New SS - *The Dearest Buddies* (Part 11 and 12 DONE - Pg 28)

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Hi Friends

Teddy/Sush here! I was extremely elated with your compliments on the fortune cookie task I did... So I thought of writing a SS and see how it goes... And here it is!! This is my first attempt and hopefully it goes well!

Before starting, one IMPORTANT NOTE: : :

Ramya!! (ramyvijay) - Thank uu for all that u helped with! Lots of credits to u!!

The Dearest Buddies

Setting : France

Synopsis :

Our most beloved Office darlings and it is their story...


Eight best friends who graduated from the University of Paris... Soon married each other out of love! All the four cute couples had a sweetheart... And they are ... Karthik, Vishnu, Raji, and Laxshmi! All these four share a special bonding with each other..


Character Sketch

Karthik - A responsible boy in life and respectful to his parents. Very caring as well as extremely humorous... Towards his "special" people, konjam senti type dhaan... Vishnu, his best friend and him rock France together!

Vishnu - Carefree person in life... A cute flirt but with respect... A best friend who would do anything for Karthik... Vishnu loves his mother dearly as much as Karthik...

Raji - A girl who enjoys nature and every little thing in life... Always has a smile on her face... Very cooperative to her parents and extremely creative... Raji and Laxshmi are BFFs!

Laxshmi - Cute girl, very outgoing... Mischievous and cheerful as well... Very clever and is straightforward towards life itself... Appa's pet and loves Raji as much!!


Their parents are the presiding committee of Nettech Solutions' headquarters in France. Planning to retire soon and to hand over the corporation into the children's hands.


Friends - I am looking forward for your feedback! Thank U! 😳

Ramya (ramyvijay) - Thank u again darling!! πŸ˜‰


-- Part 1 to be updated soon! --


Index

Intro

Part 1

Precap

Part 2

Precap

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12


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wow.. Sush.. started soon.. πŸ‘πŸΌ

let me check it out and comment...
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Intro seems interesting... sure u will rock ma...

waiting
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Wow wow welcome buddy
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Awesome!! Waiting for the first part!! Glad your writing a SS thank you!! All the best
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wow arambamae amarkalama iruku i am waiting for ur update
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Very nice start...awesome intro...
cont soonπŸ˜›
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Hi Teddy, I'm happy that you are starting an SS, looking forward to reading it!
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Thank U so much Friends! πŸ˜‰
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Part 1 -


KVRL live in the same house in the city of Marseille, France. (I chose France especially because it holds the city of love (Paris!) To the story now...

One exquisite July morning in Marseille where Lakshmi opens the curtains with her cup of coffee looking out at the bustling city from the third floor from their home...

Lakshmi: (Sigh) Hmmm... what a busy world we are living in...

Vishnu (Enters yawning): Good Morning Lakshmi! Enga enakku coffee?

Lakshmi : Uh... Kitchen counter mela irukku paar... go, add sugar, and drink...

Vishnu : Thanks... Innaikku Latte or Espresso?

Lakshmi : Normal coffee that is all... Everyday unakku special coffee seiyya mudiaadhu...

Vishnu : Fine..thanks anyways! Let me go relish that "normal" coffee... Hehe

Lakshmi : Adi! Idiot... Unakku venum naa, go to the coffee shop across the street or u make it...

Karthik : Hey Vishnu enakkum oru cup please! Morning Lakshmi!!

Lakshmi : Bonjour! How did u sleep?

Karthik : Hmm.. well thanks... Raji enga?

Vishnu (Brings two cups of coffee) : Indhaa daa... Raji stayed up till 2 drawing the Mona Lisa...

Karthik : Evaloda art work ellam sell panninaa yenna? Or maybe an exhibition to show all...

Lakshmi : Good idea Karthik... I think an exhibition would be better...She won't sell them for sure!

Vishnu : Okay yeah we'll see about that... Now for today... Innaikku enna plan?

Karthik : Ummm.. Any Idea Lakshmi?

Raji : Uh let's go to the beach! Good Morning everyone! It will be fun, besides it's full of nature!

Lakshmi : Morning... U and your nature! Raji ethanadhadava Beach ponaalum nature nature!

Vishnu : I know... Please Raji not this time...

Karthik : Hmm how about boating in the beach? So that we can compromise?

VRL : Yay! That works out fine!

Karthik : We will be leaving at 3pm and reach by 4...

Vishnu : We will stop by Chez Loury for dinner alright?

Lakshmi : Yup... I am gonna go to the library in a few minutes... Yaaravadhu vareengala?

Vishnu : Me Me... Give me like 15 minutes to get ready... (VL leave to get ready)

Raji : Karthik unnakku enna breakfast venum?

Karthik : (Admiring looking at her...)

Raji : Karthik? Back to Earth!

Karthik : Uh sorry... How about waffles? And Maple syrup?

Raji : Okay in a few minutes wait...

**He is in love with her!! So is she... For a long time now... Although they are with each other since birth... This developed in the past few months**

Vishnu: I am here! Raji ennakku waffles irrukka?

Raji: Yup! Dining roomku vaanga Vishnu... Bring Lakshmi as well...

*Lakshmi comes out and walks with Vishnu for breakfast*

Lakshmi: Hey super! Thanks Raji!

Raji: De rien... Lakshmi can u pick up the Tracy Chevalier's novel Girl with a Pearl Earring for me?

Lakshmi: Sure! That book was great... I read it last month...

Vishnu: Shabbahhh... dei Karthi? Ivanga en da ivalo books padikuraanga?

Karthik: Oru chinna image dhaan machaan... Basically to show off...

*Vishnu gives his "laugh" while RL glare at KV*

Lakshmi: Naa done... nee ippo variya illaiyaa Vishnu?

Vishnu: Idho two minutes... I am done as well...

Lakshmi : Hey neenga rendu perum enna panna poringa? U want to come as well?

*Vishnu gives a pleading look to Karthik to tell no... K smirks and says no thanks... R tries hard to control her laugh*

Lakshmi: Enna aachuu? Whatever... Vishnu I am waiting outside for u...(She leaves)

Vishnu: U two are the best of friends... Love u both! Romba thanks!! (Runs outside)

*Raji takes all the dishes inside...to clean*

Karthik: Iru.. innaikku naan clean pannuren... Nee po...

Raji: Over ah scene podadha... Naane pannuren...

Karthik: Mudiyadhu... ippo nee clean panninaa I will make everything dirty again and clean...

Raji: What is your problem idiot? Why do u want to help me so much?

Karthik: Unnakku theriaaddhaa?

Raji: (Rolls her eyes) Fine... do whatever u want...

Karthik: Merci Darling!

*Raji goes into her room... Looks at Karthik washing the dishes and smiles admiringly*

At the library :

Vishnu: Hey lakshmi! Look here!

Lakshmi: Shhh... It is a library... Keep quiet.. Enna?

Vishnu: They have kitten posters for sale... U love cats don't you?

Lakshmi: Awww... Thank u Vishnu (Pulls his cheeks)

Vishnu: (Mindvoice : OMG that was awesome! U r so lucky Vishnu!)

Lakshmi: Okay I am at the Fiction section... U stay in this lounge...

Vishnu: Mm okay...

*After a few minutes L checks to see V sleeping on the couch like a cute baby. She thinks he is so adorable and snaps a pic of him from the isle she is in...*

*By the time L comes back, she is shocked! L finds V talking to an English woman with so much pleasure... L thinks look what I am gonna do to u and she calls a little child with her...Goes near V*

Lakshmi: Excuse me sir, I think your daughter is searching for you... (Says to V)

Vishnu: (Shocked!) Uh what? Lak---

English Woman: Okay sir, bye

Lakshmi:Thanks for coming darling, go back to your mom! Bye! (The child waves)

Vishnu: En Lakshmi indha madiri pannina? Po I am cross with u!

Lakshmi: Oh yeah right! I have to let you flirt with some random woman right in front of my eyes!

Vishnu: Your mischief is going out of control! I will be outside... Come quick (He leaves)

Lakshmi: (Smiles and says so cute)

*VL are back home carrying all the books*

Lakshmi: (Goes into R's room) Indha dii nee ketta book...

Raji: Thank u Laksh! U r such a darling!

Laxshmi: (Smiles) Sari... Naan poi lunch ready pannuren... We have to leave in a few hours...

At 2pm

Lakshmi: (Speaks loud) Karthik, Vishnu, Raji? Lunch is ready to be served!

KVR: Coming!

Karthik: Aww Lakshmi! Super Super! (Hugs her)

Vishnu: Yesss!! Indian food!! Yay!

Raji: Eppadi Lakshmi? Kalakeeta po!

Lakshmi: Thank u! Thank u! Pleasure is mine! (Bows down with her apron)

*Everyone eats lunch and gets ready for the beach!*

At 3:10pm in the car

Karthik: Everyone brought their swimsuits right? We will be going in the water today!

VRL: Yup! All set!

Lakshmi: Oh this is going to be fun!

Raji: I know! Perfect weather too!

Vishnu: U two take a nap until we reach there... So u will be fresh...

RL: Mmm.. Okay...

*RL comfortably sleeping while Vishnu is driving and K is playing on his phone*

*Beach day to be continued*

--Part 2 on the way--

Friends - I am looking forward for your feedback!

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