SS: Decision Making in Life(Last parts&Ques Pg 10) - Page 6

No need to stretch it out, but no abrupt endings.

Its not abrupt...but rushed..similar to my hospital scene...😆

Can't comment until I read. 😆 But if main things are over, a short epilogue is okay.

Hmm..I can say this much...parents solve the kids' problems..kids are clear what they want...Now should I write..what they get..the results..how they get..etc etc...That's what I have rushed...

No, describe all what happened to them in one or two para is okay. Or you may do it in the form of a short scene, like Rocky gets admitted and Ginny gets good result and they are all just talking about it and laughing.

yeah...I have written something similar to that...

and since I wont get a better chance...I'll end with a family scene with kids asking LS about their life decisions...and enjoying hearing their stories.. and ending on a happy family note..what say?

I thought I will have nothing to do more with this story..Now I can extend..😆 have to think a lot..because the last discussion...I want it to be serious, funny and a scene where RG knows more about LS...

Add one more part to your story then. 😆

Let me see...I write in the mornings only...So...I will think about it now..as what to do...

Epilogues comes at last by definition, put the family scene earlier then. 😆