New SS - *The Dearest Buddies* (Part 11 and 12 DONE - Pg 28) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Rajee71

Wow... Nice update..

Party, their parents - KRVL discussion - everything is very nice.. Kadaisila dance floor events and KR are awesome... Superaa sandai podaraangha...

I loved this part, Sush., 👏

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Very very nice update,Sush👏...

liked all the moments...especially their parents bond...

dance events also cute..

but lastla...hihi...i liked this fight...😆.

waiting😊

Originally posted by: devilz94

Nice update Teddy, loved the fight between KR. Karthi being possessive and not liking Raji being with other guys was clearly shown. Raji her ego lool, the way she did things on purpose to wind Karthi up hahaa.

The parents bonding with the children was nice to see. Allowing them to drink something different loved their bonding.

At the end Raji saying she wont come home😕 making me ask when is the next update? Please update soon😳

Originally posted by: sathyakrs

Superb update Sush..

KRVL and their dads...lolzz I like them..

KR and their fights..inseparable...Without that we cant imagine them.

Hi Sush , superb update . Very nice parents & children bonding.

Originally posted by: plily

Hi Sush , superb update . Very nice parents & children bonding.

KR still fighting 😆. KR is awesome even in fighting. Compromise is zero level for them 😆😆. Dear when is the next update . Waiting , please update soon.

Part 6-

*K stops and turns around...Walks behind her... and grabs her hand..*

Raji: Leave me!

Karthik: Mudiyaadhu... U will be coming home with me after the party...(Leaves her hand and walks away)

Raji: Appo nee sollu... justify your behavior...

Karthik: No... stop doing this to me...

Raji: Nope Karthik... U have no other go... I will leave or nee sollu...

Karthik: (Silent)

Raji: Sollu Karthik...

Karthik: BECAUSE I LOVE U GOD DAMMIT! (stands there... )

Raji: (Blinks) Ka...ka.. Karthik? (Shivering uncontrollably and is almost to cry...)

Karthik: Pch... (Mindvoice - No don't cry... I can't take that...)

Raji: (Just stands there crying and shivering...)

Karthik: (Goes to her and fondles her into his arms)

*After a few mins...*

Karthik: Sorry Raji... I am sorry...

Raji: Karthik?

Karthik: Please... I am sorry... Alaadhaa...

Raji: (Sobbing into K's shirt) Po... I am still mad at u...

Karthik: Appadiyaa?

Raji: (Looks up at K finally...)

Karthik: Habbahh... Tears stock finish aaiyuduchaa?

Raji: Mm... Iddhukku mela no more water...

Karthik: (Smiles) Finally... Sorry again...

Raji: Edhukku?

Karthik: For all that happened today...

Raji: Apologies accepted...(Smiles)

Karthik: Yay! My chellam smiled!!

Raji: I am OVERJOYED!!!!! (Starts running against the wind)

Karthik: Wow... Cute...

Raji: Karthik? Come over here!

*K finds R sitting on a large rock... He goes to sit too...*

Karthik: How are u so hyper all of a sudden? (Puzzled)

Raji: Idiot u proposed me like 20 minutes ago...

Karthik: Eee! I did?

Raji: Yes... But in a very angry tone... R u earth?

Karthik: Oh so that was all the crying about... Hmm... I am getting back...

Raji: Idhala kudiyum ivalo harsh ah dhaan irruke... Poda...

Karthik: Ivalo dhaane? Ippo paar!

*R looks puzzled yet smiling... K goes and picks out flowers... Comes back to her...*

Karthik: (Kneels down) Will u accept my heart full of love?

Raji: (Awed) (Nods and Takes the flowers)

Karthik: I love u... I love u... I love u...

Raji: (Smiles) Naa enna sollanum?

Karthik: Whatever u feel like telling...

*R gets up and goes under the bright silver pearl... The Full Moon... Chilly winds making her shiver with goosebumps... K walking behind her... VL come by searching for KR...Stop while seeing R...*

Raji: (Screams) I LOVE U KARTHIK!

Karthik: (Right behind her) Ra-

Raji: (Just goes and hugs him tightly...) I love u... I love u... I love u idiot...

Karthik: (Holds her firmly..) Me too...

Vishnu: Paathiyaa Lakshmi... Ivanga rendu peraium?

Lakshmi: It is sooo cute Vishnu!!! Awww!

Vishnu: They sure are made for each other...

Lakshmi: Vaa... Poi konjam tease pannalaam...

*VL walk near KR...*

Vishnu: (Clears his troat)

Raji: Uh (Comes apart from K)

Karthik: Pch...

Lakshmi: Enna nadakudhu inga?

Raji: (Blushes) Nothing...

Karthik: Right... Nothing...

Vishnu: Ey we heard u...

Raji: OMG... Everything?

Lakshmi: Nope... Only your "I love u"

Karthik: (Blushes) So what?

Vishnu: Nothing... Ippo narrate the whole story to us... and say "censor cut" at places which are personal..

Raji: Solrom but there are no censor cuts...

*KR narrate what had happened the whole day...*

VL: (Both sigh at the same time)

Lakshmi: Wow... Rushed... yet SOOO cute!!

Vishnu: Yeah gosh! Ur lives today... Habbah... Very happy for u my dear friends...

Lakshmi: I am probably more elated than all of u!! I am just delighted!! (Smiles)

Raji: I am still in a trance... I can't believe what happened...

Karthik: Me too...

Lakshmi: Sari vaa Vishnu...Namba polaam... Let's leave the love birds alone...

Karthik: Uh okay... We will be there in a few mins...

*VL leave... R goes to sit on a bench... K comes and sits next to her...*

Karthik: Raji... I love u...

Raji: Why r u saying this so many times?

Karthik: I have been longing to tell this to u forever...

Raji: (Smiles) Sari me too...

Karthik: We should get married...

Raji: Hello I love u solli one hour kudiyum agala... Innum love pana venaama?

Karthik: We can still do that after wedding right?

Raji: But adhula thrill illaiye...

Karthik: Sari fine I will wait...

Raji: That is my Karthik...

Karthik: Un lap la thaachikavaa?

Raji: (Amused) Mmm

Karthik: Would I not bore u?

Raji: What do u mean?

Karthik: Well... Ever since u were born, u have been around me... Ippo life full ah...

Raji: Of course not... Ivalo naal ah u were my friend... Now more than that... it makes a significant difference in my life...

Karthik: (Smiles) Vishnu Lakshmi are amazing right?

Raji: Amaa daa... We r lucky to be such close friends...

Karthik: Last night I went to Vishnu's room okay?

Raji: Hmmm sollu...

Karthik: He was looking through his one album folder with all the pics of Laksh... Cute ah irundhadhu...

Raji: Aww... Cute couple they are...

Karthik: Photographer avaroda darling photos ellam special place la vachirukaaru... Sweet...

Raji: Lakshmi also loves Vishnu...

Karthik: Vishnu kku eppavum Lakshmi dhaane?

Raji: Correct daa... Their names also work out perfectly...Did u drink?

Karthik: Konjam... Like two glasses of wine... ippo I will go back and drink as much as I want...

Raji: Hmm...(Frowns) Okay...???

Karthik: Sari polaamaa?

Raji: Hmm vaa... Let's do some dancing...

*KVRL enjoy the party completely... Everyone leaves... KVRL standing outside...*

Karthik: (Keeps blinking) I can't see properly...

Raji: Did u drink?

Karthik: Yeah of course... Vishnu enga?

Vishnu: Dei I am right behind u daa...

Karthik: (Searches on his left side) U r not behind me daa... I just looked for u...

Lakshmi: Rendu perum total hangover Raji... Onnu front la ninuttu behind nnu solludhu... Another left search pannintu back search pannitenu solludhu... Shaabaahh

Raji: Correct... Indha uncles permission kuduthaanga paar? Avangaala sollanum...

Lakshmi: Whether they have permission or not... they would have ended up like this...

Raji: Vishnu time enna?

Vishnu: 45:1pm...

Raji: What?

Lakshmi: He is drunk... 1:45 am dii...

Raji: Taxi vandhidichu paar... Vaa let's get inside...

Lakshmi: Bonjour Sir...

Taxi Driver: Bonjour... Please enter the address into GPS...

Vishnu: Enna idhu? Namba veedu "not registered" nnu varudhu?

Raji: Shabbahh... Marseille podaama Paris nnu potaa appadi dhaan varum... Let me do it...

*KVRL reach home...*

Karthik: Bye! I am going to eat...here I come my dear pillow...

Raji: (Laughs) What? Good Night...

Vishnu: Good Afternoon Raji... U too Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: Pppahh loosu... po...

Raji: Naalikku paar... these two dying of headache...

Lakshmi: Of course...

Raji: Hey rendu perum suit laiyaa thoonga poraanga...

Lakshmi: Adhukku nambala change pannivida mudiyum?

Raji: (Smiles) Hehe...

Lakshmi: R u happy?

Raji: Of course I am... I love him...

Lakshmi: Innaikku Karthik konjam alagaa dhaan irundhaan...

Raji: Hello...Unnaku Vishnu irukaaru...

Lakshmi: Illa it's not like that.. Karthik to me was cute... Vishnu was...mm... more romantic..hottish...

Raji: (Laughs) U love him...

Lakshmi: Of course I do... Only Vishnu and forever Vishnu...

Raji: Paraa... indha mischievous Lakshmi la oru senti part...

Lakshmi: I realized that after I fell in love... Hey unnakku Karthik munnadi vera crush irundhirukka?

Raji: Yeah sure did... many... I just won't show it like u...

Lakshmi: Hmm... Karthik kku theriyummaa?

Raji: Nobody will cross their teenage years without having crushes... Nature's patchwork...

Lakshmi: Hehe...Remember Ally?

Raji: Hmm... Vishnu's long back crush right? She is cute...

Lakshmi: She was there today... As usual namba aalu flirting...(Laughs)

Raji: I am proud of u Laksh...

Lakshmi: Why?

Raji: Evalo practical ah think pannirukke...

Lakshmi: Hey...I know Vishnu... It's him... But he has never crossed his limits...

Raji: Eppadi solre?

Lakshmi: Next time notice this... Unless he was to hug someone... oru girl one step forward vandhaalum...he will move back by a step... His instincts work like that... U r in charge of that right? Sooo...

Raji: Pppah Eppadi ellam paathuruke paar...

Lakshmi: Of course dii... Ivalo hot and handsome ah who will get someone?

Raji: Let me tell Vishnu tomorrow...

Lakshmi: Adi vaanguve...

Raji: Sari Sari I won't... U two are made for each other...

Lakshmi: Sari let's sleep...

Raji: Good Night... (RL go to their respective rooms...)

*Morning after the party... In V's room...L walks in with the vacuum cleaner...*

Lakshmi: Vishnu elundhukko...its 10am...

Vishnu: Ouch! (Holds his head) (Tries to get up) Oh sh*t... (Rubs his eyes)

Lakshmi: (Frowns) Mudhala open your eyes... Elundhukra appove what language is this?

Vishnu: (Looks with the smallest gap between his eyelids...) Lakshmi?

Lakshmi: R u on Earth?

Vishnu: No on my bed...

Lakshmi: Shabbahhh

Vishnu: Aaahhh!! Help me...

Lakshmi: Drunkard...

Vishnu: Enna Lakshmi nee? Drunkard ah? I am not that bad...

Lakshmi: (Sarcastically) Oh yeah right I believe u...Dress maathittu padukam nnu arivu illai? U r on the bed with your suit...

Vishnu: Dang it!

Lakshmi: (Sighs)

Vishnu: My suit is messed up... Grrr...

Lakshmi: Shut up and get down... I have cleaning work to do... Arrange your bed and leave...

Vishnu: No way... Elundukkave mudiyala...

Lakshmi: Vishnu what nonsense is this? U r wasting my time... I have to go cook.. Elundiri daa!

Vishnu: (Sighs) Andha glass of water edu please?

Lakshmi: Indhaa...

Vishnu: (Gets up and drinks) Ppahh! (Shakes his head) Cha...

Lakshmi: R u fine now?

Vishnu: Somewhat... I can see fine... But my head is killing me...

Lakshmi: Better go and take a shower and then come out...

Vishnu: Nope... No way... I will faint...

Lakshmi: Paravaillai... if u faint, the emergency alarm will ring and the ambulance will be here...

Vishnu: Grr... Sari poren...

*L starts cleaning... V arranges his bed and goes inside the restroom...*

*K's room... R walks in...*

Raji: Eppadi thooguraan paar... Kupparai padhuthuttu pillow over his head...

Karthik wake up! Wake up... housework time...wake up...

Karthik: (Frowns) Damn my head...

Raji: As expected...

Karthik: Eppo dii veetukku vandhom?

Raji: At 2:30am...

Karthik: Sh*t my suit!

Raji: Grr... Perfect morning language... Appadiya vandhu paduthuttu en kathure?

Karthik: Sari vidu... My head... I am going to sleep again...

Raji: Hello sir it's 10am... U gotta wake up...

Karthik: I cannot ! It hurts!!

Raji: U deserve it...Sari go into the restroom and please take a shower...

Karthik: Ugh..Okay...

*At the dining table for a LATE breakfast...K already sitting with his mobile...RL in kitchen...V walks in*

Vishnu: Hi Machaan...

Karthik: Vaa daa...How did u sleep?

Vishnu: Honestly, I don't know...

Karthik: Me too daa... I can't remember anything...

Lakshmi: (Brings breakfast) That is because u two are some drunkards...(Sits down)

Raji: (Brings more dishes) Rightly said... (Sits down...)

Karthik: Drunkard ah? We r not that bad...

Vishnu: Exactly

Raji: (Sarcastically) Oh yeah right... We believe u...

Vishnu: Ppah innaku morning effect was torture...

Lakshmi: What did u even drink? Does wine have so much of effect?

Vishnu: Wine doesn't...but... beer and vodka do...

Lakshmi: Chhiii yuck...(Frowns)

Raji: All that equals hangover...

Vishnu: Hey Karthik um enakku company kuduthaan...

Raji: Idhu veriya?

Lakshmi: U two are grounded from drinking for the next three months...

Karthik: Oh my gosh Lakshmi! What about parties?

Lakshmi: Coke will do Karthik...

Vishnu: (Sighs) Well u should reconsider... the last time we drank was two months ago...and it wasn't a hangover since it was our parents' anniversary...

Raji: Correct...How can u drink when the parents are around? But u r still grounded...

Karthik: Okay whatever I am hungry...

Lakshmi: Today we have french toast, applesauce, pancakes, and cheater syrup...

Vishnu: Yummy... Thank u darlings...

Raji: De rien Vishnu...

*At the sofa where KVRL are seated doing different things...*

Raji: Hey look at this... I sewed a scenery of moonlight...

Karthik: Super...

Lakshmi: Semma dii... Ur nature...

Vishnu: Fantastic... Apparom I believe the moonlight witnessed some cute romance yesterday huh?

Karthik: (Looks up to R) Appadiyaa?

Raji: (Blushes) Oh really?

Lakshmi: Stop acting u two...

Karthik: (Smiles) Sari Sari... adhukku ippo enna?

Vishnu: Onnum illai daa... Chumma appadiye sonnen...(Smiles)

Lakshmi: Hey Raji were u not freezing? For 10 mins itself I was shivering...

Karthik: U should see her... Gosh...shaking from madness and shivering from coldness...

Raji: Hmm amaa! All because of this idiot...

Karthik: But I gave u a hug after that...

Vishnu: Laksh seems like we missed a lot...

Lakshmi: I know right? Should have went a little early...

Raji: U guys r invading our personal space...(Smiles)

VL: (Laughs)

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*KVRL's another day of training...*

Mr. Hall: GM guys!

Karthik: Morning Mr. Hall...

Mr. Hall: Today you have a lecture session with your parents...

Vishnu: Oh cool... This is our first synchronized session... Hmm...

Mr. Hall: Well... U all will be attending this meeting over the Moodle software... the rules are pretty simple... you will have them presenting to you while u make sure to take notes as well as ask questions and dicuss...

Lakshmi: Thank u Mr. Hall... Seems like a very professional way of handling this...

Raji: How long will this meeting be?

Mr. Hall: Three hours guys...Uh it is 9am and the meeting starts from 10am to 1pm. Please report to your cabin. Each of your computer is set - up...U may login in at 10am... Thank u and Bye...

*KVRL in their cabin...Signed in and all set for the synchronized sessions to start...*

-- Part 7 on the way --

Friends - I am looking forward for your feedback!

NOTE : Please make sure to tell your constructive comments too... This will help me catch your mindset and make me a better writer as well 😉

Sush, super update...

KR love, KRVL bond were nicely portrayed..

Our awesome foursome are the BEST...

Dear Sush ma'am, this is an intriguing story, more than the plot the location makes me look forward to your updates. Its very interesting to see the French and Indian nativity perfectly blended in our lead characters. I believe you live in Paris or have. If so, pl do add some visual effect to enhance the nativity feel... Thanks very much. 👏

Originally posted by: Rajee71

Sush, super update...

KR love, KRVL bond were nicely portrayed..

Our awesome foursome are the BEST...

Thank u! 😃