New SS - *The Dearest Buddies* (Part 11 and 12 DONE - Pg 28) - Page 5

Hi Sush , nice update . Enjoyed the outing very much 😉. New place , new experience with your story 👍🏼. Your Lakshmi is very naughty - Loved it 😆. KVRL bonding is super . KR & VL relationship? Have they convey their feelings ? Thanks . Waiting

Originally posted by: plily

Hi Sush , nice update . Enjoyed the outing very much 😉. New place , new experience with your story 👍🏼. Your Lakshmi is very naughty - Loved it 😆. KVRL bonding is super . KR & VL relationship? Have they convey their feelings ? Thanks . Waiting

it's a fabulous update Teddy 👏

Originally posted by: sizzling78

it's a fabulous update Teddy👏

i imagined each scene but i also thought why director can't think like these ideasnu😆

Lakshmi wohhh so naughty & mischeif 😛but sad of that shopkeeper 🤣i smiled all the way😆

it's nice to see such KRVL bond of friendship's magic which has lost it's charm in the original plot 😭

waiting eagerly for KR & VL's proposal😳

waiting for ur next part

Thank u very much! 😉

Part 3 Precap -

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Naan onnu ketkataa?

Lakshmi: (Without looking up) Enna kellu....

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Lakshmi: Phone addikudhu paar... eduthu pesu...

Vishnu: Mmm... (Attends the call) Hello appa?

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V mom: Innaiku morning phone la appakitta oru truth kandupidichennu sonne la? Ennadaa?

Vishnu: Adhu vandu maa...

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Raji: Karthik...

Karthik: Enna?

--Part 3 on the way--

Part 3 -

On a sunny Saturday...

*L is reading a book on the sofa while V enters and sits across L*

Vishnu: Enna Lakshmi read pannure?

Lakshmi: Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury

Vishnu: Hey that is an amazing book... One of the best that I have read!

Lakshmi: Nee book ellam padipiya? Sollave illa? Appuram en ennaium Raji um tease pannure?

Vishnu: Overah kalaikaadha enna... Both Karthik and I read books but we are not bookworms like u two...

Lakshmi: Sari Sari vidu... (Starts reading again)

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Naan onnu ketkataa?

Lakshmi: (Without looking up) Enna kellu...

Vishnu: Munnaadi ellam nee ennaium Karthikium hug panna yosikave matta... Ippo en Karthiya normal ah hug pannure but enna mattum...?

Lakshmi: (Looks up) Do u have any sense idiot? Neeyellam oru seriyaana wasteuu...

Vishnu: Ey en ippo thitture?

Lakshmi: Normal friends ah hug pannarathukum unna hug pannarathukum difference illya? Unna friendaa hug pannanum naa sollu I will me more than happy to do it...

Vishnu: (Face all bright with a happiness) Wow Laksh!! Semma po... I am flying!! On cloud nine!!

Lakshmi: (Starts laughing) U r so innocent Vishnu...

*V's phone rings...*

Lakshmi: Phone addikudhu paar... eduthu pesu...

Vishnu: Mmm... (Attends the call) Hello appa?

V dad: Hi Vishnu! Eppadi daa irukke? How about the other children? First speaker la phone podu then call everyone in the home please...

Vishnu: (Puts on speaker) Karthi? Raji? Come downstairs please...(L looks up and listens) Naanga nallairukom paa... How about u all?

V dad: Mmm...good... Ennada ivalo excited voicela pesure?

Vishnu: (Looks at L and smiles) Onnum illai paa...Chumma I got to know a truth that is all...

V dad: Sari I will not interfere with that... Ellarum vandhacha?

Vishnu: (KRL are seated) Yup everyone's here... Edhukku call paniniga?

V dad: Firstly, all of the parents are here...This phone call is to talk about Office...

Karthik: Hi uncle and others... Is everything okay?

V dad: Prefect Karthik... It was just that we all decided that we should...retire...

Raji: Enna uncle? Then what about the Office?

K dad: Illa maa... this is the right time to handover it to u all...

V mom: Correct...so u all should be here for dinner tonight...

Vishnu: Enna maa ivalo sudden ah solareenga?

R dad: No Vishnu... Idhu romba naal plan...

L dad: Ammam so it is important and cannot be discussed on the phone see you tonight...

Lakshmi: Sari paa we will be there by 7:00pm then...

*They say bye and cut the phone*

Vishnu: Ennada idhu? Why would they--

Karthik: Onnum puriyalla... We will go and see...

Vishnu: College finish pannitu happya thaane irundhom? Now why such a big responsibility?

Raji: Hello... Naama ivalo luxurious a live pannaradhu kaaranam our company...

Lakshmi: Correct...I am ready for this challenge!

Karthik: Yeah new experience in our life...

Vishnu: (Sighs) Okay fine... Let's do it guys!

Karthik: Sari... nee enna truth kandupidiche?

Vishnu: (Smiles at L) Onnum illaye...

Raji: Appadiyellam solli escape aaga mudiyadhu... better tell us...

*L texts V something and V reads it... Edavadhu vaaiya thorandha... Apparom ennaku theriyaadhu...*

Vishnu: Hey onnumillai... seriously nambuna nambunga illati ponga...(Gets up and leaves)

Karthik: Hey Vish--

Raji: Vidu Karthik... Apparom pathukalaam... Enga poidaporaaru...

Lakshmi: Sari I am back to reading...(Looks at the book and starts)

*KR leave upstairs and go to a balcony*

Karthik: Raji...

Raji: Hmm.. Enna?

Karthik: (Mindvoice - I love u... I love u soo much... I am waiting for the right moment to tell u)

Raji: Ennaku ketturuchu...

Karthik: Appadiya? Enga sollu patpom... (Smirks)

Raji: Idhu ellam enkita vendam... Naa solla matten podaa...

Karthik: Appo can I tell?

Raji: Unnoda "right" moment vandhadhum sollu...ippo venaa...

Karthik: (Smiles sweetly) Nee readya work panna?

Raji: Theriyalla Karthik...My mind is totally blank...Let's see what the parents say...

Karthik: I am waiting for that as well... (Goes near R)

Raji: (Moves away) Enna pannure?

Karthik: (Mindvoice - Thaliyaa poorre? Iru enna panurennu paar...) Ey Raji a cockroach!

Raji: (Screams and runs into the room) Karthik poiduchaa?

Karthik: (Goes behind her) Maatuniyaa? Endii thalli ponne? Naan varakudadha?

Raji: Open spacela ellarum pakkure edathule varakudadhu...

Karthik: Oh appo ip-

Raji: Eppaiyum varakudadhu... at least till u confess...(Smiles) Leave this now... Bye (Runs away)

Karthik: Such a darling...Love u

*At V's home (City of Nice France - Main attraction : MAMAC Museum of Fine Arts)

*All the parents are present... L knocks the door...*

KVL: Hi Aunty!!

R: Hi Maa... Eppadi irruke?

R mom: Super... Come in...

*KVRL go inside and meet the others in the living room*

Vishnu: Hello everyone!

R dad: Hey!

L dad: How about we start eating and we will discuss at the dining table?

Raji: Sure let's go...

*All the parents and children are sitting at the 12 - seat dining table*

Vishnu: Whoa! Who cooked ALL this?

L dad: All the honorable ladies of this group...

Karthik: Sari let's start eating... I am starving!

Lakshmi: Hey 30 minutes munnadi thaane peanut butter sandwich saputte?

Karthik: Well...I am starving again because of seeing all this food... Yummy!!

*All have a good laugh and start eating*

R dad: Okay as we said earlier this day we all will be retiring in a month and soon u four will be the presidents of Nettech Solutions...The reason for this is...

K dad: We are getting old and we want to enjoy our lives with each other as much as possible...(Laughs)

R dad: U all need a responsibility in life...

L mom: We have developed the company to a place where it will be safe always...so u need to take care...

V dad: U all need to learn to be independent

V mom: Finally we believe in u children...

K mom: U will be trained for this month and once u are expertized... We will retire officially...

Vishnu: Habbahh! Ivalo responsibility ahh? Are u all sure about this?

R dad: Of Course Vishnu... U all will do great!

Raji: Sari okay...we will take this up!

KVL: Yup!

K mom: That's our children... Good Luck!

*All finish dinner and V goes to his mom*

Vishnu: Hi maa...

V mom: Hi daa... eppadi irruke?

Vishnu: Good... Unna romba miss pannuren maa...

V mom: Dei adhaan daily phone la pesure illa?

Vishnu: That won't be like sitting with u and talking like this...

V mom: Theriyum daa... We have to get over things in life... Vishnu...?

Vishnu: (Sighs) Sollu maa...

V mom: Innaiku morning phone la appakitta oru truth kandupidichennu sonne la? What is that? Un appa paatukku I am not interfering nu sollitaaru... Nee happyaa irundhennu mattum purinjidhu... But...ennadaa?

Vishnu: Adhu vandu maa...

V mom: Sari... It is something to do with a girl? (Smiles)

Vishnu: Aamaa...(Smiles)

V mom: Did my son fall in love?

Vishnu: (Shyly) Long back maa...

V mom: Sari sollu who is that darling? Enna truth?

Vishnu: Kandippa solren... Un kitta solame eppadi... But ippo vendaam... ..Seekiram I will come...

V mom: Sari... I am waiting...

Vishnu: I love u maa!

V mom: (Smiles) U r the best son...

*All four are back home and drinking hot chocolate sitting on their sofa...*

Karthik: Thanks for this cup...So needed right now...

Vishnu: Yup... Sari naalikku shopping poganum...

Raji: Edhukku Vishnu?

Vishnu: Enna ippadi kettutinga? Office pogaporum from Monday... Konjam attracting ah poga vendaama?

Lakshmi: Adhu sari thaan... But why attracting?

Vishnu: Appa told me that there are a lot of females, especially from different parts of the world... French, American, Italian, Australian, Indian, Chinese, Thai, and more... (Smiling happily)

Lakshmi: (Glares at Vishnu) Anga vandhu edhavadhu flirt panni paaru...apparom irruku unakku...

*KR start laughing*

Vishnu: Enna Lakshmi nee... Paaru ivanga rendu peraium...

Lakshmi: Sari Sari... Romba tease pannadhinga... Paavam...

Raji: (Laughs) Sorry Vishnu...

Karthik: I am a little nervous about this...

Lakshmi: En Karthik?

Karthik: Well...namba parents 30 years ah company a hard work panni indha high positionkku konduvandhu irukkanga... We should improve it even more...

Raji: Correct Karthik...We have to make them proud...

Vishnu: Let's make sure that at all situations we four are together always...

Lakshmi: Kandipaa... We are everything when together...

Raji: And nothing when alone...

Karthik: Rightly said... Good Night...

Raji: I am coming too... (KR leave...)

*L gets up to leave but V pulls her*

Lakshmi: Enna Vishnu?

Vishnu: Amma innaku kettanga...

Lakshmi: Sollitiyaa? Amma naa unnaku romba pudikume...

Vishnu: Sollale Lakshmi... But soon solrennu solliruken...Adhuku nee thaan cooperate pannanum...

Lakshmi: Modhala nee edhavadhu initiative yedu... naan cooperate pannradhuku...

Vishnu: Ennaikaa vadhu adhuvaa varum Lakshmi..Wait pannalaam...

Lakshmi: (Smiles) Sari bye... Good night...

*VL leave but turn around and have a romantic eye lock...Leave again*

*Before KR entering their different rooms...*

Raji: Karthik...

Karthik: Ennadii?

Raji: Romba worry pannaama thoongu okay?

Karthik: Parraa...yaaro enakkaga care pannikuranga...

Raji: Naan pannamaa vera yaaru pannuvaa?

Karthik: Appadiyaa... En dii?

Raji: Podaa Good Night! (Goes into her room and locks the door)

*K is standing there smiling... R is leaning on the backside of the door and whispers I love u Karthik...*

--Part 4 on the way--

Friends - I am looking forward for your feedback!

NOTE : Please make sure to tell your constructive comments too... This will help me catch your mindset and make me a better writer as well... 😉

Wow teddy superb updates err really really good waiting for your next part👏

Very nice update, very cool, awesome bond between 4.. Very well portrayed... 👏

Teddy lovely update... raji and karthi both know that they have feelings for each other but havent confessed likewise lakshmi and vishnu.. really nicely portrayed.

Thanks for the update Teddy, really nice to see everyone together. When is KR going to tell each other their feelings, I'm sure that will be a good scene to see.