: U are so sweet Karthik...Lo- (Bites her tounge) uh nevermind...Let's go...

Karthik: Hey full ah sentence ah finish pannu...appodhaan...(Smirks)

Raji: (Shyly) Mudiyaadhu... Naan kelamburen... po...(Starts walking)

Lakshmi: Okay Okay...(Smiles)

Vishnu: Ennakum purinjiduchu...(Smirks)

Karthik: Hey kalaikaadhenga paa...I am going with her...Bye...


*KR taking a walk on the beach... Nobody is around them... Just the waves sound and them walking...*


Raji: Karthik?

Karthik: Sollu daa...

Raji: Full ah sentence finish panavaa?

Karthik: Vendaam... Naan thaan first solluven...

Raji: Unnoda "right" moment eppo varadhu?

Karthik: I don't know... No planning... Naturally it will come in some form...

Raji: (Sighs) Sari... Indha atmosphere nallairukku la?

Karthik: Semma... France naa summavaa?

Raji: I know... I love living here...

Karthik: Unna pathukitte irukanum pola irukku... Nalla velai I get to sit right across u in office...

Raji: (Frowns) U are making the whole place awkward Karthik... So u would just be staring at me all day?

Karthik: Of course chellam... Vishnu Lakshmi enna nammakku theriayadha? We have been together ever since birth...Adhanaala...

Raji: Adhanaala?

Karthik: (Screams) I DON'T CARE!

Raji: (Starts laughing) Habbah so loud...

Karthik: Stay with me forever as the smiling Raji please?

Raji: Hey en ippo senti aagure?

Karthik: Theriyala dii... I just had to say that...

Raji: Sari vidu... Can we sit?

Karthik: Hmm vaa let's sit here...(KR sit down)

Raji: (Mindvoice- I love u... Way too much... Indha feeling eppadi vandhudhu ne theriyalai but pudichirukku)

Karthik: I too like it... Unexplainable...

Raji: (Suprised) Ketturuchaa? OMG... I should never talk to myself again...

Karthik: Illa nee pesanum...appo dhaan we can mutually talk...

Raji: Correct dhaan... But u r invading me... (Throws sand at him)

Karthik: Ey enna dii pannure? (Throws more sand on her)


*Both are happily playing with each other with hearts filled with LOVE...*


Karthik: Raji un kai pudichikka va?

Raji: (Gives her hand) Hmm... Enndaa unnaku en kai ivalo pudikudhu?

Karthik: Un kai pudichaa...

Raji: Enna sollu...

Karthik: I would get a million feelings that surround me...

Raji: Puriyalla...

Karthik: Uh how do I say this... um...Like ... Anga paar... Andha vast sea la oru chinna boat irruku paar... Like that... (Squeezes her hand) I am that boat and the water around it is what I feel... Idhu solla mudiyaadhu Raji...

Raji: (Tears filled her eyes) Karthik...

Karthik: Hey alaadha... Chumma appadiye solliten sorry daa...

Raji: (Mindvoice - I love u idiot... Eppadi daa? How can u love me so much?)

Karthik: Marubadiyum mind voice ah? Should I answer your question?

Raji: (Smiles) Vendaam... U will make me cry again...

Karthik: Vaa innum konjam walk poittu we will return...


*KR start walking again... K holds R with his arm around her shoulder...*


*VL are at home... V is doing something on his laptop...L finished arranging the kitchen and goes and sits near V*


Vishnu: Enna darling?

Lakshmi: Onnum illai... Chumma...What are u doing?

Vishnu: Gmail Inbox cleaning...Sari close your eyes...

Lakshmi:Edhukku daa? (Closes her eyes)

Vishnu: (Does something on the laptop) Ippo look...

Lakshmi: (Shocked and surprised) Hey Vishnu...Unnaku naan first send pannina email ah? That was like years ago... Did u not delete it yet?

Vishnu: Nope... Idhu eppo send pinnina theriyumaa? When you were 8 years old... (Smiles)

Lakshmi: Eppadi Vishnu? Ithana years kku apparom kuda u have it safe?

Vishnu: Adhu appadi thaan... Read your message... (It says - Hi Vishnu! I am at the hotel room across your room! Haha... U just gave me your email right? This is the reply...--Lakshmi :P)

Lakshmi: (Smiling) Long back right?

Vishnu: Semma cute... Just like now (Touches her nose with his finger)

Lakshmi: Sari en nee delete pannala?

Vishnu: Because I can't delete u from my heart and little things like this are proof for the fact that u hold a special place in my heart...

Lakshmi: Sari but...how?

Vishnu: Naa speacial nnu mean pannuradhu vandhu...I have a special place for my parents, two people, my best friends, Karthik Raji, two people, but two irrukave mudiyadhadhu is the relationship between us... U r the one and ONLY one for the rest of my life... (Mindvoice - I love u Laksh)

Lakshmi: (Surprised) Super Vishnu... Ippadi ellam naan think panninadhe illa... Unnaku enna avalo pudikkumaa?

Vishnu: Amaa... There isn't a limit...

Lakshmi: (Mindvoice- Love u Vishnu... I can't express how happy I am... I love u...)

Vishnu: Enna chellam yosikkare?

Lakshmi: Onnum illai...Adhu eppadi neeyum Karthikum confess pannaradhu adhuvaa varumnu solreenga?

Vishnu: Because it is nothing to plan...then it would make ur feelings artificial...

Lakshmi: Sari forever varraama irundhudhu naa?

Vishnu: When u think it will take forever...Appo nee sollidu...(His trademark laugh)

Lakshmi: Naan ellam sollamaten...Nee sonna okay...otherwise we are moving on in life...

Vishnu: Enna nee ippadi solare?

Lakshmi: Appadi dhaan...

Vishnu: Sari Karthik Raji vandhuduvaanga... Lets pretend nothing happened here...(L nods)


Karthik: Lets pretend what happened here? (Confused)

Vishnu: Cha! Vandhutiyya? Grrr... (Frowns)

Raji: Stop making noises and tell what happened...(Smiles)

Lakshmi: Onnum illai...(Tries hard to not smile)

Karthik: Ippo sollati we will assume something private happened...(Teasingly looks)

Vishnu: Habbah dei...Appadi ellam onum illai...Edhavadhu rumor laam start pannadhe...

Raji: Appo solluga... Obviously we know it is personal...but what were u two hiding?

Lakshmi: Onnum illai paa...chumma we were just talking...about...stuff...

Karthik: Idha munnadiye solradhu...(Smiles) Idhukku mela ketkalai...

Vishnu: Ivalo easy ah vida mudiyaadhu... Neenga rendu perum enna panninga?

Lakshmi: Semma Vishnu! Sollunga officers...About your romance...(Teases)

Raji: Hey no romance... Ippadi ellam pesaadhe...

Karthik: Appadiya Raji? Unmaiya sollalame...

Raji: Endaa enakku support panname ippadi pesure?

Vishnu: Okay Okay... Semma weather, lonely beach, one couple...(Sighs)...

Raji: Chiii enna Vishnu idhu? Karthik...Ellam unnala dhaan...Adi!

Karthik: (Starts running while R chases him) Vidu dii... Sorry Sorry...


Lakshmi: Semma cute la Vishnu?

Vishnu: Amaa made for each other... (VL enjoy KR's playing...)


*About time to leave for the party... R meets K in his room...*


Raji: Enndaa innum ready agalaiyaa?

Karthik: Nope...Even u didn't get ready...

Raji: I came to get my ironing table from your room...(She goes gets it and is about to leave)

Karthik: Raji?

Raji: Hmmm?

Karthik: I feel something weird... Like ...a bad thing will happen and it will turn to be a good one...Puriyalla...I am confused...

Raji: (Mindvoice- Enna ivanum idhaye solraan? Oh god ennaku bayamaa irruku...)

Karthik: Ennadi yosikure?

Raji: Nothing...Be relaxed and enjoy the party...U will be fine...

Karthik: (Smiles) Thanks daa

Raji: (Smiles as well and leaves)


*R comes back to K's room but stops on hearing his convo on the phone...*


Karthik: Haha! U r so funny... Yeah Yeah Kacy... Where do u work now? Oh great!

Raji: (Mindvoice- Idiot poium poium Kacy kitta dhaan flirt punnreiyaa? Ava ellam oru aalu...)

Karthik- Okay Kacy... Sure let's meet up sometime... Haha...Oh seriously? Wow! Hmm... U will be at the party today right? Yes! I am happy... Looking forward to see u... Oh Kacy don't say that! Really? OMG! Oh red? Hot!

Raji: (Mindvoice- That is it...I have heard enough...Avaloda dress kku comment punnuraana? Podaa... Karthik neeyumaa ippadi? Endaa? Don't u love me?)

Karthik: (Looks at his phone screen) Beautiful Kacy! Oh alright... Cool! Well see ya in a few hours! Bye!

Raji: (Near the verge of crying) (Mindvoice- Endaa? I am so mad at u!)

Karthik: (Comes out of the room and saw R almost to cry) Hey Raji? Enna chellam aachu? (Goes near her to touch her)

Raji: (Pushes his hand off) Kai edu Karthik...

Karthik: Enna aachu?

Raji: Don't talk to me anymore.En Karthik ivalo cheap nnu I didn't even think... Cha...poium poium Kacy ah?

Karthik: (Realizes) Oh adhuvaa... Naan solradha kelu Raji please...

Raji: What r u gonna tell huh? Adhu unmai illai naa? Po engaiyaavadhu... Cheap!

Karthik: That's it Raji... U r crossing the limits... Niruthu...(Looks angry)

Raji: Just shut up okay? Don't try to justify your point...

Karthik: Podi... All these years nee ivalo dhaana enna pathi understand panni niyaa? Bye! Goodbye! (Turns around angrily and leaves...)

Raji: Podaa... Thappu pannitu kovam vera paduriyaa? Po...I hate u... No I don't... I love u idiot... (Starts to crying)


*KR were still holding grudges...Didn't even see each other properly...*


*KVRL enter the party hall to find a HUGE crowd!*



-- Party Day to be continued --



--Part 4 on the way--



Friends - I am looking forward for your feedback!



NOTE : Please make sure to tell your constructive comments too... This will help me catch your mindset and make me a better writer as well... πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Wow Sush !! such a long update.. πŸ‘ Thanks 😊

what to say? I just love to read your writings.. too professional.. from a little girl.. I'm just wondering...

and what did u say? no idea on IT company.. fiction.. imagination... definitely there is nothing illogical here.. everything seems to be formal with respect to office...

Love this KVRL and their bonding ❀️

great work πŸ‘πŸΌ...

looking forward for the party.. πŸ₯³
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: SushK16




Thank uuu!!! πŸ˜› Now that I think about it...



I will clarify that for u on the next part! πŸ˜‰



And I got the answer.. Thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
awesome update teddy. loved it and thanks for the long update.
you have expressed each one of their emotions clearly for the way they feel about the work and their feelings towards each other. hope their is no major problems in the office.

in this part shows the bond between raji lakshmi and vishnu and karthi not just the relationship with karthi raji and vishnu lakshmi. it was nice to read thank you.

loved how karthi and raji feel the same thing. hope he tells her the way he feels soon. 😊

waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Sorry for the late comment,yaar...
caught with two updates back to back...

very well written...nicely portrayed the bonding between KRVL...

so,KR have same feelings...so cute😳...

thanks for the long update...waiting for the next partπŸ˜›
Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
woww..wonderful updates...KRVL bonding, KR and VL 's yet to be proposed love...amazing..
KR both getting similar thoughts..nice..

Like your style of narration..πŸ‘πŸΌ

thanks for the long update..looking forward to the party and KR's patch up.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Interesting update...

IT field theiyathu nu solli super explanatios kuduthurukeengha... πŸ‘

Super... On the whole very well explained Ana kadaisila KR fight pottu freeze paniteengha...

Waiting for the next update...
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