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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: JutheeAlam

Awww so cute update ... Continue jaldi jaldi ...

Thank you so much
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CONTINUE...
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Next morning, there was a puja in Mishra house. Everyone were sitting infront of mandir where panditji was reciting mantras. Anant's eyes were searching navya. He was in his off white color kurta pyjama. Navya enters from kitchen. She was in her yellow color anarkali suit. He was just mesmerized looking at her. Navya gave prashad thali to meeta. Everyone gets up for arti. Ritika distributes flowers amongst all when Anant drops it from his hand. They both bends to take it when their heads hit
RITIKA - ouch
ANANT - oh so sorry ritika. Do you hurt it?
RITIKA - no it's ok
Ritika looks at Anant and smile while Anant was busy in his own. She goes from there towards Ranbir.
RANBIR - ritu.. Mujhe thoda jyada dena
Ritika fakes smile. She handed whole basket to Ranbir and goes from there. Ranbir looks at her and smile in disbelief. The puja came at its end. Everyone were sitting in hall
OM - so.. Aaj ka kya program he?
SUGANDHA - kya aap bhi. Sabko sabke office aur kam he
DEEPAK - are nahi bhabi. Office to apna hi he. Aur rahi bat navi aur ritu ki to un dono ne aaj chutti li hui he
RITIKA - yes aunty. Don't worry about it. Uncle sahi keh rahe he. Aaj kuch karte he
Everyone were talking and deciding about today's plan
NAVYA - papa.. Shimla ki sight seeing karne chale. Us bahane picnic bhi hojayegi
Everyone became happy hearing about picnic
MEETA - Ha ye sahi rahega.
SUGANDHA - mausam bhi acha he. Bohot maza ayega
ANANT - ha.. Bohot maza ayega
Said Anant looking at navya. Navya smile and looks down
OM - chalo then baccha log. Get ready
Everyone moves towards there room to get ready for sight seeing
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After some time Anant came down in his black t-shirt and blue jeans. While Ranbir was in red t-shirt and black jeans. Navya was wearing sky blue chudidar suit. Her hair were left open
RANBIR - navi.. Ritu kaha he!?
NAVYA - arahi he. Actually use tayar hone me thoda jyada time lagta he
She smile and started packing their picnic basket. In this process her bracelet was making sound. Anant smile looking at her Bangle and then at her
ANANT - nice bracelet
Navya looks at him in wonder. Suddenly ritika disturb them
RITIKA - hey
She was in her white top and blue jeans. Anant and navya looks elsewhere
RITIKA - kaha he sablog? Jana nahi he kya?
RANBIR - sablog bahar wait kar rahe he. Tumne hi late kiya.. Ritu
RITIKA - hey you don't call me that ok. It's ritika for you
NAVYA - hold on guys. Bahar sab wait kar rahe he. Ab chalo
Anant took the basket when navya was going to pick it. They smile looking at each other. They went from there. They did a mini bus in which they started travelling to different places of shimla. They started singing and dancing in bus
ANANT - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE
Anant started singing looking at navya. Ranbir also joins him looking at ritika
RANBIR - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE
NAVYA - DEKHUNGI SOCHUNGI
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGI
Navya also started singing. Anant and navya started dancing together. Ranbir takes ritika's hand
RANBIR - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE
RITIKA - DEKHUNGI SOCHUNGI
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGI
Ritika remove her hand and fakes anger on him. Everyone laugh at them. They reach a place near Lake. They started doing boating. Navya and ritika were dancing together while Anant and Ranbir watch them
NAVYA - HUM SATHI KITNE PURANE
FIR KYU HE ITNE ANJANE
Said navya back hugging meeta. Meeta caresses her head. Anant smile looking at them. Ritika came near them. Meeta also caresses her head
RITIKA - HUM SATHI KITNE PURANE
FIR KYU HE ITNE ANJANE
NAVYA - KYA RANG LAYE NA JANE
BACHPAN KE YE DOSTANE
Anant and Ranbir inturpts them
ANANT - KAB KAHA KYA KHABAR
JA RUKE YE NAZAR
RITIKA - ARE KYA PATA KON HE
KISKA YAHA HUMSAFAR
Ritika said smiling at Anant. Ranbir came from her behind and she got scared
RANBIR - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE
RITIKA - DEKHUNGI SOCHUNGI
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGI
Ritika said to him and goes from there. Anant came beside Ranbir while navya came from other side
ANANT - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE
Anant makes his hand forward but navya teases him and goes from there. Ranbir shakes hand with Anant while he fakes anger
They all travel to other places. It was a picnic spot, garden place. They had snacks there. Navya was standing near a tree when Ranbir came near her
RANBIR - TUM BHI TO HO DOST MERI
TUM TO MERA SATH DE DO
Navya smile at him. There Anant and ritika were playing
ANANT - TUM BHI TO HO DOST MERI
TUM TO MERA SATH DE DO
Ranbir looks at them and smile
RANBIR - APNI SAHELI KA MERE
HATHO ME TUM HATH DE DO
Navya laughs at him. She dreams about Anant
NAVYA - INTEZAR INTEZAR
AUR KYA HE YE PYAR
Anant came from her behind while she looks at him and smile
ANANT - JHUT HI YE SAHI
KEHDE WO EK BAR
Ritika came in between and looks at Anant
RITIKA - LO MENE KAHA TUMSE DOSTI KARUNGI
TUM BHI KAHO MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE
RANBIR - DEKHUNGA SOCHUNGA
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGA
Ranbir said to ritika while ritika looks angry and stamp her foot. Navya also looks at Anant
NAVYA - ARE MENE KAHA TUMSE DOSTI KARUNGI
TUM BHI KAHO MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE
ANANT - DEKHUNGA SOCHUNGA
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGA
Navya's jaw drop. She runs behind Anant while Ranbir and ritika also follow. Sugandha call them and all four headed towards the bus. It was dark now and everyone headed towards home...
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
This is really awesome ;))plz ritika ko hatao
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: silla

This is really awesome ;))plz ritika ko hatao

Itne jaldi hatao? abhi to shuruvat hui he
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Great update.pls I don't want anyone between my anya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ganganavya

Great update.pls I don't want anyone between my anya

Thank you. well the story line is that only. don't worry no one will come
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CONTINUE...
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At night in ritika's room. Ritika came from bath. She was in her night suit. She goes near her parent's photo.
RITIKA - aapko pata he na? London se Om uncle aur baki sab aye he
Ritika started talking with the photographs
RITIKA - genuinely speaking, bhul gayi thi me unko. Par ab aye he to bohot acha lagta he sabke sath. Specially Anant ke sath
She smile thinking about Anant
RITIKA - Kitna acha he na wo.. Handsome mature... Aur wo.. Uska bhai.. Bilkul irritating
Said ritika and fakes anger. Suddenly navya enters with a glass of milk. She was in her white night suit.
NAVYA - kya bate horahi he mom dad se?
RITIKA - q batau.. Secret he
Navya came near her and stand beside her
NAVYA - mujhse secret?
RITIKA - ha.. Ye mera aur mom dad ka secret he
Navya smile in disbelief
NAVYA - acha chal ye pi le. Ma ne bheja he. Aur tune teri vitamin ki tablet li thi?
Ritika smile and nodded in yes
RITIKA - navi.. Tu nahi hoti to mera kya hota?
NAVYA - what? Aaj kya philosophy ka bhut chada he tere sar pe? Kya bate kar rahi he
Saying navya was about to go when ritika stopped her.
RITIKA - no navi.. Mene to bachpan se hi unhe kho diya he jinse me pyar karti hu. Tu aur ma papa nahi hote to me to akeli hi hojati
Said ritika having little tears. Navya holds her hands.
NAVYA - pagal hogayi he tu? Tu kabhi akeli nahi hosakti. Yad rakhna hamesha ritu... Jab tak me hu tera dil kabhi nahi tutne dungi
They smile and hug each other
RITIKA - you are the best sister in this world
NAVYA - acha.. Mujhe to pata hi nahi tha
Anant and Ranbir who were standing outside heard their conversation. They also became emotional. They smile looking at navya and ritika
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Next morning, navya was getting ready in her room. She was wearing her purple anarkali suit. She was arranging her bag while humming a tune. Anant who was standing at door listen her
ANANT - wow.. Nice song
Navya looks back at him. He enters in her room. She smile at him
ANANT - infact it's my one of the favorite song.
NAVYA - acha?
ANANT - ya.. Starting yad nahi arahi he.. Kya tha??
Anant was thinking when navya sang.
NAVYA - milo na tum to hum ghabraye
ANANT - milo to aankh churaye hume kya hogaya he. Hume kya hogaya he
NAVYA - tumhi se dil ka raz bataye tumhi se raz chupaye hume kya hogaya he
They both laugh. Anant looks at her laughing.
ANANT - bohot acha gati ho
NAVYA - thank you
ANANT - waise tum kahi ja rahi ho?
NAVYA - ya.. Clinic
ANANT - oh ya.. Tum to doctor ho, Dr navya Mishra
Anant teases her while she smile
ANANT - navya.. If you don't mind.. Can I come with you
Navya gets surprised when Anant asked her about it
NAVYA - mere sath clinic?
ANANT - ya.. Waise bhi ghar pe bore horaha hu. So.. Can I?
NAVYA - ya sure
ANANT - ok.. I will just get change and come
He excuses himself and goes from there to get ready while navya became happy that Anant is coming with her
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Meeta sugandha and ritika were having chat at dinning table having breakfast
RITIKA - me aur navi jab sham ko ajayenge na aunty tab hum shopping chalenge
SUGANDHA - ha ha zarur
Suddenly Anant and navya enters. Anant was in yellow t-shirt and blue jeans
SUGANDHA - are Anant.. Kahi bahar ja rahe ho beta?
ANANT - ha ma. Navya ke sath uske clinic ja raha hu
Ritika looks at both of them. She gets little sad.
SUGANDHA - clinic.. Q?
ANANT - ha ma. Waise bhi dad aur uncle ghar par nahi he. Ranbir apne school friends se milne gaya he. Ab me aap dono ke sath kya karu. Isliye socha navya ke sath chala jata hu
MEETA - acha kiya beta tumhara man laga rahega. Navi.. Lunch?
ANANT - don't worry about it aunty. Hum bahar kar lenge
Ritika gets more sad hearing it. She inturpts between them
RITIKA - ma.. Mujhe bhi lunch mat do. Guys I will also join you
NAVYA - great. Ranbir ko bhi bula lenge. Bohot maza ayega
SUGANDHA - chalo acha he tum bacche aaj bahar lunch kar lo
Ritika smile thinking about lunch plan
NAVYA - acha ma aunty.. Hum chalte he. Bye ritu
RITIKA - bye
Navya and anant left from there. Ritika watch them going
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Anant and navya reached navya's clinic
NAVYA - come Anant
Anant enters navya's cabin. He looks around to find all the things which children loves
ANANT - wow. Bohot beautiful he
Navya smile looking at him
NAVYA - betho na
Anant sits infront of navya. Navya started checking her appointments
ANANT - waise navya.. Padhaku to tum bachpan se thi. Mujhe pata tha tum doctor ya engineer to zarur banogi.
Navya laugh hearing Anant
ANANT - you remember? Bachpan me meri basketball match jab hoti thi me apna sara homework tumhare pas lekar ata tha aur tum mujhe complete karke deti thi
Anant smile remembering past days
NAVYA - ha yad he. Aur ye bhi yad he ki teacher ko jab pata chalta tha to tumhe dat padti thi
ANANT - aur teacher jab hath par scale se marne jati thi tab tum apna hath age karti thi. Taki mujhse pehele tumhe mar pade
They both smile looking at each other
NAVYA - q na karti aisa. Tum mere bht ache dost ho. Dosti hi to he jo har rishte se upar he. Kyuki dosti hi he jo har rishte ki shuruvat he.
Anant smile looking at her. She started checking her files while Anant was still staring her. Suddenly navya's eyes falls on him. She shakes her hand before his eyes and his thoughts broke.
NAVYA - what happened? Kya soch rahe ho?
ANANT - me ye soch raha tha ki apni rest of the school life aur college me mene tumhe bohot miss kiya navya
Navya smile lightly
ANANT - bohot sari ladkiya frnds thi. Par you know koi itna close nahi
Navya's smile disappear. She gets little jealous
NAVYA - Anant.. Tumhari koi girlfriend to hogi hi
ANANT - hogi hi matlab
NAVYA - Matlab tum itne ache ho.. Obviously hogi tumhari koi... Girlfriend
She said looking down. Anant control his laughter. Suddenly he started laughing. Navya looks at him and sigh relief
ANANT - come on navya. Aisa kuch nahi he. Infact dost to bohot the. Par tumhare jaisa koi aur mila hi nahi
Navya smile at him. They both were looking into each other's eyes
ANANT (in mind) - aisa nahi he navya ki koi aur mila nahi. Par tumhe yad karne se aur tumhe pyar karne se kabhi fursat hi nahi mili. To kaise kisi aur par nazar jati?
They both were continuously looking at each other when nurse came and their concentration broke
NAVYA - yes?
NURSE - doctor.. Patient is here
NAVYA - ok
The nurse goes from there. Anant nodded in disbelief
ANANT - chalo. Ab to tum busy hogayi ho
NAVYA - some time Anant. Fir hume lunch par jana he right
Anant nodded in yes and sit at the sofa at corner. Navya started attending the patients while Anant smile looking at her.
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really awesome arghhh ritika I will kill u ..beech mein tapakna lazmi hai kya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: silla

Really awesome arghhh ritika I will kill u ..beech mein tapakna lazmi hai kya

Thank you. don't worry stay tuned for the next
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CONTINUE...
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At afternoon, Ranbir and ritika were waiting for Anant and navya at a restaurant.
RANBIR - waise ritu.. Tumhe rajesh yad he?
Ritika looks at him
RITIKA - no
RANBIR - tum rajesh ko bhul gayi ritu? Wo hamara classmate
Ritika gets irritated. She shouts at Ranbir.
RITIKA - God Ranbir please. First of all it's ritika for you. And secondly mujhe ye purani yado ke sath rehna bilkul acha nahi lagta. Purane yado ke sath rahoge to nayi yade kaise banengi?
Ranbir looks disappointed. Suddenly Anant and navya enters. Ritika gets happy seeing anant.
ANANT - sorry guys. Late hogaye. Madam ke patients ki list hi itni badi thi to kya karte
Navya hits on anant's shoulder. Ranbir and ritika smile.
RITIKA - thank god tum log aye to sahi. Nahi to is irritating ke sath me bor hojati
Ranbir's jaw drop while Anant laugh. Navya hits ritika with her elbow
NAVYA - ritu.. Control yourself
RANBIR - it's ok navya. Mujhe bachpan se adat he.
Ranbir wink at ritika while she fakes smile
ANANT - acha to kya order kare?
RANBIR - kuch Indian mangate he
ANANT AND NAVYA - gobi ke parathe
They both said together. Ranbir and ritika became amazed
ANANT - wow.. Tumhe yad he?
NAVYA - kaise bhul sakti hu?
RITIKA - kya.. Tell me also
RANBIR - gobi ke parathe Anant ke favorite he. Meeta aunty jab bhi gobi ke parathe bhejti thi navya ka tiffin Anant ka hi hota tha
RITIKA - ohh.. Yad aya
Anant ordered parathas for them. After some time the waiter serves them. Navya keep the paratha in anant's plate and a bowl of curd
NAVYA - come on Anant. Have it
Anant excitedly touch the paratha and his finger gets burnt
NAVYA - oh ho.. Garam he Anant. Baccho jaisa karte ho
Navya makes small pieces of parathas
NAVYA - garam garam paratha jab thandi thandi dahi me dubakar khate he to...
Anant holds her hand and eat the bite from her. They smile looking at each other while ritika looks at them
ANANT - kisi aur ke hath se khane ka maza hi alag hota he
Anant navya and Ranbir started eating and talking about their old days. Ritika looks uncomfortable and smile lightly.
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At night, navya was in her yellow night suit. She enters ritika's room.
NAVYA - ritu...
She looks around to find no one
NAVYA - ye ritu kaha chali gayi!?
She checks the washroom but she was neither there too. She looks confused and goes from there. She enters kitchen where meeta and sugandha were working.
NAVYA - ma. Apne ritu ko dekha kya?
MEETA - thodi der pehele dikhi thi. Kehrahi thi garden me ja rahi he.
NAVYA - thk he me ati hu
Navya goes from there while sugandha smile.
SUGANDHA - meeta bhabi kehna padega. Apne aur bhaisahab ne jitna ritika ko sambhala he utna hi navya ne apnaya he
MEETA - ha bhabi. Navi aur ritu me bilkul sagi behno jaisa pyar he. Ek dusre ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti he wo
SUGANDHA - bhagwan kare unko kabhi kisi ki nazar na lage
Sugandha and meeta smile at them and continues their work.
***
Navya enters in garden and find ritika sitting alone
NAVYA - ritu...
Ritika suddenly wipes her tears. Navya sits beside her
NAVYA - tu ro rahi thi?
RITIKA - nahi.. Me kyu roungi. Wo to bas.. Mom dad ki yad arahi thi
NAVYA - jhut mat bol. Mujhe pata he mom dad ki yad ane par tu aise nahi roti. Bata mujhe kya hua he?
Ritika wipes her tears while navya waited for her.
RITIKA - aaj lunch par, tum sab bachpan ki kitni bate kar rahe the. Aur me sirf sun rahi thi. Mujhe to kuch yad bhi nahi tha. Neglected feel horaha tha
She looks down feeling sad. Navya feel sorry for her
NAVYA - I am so sorry ritu. Mene to socha hi nahi ki tujhe neglected feel hoga. I am sorry
RITIKA - pagal he kya. Tere aur mere bich sorry kabse ane laga
Navya smile at her
NAVYA - fir bhi. Meri wajah se tu hurt hui he na?
RITIKA - nahi baba. Me to khudse hi hurt hui hu.
Navya looks at ritika who was feeling sad. She decided to cheer her
NAVYA - chod na ritu. Hamari hi galati he. Hume aisi purani bate Karni hi nahi chahiye. Aur tu hi to kehti he na purani yado ke sath rahenge to nayi yade kaise banengi. He na?
Ritika smile at her. They both hug each other. They both goes inside to have their dinner..
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TO BE CONTINUED...

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