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But friends, its taking time.. I mean the update is getting lengthier than expected.. like 2 parts put together..

But for sure, it will be up before end of day today 😊
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Lengthier ... 😲 2 parts

Waiting pana na ready pa ... take your time Ramya dear 😉
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Part 96 :


Previous Part : Part 95


Scene Continues..


Hari and Ram reach the hospital.. While Ram parks the vehicle, Hari rushes towards the reception..

Hari : inga Smitha nu oruthanga..

Receptionist : please wait sir.. let me check..

Hari : office la irundhu koottittu...



While he was mentioning the details, Simi who was seated in the lounge, called him..

Simi : Hari... I'm here...

Hari : Oh... Thanks mam... its her..

Receptionist : Welcome..



He then goes and sits beside her..

Hari : are you ok ? ennaachu ?

Simi : yen office la sollalayaa ?

Hari : sonnaanga sonnaanga... looks like idhukku munnaadiye low BP irundhu you fainted nu sonnaanga..

Simi : adhu vandhu...

Hari : come on... tell me... yen en kitta sollala...?

Simi : periya vishayam nu theriyala...

Hari : Ohoo... appo... ippo ambulance la vandhadha periya vishayam nu sollalaamaa ?


Simi : hey... adhu dhaan procedure aam daa.. I mean, office la irundhu hospital ku varanum naa..

aamaa... nee edhula vandha ?


Ram : en kooda dhaan 2 wheeler la..

Simi : Oh Ram ah.. ? Thanks...


Ram : how are you now Simi ?

Simi : I'm ok..

Ram : vandila varum bodhu Sir romba tension aayittaan... Sivi mela vera kaduppaayittaan..

Simi : Oh... avalukku poye aaganum nu constraint irukku... everyone have personal things...

Hari : adhilla...

Simi : good that you drived..


Ram : hmmm.. Saran dhaan ivana pathi therinju thaniyaa anuppala...

Simi : Oh


Ram : sari.. ippo eppadi return poga porom.. ?

Simi : neenga kelambunga Ram..

Ram : then you two ?

Simi : Taxi varra sollirukken... naanga appadi ye veettukku kelamburom..


Ram : cool... fine... see you then...

Simi : Thanks again..

Ram : bye Simi... Bye da... Take Care..



After he left, they both waited for Taxi to come..


Simi : romba bayandhuttiyaa daa.. ?


Hari : pinna ? bayandhen nu solradha vida.. tension aayitten..

Simi : problem enna naa.. ? un mobile ah nee marandhu vachittu vandhadhu dhaan... contact panna mudiyala..

Hari : office la irundhu kelambum bodhu, I called your number..


Simi : hospital la silent la potten... moreover signal is week here..


Hari : sari vaa... doctor ah paarthuttu varalaam..

Simi : ethanai dhadava paarkkuradhu..? adhaan already paarthuttene..

Hari : ennavaam ?



By then she gets a call from the taxi driver. She attends and cuts it..



Simi : vandi vandhiduchu... vaa veettukku poi pesikkalaam..

Hari : Smithu..

Simi : car is waiting... vaa..



He follows herand gets into the car..

Hari : ippo sollu..


Simi : sshhh... (signals that driver also there)

Hari : (low voice) thats ok...

Simi : haiyyoo... unnoda mudiyala... onnum illa daa..


Hari : then, idhenna prescription ?

Simi : adhuvaa... udambu strength ku.. no proper rest and untime la saappiduradhaala, effect kaattirukku..

Hari : idhula daily long travel vera...


Simi : ppcchh... adhellaam onnum illa... thats the time for relaxation...


Hari : apparam kaila adhenna.. ?


Simi : Report..

Hari : enna report..

Simi : test pannaa report tharuvaanga dhaane.. ?

Hari : hmmm... show me..


Simi : naandhaan veettukku poittu paathukkalaam nu solren la..


Hari : are you hiding something from me Smitha ?


Simi : aamaa... world la ye kodiya...



Hari closes her mouth before she utter next words.. He then closed his mouth as well indicating he won't open his mouth till they reach home..



As they reach home, Simi took a light meal and tablets and went to take rest..



She calls out Hari once she wakes up..

Simi : Hari..
.

Hari : (didn't hear)

Simi : my darling...


Hari : enna madam...?


Simi : car la varumbodhu avlo nacharicha.. veettukku vandhu ketkkala..?


Hari : aamaa... naan edhaavadhu ketkka nee thevai illaama edhaavadhu solradhukkaa ?


Simi : hey... sorry yaa..

Hari : sorry sonnaa sariyaayidumaa ?

Simi : vera enna seiyyanum...? (kiss him)

Hari : inimel appadi pesa maatten nu sollu...

Simi : kandippaa matten...


Hari : sari sollu...


Simi : adhaan sollittene...

Hari : adhilla... whats that report .. ?


Simi : sollanumaa ? or you want to see it ?


Hari : whatever..




Simi about to the give the report, but pulls it back and says,

Simi : illa... naane solliduren..

Hari : enna confusion ?


Simi : onnum illa...

Hari : appo sollu...


Simi : solren.. (feels shy)

Hari : come on..


Simi : one plus one is equal to three..


Hari : what ? equation laam solra.. idha naane solve panni therijukkanumaa ?


Simi : haiyyooo... makku paiyyaa ..


Hari : yaaru naanaa ?

Simi : then ? sari idha paaru
(shows the report)

Hari : enna idhu baby padam laam pottirukku... maathi kuduthuttaangalaa ?

Simi : haiyyooo... mudiyala...

Hari : cool cool ... enakku purinjiduchu... irundhaalum, nee solradha ketkanum pola irukku..


Simi : badavaa.. adhellaam solla mudiyaadhu...

Hari : paarraa... vetkkam laam varudhu...




Simi then takes his hand and keeps it on her and says thanks... Hari overjoyed, jumps and then held her, lifts and swirled..

Simi : hey... podhum podhum...


Hari : I'm just flying...

Simi : adhaan paarthaale theriyudhey...


Hari : I don't know how to express my happiness...


Simi : mudhalla ennai irakki vidu...




He obeys her and drops her slowly onto the sofa.. Then they both were happily enjoying the moment..

Hari : enna madam innaikku saree la kalakkureenga ?

Simi : chummaa dhaan..


Hari : oru vela, unakku munnaadiye theriyumo ?


Simi : adhellaam illa... just thonuchu... oru maadhiri sandhoshamaa irundhuchu...

Hari : adhaan office la motha kannume un mela dhaan irundhuchaam..

Simi : appadiyaa ? yaaru sonnaa.. ?

Hari : yaaro... adhu ippo mukkiyam illa..


Simi : sari... office na dhum nyaabagam varudhu.. Saran ku call panni sollidu..

Hari : enna nu ?

Simi : back to home... rest edukka sonnaanga nu

Hari : avlodhaanaa ?

Simi : mathadhellaam... apparamaa nerla sollikkalaam..

Hari : Okay done...

Simi : appadiye... Madhu kitta yum, Priya kitta yum solla sollidu...


Hari : sure...




He dials Saran's number and informs him..

Hari : phone nu na dhum nyaabagam varudhu..


Simi : enna ?

Hari : ammaa call pannirundhaanga pola.. namma team mundhikkottai attend panni, unnai hospital ku koottittu poyirukkaanga nu olari irukkaan...

Simi : first of all, why did he attend it ?

Hari : pinna ? needhaane Saran kitta kudutha.. he is around only.. romba neram ring adichadhum, periya sevai seiyyura maadhiri pannirukkaan..

Simi : hospital ponom nu dhaane theriyum... reason theriyaadhu la...

aanaa... athai kku Krish sollittaa ?


Hari : adheppadi ? avanukkum dhaan theriyaadhe..

Simi : Oh.. aamaa la..

Hari : but anyways, solli dhaane aaganum..

Simi : aanaa... eppadi solradhu nu dhaan..


Hari : yen.. ? ungala paatti aakkittom nu straight ah sollida vendiyadhu dhaan..


Simi : romba arivu...


Hari : Thank You... Thank You..

Simi : naan onnum unnai pugazhala..


Hari : then ? vera eppadi solradhaam ?



Laksh : vera eppadi yum solla vendaam... naane kettutten..

Both turns towards the entrance and saw Lakshmi standing there..

Simi was about to get up..

Hari : nee iru.. naan poren...

Laksh : congrats my son..

Hari : enna inga ye nikkureenga.. ? Dad varalayaa ?

Laksh : illa...

Hari : ok... come in..

He was about to close the door..

Laksh : hey... innoru aalu varraanga...

Hari : Dad dhaan varalanu sonneenga le.. vera yaaru ?




Jaya comes walking towards them..

Jaya : vadiya side la park pannitten Lakshmi...

Hari : athai... vaanga vaanga...

But she stands still looking at him and stares at Lakshmi..

Laksh : nee ulla po... naan koottittu varren...

Hari : Ok mom..

Laksh : hey vaa... yen appadiye ninnutta ?

Jaya : (morachifies)

Laksh : sari sari... puriyudhu... yen sollaama koottittu vandhen nu dhaane kovam..

Jaya : pinna.. ? inga dhaan porom nu sollirundhaa..

Laksh : nee vandhirukka maatta... right ?

Jaya : (silent)

Laksh : adhaan vaasal varaikkum vandhaachu la.. ? apparam enna ? come on..

Jaya : adhilla... Karthik...

Laksh : adha naan paarthukkuren...

Jaya : irundhaalum... ?

Laksh : look... naan yen sudden ah kelambi vandhen nu theriyumaa ? un ponnu... adhaan en marumaga, office la mayakkam pottu vizhundhirukkaa.. hospital koottittu poyirukkaanga... adhaan ennaachu nu paarkkalaam nu vandhen...

Jaya : achachachoo...

Laksh : but bayappada vendaam...

Jaya : enna ?

Laksh : yes.. sandhosamaana vishayam.. she made us grand parents..

Jaya is elated with those words and couldn't control her emotions.. She just walks fast inside to Simi and hugs her and kisses...

Laksh : idha... idha... idha dhaan naan edhirpaarthen...



Jaya : enna Lakshmi nee.. idha munnaadiye sollirukka koodaadhaa ?

Laksh : munnaadiye therinjaa dhaane ?

Jaya : pinna eppadi ?

Laksh : just few minutes before.. nee park pannittu varra time la... got to hear them talking..

Jaya : Oh..

Laksh : sari... munnaadiye therinjirundhaa enna senjiruppa ?

Jaya : Karthik ah yum..

Laksh : adhaane paarthen... ippo enna ? call panni sollidu...

Jaya : illa... avankitta sollaama inga vandhadhe...

Laksh : infact unakke theriyaadhu dhaane ? then what ? he'll understand..



Simi : mom... konjam irunga... Dad kitta solla vendaam..

Laksh : enna ?

Simi : aamaa... athai..


Hari : innum enna pidivaadham..? Maamaa ku therinjaa evlo sandhosha paduvaaru..


Simi : adhunaala dhaan...

Hari : puriyala..

Simi : appaa kitta, naane nerla sollanum.. avaroda mugathula ulla sandhoshatha naan neraave paakkanum... adhukku dhaan...

Laksh : so sweet...

Hari : sari... eppo polaam.. ?



Vish : adhukku avasiyame illai..

Now everybody turns to that side..

Hari : Dad..

Vish : not only me... look here... (moves aside and Karthik was behind him)

Hari : (over joyed) vaanga Maamaa... real surprise...

They both goes inside.. Karthik first looks at Jaya..

Laksh : anga enna paakkura Karthik ? naan apparamaa solren...

first un ponnu enna solraa nu kelu...




At first, both father and daughter were looking at each other in silence.. Then,

Karthi : sollu daa.. enna sollanum..?

Simi : adhu vandhu...

Karthi : come on... en ponnu ippadi pesuradhu ku yosikka maattaale .. ?

Vish : (to Laksh in low voice) eppadi edhuvume theriyaadha maadhiri act panraan... ippodhaane vaasal irukkum bodhu kettaan..

Laksh : chummaa iru konjam.. watch the scene..

Vish : inga enna padamaa kaatturaanga ?

Laksh : ssshhh...

Vish : ok ok.. moodittu irukkanum... adhaane ?

Laksh : fraud-u...



Simi : adhu vandhu dad... neenga thaathaa aayitteenga..

Karthi : (face brightens) really... ? Thanks daa chellam... (kisses her)

Simi : en mela kovam illaye.. ?


Karthi : kovamaa ? adhuvum en ponnu mela ... never... I know you..

Simi looks at Hari proudly which says, 'paarthiyaa naan sonnen la.. idhaan andha understanding'.. He too signals 'romba dhaan'..

Karthi : naan thaathaa aaguradhu irukkattum... en kutty ponnu ku, kutty paappaa varra pogudhaa ?

Simi : (smiles)

Jaya : aamaa evlo naal dhaan iva kutty ponnaa iruppaa ?

Simi : eppavum... illayaa Dad ?

Karthi : definitely... ava kedakkuraa... vidu...

Jaya : paarraa... ithana naal un feelings ah thaangi kittadhu yaaru ?

Karthi : adhukku ? (looks at her)

Jaya : onnum illa... sonnen..

Simi : ennamaa ? ippadi adangitteenga ?

Jaya : (feels shy) podi... idhe velai unga rendu perukkum... ennai kalaikkuradhu ku...

Vish : its all in the game Jaya... leave it..



Only then they realised, its not only them who were there.. Also Vishnu, Lakshmi and Hari..

Laksh : enna ? naangalaam irukkuradhu ippo dhaan un kannukku theriyudhaa ?



Simi : sari sari... appaa ammaa first time vandhirukkeenga... let me go and cook something for you..


Laksh : adhellaam apparam paarthukkalaam... ippo poi rest edu...

Simi : athai..


Laksh : ellaarum inga dhaane irukkom... just go inside...

Simi : sari okay...



She then takes her mother with her into the bedroom.. Simi lies down on her mother's lap and Jaya caressed her hair..

Meanwhile Lakshmi went to the kitchen and start preparing sweet..

Karthi : enna Lakshmi panreenga ?

Laksh : en marumaga sweet aana vishayam sollirukkaa... so adhukku sweet senjittu irukken...

Karthi : Oh... sari mudinjadhaa ?

Laksh : innum 5 minutes la mudinjidum... yen ketkkura ?

Karthi : naanum seiyya dhaan...

Laksh : paarraa..



Simi had a smal nap and as she woke up, Lakshmi entered with the sweets...

Simi : wow.. sweets... ennai samaikka venaam nu sollittu neenga senjirukkeenga..


Laksh : (smiles)

Vish : saappidumaa...

Simi : neenga ellaarum first eduthukkonga...


Laksh : needhaane inippaana vishayam sonna.. nee dhaan mudhalla saappidanum...



Lakshmi then feeds Simi and Hari and gave the plate to Vish...

Vish : enakkum ootti vittirukkalaam...

Laksh : (morachifies)

Vish : ippa enna thappaa kettutten nu moraikkura.. ?

Karthi : ivaru kuzhandhai... ootti vidaama saappida maattaaru...

Vish : hello... un wife ootti vittu nee venaam nu solluviyaa ?

Karthi : illa dhaan.. (winks)

Simi : Kesari super ah irukku athai... but paayaasam...


Laksh : paayaasam ? (looks at Karthik)

Simi : neenga pannala..

Laksh : kandu pidichittiyaa ?

Simi : pinna ? enga appaa voda kaippakkuvam enakku theriyaadhaa ?

Vish : haiyyoo... romba kulirudhe...

Karthi : ennadaa ? (gives a look)

Vish : ice mazhaila nananjaa kuliraadhaa ?


They had a good time together..


Simi : ok ok... ippa yaarum edhuvum solla koodaadhu.. I'm going to cook dinner for you all..


Hari : venaam nu sonnaa ketkavaa pora ? naanum varren..

Simi : nee edhukku ?

Hari : help ku dhaan...

Laksh : (to Vishnu) paarraa... nee ennikkaavadhu ippadi sollirukkiyaa ?

Vish : therinjaa dhaane solradhu ku .. (laughs in his usual style)

Simi : maamaa... unga payyanukku mattum theriyumaa enna ?

Vish : Oh.. appadiyaa ?

Hari : idhai yaaraavadhu unkitta kettaangalaa ? naan unnai vida nallaa ve samaippen...


Vish : cool cool.. yen Lakshmi ivangalukkulla sandai izhuthu vidura ?

Laksh : yaaru ? naanaa ?

Vish : pinna naanaa ?

Laksh : fraud-u



In the mean time, Lakshmi asks Vishnu as how they came there...

Vish : adhuvaa Lakshmi.. morning nee Hari number ku call pannopo, someone told that Simi taken to hospital la..

Laksh : aamaa..

Vish : then, later on afternoon nee marubadiyum call pannappo, phone la response edhuvum irundha maadhiri theriyala... but looked like you were listening..

apparam you were not okay.. konja nerathula Jaya va koottittu velila kalambitta...

felt something not ok.. so naanum ennoda nanbanai koottittu pinnaadiye vandhutten...


Laksh : naanga inga dhaan varrom nu unakku eppadi theriyum..?

Vish : adhellaam oru anumaanam dhaan..

Laksh : paravaalaye..

Vish : sari.. andha call la enna ketta ?

Laksh : adhuvaa.. ? I think at that time, Hari yoda mobile silent la irundhirukkum.. naan call pannumbodhu, maybe call attend aayirukkalaam... pesunadhai vachi paathaa, looked like they got into the car from the hospital.. So, veettukku dhaan povaanga nu I came here...

Karthi : aaga motham... husband and wife serndhu, engalukku theriyaamaye, inga kondu vandhu serthutteenga..

Laksh : happy dhaane ?

Karthi : ofcourse..

Vish : adhukku nee engalukku thank pannanum..

Karthi : avlodhaane ? thanks pannittaa pochu... (shakes his hand)

Vish : ippadidhaan unga oorla thank pannuvaangalaa ?

Karthi : Oh sorry... (gets up and hugs him)

Vish : poda..


They served the dishes prepared and the elders (I mean our KJ and VL) were actually surprised as it tasted good... They finished having dinner..

Vish : Jaya.. enga.. indha situation ku oru song podu...

Jaya : yen ? adhai needhaan poduradhu..

Vish : Oh... nee Karthi ku mattum dhaane paattu poduva.. marandhutten..

Jaya : nee irukkiye..

Karthi : yendaa.. ? avakitta vaangi kattikkaama unnaala irukkave mudiyaadha.. ?



Vishnu then plays the song from his mobile...

Engal Veettil Ellaa Naalum Karthigai

Vish : laa la laa..

Engal Nilavil Endrum Illai Theipirai



Hari on seeing his wife's face turning dull, asks her...

Hari : dhideernu enna aachu ?

Simi : miss Krish and Madhu now..

Hari : hmmm... me too...




Krish : don't worry brother !!

Everyone looks at the entrance..

Krish : we are here...



Madhu and Krish comes to them happily...

Hari : hey enna ? event adhukkulla mudinjiruchaa ?

Krish : bro... time enna nu paaru ..


Hari : Oh.. late aayiduchaa.. ?

Simi : hey aamaa... time ponadhe theriyala..

Krish : sari enna vishayam.. ? dhideernu ellaarum inga aajar aayirukkeenga ?

Vish : adhai apparam solrom... first unga visit kaana reason sollu..

Krish : naan en brother ah paarkka vandhen..

Vish : chummaa vidaadha my son..

Krish : really... summaa paarkka varala... have got something for them both.. and its a surprise for you...

Vish : appadiyaa ? naangalum oru surprise vachirukkom..

Krish : Is it ? enna ?

Vish : first nee sollu...

Krish : ok.. here it is... (takes out the momento given to them for winning the dance competition)

Madhu : winning momento for your dance performance...


Vish : Oh great..

Madhu : enna onnu.. aadunavangalukku badhilaa vera aal receive pannaanga..

Laksh : vera yaaru ?

Madhu : adhaan neenga xerox copy eduthu vachirukkeengale athai...

Laksh : adhai yen suthi valachi solra ? un purushan nu sollu..

Krish : adhu onnum illa maa... purushan pera solla maattaangalaam..

Madhu : (pinches him)

Krish : sss haaa...

Madhu : see this (shows a snap in her mobile)



Simi : hey enna ? neeyum poyirukkalaam la ?

Krish : Saran um adhaan sonnaaru.. iva dhaan varala...

Simi : yen ?

Madhu : pinna ? ellaarukkum ivara theriyumaa ? I mean.. appaidye Hari yoda ditto... ippa same look with same hairstyle ellaame...

Ivaru kooda naan poi vaangunaa, Jodi maariduchu nu confuse aaga maattaanga ?


Vish : idhula ippadi oru vishayam irukko ?

Krish : sari... unga surprise enna ?

Vish : adhai.. un friend kitta kezhu..

Krish : what ? avale paavam udambu sariyillaama vandhirukkaa...

Vish : adhaan enna vishayam nu kezhu..

Krish : hey.. naan kettaadhaan solluviyaa.. ?

Simi : naan sollala paa.. un brother kitta ye kezhu...


Krish : yaaraavadhu oruthanga sollungalen...


Laksh : nee Chithappaa aayitta... and Madhu has become Chithi...

Krish : what ? puriyala...

Madhu : haiyyo... ungala... (whispers)

Krish : Oh... adhaan indha celebration ah ? varumbodhu orey paattu satham dhaan..


Karthi : aamaa.. ellaam idho.. ivanaala dhaan... family song pottittu...

kannu pattuda koodaadhu daa..

Vish : so what ? adhukku oru song podalaam...



Kannu Pada Pogudhaiyyaa Chinna Gounder eh

Unakku Suthi Poda Venumaiyyaa Chinna Gounder eh...



Vish : eppudi ?

Laksh : sonnaalum.. sollalanaalum... suthi poda dhaan venum..



Hari : sari ok... utkaarudaa... neeyum Madhu... naangalellaam saapptaachu.. I'll bring for you..



He goes inside the kitchen..

Madhu gets a call, she then gives her phone to Lakshmi...

Laksh : yaaru maa ?

Madhu : ammaa dhaan... ungakitta pesanumaam...

Laksh : yaaru Subha vaa ? kudu...

Hello.. Hello...


Simi : athai.. signal weak ah irukkum.. andha pakkam poi pesunga...



Lakshmi comes back cutting the call...

Jaya : enna Lakshmi... ?

Laksh : Subha inga varraangalaam... I mean India varraangalaam..

Jaya : Oh... nalla vishayam dhaan...


--- to be continued..


Link to : Part 97
Edited by ramyvijay - 9 years ago
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Ramya super update dear 👏 👏
Its like a family reunion

Simi & Hariku kutty papava 😳

Lakshmi & Jaya arriving and Jaya stop at the door but mothers love will supersede all and wins ...

Karthik & Vishnu ... yenapa same method a iruku 😆

THE BEST Karthik & Simi ... thank you Ramya actually I want this before but its very apt for this situation ... and me too thought the same ...Appakum ponnukum yena oru understanding ... 👍🏼

Songslam semaya iruku ... Vishnu , Karthik still the same ..

Not forgetting Krish & Madhu ...

Thank you Ramya ...
Lovely update ... Lily happy o happy 😆 !
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Thanks Lily dear..

You happy, Me happy 😊
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lovely update Ramya...
As expected Simi Hari are going to be the proud parents..👍🏼

At last karthik simi met and everything settled smoothely..ideal time they met

Its so nice to see the family together in this happy occasion..

Wish Krish and madhu start their life soon..

Still one more thing to be revealed yet...why Simi left the house..Wish you reveal it soon..( but you wont I think...lolzz😉
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Semma reunion... So cute parents and in laws... Very natural behaviour... Lovely... Waiting for the next...
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Fantastic Update Ramya 😉

I'll tell you this... This one is actually my fav part of your story after the Jaipur visit parts at the beginning... 😛

It was sweet to see how much Hari actually cares for Simi... Clearly showed his fear and tension...

Aww... A new arrival to the family huh? That is so cute... 😳 Liked Hari - Simi 's sweet convo at home...

Lakshmi - Jaya entry was at the right time... Ha ha ha... Lakshmi made it easier to them by figuring out from their talks...

Again a perfect entry of Karthik - Vishnu... Superb... Aww... More than the baby news, Karthik - Simi reunion was more cuter... I mean since it was a long awaited one... Appa - Daughter understanding semma... 😛

Family song and timing was apt... Vishnu great... 😉

And the whole family was there after Krish - Madhu came... He he he... Hari's look alike got the award instead of him... Lolz... 😆

Subha coming there... Aduthu importance for Krish - Madhu ah? Go ahead... 😛

Also still Simi oda reason ah reveal pannalaye... Me waiting to know that...

Really enjoyed the update Ramya... It was great... Keep it up Author... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super update Ramya
a really good part

Simi and Hari really happy for them... Hari cares a lot about Simi so nice

Super entry for KJ VL and the songs was good

KM nice they came too

nice family bonding between all

glad father and daughter are back together now :)

Ohoo so subha is coming now? waiting to know what is in store for KM...

thanks for the update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks everyone for your valuable comments 😊

it's been quite sometime I updated.. I'm not keeping good now.. need few more days to come up with next part..

Thanks in Advance for waiting 😳
Edited by ramyvijay - 9 years ago
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