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Posted: 8 years ago
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SUNSHINE COLONY, 3RD FLOOR FLAT 302
BAJPAYEE 'S...
Ritika was roaming here and there in hall waiting for Anant. Om who was sitting on sofa reading newspaper looks at sugandha who was arranging plates on dining. They talk with eyes. Om decided to ask ritika
OM - kiska he ye tumko intezar me hu na, dekh lo idhar to ek bar me hu na
Om started singing while sugandha giggle. Ritika gave a look at him
RITIKA - dad.. Please.. Don't act as if you don't know
OM - are seriously
Ritika looks sad and goes towards Om
RITIKA - dad.. Bhai Kab ayenge?
SUGANDHA - ohho.. Ajayega. Kya jaldi he tujhe?
RITIKA - jaldi he mom. Aaj kisi bhi halat me, me bhai se Ranbir ke bare me bat karke rahungi
Suddenly door bell rang. Ritika runs towards the door to open. Anant gets in tired and angry. Ritika takes his bag from him and makes him sit on sofa. She gave him water. He looks at her confused
ANANT - kya chahiye tumhe?
Om and sugandha giggle
RITIKA - bhai.. Kya me apki sewa bina kuch chahe nahi Kar sakti?
ANANT - nahi
Om and sugandha started laughing while ritika pouts
RITIKA - bhai...
Anant sigh and looks at ritika
ANANT - acha baba sorry. Ab bata meri pyari behen kya chahti he?
RITIKA - jo apki ye pyari behen chahti he wo use doge?
Asked ritika curiously while Anant understood what she was talking about
ANANT - ritika I think we had a lot of conversation on that topic
RITIKA - bhai please.. Ek bar mil lijiye
ANANT - the topic is closed ritika
Anant was about to leave when Om stop him
OM - Anant ek bar sun to lo wo kya bol rahi he
ANANT - kya sunu dad? Wo ladka Ranbir Mishra. Pata nahi kon he wo, kya karta he, kaisa he, aur ye chahti he me iski shadi usse kara du
RITIKA - isliye to bol rahi hu bhai ek bar mil lijiye. Aur usse milenge tabhi to pata chalega wo kaisa he
Sugandha come near Anant
SUGANDHA - Anant we all know how much worried you are about ritika. But beta ab ritika badi hogayi he. Iske life ke decision ye khud le sakti he
OM - aur Anant.. Tum usse mile bagair hi kaise bol sakte ho he is not good. Apne behen ke choice par bharosa rakho
Anant looks at sugandha who nodded in yes. He then look at Om who patted on his shoulder. Finally he looks at ritika who was pleading him with eyes. He took a deep breath
ANANT - thk he.. Milenge
Ritika became happy and was about to hug him but he stopped her
ANANT - but meri ek shart he
RITIKA - kya bhai?
ANANT - me usse sirf ek bar hi milunga. Agar thk lagunga to hi decision lunga.. Otherwise...
RITIKA - ha ha bhai.. Done
Ritika agreed to him and hug him. Anant looks tensed.
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ARYA ARCADE, 4TH FLOOR, FLAT 402
MISHRA'S...
RANBIR - Sach ritika.. Tumhare bhai man gaye?
RITIKA - ha now please tum b navya ko mana lena
RANBIR - ok I will try
RITIKA - bye love you
RANBIR - love you too
Ranbir think about ritika and turn around to see deepak standing
RANBIR - papa
DEEPAK - ye kya horaha tha?
RANBIR - papa wo..
Ranbir looks afraid. Deepak suddenly burst into laughter
DEEPAK - he bhagwan.. Itna q darta he apne papa se?
RANBIR - kya papa.. Aap b na
He sigh relief and deepak comes towards him
DEEPAK - me teri behen navya thodi hu. Jo gussa Kar jaunga. Chal bata kya kaha meri hone wali bahu ne
RANBIR - yahi ki uska bhai mujhse milne ke liye ready he
DEEPAK - are wah good.. Tu bhi lekar ja navi ko
RANBIR - wohi to papa. Navi to mujhse bat bhi nahi Kar rahi. Kuch bhi bolne jata hu to Dat deti he. Meri to ye samajh nahi Ata bada me hu ya ye
DEEPAK - hmm.. Waise teri behen ko manane ka ek idea he mere pas
Ranbir looks at deepak and he wink
In kitchen meeta and navya were working. Suddenly song played in hall
BARA MAHINE ME
BARA TARIKE SE
TUJHKO PYAR JATAUNGA RE
Navya and meeta enters in hall. They look at Ranbir who was dancing like Salman Khan. Dadi was sitting on sofa and enjoying
DHINKA CHIKA DHINKA CHIKA
DHINKA CHIKA DHINKA CHIKA
RE RE RE RE...
Navya nodded disbelief. She goes near music player and switched it off. Navya folded her hand
NAVYA - what's going on?
RANBIR - dhinka chika...
NAVYA - what??
Ranbir looks down while navya looks angry. Just then she smile while Ranbir also smile. Both of them hug each other
NAVYA - you are unbelievable Ranbir
RANBIR - tune mjhe maf kiya na
NAVYA - ha baba
RANBIR - to tu chal rahi he na usse milne
Smile disappear from her face. She looks at Dadi,deepak and meeta
NAVYA - oh so this was your plan
Navya was about to leave when Ranbir stopped her
RANBIR - navi... Me tujhe order deta hu
NAVYA - kya
Ranbir looks at deepak who showed him thumb up
RANBIR - ye tere bade bhai ka order he. Tu uske sath Kal chal rahi he teri bhabi se milne
NAVYA - what nonsense Ranbir bada bhai and all
RANBIR - 6 minute hi sahi.. Bada hu me tujhse.. Aur bado ki bat manni chahiye.. He na Dadi
Navya looks at Dadi
DADI - ha bhai.. Navi. Bado ki bat to manni chahiye
Navya nodded in disbelief. She looks at Ranbir.
NAVYA - ok
All of them became happy. Ranbir hugs her
RANBIR - I love you navi
NAVYA - pagal kahi ka
Ranbir smile and navya looks worried
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" I knew the first time we met.. You'd be kinda hard to forget.. " I think it goes correct with anya right??
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Nicee updttt...loved it cont asap :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Superb update
both were so worried
for their siblings alliance 😛
but finally both are agreed
waiting for their unforgettable meeting 😉
do continue soon dear
Saumya96 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: lovelypari19

Superb update
both were so worried
for their siblings alliance 😛
but finally both are agreed
waiting for their unforgettable meeting 😉
do continue soon dear

Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Hello dear friends.. Hope you all are doing well. And hope that you are liking my updates. I want to inform you that I will not be able to update for one week as I am little busy in my work. But I will try to update atleast one of my FF but not both.. So please bear it for 1 or 2 weeks.. Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Super update... Finally Mann gye dono, waiting for their meeting continue soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Very nice update.thanks alot for regular updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Nitshamya

Super update... Finally Mann gye dono, waiting for their meeting continue soon dear

Thank you so much. Will continue after a week or two
Saumya96 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ganganavya

Very nice update.thanks alot for regular updates

Thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Hello guys.. Common keep this topic alive. I will update after a week
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