FF: JANE DIL ME KABSE HE TU...!!! Updated @page 46 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: JutheeAlam

Awesome concept.. Continue soon plzz

Thank you so much. will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ganganavya

My fav movie on my fav people .loved u r update .next anya meet yeahhh

Mine too. sorry for the late reply. will continue soon as soon as I get free
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CONTINUE...
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Next evening, Mishra family goes to station. Navya was dressed in Orange top and black jeans. All were waiting for bajpayees to arrive.
MEETA - kitni der hogayi? Ab tak aye nahi
DEEPAK - oh ho meeta. Are London se Mumbai aur Mumbai se shimla arahe he. Time to lagta he ane me..
Navya smile hearing their cute fights. She remembered the day when Anant was leaving shimla.
FLASHBACK...
Small Anant and navya were talking at railway station.
ANANT - bye navya. Ja raha hu me
NAVYA - ha. Par apne is friend ko bhulna mat
ANANT - don't worry. Me jab wapis aaunga to tumhe yu pehechan lunga.
NAVYA - promise?
ANANT - promise
They both shake hands promising to not forget each other.
FLASHBACK ENDS...
Navya smile thinking about it. Ritika looks confused at her.
RITIKA - navi.. Kya soch rahi he?
NAVYA - huh? Nah.. Kuch nahi
Ritika nodded in disbelief. Suddenly deepak said
DEEPAK - lo agaye..
Everyone looks at the direction from where Om and rest were coming. Om goes towards deepak and they hug each other and so as sugandha and meeta.
RITIKA - wow.. Ye Anant he?
Anant and navya looks at each other. The surrounding get freeze for them at that moment. Anant's sharp eyes gets drove into navya's big eyes. He moves towards her. They smile looking at each other.
ANANT - kaha tha na. Pehechan lunga
Anant moves his hand forward. Navya met her hand with him
NAVYA - tum bilkul nahi badle
ANANT - aur tum bhi nahi
RITIKA - aur me bhi nahi
Inturpts ritika between them.
ANANT - hey.. Tum ritika ho na
Ritika nodded in yes.
RITIKA - London jakar tum badle nahi hoge par English boy zarur hogaye ho
ANANT - aisa nahi he ritika. Me chahe London me tha par mera dil to yahi tha
Said Anant looking at navya while she looked down. Ritika looks confused
RANBIR - hello girls. Humse nahi milengi? Hi navya.. Hi ritu
RITIKA - it's ritika
RANBIR - oh is it.. Me to ritu hi kahunga
RITIKA - aaahhh
Ranbir irritates her while Anant and navya laughs
NAVYA - tum dono firse shuru hogaye?
ANANT - 15 sal hogaye. Par tum dono ki fights ab bhi same
They all laugh and had a lite moment. Suddenly deepak call navya and ritika. They both moves towards them and took Om and sugandha blessing. Anant smile looking at navya
SUGANDHA - bapre meeta bhabi.. Kitni badi hogayi he dono.
DEEPAK - ha bhabi.. Bacche bade hogaye par height me bas Anant bada hua he
All laugh while Anant looks embarrassed
MEETA - ab sari bate yahi karenge? Ghar bhi to chaliye rat horahi he
All of them headed towards Mishra house
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At night, everyone were having dinner sitting on dinning
OM - shimla bilkul nahi badla yar deepu. Sachme India ki real beauty agar dekhni ho to yaha ajaye
Navya serves Om dinner
OM - wah.. Kya bat he.. Bhabi bohot achi khushbu arahi he. Sugandha ne to meri dieting karake papad bana diya he. Aapke hath ka Khana mene bht miss kiya
MEETA - acha to bhaisahab.. Zara ye khana taste karke dekhiye. Meri navi mujhse bhi acha banati he
Everyone gets surprised. Anant looks at navya in wonder
SUGANDHA - are wah beta. Ye khana tumne banaya he?
NAVYA - Ji aunty
RANBIR - aur ritu tum
RITIKA - no no.. Mujhe nahi ata ye khana wana banana
OM - chalo acha he. Deepu teri ek beti traditional to dusri modern. Par dono ke sanskar ek saman
Navya and ritika smile looking at each other. Everyone started having dinner. Anant looks at navya while she also looks at him. They both smile looking at each other
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At late night, navya was sitting in garden near camp fire and reading a book. She was in her pink night suit. Anant who was in his blue t-shirt and trouser came near her
ANANT - hi
NAVYA - hey
He sits beside her.
NAVYA - soye nahi?
ANANT - jet lag
NAVYA - oh
Navya smile and close her book and kept aside. Anant scrunched his eyebrow looking at the book. He takes the book in his hand
ANANT - love story?
Navya looks at him and smile
NAVYA - ya.. It's my favorite novel
ANANT - great.. Tum to romantic nikli
Navya laughs by his statement while he smile looking at her
NAVYA - me romantic hu.. But sirf khudke liye. You know is novel me 101 type ki love stories he jo mene 101 times padhli he
ANANT - wow.. Bravo.. You know ek kahawat he. Every love story is beautiful but ours is my favorite
Said Anant looking at navya. Navya also looks at him
ANANT - Kitna miss kiya mujhe navya?
Anant asked her. Navya looks away smiling
NAVYA - Kal ma ne ghar me puja rakhi he. Jaldi uthna he. Bohot late hogaya he
Anant nodded in yes
NAVYA - chale?
ANANT - yah
They both gets up to go in.
NAVYA - good night
ANANT - same to you
Navya smile and goes from there while Anant smile looking at her and headed towards his room...
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Wohoo lovely ;) great. Updt sooon
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#25
Wow this is really awesome can't wait for next update :))
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#26
Awww my cutipies . loved their first meet.love them sooo much .I could just see them in front of me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Awww so cute update ... Continue jaldi jaldi ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -meru-

Wohoo lovely ;) great. Updt sooon

Thank you. will continue soon
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Originally posted by: silla

Wow this is really awesome can't wait for next update :))

Thank you so much. Glad you like it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: ganganavya

Awww my cutipies . loved their first meet.love them sooo much .I could just see them in front of me

Thanks alottt. will continue soon
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