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Very Nice start dear...
Different location...Different concept...
Loved the bonding between them...
looking forward to read more...
Originally posted by: sathuraj
Very Nice start dear...
Different location...Different concept...Loved the bonding between them...looking forward to read more...
Part 2 -
An hour later Vishnu steers into the parking lot and parks the car under a palm tree...
Vishnu: We are here! Wake up Wake up...
Karthik: It took longer than usual today... En?
Vishnu: Oh, the freeway is blocked for speedway racing...So innaikum naalaikum ippadi dhaan irrukum...
Raji: Aha! We are here! Oh just look at the world around us... Nature shows its beauty... (Sighs)
Vishnu: Adhu eppadi Raji u can just love the same place you've been to like a dozen times?
Raji: Vishnu... Artists like me know what the nature's capacity... Ungala maadhiri TV pakkara people ku ellam theriyaadhu...
Karthik: Great Damage daa Vishnu...
Vishnu: This certainly isn't new for me... All my life... Ohhh!
Lakshmi: Hey en neenga ellarum Vishnu va tease pannuringa?
Vishnu: Thank u Lakshmi! (Has a big smile on his face)
Karthik: Paaraaa! What a support... Wow Wow...
Raji: Hehe ... Purinjiduchu for me! (Smirks)
Lakshmi: Hey adhellam onnum illai... Po...
Raji: Ennaku theriyaadha Lakshmi? We have been together all our lives...
Vishnu: Habbaahh u neengalaam irrukeengale... (Sighs) Let's get down...
Karthik: Usually pora Hotel ke ponga... I booked a room for us there...
*KVRL go to their hotel room.While they were going L noticed a lemonade stand and watched it carefully*
*The four are back carrying towels and hats...L brought extra stuff in a bag*
Lakshmi: Look There! Let's go to that lemonade stand.
*Everyone follows L*
Lakshmi: Excuse me? There is another stand of your lemonade on the other side of the beach.. Is that yours? (Smirks)
Lemonade Seller: Seriously? Nope that is not mine...
Lakshmi: But there are more customers on the other side so u should go and stop that...That stand is under your banner as well...
Lemonade Seller: Uh okay.. Thank u... But will take me like 20 minutes to get back...
Lakshmi: Oh sure! We'd be more than happy to take care of your stand!
*The Lemonade Seller smiles and leaves*
*All this time KVR were looking puzzled of what Lakshmi was doing*
Raji: Enna Lakshmi idhu? What in the world are u doing?
Vishnu: Aama... Ippo enna panna porre?
Lakshmi: We are gonna have some fun! Just wait and watch!
Vishnu: Oh God! She is going to embarrass all of us...
*L looks around the stand and stands for a minute thinking...then she takes out a jar from the bag and pours all the lemonade into it and puts the jar in their bag...*
Raji: Hey enna dii pannure? Stop!
Lakshmi: Keep quiet enjoy the scene...
*KVR realize that they won't be able to stop her and so their stand back watching her confused with a smile*
Lakshmi: That jar is for us! Free!! Now Vishnu inga vandhu indha lemonade poster remove pannitu thaa.
Vishnu: Enna nadakudho inga... (Removes and gives it to L)
Lakshmi: Thanks... (Takes out a sharpie pen from her bag and starts writing something...)
Raji: (Realizes what L is writing) Hey lakshmi ippo nee stop panna poriyyaa illaiyaa?
*KV stand there shocked... L hangs up the banner again... She then pours black food coloring (That she found on the lemonade stand) in gallons of water and pours them in the juice can dispenser and mixes well*
Lakshmi: (Clears her throat) Attention Everyone... Hope u all are having a wonderful day! Come on to the stand and get a glass of Vodka! This is a mini bar stand specializing in Vodka! See the sign? "The world of Vodka and Fun" Come on over folks! One time offer... U see that man walking down to this stand? (Points at the Lemonade Seller who comes back) He is the owner of this... We are just marketing for him... Right after he comes, pay and enjoy your drinks folks... Have a great beach day... Bye!
*KV standing there blinking and shocked! R has her hand on her forehead*
Lakshmi: Why are u all just standing? Let's go come on!
*She drags R and KV follow them in shock*
Raji: Lakshmi is there no limit to your naughtiness? En Lakshmi? Poor that guy...
Vishnu: OMG Lakshmi... U need to stop fooling around... Goodness girl!
Karthik: We'd better go and leave him a few Euros... Lakshmi! Nuisance this is...
Lakshmi: Cool guys! I left him 80 Euros... Pas de soucis (No worries)...
*KVRL watching the man looking all puzzled because he fooled by L... Then he is confused of the people asking him for Vodka... He looks at the can and is in utter shock! He makes everyone go away and packs away his stand while the Euros L kept fell out! He takes it (Didn't even bother to think) and leaves looking all tired and weary of what happened...*
*KVRL start laughing their heads off seeing the man's condition*
Lakshmi: See u all had fun didn't u?
Raji: Obviously Idiot... (Laughing)
Karthik: Eppadi Lakshmi u have such a mind? Semma ponga! Fun but I felt bad for that guy...
Vishnu: Konjam neram u shocked us and made us speechless!
Lakshmi: See that is the point of it... We all had some suspense and fun... After all what is life without this? How about a glass of lemonade and then swimming?
Karthik: That works out fine...We have boating at 6... Plenty of time left...
*KVRL enjoy the lemonade and are in the water playing volleyball...Then they jump over waves and push each other and play well... Soon they are out of the water and head to the hotel*
Karthik: Vishnu and I will wait outside until u two come... Bye! Vaa Vishnu...
Vishnu: Tickets ellam correct ah vachirukkiya machan?
Karthik: Mmm all are good...
*RL come back and they look stunning... K looks at Raji and is lost in her as she is adorable...*
Vishnu: Hey Lakshmi! Unnoda sunglasses enga? Boating naa konduvaruvailla?
Lakshmi: I left it in the car... Will u come with me to get it?
*Vishnu nods and both head towards their car...*
Karthik: (Mind voice: Paa enna alagu! She is killing me...) Takes a deep breath
Raji: Ey enna ippadi pakkure?
Karthik: U r striking today... Raji un kai kudu please?
Raji: (Gives her hand) En ketta?
Karthik: Chumma dhaan... (He is just staring at her cute fingers while Raji is looking at him with a smile)
Raji: Hey vaa polaam it will take sometime to get to the boathouse... Vishnu Lakshmi will come from the other side so let's go...
Karthik: Okay (Both walk holding hands)
*VL are near their car... L takes out her sunglasses and V locks the door...*
Lakshmi: Come on let's go... (Starts walking)
Vishnu: (Leaning on the car and pulls L's hand and she goes and bumps into him) Not so fast darling...
Lakshmi: Vidu Vishnu... Enna idhu beach la laam ippadiya nadanthupe? Leave me
Vishnu: Look just a second... U r awfully attracting... Indha maadhiri ellam dress panina ippadi thaan...
Lakshmi: (Blushes) Thanks... Ippo polaam vaa...
Vishnu: Mudiyaadhu... Only after u give a hug...
Lakshmi: No way... I am going bye...
Vishnu: Sari wait naanum varen...
*KVRL enjoy their boat riding... Took lots of pictures as well... Had a fantastic time at the beach... They are all packed up and are in the car heading towards Chez Loury*
Raji: See how beautiful this city looks at night...
Lakshmi: Hmmm... Aama... New every time we see it...
*Vishnu pulls the car in front of Chez Loury... Every get inside the restaurant*
Waitress: A table for how many?
Vishnu: Four
*The waitress leads the way to their table and hands menus*
Karthik: First four parmesan glazed vegetable soup please...
Vishnu: The main course for four with spring rolls
Lakshmi: One Mountain Dew glass
Raji: One RedBull glass
Karthik: Coke for me
Vishnu: Sundrop for me... That is all...
*The food arrives and they all savor every bit from the hunger they had after the beach visit... V pays the bill and they all walk out... Soon the car reaches their home...*
Lakshmi: (Unlocks the door) Finally... Super day it was...
Raji: I know... I am soo tired... Good Night people...See ya in the morning...
Karthik: Mmm... I am going as well... First to take a shower and to sleep...Bye!
*KR leave to their rooms*
Vishnu: Let's go too... Come...
Lakshmi: Vishnu oru nimisham...
*Go near V and gives him a comfortable hug*
Lakshmi: Ippo happy yaa? Good Night... (L leaves)
Vishnu: Thanks sweetheart... See ya in the morning... (Vishnu leaves as well)
*All four of them soon in deep sleep with the sweet moments of today in their hearts...*
--Part 3 on the way--
Friends - I am looking forward for your feedback!
NOTE : Please make sure to tell your constructive comments too... This will help me catch your mindset and make me a better writer as well... 😉
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