FF: Nazar- Ek nayi Kahaani Part 13 Updated on Page-5 - Page 3

Hmmm... Another interesting chapter.

So, both the Mohona(s) are interlinked... Curious to know the connection between them.

Plus how does Ruby fit in this equation?? What is her motive? Is she in cahoots with Mohona Daayan or not?? Am curious to know...

Dilruba enters... So, here Daayans and Chudails are not mortal enemies??

Plus it's a bit odd to see that Pia isn't trained... I mean, even if she doesn't know about her being a Daivik, being a Reevavanshi, I had expected more from her.

Also, I did not expect her to get kidnapped so easily...

For once, I am glad that the Rathods said something negative about Ansh and Ruby's marriage... FF main hi sahi, kuch to kaha!!!

Really enjoyed reading it.

Waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Hmmm... Another interesting chapter.

So, both the Mohona(s) are interlinked... Curious to know the connection between them.

Plus how does Ruby fit in this equation?? What is her motive? Is she in cahoots with Mohona Daayan or not?? Am curious to know...

Dilruba enters... So, here Daayans and Chudails are not mortal enemies??

Plus it's a bit odd to see that Pia isn't trained... I mean, even if she doesn't know about her being a Daivik, being a Reevavanshi, I had expected more from her.

Also, I did not expect her to get kidnapped so easily...

For once, I am glad that the Rathods said something negative about Ansh and Ruby's marriage... FF main hi sahi, kuch to kaha!!!

Really enjoyed reading it.

Waiting for the next part...

Thanks for the feedback.... will try to improve more in next parts...

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Hmmm... Another interesting chapter.

So, both the Mohona(s) are interlinked... Curious to know the connection between them.

Plus how does Ruby fit in this equation?? What is her motive? Is she in cahoots with Mohona Daayan or not?? Am curious to know...

Dilruba enters... So, here Daayans and Chudails are not mortal enemies??

Plus it's a bit odd to see that Pia isn't trained... I mean, even if she doesn't know about her being a Daivik, being a Reevavanshi, I had expected more from her.

Also, I did not expect her to get kidnapped so easily...

For once, I am glad that the Rathods said something negative about Ansh and Ruby's marriage... FF main hi sahi, kuch to kaha!!!

Really enjoyed reading it.

Waiting for the next part...

Always welcome honest feedback... will try to improve in next parts... thanks

Part -7

As Pia is surrounded by chudail rakh chakra, she prays to God to help and opened her eyes with anger.She tried to cross the chakra but fails.She again takes Maiyaa's name and again tries to cross it but fails.Dilruba laughs on her.Suddenly dayan vraksh roots starts coming out of chakra and starts holding Pia.

On the other hand, everybody is tensed in Rathod house due to Ansh decision of marrying Ruby so early even when this new Ekayan issue is emerging.Mohana says-"Although i dont like Ruby at all but for Ansh i am ready to do this because who knows if she returns then our relation will be the same or not".Vedashree says-"No didi..dont say all this..we will always support you as we know what happened then..so please be calm."

Ruby comes down in a bridal attire along with Ansh and everybody shocks as accordingly marriage is after 1 week so why is ruby doing this.Mohana asks-"What is this nonsense...just go and change..today is not ur marriage".Ansh stops Mohana and says-"Mom...please be kind towards ruby otherwise ..".Vedashree asks Ansh to stop all this and took Mohana inside room.Ruby smiles as she is very near to fulfill her motive.She dances alone with Ansh on "Sharara sharara"(just imagine).

In dayan lok, dayan vraksh roots brings Pia there in unconscious state.And Mohana took hold of her with her choti and drags her to the Bandap temple.After reaching the temple entrance, Mohana chants a mantra and brings Pia forward to the gate.Suddenly a spark happens and Pia gets shock and she is thrown backwards.Mohana gets shocked as why a special person like Pia experience this.She goes near to her and suddenly Pia converts into Dilruba.Mohana shocks again.

In Nishant house,Pia is sitting there safely with Savi.They remembers that how Savi came at right moment and Pia cunningly trapped Dilruba in instigating her against master whoever sent her.Before dayan vraksh roots fully captured Pia,she breaks that chakra effect by the knife given to her taking Goddess Name.After coming out, Savi attacks Dilruba and dayan vraksh roots trapped her in Pia's form.

Part-8 Recap

Rathod house is decorated for ruby-ansh marriage.Ruby hypnotized everyone so they follows her order.Meanwhile Mohana came out from rathod house for somework and goes for Bandap temple without knowing what awaits her.

Part 8

Mohana in dayan lok on finding that girl is Dilruba gets furious.Dilruba get up and asks Mohana to calm down and promise to bring her here at any cost as she and her sister has locked horns with a wrong supernatural creature.Mohana asks her to just shut up.She says-"stop all this nonsense you dumb chudail.Today was a very important day for me to initiate the chakra breaking series but because of you all get ruined.Now i have to take another route which i didnt wish to take but i have no choice now."

Dilruba also gets furious on hearing all allegations of Mohana but she keeps quiet as she has a plan still in her mind for Pia.Mohana calls Kagraz and asks him to initiate the alternate way of chakra breaking.Kagraz says-"you can think once again...as this seem simple but you know it is not."Mohana says-"just do it..i dont have much time..i can do this at any cost."Then kagraz nods head in Yes ok and flew from there and suddenly a spark falls on Mohana and she asks Dilruba to come here.Dilruba asks Mohana what is this new way.She tells that now she has to made all the stars and planet in same structure as kagraz wil tell and also have to bring Pia and Rathod's house Mohana together at Bandap entrance.Dilruba laughs and say it will be fun.Mohana grabs her with her choti and asks her to shut up and listen to her plan as she has to do all this in 1 week.

Next Day at Rathod house

Everyone is listening to ruby as she hypnotized all.She is dressed ad bride and asks Ansh to come down fast for her marriage with him.Ansh gets ready but he feels inside that he is not doing something right.Suddenly he has flashback of Pia falling in his arms and he controls himself.

Everyone is ready and come down except Mohana as she had gone to somewhere to temple for seeking blessing.Ruby sits along with Ansh on the mandap and Pandit ji starts reciting wedding mantras.Suddenly Pia enters their hall and as she put her step forwards, temple bell rings and wind starts blowing.Also the fire on the mandap centre also got blown away.Ruby gets furious as sees Pia is coming in the hall.She thinks is she told all this to anyone in her house, Revavanshi's will stop her way.So she has to kill Pia.

Ruby steps forward to hold Pia suddenly when the Gangajal in the house temple falls down and before ruby reaches Pia, that rolling bottle created a line between them.

PART- 9

Ruby tries to cross the line and she gets repelled and come in her real look of daayan and also everyone comes out of her hypnotism. Mohana comes in Bandap temple suddenly she feels someone is looking behind her.

PART -9

As gangajal made a line between Pia and Ruby.Ruby didn't saw it and try to cross it.But as She crossed the line, she gets repelled and thrown away.Ruby hold herself on the wall and comes in the real look of Daayan.Also everyone comes out of her hypnotism.Vedashree on noticing this asks everyone and Ansh to come along with her to the temple area as they will be safe there.Everybody runs.Meanwhile Pia hides behind the wall in hall to protect herself.She thinks-"I knew it that Ruby is not a normal human..but i have to do something to stop her from fleeing away."She called her father and Saavi to come for help as soon as possible.Ruby comes down from the wall and started searching where everyone hides.Pia also followed her slowly slowly with Khanjar in her hand.Ruby contacts Mohana Daayan and tells her everything.First Mohana gets furious on knowing that her every plan is failing but suddenly she strikes something and tell something to Dilruba and asks her to go and fulfill the task this time.

In Rathod's house

As Pia follows Ruby,suddenly she saw a dark shadow and she hides behind as she dont know how to fight an unseen enemy(also she has to get to know of her being Daivik also).After few time, Vedashree saw Pia roaming outside their room.She asks Pia to come and hide here with them.Pia says that she knows some potion that they can make in Kitchen which will make ruby weak.Vedashree agreed to this and asks Pia to come along.

In their way to kitchen,Vedashree saw Ansh lying on the ground unconscious.She ran towards him and she reached,Ansh disappears.Pia comes and laughs and turns herself into her real form of Dilruba.Ruby also came and says-"Oh Mother-in law,,,dont take tension.Ansh is safe and is with me only.But i need one of you to force him to accept our orders so i have to so this all drama..come lets come with me."

Suddenly Pia comes in front of Ruby with Nishant and asks her to leave them otherwise she will regret.Ruby ignores them and started singing Daayan chores.Vedashree got hypnotized again and stood in front of Ruby.

Part 10 Recap

Rathod's house Mohana comes inside Bandap temple and opens a coffin like box.She gets shocked to notice something weird.Meanwhile daayan Mohana notices someone inside the temple and thinks that how is this possible that the lock is open.

Sorry for being late...

So, the story progresses... And it's getting interesting too.

You are doing a really good job...

Mohona Daayan needs the other Mohona plus Pia together at Bandap temple entrance to break those chakras... Interesting.

Also, I guess there is some connection between Mohona Daayan and Mohona of Rathod House? As Mohona herself said that if that Daayan returns, her relation with Vedashree might not remain the same...

Finally another piece of the puzzle falls in place... Ruby is in league with Mohona Daayan.

But I hope you will make it clear as to why does Mohona want this marriage to happen...

All the best for the upcoming chapters...

PART- 10

Pia and Nishant-Saavi stood with her to fight Ruby and Dilruba.Ruby hypnotizes Vedashree by singing Daayan chores.Vedashree warns Pia and her family to not do anything to Ruby otherwise they will have to fight her before Ruby.Dilruba Laughs and says-"What you will do now..last time you got saved but this time not.."Pia sees Saavi and gives her some clue through her eyes and saavi goes somewhere by hiding meanwhile Pia tries to divert Dilruba and Ruby's attention.Ruby says-"Now its high time..you always come between my motives..i dont know what is special in you but i am Daayan and now i will fulfill my motive..dont worry i wont kill you as you are necessary to me now..".Ruby remembers how Mohana contacted her and told her to not kill Pia as she has some powers maybe they could use for their motive.

As Nishant tries to attack Ruby ,Dilruba sits on her shoulder and tries to divert his actions and suddenly Ruby hold his weapons through her choti and threw them away.Pia gets shocked and tries to help her father by using her khanjar and she throws it towards Ruby and it cuts her choti.Ruby scream in pain.Meanwhile Dilruba comes down and also took Nishant form.As pia turns back, she saw two Nishant.Both starts saying that he is real Nishant.Ruby calls Daayan vraksh and gets disappear through the roots along with Vedashree.Pia gets late in stopping Ruby.

Suddenly Saavi attacks on one Nishant and it is Dilruba itself.Dilruba gets injured and warns them to get ready to experience hell and flees from there.Pia asks Saavi how she knows who real Nishant is.Saavi told that after completing her task of sprinkling magical powder on every entrance of the house as told by her so that they can trace any black power who comes in this house and where they goes, she came back and at the right time she saw Dilruba taking Nishant form so she knews.Pia gets calm and Nishant hugs them both.Then they call everyone outside and told them what happened here with Ansh and Vedashree.They convince them they will trace Ruby and Dilruba with the help of magical Powder.

They wait there for the powder to start glowing for some time but it didn't start working.Nishant got tensed and asks Saavi whether they made it correctly.Saavi says yes and brings the book from which they had made it. Nishant checks once and says that they had not read one line on next page that this powder start working by the touch of a special power and not humans.He says that-"If we knew this before , we can take help from any black power stored in our Taikhana but now we don't have much time ..what we do now."

Pia and everyone gets more tensed and suddenly wind blows and to keep powder on place,Pia touches it and her Daivik sign glows and powder also start glowing(Namo Namah song plays in the background).Everyone gets shocked to see this and notices that Pia has definitely some power.Nishant gets tensed on seeing this and decides to meet PanditJi after all this ends.Powder starts flowing and all they gets ready to follow it.

Meanwhile, Rathod house Mohana has come to Bandap temple.She comes at the entrance and says some mantras and the locked door gets opened itself.She gets inside.On the other hand, Daayan Mohana witnesses something weird and comes towards the temple and gets shocked to see the door is closing with someone inside.She forgets for one second that she cant get there without her plan fulfillment and runs towards the entrance and gets a big shock and thrown away on the ground.Rathod's house Mohana turns back and see someone lying on the ground with long choti and then the door closed.

PART -11 RECAP

Rathod house's Mohana meets Guruma inside the temple and ask her what is going to happen now.Guruma says that the time is coming which was mentioned in the daayan rahasya,we tried to stop that but now only God knows what will happen.

PART- 11

Rathod's house Mohana entered inside Bandap Temple and after door getting closed thinks who that lady was.She touches Guruma feets and ask her whether she knows who that lady was outside the temple.Guruma gets tensed and asked her-"Lady..who...did she saw you...did she had a long braid..?".Mohana tells that no she didnt saw her but yes she had a long braid.Guruma says that i know why you didn;t recognise her because what happened 20 years back still had an impact on you otherwise just by her choti you had recognised her.Mohana says-"is She that?..Guruma says yes and i am sure that somethings in your house should be going wrong in past few days ,right?.Mohana says yes and ask but why is that happening.Guruma says-"All this was mentioned in Daayan Rahasya and we tried to stop that but it seems time cycle will move and this prediction will come true."Mohana asked which prediction.Guruma took her to a place inside the temple and show her a wooden big box like coffin.She opened it and gets shocked to see a cut Braid inside it but it has faded.Mohana asked what is this all Guruma.Guruma tells that-"This braid has become weak and transparent because now she(Daayan Mohana) has started taking its power back to her through various black powers and if she get succedded to break those 7 safety chakras then storm will come".Then Guruma tooks her to an old Shelf and tells something about the prediction she was talking about through a book.Mohana gets very shocked to know the prediction and says-"is it true..how can I ..No.."and then Guruma calm her and ask her to be strong to fight this all.

Meanwhile everyone follows the powder and tries to search Vedshree and Ansh.Pia prays to God to keep them all safe.Suddenly in between their way, Dilruba appears and stop their car.Nishant-Saavi and Pia came out and tell her to go away otherwise things will get worse.Dilruba laughs and say-"You all troubled me..now its ur turn..i will not let you find your family so soon..he he he..(her laugh)."She says some chores and a white fog appears around them.Everyone tries to be together to fight as one.Suddenly after few minutes, Fog disappears but Dilruba caught hold of Chaitali and even transform into her look.Now everyone gets confused as who real Chaitali is.Both of them are behaving exactly as the real.Pia thinks of an idea and brings Imli from the car (which she took with herself to fight her anytime).She brings Imli and tries to greed Dilruba but Dilruba was also controlling very much,Then Pia brings entire bag of Imli and spread there in open.Dilruba is getting distracted and suddenly when she tries to grab one,Saavi attacks on real Dilruba and captured her in a bottle.Then they again follows the powder.

In Daayan Lok,

Mohana Daayan is still thinking about how did that door opened and who was inside it.Then she tried to contact Dilruba but she didn't reply.Ruby asks her what happened.Mohana says-"Dont know where she is..time is passing by..i have to do things fastly to fulfill my dream."

Everyone reaches to a dead end following the powder and after getting out of car,they shocked to see that there is no road ahead but the powder is showing signs a little ahead.

PART- 12 RECAP

Guruma reaches there with PanditJi and reveals that Pia is none other than Daivik herself and she can go to Dayan lok with the help of Daayan vraksh.Pia looks confused.

PART -12

All the family members reached a dead end following the powder.They all tried to search if some way is there to go Daayan lok from there as the powder is showing the signs a little ahead of the dead end.After searching for quite a few minutes,all get hopeless and sat down being sad.Suddenly they hear a voice and it is Guruma's voice.She came there along with Mohana and PanditJi.Guruma said-"although things are not in our hands now but why we have to fear why Goddess blessings are with us right now right here",Nishant and Vedashree asks what does she mean.Guruma came near Pia and reveals the truth that the girl who is daivik and said to be cause of Daayan Lok ending is none other than our Pia.Then she showed everyone the daivik sign on her shoulder.Nishant asks her that he had seen this mark since her birth and even they had seen it but why now they are calling Pia due to this sign.Gurumaa said-"I know you have many questions..i will answer all but after this ends..first Pia has to use her powers to get to Daayan lok. with the help of Daayab Vraksh..I know you all thinks that why Daayan Vraksh will help her being a daivik."Everyone says-"yes...it will help only Daayans/".PanditJi says-"Gurumaa is right because Pia's mother Divya once helped the Daayan vraksh to grow again after being buried by some powerful black magic."So it will help her any relative.

Pia then remembers Durga Maa and says-"Jai Ho Maiyaa Ki"..(Devi Maa Background music plays).Then her sign glows and Daayan Vraksh comes there.For few seconds,Daayan Vraksh did nothing.they all gets tensed as why nothing is happened.Suddenly the roots start come forward but instead of going towards Pia, they went towards Rathod's house Mohana.Gurumaa says-"It is not surprising as Pia is new to the Daayan Vraksh but the tree recognises Mohana but cant identify that she is not the one".Pia again calls Daayan Vraksh and its roots now head towards Pia.Before Pia could understand anything daayan Vraksh took Pia and Mohana with itself and disappears.Everyone gets shocked. Nishant shout- "Pia...No..".

PART -13

Pia reaches Daayan lok with Mohana.Daayn Mohana looks them from behind and laughs as she had a new plan for them.She comes in front of them and shows them her real form of Ekaayan.