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Part 99 :


Previous Part : Part 98





Angel alias Leena, starts attacking Madhu..


Leena : paravaalaye... evlo adichaalum thaanguva pola... assault ah utkaarndhirukka..

Madhu : unnai paarthu laam bayappada mudiyaadhu..

Leena : fine then... oru doubt.. unnoda husband kitta, nee ellaa vishayathayum sollittiyaa enna ?

Madhu : (silent)

Leena : yen maa silent aayitta ? so, he doesn't know... right ?

Madhu : ippa enna adhukku ? nee solla poriyaa ?

Leena : ofcourse..

Madhu : go ahead... dhaaraalamaa sollu..

Leena : Oh... namba maattaan nu confidence ah ?

Madhu : appadidhaan vachikko..

Leena : lets see... adhaiyum paarthidalaam..

Madhu : see... naan unnai maadhiri vettiyaa illai... enna pesanumo seekkiram sollu... kettuttu kelambanum...

Leena : paarraaa.. ? madam romba busy yo ?

Madhu : pppccchhh..


Leena : romba salichukkaadha... inimel dhaan unakku irukku...

Madhu : ssshhhaabhaaa... ippave kanna kattudhe...


Leena : wait wait... summaa solla koodaadhu... semma plan pottu execute pannirukka...

Madhu : whats your problem now ?

Leena : en life ah ye spoil pannittaye...

Madhu : hello hello... Krish oda life ah kaappaathi irukken..


Leena : who are you to interfere in my life ?

Madhu : adhaan ellaam mudinjiduchu la.. ?

Leena : inimel dhaan mudikkanum...

Madhu : enna ? Krish kitta solla poriyaa ?

Leena : exactly...

Madhu : nee enna solradhu... naane solluven...

Leena : appadi yaa ? enna nu solluva ?

Madhu : hmmm... naandhaan plan panni, unnai marriage hall ku varra mudiyaadha maadhiri senjadhu.. he'll understand..

Leena : appadiyaa ? annaikku maariage ninnadhukku nee dhaan reason nu solluviyaa enna ?

Madhu : aamaa.. so what ? ellaam nalladhukku dhaane...

Leena : unnoda nalladhukkaa ?

Madhu : ellaaroda nalladhukku dhaan.. Krish-kum unakkum nadakka irundha marriage ah plan panni stop pannen...

Krish : Madhu.. ?



Krish who has come to pick her up from the mall stood behind her.. He heard just the last line..

Madhu : Krish.. ? neenga eppo ?

Leena : bayappadaadha... ippo dhaan vandhaan..

but, he heard all of our conversation...


Madhu : what ?

Leena : (shows her mobile) see.. my mobile was on while we were speaking.. ivanukku dhaan call pannittu, line la ye irukka sonnen...

enna ? how is my plan ?


Madhu : Krish... adhu vandhu...

Krish : sshhh... come lets go..



He just drags her from that place and both were silent till they reach their home..



Even in their room silence prevailed and it was Madhu who broke the silence..

Madhu : Krish...

Krish : (silent)

Madhu : please... yen edhuvum pesa maattenguranga ?

Krish : edhuvum pesa thonala...


Madhu : atleast.. just ask me something... I can't guess whats going on in your mind right now..

Krish : I'm just blank now..

Madhu : ava sonnadhellaam...

Krish : (stops) ava enna venaalum sollittu pogattum.. but nee sonnadhu...?

Madhu : its true...

Krish : kalyaanam stop aanadhukku...


Madhu : aamaa... its me who did it..


Krish :
(disappointed)

Madhu : aanaa... edhukkaaga pannen nu...

Krish : no need...

Madhu : ava sariyilla Krish... I can't think of how your life would be..


Krish : I know her from college days.. I know that she is adament and rough...


Madhu : criminal minded nu theriyumaa ?


Krish : what ?

Madhu : I know... avala enakku chinnadhula irundhe theriyum... almost 14 years..

Krish : (looks at her) sollave illai..

Madhu : Oh... ungalukku theriyaadhu la ? Simi kitta dhaan sonna nyaabagam...

Krish : Simi kitta enna sonna ?

Madhu : adhu... indha devil oda history geography ya...


Krish : so.. you planned to put her down at the right point..

Madhu : not like that...


Krish : then what ?


Madhu : I just wanted to save you from her.. please try to understand me Krish..


Krish : appadi enna en mela akkarai ? naan eppadiyo poren nu vida vendiyadhu dhaane ?


Madhu : adhu ennaala mudiyaadhu...

Krish : adhaan yen.. ?


Madhu : because.. I loved you man...

Krish : (turns towards her)

Madhu : yes... ungala enakku pidikkum.. atleast if your would be seems to be a nice person or eppadi pattavanga nu theriyaama kooda irundhaalum, I'd be quite happy.. but therinje I don't want to let you fall in her trap..

Krish : appo... its a kind of selfishness...

Madhu : but...


Krish : even if you don't accept, adhu appadi dhaan...


Madhu : (silent)

Krish : but did you ever think of my family ? it was a big mess on the marriage hall..


Madhu : aanaa... adhaan ellaam solve aayiduche.. ?

Krish : andha feeling ah solla mudiyaadhu... nee Simi pathi kooda yosichu paarkkala la.. ?

Madhu : adhu vandhu... enga veettlayum..

Krish : adhaan ellaarumaa serndhu plan pannitteengale.. ?

Madhu : hey.. none of my family members are involved .. avangalukku theriyavum theriyaadhu..

Krish : apparam eppadi ellaame proper ah nadandhuchu..?

Madhu : see.. I didn't even know that my thaathaa knew your grandpa.. that was a surprise for me..

Krish : what if they didn't speak out.. you might have had other plans la.. ?

Madhu : please Krish... try to understand.. endha wrong intension um illa..

Krish :
(looks upon)

Madhu : you know what ? how much pain I underwent getting married without my family members around ?

Krish : its you who chose that way... no one can help it...

Madhu : adhaan solren... I kept all these aside.. ungalukku nalladhu panradhukkaaga..

Krish : how come you yourself decide what is good for me.. and I marrying you is the best thing...


Madhu : adhaan sollittene Krish.. I like you so much... last moment la I couldn't think of any other alternate thing..

Krish :
(silent)

Madhu : enna ? onnum pesamaattengureenga ?

Krish : adhaan neeye ellaam pesittiye.. I'm totally disappointed... never expected this from you.. ini pesuradhukku onnum illa..



Saying so, he just walks away from the room..

Madhu : Krish... Krish...



He sat in their garden lonely for some time, later he took his car and went for a long drive and came back late in the night...




Next Day :


Madhu got ready to office and came to the hall thinking Krish is waiting for her..

Madhu : athai.. avara paartheengalaa ? kelambi vandhaare..

Laksh : unkitta sollalayaa ?

Madhu : enna ?

Laksh : he has to attend a client call earlier and nee bus la varuva nu..

Madhu : Oh... I forgot that...


(mind voice) ennai avoid panreengalaa Krish.. ?



Two days pass by without talking to each other.. Lakshmi notices Madhu being dull..

Laksh : ennamaa... oru maadhiri yaa irukka..

Madhu : onnum illa athai..

Laksh : enakku theriyum... naan sollattumaa ?

Madhu : (shocked)

Laksh : enna appadi paarkkura ? un ammaa va pathi dhaane yosikkura.. ?

Madhu : (silent)

Laksh : I can understand maa.. ivlo naal abroad la irundhu, ippo dhaan inga vandhirukkaanga.. venaa onnu pannen.. why don't you go and stay there for a couple of days..

Madhu : athai... (smiles)

Laksh : sollumaa...

Madhu : adhu vandhu... ippodhaan...

Laksh : I know... ippodhaan inga vandhirukka... eppadi udane poguradhu nu yosikkura.. right ?

Madhu : (nods)

Laksh : inga paaru... no formalities... moreover these days you were at your grandpa's house.. ippo you are going to stay with your mom and dad... right ?

Madhu : hmmm...

Laksh : so.. no worries... chalo.. anga poi ammaa voda konjam time spend pannittu vaa..

Madhu : Thanks athai..

Laksh : sari... why waiting... go and get ready...

Madhu : illa... avaru vandhadhum.. sollittu...

Laksh : idhenna periya vishayam... naan sollikkuren..


Madhu at her Mom's house :


Subha : what a surprise.. ? ennai paarkkalaam unakku thonudhaa ?

Madhu : maa... romba pannaadheenga... neenga dhaan ennai pathi nenaikkureengalaa ne enakku doubt ah irukku..

Subha : Ashok.. inga paarunga.. unga ponnu solradha..

Madhu : Ai.. dad is also here ah.. ?


Ashok : yes kutty..

Subha : enna dhideer visit ? adhuvum thaniyaa ?

Madhu : (silent)

Ashok : enna nee ? ponnu nammala paarkka vandhirukkaa.. kelvi kettuttu irukka..

Subha : adhilla.. bag konjam perusaa irukke... adhaan..

Madhu : aamaa... few days inga dhaan stay...

Subha : stay vaa ?

Madhu : yen koodaadhaa ?

Subha : illa... edhaavadhu problem ah ?

Madhu : yen appadi thonudhu ungalukku... athai dhaan poi ammaa kooda time spend pannittu vaa nu sonnaanga..

Ashok : great maamiyaar..

Madhu : hmmm... enga athai eppavum great dhaan..

Subha is still not convinced on her sudden visit and lost in her thoughts..

Madhu : paarunga dad.. ammaa innum yedho yosichittu irukkaanga... naan solradha nambala pola... venumnaa.. unga maappilai ku illai en athai maamaa ku phone pottu tharren.. neengale kettukkonga...

Ashok : hey... enna pesura nee ? ava chummaa inba adhirchi la irukkaa..



Krish who felt bad about how he showed his anger in words to Madhu, thought of open up and apologize her the way he behaved.. He comes home happily and go in search of the house completely, only after which his Mom says about her visit to her parents' place..

Krish : (mind voice) naan edho thappu panna maadhiri, samaadhaanamaa polaam nu pesa vandhaa, nee kochikittu ammaa veettukku poyiduviyaa ?

do you think will I come there to bring you here...? unakkaa varra thonuchunaa vaa...




End of the week, they had a team meeting in which the Project Manager announce that it is Krish who is going to travel onsite after the release and give support to the clients at their place.. and Hari will give support from our side on Quality side..

All three, Madhu, Simi and Hari got to know about Krish's travel only from the meeting...

Hari : enna daa idhu ? sollave illai..

Krish : enakke sometime back dhaan sonnaanga..

Simi : semma po.. first among us to go to client site... great opportunity..

Krish : short term dhaan.. I think for 3 months..

Simi : 3 months oh 3 years oh... whatever.. Congrats daa...


Madhu was silent all long.. Hari signals Simi to look at Madhu..



Simi : enna Madam ? un reaction ah vachi enna ninaikkura nu guess panna mudiyala..

Madhu : what ?

Simi : illa.. inba adhirchi la irukkiyaa ? illa.. hubby ya pirinju irukkuradha nenachu worrying ah nu..

Krish : (murmers) adhaan ithana maasam pirinju irundhome..

Hari : ennadaa vaaikkullaye pesura.. sathamaa sollu...

Krish : nothing..

Simi : vidu daa... adhu husband wife kulla edhaavadhu secret ah irukkum... unakkedhukku ?

Hari : ok ok.. appo naanga kelamburom.. you carry on..

Simi : dei.. adhukkulla treat ku purse pazhuthidum nu kanakku podira dhaane.. ?


Krish : (morachifies)

Hari : kannlaye suttu erikkuradhukkulla, escape aaguradhu better..



Even after they left, Madhu and Krish did not talk to each other.. Both returned in the same car but not a word was spoken..

He drops her in her Mom's place and after thinking for a while, he decides to meet his in-laws..

Ashok : vaanga maappilai.. surprise visit...

Subha : neenga varradhaa iva sollave illa.. special ah edhaavadhu prepare panniruppene..

Krish : adhellaam onnum vendaam athai..


Ashok : edhukku ninnutte pesureenga.. come on.. utkkaarunga...

Krish : sure..



On noticing that he has something to say, Subha tells Ashok to make him comfortable..



Ashok : apparam... edhaavadhu sollanumaa ?

Krish : (mind voice) thank god... avangale kettuttaanga..

Subha : hmmm... sollunga..

Krish : adhu vandhu maamaa... athai... naan onsite travel panna poren..

Ashok : cool.. good opportunity...

Krish : (smiles)

Subha : (looks at Madhu who looks sad) eppo ? enga ? evlo naal ?

Ashok : oru oru question ah kelumaa...

Krish : next week..

Subha : so soon ?

Krish : hmmm... but its a short-term travel..




He then have a casual talk with them and was about to leave.. Madhu comes with her bag..

Ashok : hey kutty... neeyum kelambittiyaa ?

Subha : pinna ? one week la maappillai kelamba poraaru... iva kooda irukka vendaamaa..?

Ashok : hmmm... thats right..

Krish : illa paravaala.. actually, I'll be quite busy with work... venumnaa ingaye...


Madhu : thats ok... we'll leave... kelamburom maa..

Subha : hmmm... paarthukko... and exact date and timings sollunga.. we'll be there for sure to send off...




VL Home :


Again, he briefs the details about his travel to those at his home.. He was on continuous calls, so Madhu didn't get opportunity to speak with him.. She then convince herself to talk to him the next day..

But Krish didn't give chance for that.. At first she thought he is busy with official work, leaving early and coming home late.. Later, she realised that he is avoiding her and not ready to talk..

Madhu : (thinks) innum en mela kovamaa irukkeengalaa ? hmmm... naanum paarkkuren evlo naal pesaama ennai avoid panreenga nu..



KJ Home :


Jo and family were also there.. They were into the plans of Prem-Preethi's marriage..

Preethi : enna Krish... appo ennoda marriage ku nee inga irukka maattiyaa ?

Simi : nallaa kelu... ennoda baby porakkumbodhaavadhu nee pakkathula irundhu paarppiya ?

Krish : I think, I'll be back before that...

Simi : hmmm... paakkalaam paakkalaam..


Preethi : munnaadiye sollirundhaa, marriage date konjam thalli fix pannirukkalaam..

They confirmed it just few days back..

Krish : don't worry... I'm going to be there with you all during your marriage..

Preethi : what ?


Krish : enna muzhikkura ? technology evlo improve aayirukku... naan anga irundhe LIVE ah paarppen..

Simi : Oh appadi... okay okay..


Friday :

The most critical project in which the entire team was working has gone into production successfully with very few deviation which is negotiable..

Now, its the time for Krish to leave.. His flight was on Sunday early morning.. Everyone at home were busy arranging things and accompanied him to the airport in the midnight..



Others left the couple alone to have a private talk.. Though seated nearby and had lot of things to talk, both were unable to express their feelings on other and kept mum.. Even the good bye was exchanged through their eyes..



VL Home :

Madhu kept on changing channels on TV and still everything seems to be boring..

Vish : ennamaa romba bore adikkudhaa.. ?

Madhu : aamaa maamaa... edhuvume nallaa illa..

Laksh : Krish um illa... Hari, Simi ya avanga veettukku azhachiyyu ponadhula irundhu.. angaye settle aayittaan... venumnaa nee unga ammaa kooda irundhuttu vaayen..

Madhu : athai.. ? ippodhaane poittu vandhen...

Laksh : adhu just 1 week dhaane ?

Madhu : appo ?

Laksh : Krish varra varaikkum nee anga irundhuttu vaayen..

Madhu : idhaane ennoda veedu..


Laksh : yaaru illa nu sonnaa ? ammaa appaa ivlo varusham un kooda illa...

Madhu : hmmm..


Laksh : inimel life full ah inga dhaane irukka pora.. indha chance ah use pannikko nu dhaan sonnen...

Madhu : (mind voice) adhu dhaan theriyala ye.. Krish enna mudivu eduppaaro nu..


Vish : ya.. good idea...

Madhu : sari athai.. will think about it...



She then moves from there...

Vish : achacho...

Laksh : ennadaa aachu..?

Vish : Madhu vum kelambittaa.. naama rendu perum dhaane ? ammaa appaa vum Jaipur visit panna poyirukkaanga..

Laksh : sari.. adhanaala enna ?

Vish : pesaama.. naamalum Karthik veettulaye stay pannidalaam...

Laksh : ennadaa olarra ? sammandhi veetla iruppaangalaa ?

Vish : hello... first he is my uyir thozhan maa..

Laksh : appadiyaa ? appo nee mattum poi irundhukko..

Vish : yen ? avan unakku friend illayaa.. ? iru iru.. Karthi kitta maatti viduren..




--- to be continued..

Link to : Part 100
Edited by ramyvijay - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing and a gripping read...wonderful...

Wow Madhu did it currently? Please do update sooner...

Great writing
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Nice update ramya :)
Omg never expected madhu to be the cause of angel not turning up pavum krish his point of view is correct and machu feel sorry for her she did wrong but she also did suffer.

Waiting for their reunion...

Oh so prem and preethi marriage happening soon waiting for all that

Hmm subha realised something wrong with madhu and madhu going to stay there hope they solve it

Waiting for the next part please do update soon and that to will be your 100 part waiting for it eagerly and advance congrats :)
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Hi Ramya ,
Thanks for the update .

Ithu yena puthu storya iruku . Yenaku thalai suthuthu ma.

Madhu 😲 😲 is the one stopped the wedding . OMG but ... sorry me getting confuse here ... Madhu ... .

Ok whatever reason Madhu given , I support Krish on this. She should told him not until he knows it from Angel the devil . Hope for the reunion but the misunderstanding is make it worst now . Krish outsite travel for three months 😒

Prem & Preethi wedding on the way now .

Madhu in confused state (Me too)

Vishnu 😆

Ramya , yen suddena ipidi oru twist . But I like it , waiting for Madhu & Krish heart to heart talk 😉

Hope you will update soon.
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OMG what a twist in the story...

Is it Madhu who stopped the marriage...Unbelievable..

I can understand Krish's pov...Madhu would have told about all this before..She could have avoided this embarrassing situation.. knowing the truth from someone else...adhuvum..through Leena..romba kashtam thaan..

Krish Madhu ku sodhanai mela sodhanai...Krish going to onsite...away from home for 3 months...so sad

Let me see how you are going to solve their problem..

Amazing part Ramyaa..you are the best in giving unexpected twists and turns in the story..and solving them in unique way...Keep going.👍🏼
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Coming Up Next... Part 100

Actually next part is ready and handy with me for past 2-3 days.. But I couldn't update as I have net connectivity problem from my desktop.. It'll be up as soon as the issue is resolved..

Thanks everyone for waiting 😊 Catch you all very soon 😎
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Sorry Sorry Sorry for the laaate comment Ramya... *Puppy face* 😛


Part 98 -


Finally the newly weds are home!! That's great... 😃

Skip Level Meeting was a thoughtful addition in the office track Ramya... You really bring out the IT atmosphere in your story... I enjoy that a lot... 😃

Saran's point of view um correct ah explain panni irukeenga... Not just as a normal employee but as a head's perspective as well... It was different... 👍🏼

Oh are you planning a track between Sudhan and Thaappaa? 😛 'Nepali Nikki' sounded funny and cute... 😆

Krish - Madhu back from their trip... And Simi's joke was funny... 😆 But she was correct, yaara irundhaalum project date dhaan sollirupaanga la? 😆

Haiyaa, all of them together now... That's awesome!! 😃

The adults convo was as usual fun to read... Laksh is cute, and her little prank along with Jaya was fun... Vishnu malupifying... 😆

Angel entry? 😲 As usual she is continuing her villi role... 🤔 Drama behind the wedding? 😕

It was an awesome update Ramya!! 😃 Really enjoyable... 😉
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Part 99 -


Ramyaaa... Eppa evalo periyaa twist... 😲 Madhu was the one who stopped the wedding? 😲

OMG seriously, it was a huge shock Ramya... Never expected it to be Madhu... 😕

As much as Madhu tries to justify, Krish is right in his perspective and feelings... Paavam he must have felt really bad... 😔

At the worst scenario, Madhu should have told have told Krish herself rather than for him to know through Angel... 🤔

Hopefully their misunderstanding clears soon...

Laksh is such an understanding MIL, she allowed for Madhu to be with her mom... 😃

Oh no Krish will be gone for three months ah? 😔

Prem - Preethi wedding is on the way... Cool... 😃

Vishnu also wants to go to Karthik's house... He he he... 😆

Eagerly Waiting for your 'Century' update Ramya!! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ramya , pls update soon . Waiting for it 😭
100th update vera , really excited dear
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