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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for this fic updates
plz next time update this one...
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Originally posted by: lovelypari19

Waiting for this fic updates
plz next time update this one...

I will definitely update this one but after some days. Till then keep reading
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please update soon missing
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Hello lovely people.. I am back.. Enjoy the upcoming updates.. Thank you
CONTINUE...
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Next day at restaurant, ritika and anant were waiting for navya and Ranbir. Anant was continuously staring his watch and looking at ritika while she was just smiling at him
RITIKA - wo bhai.. Actually na Ranbir ko adat he hamesha late hi karta he. But he is very serious in his work
ANANT - mene kuch bola?
Ritika nodded in no. Suddenly anant's cell rang. He excuses himself and goes out to talk. Here navya and Ranbir came outside the cafe
RANBIR - navi.. Tu andar ja me Ata hu
NAVYA - tu kaha ja raha he?
RANBIR - Are wo uska bhai araha he na to bouquet lene jata hu. Bas 5 min me aya
Ranbir goes from there while navya went inside. Navya was looking here and there and moving backwards. Anant was talking on phone. They were backfacing each other. Navya turns around and anant also turns and again they both bang with each other. Their eyes met. Anant was holding navya
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
RAB NE MILAYA TUMHE
HOTO PE SAJAYA TUMHE
NAGME SUGAYA TUMHE
PAYA MENE PAYA TUMHE
SABSE CHUPAYA TUMHE
SAPNA BANAYA TUMHE
NINDO ME BULAYA TUMHE
They both were looking at each other. Their concentration broke when Ranbir and ritika came there
ANANT - tum??
NAVYA - tum??
Anant makes her stand
RITIKA - bhai.. Aap jante he navya ko?
NAVYA - ohh.. Mjhe Kal hi samajh jana chahiye tha ki tum kisi antique family se hi belong karte hoge
Anant's jaw drop. While Ranbir and ritika looks in confusion
ANANT - mjhe b Kal hi samajh jana chahiye tha ki tum b kisi joker ki hi behen hogi
NAVYA - how dare you call my brother like that?
ANANT - and how dare you call my family like that?
RANBIR - one minute.. Navi tu mujhe batsyegi what's going on!?
NAVYA - kuch nahi Ranbir. Kal is akdu se galati se takra kya gayi ye to piche pad gaya.
ANANT - kya? Me piche pada hu? Tum padi ho mere piche
NAVYA - are? Ek to chori upar se sina jori?
ANANT - sina... What??
NAVYA - nothing.. Tum jaise akdu ko kuch nahi samjhana
ANANT - ha to mjhe b shock nahi he tumse bat karne ka
Anant and navya looks at each other in anger. They left from there while Ranbir and ritika looks at them going
RITIKA - what is going on yar Ranbir
RANBIR - mjhe pata tha.. Jab atom bomb aur nuclear bomb milenge tab dhamaka hi hoga
They look at each other and gets worried
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At evening, ritika was angry on Anant. She was waiting for him. He enters from office and sat on sofa. Ritika goes near him and stand folding her hands
RITIKA - aapne aaj navya se aise bat q ki?
Anant gave a look at her
ANANT - ritika.. Me office se abhi abhi aya hu. Ghar akar mujhe pani k liye puchna chahiye to tu ye kya lekar bethi he?
RITIKA - bhai please.. Ye sab aap intentionally Kar rahe he. Aapne bola tha aap Ranbir ko ek chance denge
Anant looks elsewhere
ANANT - mjhe is bare me koi bat nahi Karni he
Ritika pouts and left from there while crying. This all was witness by sugandha and Om. Sugandha come near Anant
SUGANDHA - ye kya chal raha he?
ANANT - kya mom?
SUGANDHA - tu intentionally ignore Kar raha he Ranbir ko?
Anant realized that he can hide from whole world but not from his mom. He nodded in yes
SUGANDHA - you are impossible Anant. Aaj tak mene tujhe kuch nahi bola he. Ritika ke liye sare decision tune liye mene tujhe kabhi nahi roka. Par is bar bat mere beti ke Zindagi ki he uske khushi ki he
ANANT - I know.. Par mom. Mera Ranbir ki behen ke sath jhagda he
SUGANDHA - iska matlab tu jhagde ka asar Ranbir aur ritika par hone dega? Are Kamal karta he ye ladka
Anant looks in anger. Om indicate sugandha to keep quiet. He goes near Anant
OM - Anant.. Tune bola tha tu Ranbir ko ek chance dega. He na
Anant nodded in yes.
OM - sirf isliye ki tera uski behen se jhagda he tu usse bat nahi karega? Mene tumhe Kal b samjhaya tha Anant. Ritika par bharosa rakho
Anant looks at Om and nodded in yes
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Here in Mishra house
NAVYA - aap log q nahi samajh rahe? Us akdu se mera jhagda he. Aur me nahi chahti us akdu ki behen is ghar me aye
Meeta deepak Ranbir and Dadi were listening to her shouts
MEETA - ye kya bat hui? Ritika ka bhai aisa he to kya ritika b waisi hi hogi? Kaha likha he aisa?
DEEPAK - correct. Ab tu Hitler he navi iska matlab ye thodi ki Ranbir b Hitler he
Navya's jaw drop hearing deepak's joke. Dadi giggle
MEETA - deepak.. Me samjha rahi hu na use
NAVYA - ma please.. Mjhe kuch nahi samajhna
Ranbir keep his hand on his head
MEETA - Kamal karti he ye ladki.. Ma aap hi kuch boliye
Dadi goes near navya
DADI - navi.. Tu to meri itni samajhdar bacchi he fir ye kya zid lekar bethi he?
Navya looks at Dadi. She hugs her. Dadi caresses her head
DADI - dekh navi Ranbir pyar karta he usse. Aur tu hi bata isme kya samajhdari he ki ritika ke bhai se tera jhagda he to tu Ranbir aur ritika ki shadi nahi hone degi?
Navya left her and looks down
DADI - aur tune hi kaha na tu sirf ek bar hi mili he uske bhai se. To kya ek mulakat me hi tujhe wo akdu aur jhagdalu lag raha he?
Navya looks at Dadi and nodded in no
DADI - to beta thodi samajhdari dikha. Apne bhai par uske pyar par bharosa dikha
Navya looks at Ranbir and nodded in yes
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" LOVE'S FIRST STAGE IS FIGHT, NOT SIGHT... " isn't it??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
really loved anya
characters in this fic
it's like a treat for me to read
their super cute fight
really love them alot
this story is getting amazing
plz do cont asap dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelypari19

Awesome update
really loved anya
characters in this fic
it's like a treat for me to read
their super cute fight
really love them alot
this story is getting amazing
plz do cont asap dear

Thanks alottt dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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woww awesome update... continue soon..
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CONTINUE..
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Next day, all four of them were sitting at a table in restaurant. Anant and navya were sitting infront of each other and so as Ranbir and ritika. Ranbir decided to break the silence
RANBIR - ehm.. Navi.. Ye ritika he. And ritika ye meri twin sister.. Navya
Ritika said hi to navya to which she smile lightly
RITIKA - bhai ye Ranbir he. And he is my big bro, Anant bhai
Anant also gave a smile
ANANT - waise.. Aaj bhi aap log bohot jaldi aye he
Navya looks angrily at him. Actually today also Ranbir and navya reached late and anant have to wait for them
NAVYA - wo kya he na mere bhai ko bohot kam hote he. He is so busy you know
ANANT - acha?? Apke bhai k liye meri behen se jyada kuch important he?
RITIKA - chodiye na bhai.. Ab agaye he na
RANBIR - I am extremely sorry for that. Aap puchiye na aapko jo puchna he
ANANT - ya sure but.. Let the girls talk first
Anant indicated navya to talk
NAVYA - so ritika.. Kya age he tumhari!?
RITIKA - waise to you should never ask girls their age but you are also girl so I will tell you.. I am 23
NAVYA - only 23? Me b 24 ki hu and I think it's not proper age for me to get married. Tum to fir b mjhse choti ho
ANANT - my sister is well settled in her carrier. She is dance trainer aur acha khasa kama leti he. Isliye shadi karna chahti he
Ritika looks down feeling nervous
NAVYA - fir b. It's quite early. Well leave it. Acha ye batao tum mere bhai se kaha mili?
Ritika looks at Ranbir
RANBIR - navi.. Bataya to mene tujhe
ANANT - lagta he tumhari behen ko bhulne ki bimari he. You know short term memory loss
Anant smirk at navya while navya looks in anger
NAVYA - mujhe yad he. Fir b mujhe ritika se sunna he
RITIKA - actually we were Facebook friends. Ek common friend ke through we became friends. Fir kuch din chat kiya and then decided to meet aur milte hi I fall for Ranbir
Said ritika looking at Ranbir
NAVYA - itni jaldi pyar hogaya tumhe? Strange
ANANT - what's so strange in that? It depends. It's called love at first sight you won't understand
NAVYA - Ranbir tumne bataya nahi ki tum ritika nahi balki uske bhai se shadi Kar rahe ho
Ranbir chocked coffee and looks at navya in amusement while giggle. Anant's jaw drop
ANANT - what?
NAVYA - ha. Me puch ritika ko rahi hu answer tum Kar rahe ho. That's why
ANANT - me uska bhai hu. Wo Har bat mjhse puchkar karti he
NAVYA - pyar karne se pehele pucha tha? Nahi na.. Then please keep mum
Navya scolded Anant to which he folded his hand and keep silent
NAVYA - to ritika.. Ye batao. Tumhara favorite food kya he
RITIKA - I love chicken
Navya's eyes became wide while Ranbir hit his hand on his head
NAVYA - kya.. Non veg?
RITIKA - yes
Navya looks at Ranbir for which he fake smile
NAVYA - you don't know or what. We are mishra's. Pure brahmin family. Hamare yaha chicken kya egg b nahi chalta
ANANT - so what. We are also brahmin. But we eat non veg. What's the big deal
NAVYA - tumhare yaha chalta hoga. Hamare yaha nahi. Ritika ko non veg chodna hoga
ANANT - kya?? Q?? Why should my sister sacrifice? Wo chicken ke bager nahi reh sakti. Aap log apne ghar ka rule change kijiye
NAVYA - hamare ghar ane wali he wo. She should compromise
ANANT - to thk he. Agar aisa he to Ranbir hamare ghar rahega shadi ke bad
NAVYA - kya Matlab? Ghar jamai? Tumhe lagta he mera bhai ghar jamai banega? No.. Never...
ANANT - to tumhe lagta he meri behen chicken chodegi? No.. Never..
They were continuously arguing with each other. Ritika and Ranbir were totally silent looking at their world war. They were looking at Anant when he was speaking and then at navya when she was speaking. Finally they look at each other and keep their hands on their head feeling frustrated while Anant and navya goes on...
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" I TAKE TWO STEPS FORWARD, I TAKE TWO STEPS BACK..
WE COME TOGETHER BECAUSE, OPPOSITE ATTRACTS?? "- true??
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
A haha hah hah damn funny please update fast ;))
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#30
Fantabulous update
their fight was sooo funny 😆
i like that line of navya
ranbir tum ne btaya
nhi tum ritika k bhai
se shadi kr rhy hoho 🤣
plz cont as soon as possible 😊
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