New SS - *The Dearest Buddies* (Part 11 and 12 DONE - Pg 28) - Page 22

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Sush

@coffeebuff

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Hey Guys...

That's the end of this SS...

It has been a great journey for me to write this story...

First of all... THANK YOU SO MUCH to everyone of the readers !!

It was my first attempt... You guys supported me with your comments... It means a lot, and I have learnt much from your feedbacks...

I am ever so grateful for your contribution friends... Thanks once again...

Also... Special mention to Ramya (ramyvijay) for assisting me at the beginning before I started this story... If it weren't for her, I wouldn't have even started... Thanks Ramya...

I am waiting for your last comments Friends... :)

Thank You Forever !!

Much Gratitude...

Sush 😉

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Woohhh sush...rendu updates a?...super...

Padichutu comment panren😆

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

What a lovely surprise Sush hahaha

Cant believe you have finished it

Shall read and comment in a while da :)

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ammukuty

@ammukuty

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Sema update teddy superb nice climax. You have gifted me a part which make my lips to happy curve thank you 😊

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Part 11

Oyi..appo raji dream summa ullulaiya?hehehehe...but dream scene romba reala irunthuthupa...naankoda raji kanda kanavulam unmaiyave nadukumonu ninachen...but ippadi bulb kuduthuteeye...hehe😆

Oh...presentationlam summa dhool parakuthu pola...Happy to see KRVL together...ippadi than unityoda irukanum...super..👏👏

Part 12

Raji with her Aachi..lol...romba azahga iurku antha scene...

athana,raji karthik a vaanga,ponganu than koopidanum.but .maama nala iruku... vishnu was right..hehe..😆😆

Woohhh...Karthik's entry..SEMA...pokkiri pongal song vera pottu😆😆...then his outfit...aiyoo...sema comedy..nonachu paarkum pothe siripa varuthu..😆😆

Ellorum rajya tease panrathu...so cute..

Then raji calling karthik as mama..KR moment...vishnu's entry at that time..KRV talk...ellame ellame perfect a irunthuchu.

KR convo at temple...touched my heart...😳

that's true..perumal kovil sakkarai pongal e oru thani taste than...

Pparrah...innoru KR moments...Lovely...iva vibudhi ettu vidrathum,sir kumkum vaikarathum,mangalakarama iruku...

VL convo...laxmi othukittacha marriage ku...super..

Kr talk before wedding...so cute...avangaluku pechu varalayama?...hehe...

Raji ethuku azahra ippa?...pavam...pulla bayanthuruchu pola...lol...

Enna Thulasi?..dream scene true thana?..Tamizh...yei super sush...oh ithan vishayama avanga nesa a marachathuku?...okay..nallavela marriage aagiruchu avangaluku...hehe..😆

This line...AMSAMA iruku...Loved it..👏👏😳

Ketti Melam kottida... Venkateshwara saatchiyil vandhirupavar anaivarin aashirvaandhathudan, akshadhai mazhai thirumana jodi mel vizha, Mappillai manpennin kazhuthil Thaaliyai kattinaan...

Then lasta VL marriage ku adi podachu...superrr...

Aww...sush...ending romba azahga,manasuku thriothiya irunthuchu...enaku romba romba pidichuruku...nee story a mudichathula varutham than...but perfect ending.entha villi,villainsum illama cute a irunthuchu...pesama new story onnu start pannidu...okay?...hehe...😛😆

Thanks ma for giving this wonderful story...KRVL ...Undoubtedly,Dearest Buddies than...

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Abinaabi

@Abinaabi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Hi machi... Sorry machi konjum busy adhan first comment panna mudiyala...

Part 11

Naalavell kanavu kanavave poyiduchu... Naan adha vechi nee edhachum twist kudthuduviyo nu bayandhen...😆

Presentation perfect pannitanga... Nice to see KVRL together... Oru nalla friendship avangalukulla irukku...

Part 12

Indha style ezhudhuradhu nalla irukku di...

Superr... KVRL in raji's native place... Karthik entry kalakalla irunthuchu adhvum dance vera pokkiri pongal song ku vera...

Raji ku bulb ayduche karthik kum enna mamma nu dhan koppidanum nu sollittan... Andha scene really superb👏👏

KR scene so cute adhuvum raji oda dailogue "Dei Mama... Nee azhagu dhaan da..." 😳😳 Kekkeve ivalo azhaga irukku... So sweet😳 Correct na samayathulla indha vishnu vandhuruvan...

Temple scene... Awesome... Dialogues lam romba yosichi kashtta pattu ezhudhi irukka pola?

Really its true... Peruma kovil sakkarai pongal oru thani taste dhan😉Andha scene romba enjoyable irunthuchu... KR mattum illa me too enjoyed...

VL scene so nice... VL nale Avatha paiya song dhan... Enaku eppa keetalum VL scene dhan nyabagam varum...

KR phone convo lovely😳😳 Rendu lovers kadasiya phne la pesuradhu.. Nice feeling...

Raji oda bayam marraige kuu munnadi karthik parkkanum nu asai paduradhu ellame natural la irunthhuchu... Unnoda dailgues ellame dhan...

Thualsi😲 Naa idha ethir parkkala... Nallavella edhum pretchannai varama smooth poyiduchu...

At last KR ku marraige ayiduchu... Such a beautiful pair...😳 I am so happyyy...

Last scene... " Enna pa... Aduthu ellarum swamimalai dhaane?" Ada semma timing...😆

KRVL Eppavume dearest buddies dhan...

Thanks a lot for giving this sweet story... Really I loved it... Mukkaiya en machi pannadhale ennaku romba pudichi irukku...

Eppdi oru story kudthuthadhuku oru periya clap👏

U always rock...

Love u machi...

Edited by Abinaabi - 9 years ago

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Hey Sush firstly thank you for the update

Part 11

Thank god it was a dream loool

And the bond of KVRL super👏 the way they did the presentation and the friendship really nicely portrayed.

Part 12

Firstly Raji and her Aachi scene soo cute and seeing Raji being playful was cute and then VL and then all taking the mick out of Raji and telling her to call Karthi Avar, or Mamar🤣 Vishnu semma timing loool

Karthis entrance🤣 i cracked up laughing avanuku poii eppadi oru build up loool😆 but i liked it too nice initiative Sush👏 and namba thalapathy music and song choice super 😉

KR cute convo and Raji calling him mama and that scene was cute😳 and their convo that followed after was emotional and nice... both talking with some maturity and being honest really liked that and the positiveness thanks for bringing that Sush😊

VL the song took me back to initial days of office and how either one of them would play the song that was really good... and both talking about their wedding😊

KR phone convo in the night and both feeling like something may happen defo made for each other couple😊

and Raji wanting to meet Karthi before the ceremony and Karthi calming down Raji and making her understand nothing will happen was nice

Vacha paaru twistu anga nikura nee😆 i knew you were going to do something but didnt expect you to portray as this way... i liked it the way you kept it positive and made a comedy out of it was cool... karthi again consoling raji at the mandapam and making her understand nothing will happen and then the scene that followed after with thulasi explaining who she is and raji saying about her dream loool😆

Tamil's entry loool😆😆 and Vishnu's dialogue after😆

the way you made thulasi ask about Swamimalai 🤣and vishnu becoming shy aww cute

and the lastly when you said they will remain as the dearest buddies really really liked that

Sush thank you for such a wonderful story, i remember how ive always been shocked with the stuff you write and be sitting here and thinking this girl loves to make me jump and give me shocks loool 😆 but it was defo worth it and the amount of times ive asked you for the next update and how patient you were with me and told me politely when it would be so athukulam nandri :)

you know you could continue this SS a part two maybe? with KR married life and VL and their friendship? if possible as i know how extremely busy you are da so think about this please😊 but well done for your first SS and your writing thoroughly enjoyed your story👏👏👏

Edited by Gayathri30 - 9 years ago

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Wonderful :) ivvalavu seekeriram end...

Wonderful writing...

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Rajee71

@Rajee71

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Nice update, Sush...

KR kalyanam, super...ivvlo seekiram mudichuteengale...

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#220

Sushk, thanks for the double updates. Really enjoyed reading the ending to your story. It was really happy with the families and the friends all together. The surprise with Tamil and Thulasi was totally unexpected and I really liked that in your story. Aaww yeah KR married, that's great to see. The way Karthik made Raji feel better as she was getting really nervous was sweet. Thanks for giving us your sweet story, I enjoyed reading it.

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