FF~Oru Naal~ NOTE: Pg 19 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update..nice to see karthi concern over raji and their relationship ... karthi rajiku um naduvala onnum illaiya? Like vish u asking me also confused

shiva seems to be a really geunine person nice to see karthi saying nice things about raji.

Who is this rani ma? When will the suspense open?
whens the next update?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update , Amrita...

Shiva - nizam dhaana.. Naan adhu oru karpanai charaenu nenaichene...

KR Ku naduvula shiva va?..

... Hmm..

Waiting for ur next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice... Wonderful...aana ore suspense a irukke... Pls Konjam torch adinga
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ammu,story sema suspensea poguthu...superbπŸ‘
karthik-raji-shiva convo...very nice...

aana KR naduvula something something iruka,illaiya??...en ippadi nadanthukaraanga rendu perum?πŸ˜•

yaaru antha rani amma...karthik ethuku patharikittu odran...

seekrama suspenselam pottu udainga...pls,,,
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you Ammu for the update. I'm a little confused also, is there something between KR or not?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ammu.. Happy to know that you are back here 😊

Read all 3 recent updates together.. πŸ‘πŸΌ

Fantastic maa.. Eagerly waiting to know the mysteries behind..

Actually in the last update, story's title 'Oru Naal' came several times.. correct ah note pannenaa? πŸ˜› .. Thought that meeting with that guy Shiva is the major scene... But andha 'Oru Naal' might be some other day pola πŸ˜‰

And somehow I've guessed the reasons that are yet to be revealed but I won't say it here and break it.. Let me see if thats right when you update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice ammu...

Karthi - Raji naduvula shiva, yenna nadakka pogudho...

who's that Rani amma? ore suspense ah pogudhey 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for ur update sis...

Superb update πŸ‘ ennapa KR ku naduvalla onnum illaya? rendu perukittaiyum oru feelingum theriyalayae πŸ˜• shiva I think he is good

Yaru andha rani amma edhuku karthik evalo pathururan seekirama suspense pottu odachidunga sis...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey friends,thanks for the likes and comments.I'm really happy to see your involvement in my story.Thanks guys!!!Here's the next part...


Karthik moves to the corridor and calls Rani amma.
Karthik: Hello,solunga ma...illa veliya poi irunthen...apadiya??...seri naan udane varen.
Raji hears everything.Karthik starts to move.Raji goes back to her workstation and starts collecting her bag in a hurry.
Vishnu: Enna achu Raji?
Raji: Athu...athu vanthu...Shiva!Err...Shiva call pannaru...engeyo veliya ponumam,athan...Ok Vishnu naan poitu varen.Bye!

She goes in a hurry.She manages to get an auto and asks the driver to follow Karthik's bike.Karthik stops at a house,gets down and goes into that house.Raji also gets down and looks confused.She pays the auto fare and hesitantly moves towards the house.

Karthik: Enna ma achu?
Rani ma: Illa pa,enaku romba mudila,una thontharavu panna kudathu nu thaan irunthen,aanalum mudila!
Karthik: Ithula enna ma iruku? Nanum unga payan maari thaana?
Rani: Illa pa innum evlo naaluku thaan ipadi unnaiye naan ethirpaathu iruka mudiyum?Unaku nu oru vaazhkai illaya?
Karthik: Amma,enaku nu oru vaazhkai iruku,antha vaazhkai la romba mukiyamana aalu neenga!Seri vaanga hospital ku polam.
Rani ma: Illa pa ennala nikka kooda mudiyala.
Karthik: Seri,naan doctor ku call panni vara solren.
Karthik calls the doctor.
Karthik: Aama,neenga ethavathu saaptingala?
Rani ma: Etha saaptalum vaandhi varuthu pa.
Karthik: Athukaga sapdama irupingala?Intha Meena enga? Ungala ipadi vitutu ava enga pona?
Rani ma: Illa pa marunthu theendhu pocha athan vanga poiruka.Avala thitatha pa,pavam chinna ponnu.
Karthik: Marundhu illa na enta solla vendiyathuthaana?En ipadi avala veliya anupitu neenga thaniya irukinga?
Rani ma: Konja neram thaana pa!
Karthik: Seri neenga paduthukonga,naan hall la iruken.Doctor ippo vandhuduvaru.
Rani ma: Seri pa!

Karthik goes to the hall.
Raji: Enna Karthik ithellam?
Karthik turns to see Raji standing near the door.
Karthik: Raji???Nee epadi inga???
Raji: Mothala naan ketathuku pathil sollu
Karthik: Raji nee office ku po!
Raji: Mudiyathu!Nee inga enna panra?Yaar athu?Ethukaga ithellathayum marachu marachu panra?Sollu Karthik!
Karthik: Raji pls...ippo enna ethayum kekatha!Nee kelambu mothala!
Raji: Maten! Nee pathil solra varaikum naan inga irunthu poga maten!
Just then Meena enters.

Meena: Vanga anna!
She looks confusingly at Raji.
Meena: Yaar na ithu?
Karthik: Friend!Seri nee ulla poi Rani ma ku ethavathu sapida kodu.Doctor ippo vandhuduvaru.
Meena: Seri na!
She leaves.

Raji: Yaar Karthik ivangellam?
Karthik: Konjam balcony varaikum variya?Inga venam!
Raji: Hmm..
They go to the balcony.
Raji: Enna Karthik ethum pesama iruka?Vaaya thoranthu sollu!Enna nadakuthu?
Karthik remains silent.He pulls out jis purse,takes a photo and hands it to her.
Raji: Yaar ithu?
Karthik: Sukanya...en wife!
Raji: Enna???? Aana nee avangala pathi oru thadava kooda sonathu illaye,naanum avangala ivlo naala paathathu illaye!
Karthik: Irundha thaana paaka mudiyum!
Raji: Enna solra Karthik?
Karthik: Sukanya ippo uyiroda illa,ava iranthu 3 varusham aaguthu.
Raji looks at him shocked.She wasn't able to react.But she managed to pick up some courage to speak on.
Raji: I'm...I'm sorry Karthik!Epadi??
Karthik: Love!
They both looked at each other.

***Flashback***
Sukanya: Karthik!!!
Karthik: Hmm...
Sukanya: Daily en veetu theru mukkula iruka andha porikki payan enkita vandhu I luv u nu solran!
Karthik: Oh!! Apadiya?
Sukanya: Enna nopadiya???Nee enna love panrathana?Oru vartha...oru vartha avana keka mata?
Karthik: Enna keka solra?Andha payan ah paatha pavama iruku!Pesama Ok nu soliden!
Sukunya: Oh!!!Apdina namakulla onnum illaya?Ellam avlothaana?Ok!Fine nalaike poi avanuku Ok solren.Unna maari onnuthukum uthavatha aala vida,daily enakaga rose um greeting card oda nikura avan evalavo mel!Bye!
Karthik smiles and she leaves.

Next morning...
Sukunya: Hey en lover enga?
Karthik: Athan inga iruken la!
Sukunya: En puthu lover enga nu keten
Karthik: Oh avana???Ethavathu government hospital la irupan!
Sukunya: Enna da panna avana?
Karthik: En lover ke route vita summa irupen ah?Athaan konjam light ah thatunen,payan vera weak ah irunthana athan naane hospital la sethuten.Inimel un puthu lover un pakkam thala vechu kooda paduka matan!!!
Sukunya: Itha minnadiye pannirukalam la?Enna verupethi paakurathula apadi enna santhosham unaku?
Karthik: Yenna,kovapadum pothu nee romba azhaga iruka athaan!
Sukunya: Ithuku oru korachalum illa!
Days passed by...
Sukunya: Karthik unga appa amma kita namala pathi pesuniya?
Karthik: Illa...ippo sonna,padikura vayasula enna love nu solli ethavathu soluvanga,mothala padipu mudiyatum,oru nalla velai kidaikatum,appo solalam!Innum oru varusham thaane!
Sukunya: Karthik naan onnu solata?
Karthik: Hmm..
Sukunya: Namma rendu perum ippo ve kalyanam panikalama?Yaar kitayum solla venam,namma padipu mudinju,oru nalla velai ku ponathuku apram ah elarkitayum solikalam.
Karthik: En mela nambikai illaya??
Sukunya: Cha cha apadi ellam onnum illa!Enaku bayama iruku Karthik.Enaku nu irukurathu en ammavum neeyum thaan.Padipu mudinja udane enna kandipa en mama avar payanuku katti vechuruvanga,enga ammavala kooda ethum ethirthu pesa mudiyathu,yenna enga rendu pethoda selavum avar thaana pathukuraru,enna padipe avara nambi thaan iruku,etho naan kenju ketathunala thaan enna padika anupuranga illa na athuvum poi irukum!Nalaiku namaku kalyanam aayita,en padipu mudinjathuku apram avanga enna katayapaduthi kalyanam panni veika mudiyathula,en purushan nee irupa la enakaga!
Karthik: Enaku purithu Sukunya!Ethukagavum naan unna izhaka virumbala!Enaku nee venum!Naan ella arrangements um panitu unaku solren.
Sukunya: Nijamava Karthik???
Karthik: Hmm...
Sukunya: I love you Karthik...
Karthik: I love you more...

Ok friends,enaku theriyum kandipa itha padichitu neenga elarum en mela semma kola veri la irupinga nu,but enaku chinna chinna twist kuduthu oru kadhai eluthanum nu aasai.I'll hope u'll understand!

Edited by AmmuKryan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey... me first πŸ˜‰

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