Part 8 -
--L takes deep breaths of the dry chilly air... Starts shivering in coldness and excitement... Takes V's phone...--
Lakshmi: Ppah namba aalu screensaver laam ennoda pic vechurikaan... Love u Vish...
--Dials K's number--
Lakshmi: Hello Karthik? (Shaking)
Karthik: Hmm?
Lakshmi: (Panic Voice) Vishnu fainted!
Karthik: (Shock) What? How? Enna...Enna aachu?
Lakshmi: Altitude increase... Low pressure... Lack of breath... Enna pannuradhu nnu theriyallai... Help Karthik... I am scared!!
Karthik: R u serious? Hello? Hello?
Lakshmi: Inga reception is low... Hello?
Karthik: Yes I am here... Call a doctor!!
Lakshmi: How? (Panic Voice)
Karthik: Well... Open the Kit that was giv--
Loudspeaker: Attention...Attention everyone! Mr. Vishnu has gone unconscious... The doctor will be arriving shortly!
Vishnu: (Shocked) What the-- I am all alive... (Runs to L)
Lakshmi: (Smirks) Karthik stay on the line... Call Raji as well... (K explains everything to R and V listens and is shocked)
Vishnu: Dei machaan... I am alright! Ey Lakshmi enna panni vachiruke? I am gone if they see me being normal... What to do? What to do? (L grinning)
Raji: OMG Laksh... Veetukku vaa... Apparom irruku unnakku... Vishnu faint!
Vishnu: (Confused Shock) What?
Raji: (Screams) I said faint! Pretend!!
Vishnu: But But...
Raji: Padunga Vishnu! The doctor would probably be coming... Lakshmi get on face-time...
--KR see V thru face-time... KRL start laughing--
Vishnu: (Eyes closed) Grr...
Lakshmi: (All relaxed) Enna Vishnu? Edhiukku phone tracking enable pannine?
Vishnu: (Frustration) If something happens to one or both of us... we can be saved...
Karthik: Super Lakshmi! Fantastic... Loud speaker dhaan highlight here... (Laughs)
Lakshmi: Thank u Karthik...
Vishnu: Dei nee ellam oru friend ah daa? She has embarrassed me in front of all these people...
Raji: Illa Vishnu... Evalo thrilling ah irrukku...
Lakshmi: Oh my gosh the doctor... (Tensed again -- But real tension)
Doctor: Hello, please explain the situation here...
Lakshmi: (Stammers) Wel- Well, we were hiking up this huge cliff as you see here and...
Vishnu: (Mindvoice- Haiyo.. endha situation la she is telling stories... Please help)
Lakshmi: Then... we sat down right here (points where VL are sitting) and then...
Karthik: (Speaks to R) Pathaiyaa? Lakshmi semma..
Raji: She is letting her imagination roll... (KR laugh)
Lakshmi: And then... we both were having soft talks... don't ask what... that's personal...
Vishnu: (Mindvoice- Loosu Loosu... Avanga ippo kettangala? U r testing my patience...)
Lakshmi: So during our quite ta--
Doctor: Oh my gosh! Just tell how this guy right here fainted without making up fantasies...
KR: (Laughing all this time)
Lakshmi: (Smirks) Well okay so he fainted... suddenly... high altitude and low pressure...
Doctor- U have wasted a whole 10 mins of all our lives... Move away...
Lakshmi: Excuse me?
Doctor: I said MOVE... (Checks V)
KR: (Burst and giggle...)
Vishnu: (Mindvoice- Hehe Laksh... Doctor super!)
Doctor: (Wakes V up)
Doctor: I don't see the need for so much of panic... U r fine... Just a little dizziness made u go numb in this weather... U r fine... U can hike forever and be fit!
Vishnu: Oh thank u Doctor... Sorry of the trouble caused... (Glares at smiling L)
Doctor: Okay so you will be paying 260 Euros... Please?
Lakshmi: 260? Who would hold that much money?
Vishnu: No wait I have my checkbook... (Gives the check to the Doc... He leaves...)
Karthik: Wallet kaaliyaa daa?
Lakshmi: No... Check dhaane kuduthan..
Vishnu: Cash or check it is from my name... (KVR start teasing and laughing at L)
Karthik: Okay guys... Going to the airport bye bye...
-- KR disconnect... VL still there... --
Lakshmi: (Keeps punching V)
Vishnu: Ouchieee
Lakshmi: (Frowns) Seriously?
Vishnu: Konjam but that's alright (Winks)
Lakshmi: (Starts laughing out loud)
Vishnu: Hehe
Lakshmi: (Hyper again) Hey look at this... I recorded the face-time of Karthik Raji...
--VL have a laughing attack seeing their reactions and expressions...--
Lakshmi: I am going to the restroom... It is down this side of the cliff... BRB...
Vishnu: Hmm.. Careful... (L leaves) She is impossible...!!
Vishnu: (Talking to himself) It was fun... (Laughs) Oh my gosh... It is green tea stand! Here I come!
--V goes to the stand to get green tea--
Vishnu: Excusez-moi... Can I get a glass of green tea please?
Seller: Sure... Here you go... (Hands a fresh cup of green tea)
Vishnu: Merci...
Seller: Comment allez-vous? (How are you?)
Vishnu: Je vais bien (I am doing well)
Seller: Your girlfriend is really sweet...
Vishnu: How do you know her?
Seller: It is her right? (Points to L coming back) She came to this stand a few mins ago...
Vishnu: (Smiles) Thank you...
Seller: Is she your fiance?
Vishnu: Soon to be...
Seller: Oh... okay... Bye!
Vishnu: Bye...
Lakshmi: Ennadaa conversation?
Vishnu: Sonna nee shy ah iruppe.. Sollavaa?
Lakshmi: What?
Vishnu: That guy said that my girlfriend...U... look pretty and that if you were my fiance...
Lakshmi: (Blushes) Why does everyone keep asking this today?
Vishnu: Truth is out and open Laksh... (His style - laugh)
Lakshmi: Haan adhellam okay... Nee modhalla sollu daa...
Vishnu: Seriously? Okay.. Here.. I L-
Lakshmi: No stop... Not right here...
Vishnu: (Rolls eyes) Edho adhuvaa vandhadhu la? Now why did you ruin it?
Lakshmi: (Blushes) Indha Vishnu vaa paakalaam nu dhaan.. And...
Vishnu: And... ??
Lakshmi: Romantic Vishnu vaa paakaa konjam shy irrukku...
Vishnu: Appadi sollu chellam... Truth is coming out... (Smiles)
Lakshmi: Sari Sari...let's go hiking...
(VL keep hiking... At one isolated place...)
Lakshmi: Vishnu.. Give me the bag please? I don't want my jacket anymore...
Vishnu: I was thinking that too... Here...
--VL put their jackets and scarves inside...--
Vishnu: Hey Laksh... Can u stay here? Inga reception illai... I gotta make a phone call...
Lakshmi: Hmm... Yaarukku daa?
Vishnu: Namba Ally kku dhaan...
Lakshmi: (Glares) Enna dhairiyum irundhaa u will say that to me? Why are u calling her?
Vishnu: Hey she was the birthday baby two days ago... Already late...
Lakshmi: Fine po... I am mad though...
Vishnu: Sorry and thanks girl! (Moves aside to talk)
--L listening to music and watching V laughing on the phone...--
Lakshmi: (Mindvoice- OH MY GOSH... How is it so pleasurable Vishnu?) (Frowns)
--V adds L to the call... L is surprised... She attends the call but stays quiet...Listening--
Ally: So sweet Vish.. Thanks a lot..
Vishnu: No mentions... So what special?
Ally: Nothing much... I am actually in Tokyo right now.. So no celebrations..
Vishnu: Do I get souvenirs Ally?
Ally: Of course darling.. Wait and watch what I bring you...
Lakshmi: (Mindvoice- Oh so he is YOUR darling? Grrr...)
Vishnu: Excited... !!
Lakshmi: (Frowns and glares)
Ally: Also Vish... Happy future for you and Lakshmi... Good Luck!
Vishnu: Ally... ??
Ally: Okay I know... Well I figured out with a few clues... Am very happy for u!!
Vishnu: Thank u!! Well.. Gotta go now.. See ya!
Lakshmi: (Mindvoice- Aww... Cute Cute... ) (Smiles)
--Phone call ends... V attends an official call while L walked up to a peak--
Lakshmi: Ppahh... Chilly Chilly... Goosebumps... Super song... Situation kku apt song.. Love it!
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ThNSLXsOfmc[/YOUTUBE]
--L listening to music... V comes behind her... Hugs L from her waist.. The headphones fall out of his pressure from arms... Softly kisses her cheeks...--
Vishnu: I love you Laksh... U and only u... Be there forever... I wish to spend my life with you sweetheart... Will u?
--L is shocked... Stunned... Eyes wide open with one tear rolling out... Goosebumps from the winds and V's touch...--
--V jerks back from his senses... Moves away--
Vishnu: Whoa... Sorry chellam!! I don't know what's gotten into me.. Sorry... Forget everything... Let's hike... Laksh... ??
--L turns around a slaps V with an iron hand... V's turn to be shell - shocked... Looks at L with a hand on his cheeks... --
Lakshmi: Idiot... Ippo dhaan unnakku sollanum nuu thonudhu illa? And you say sorry for it... (Rolls her eyes) Podaa... Naan laam unnakku set aagaa maaten...
Vishnu: (Shocked and Confused) La- Laksh? I don't understand...
Lakshmi: (Smirks) Think about what I said... (Stands there having a cute smile)
--After a few seconds--
Vishnu: (Brightens up slowly) Darling? Sorry sonnadhukku dhaan slap ah? Appo... ??
Lakshmi: (Blushes and Laughs) Podaa... (Runs down the peak)
Vishnu: Yes! (Laughs)
--V runs down as well... Goes and hugs L--
Vishnu: I love u sweetheart...
Lakshmi: Me too darling!
--L's headphones get out of the phone... Now songs playing on speaker... They both enjoy a few songs together...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6wl-b-oRFoY[/YOUTUBE]
--Enjoys the song... VL plays running around...--
Lakshmi: Still... U are darling for Ally?
Vishnu: So what? Handsome boys like me are...
Lakshmi: (Giggles and Frowns) No excuses...
Vishnu: But Lak-- (New song plays)
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJ8uMmNgqM0[/YOUTUBE]
Vishnu: Super shuffle Laksh
Lakshmi: (Smiles) How in the world do you escape from everything?
Vishnu: Because I am true... to you...
Lakshmi: Vish?
Vishnu: Hey Hey.. Vidu Vidu...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oqb0Bb6lF9k[/YOUTUBE]
Lakshmi: (Giggles) Paraah...
Vishnu: I am elated... Can't explain...!!
Lakshmi: Love u..
--Soon they finish their trip and are back home... At dinner table...--
Raji: Hey.. How was your hike?
Vishnu: Super.. (VL glance at each other)
Lakshmi: Yup! Awesome as ever...
Karthik: Something fishy in your looks... Hmm...
Vishnu: (Whispers to L) Lord... He figured something out...
Lakshmi: Shh.. Neeya sollidaadha...
Raji: Enna anga bantering?
Karthik: Better you two reveal it to us... If we find out... U will suffer a lot.. (Laughs)
Lakshmi: Vishnu let's tell them...
Vishnu: Shut up! Nooo... Avalo dhaan.. Kaalaichu eduthuru vaanga... Please darling?
Raji: Adhellam mudiyaadhu... Tell us.. Or...
Vishnu: Or... ??
Raji: No dinner for you both...
Vishnu: Raji !! Enna idhu? Ippadi oru punishment...
Karthik: Then tell us... U have been whispering and smiling and looking... Fishy!
Lakshmi: Sari Vish sollidalaam... (Blushes) Adhu vandhu... Vishnu proposed me...
Vishnu: Shh... (Blushes)
Karthik: (Surprised) Haa really?
Vishnu: Amaa daa...
Raji: Yay!!! Super news! Love you both... Extremely overjoyed...
Lakshmi: Thank u dii !!
Karthik: Yeah... Amazing... Super... Wow...
Vishnu: Ennadaa idhu ??
Karthik: I am out of words to explain my joy...
VL: Thank u guys!
Raji: Hmm eppadi? How did it happen?
--VL narrate their sweetest day of life...--
Karthik: Eee!! Sooo amazing... !! Vishnu vum romantic dhaan illa Lakshmi:
Lakshmi: OMG seriously... Ten times as romantic than what I thought...
Vishnu: Enna? R u all teasing me?
Raji: Habbahh.. U just figured that out... (KRL laugh)
Vishnu: Ippavum naan dhaan out ah? This is the second time in ONE day!
Lakshmi: Pleasure is mine sweetheart... (Smiles)
--KVRL enjoy their lovely dinner by Raji... VL leave to bed as they are tired...KR in sofa--
Raji: Karthik?
Karthik: Hmm?
Raji: I love you
Karthik: Me too...
Raji: (Frowns) U are so boring...
Karthik: Umm... Let's see... Vishnu Lakshmi are asleep... It is night time... So... I have the opportunity to...
Raji: Ey idiot! Enna pesure? Podaa...
Karthik: Enna? I was going to say that I should sleep now...
Raji: (Glares) Po..poi thoongu...
Karthik: Semma bulb ah unnakku?
Raji: Podaa dei...
Karthik: Konjam interesting ah irundhadhaa?
Raji: (Blushes) Mmm...
Karthik: U are sooo cute my chellam...
Raji: Thank u... Sari vaa let's sleep...
Karthik: Hmm... Good Night! Let's meet in our dreams!
Raji: (Giggles) Sari Sari... See u soon... Good Night!
--Part 9 on the way--
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