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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful update
waiting for flashback
cont soon dear
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Originally posted by: -meru-

Woww amazing one.. Itna late updt na kiya karoo cont asap plsssoooi

Sorry dear but I will definitely update soon
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Wonderful update
waiting for flashback
cont soon dear

Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anant at Navya's place. Interesting updateds continue soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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FLASHBACK
Navya was sitting with her friends near canteen. And anant was also some distance away from her watching her with smiling face. She was laughing and enjoying with her friends and anant become happy looking at her when suddenly someone disturb him
ADITYA - hey dude
Anant feel irritated and looks in anger at his friend.
ANANT - q aya hai tu yaha mjhe disturb karne?
ADITYA - ohh disturb.. Well me tjhe lecture k liye bulane aya hu. Come on lets go.
ANANT - no. I am not in. First year have their off and that's why no lecture for me.
Anant smiled and again started looking at navya. While aditya nodded in disbelief.
ADITYA - anant.. I think you are madly in love with her
Smiled anant still looking at her. Aditya sits beside her
ADITYA - why don't you try to say it dude?
Anant looks at him
ANANT - I don't know. Par meri himmat nahi hoti. We know each other and she takes me as her friend. May be I don't think she thinks about me like that.
Saying anant again looked at her and at the same time navya also look at him. She smiles at him.
ADITYA - may be you are wrong. I think she also feel for you.
Anant goes in thoughts staring at her. Anant started playing guitar and singing...
ANANT - MERE MAN YE BATA DE TU
KIS OR CHALA HE TU KYA PAYA NAHI TUNE
KYA DHUNDH RAHA HE TU
Everyone gets circulated near him. While navya was also watching him.
JO HE ANKAHI
JO HE ANSUNI
WO BAT KYA HE BATA
Anant watch navya while she smiles looking at him
MITWA... KAHE DHADKAN HE TUJHSE PYAAR
MITWA... YE KHUDSE TO NA TU CHUPA
He moved towards her slowly playing guitar and singing continuously.
MERE MAN YE BATA DE TU
KIS OR CHALA HE TU
KYA PAYA NAHI TUNE
KYA DHUNDH RAHA HE TU
JO HE ANKAHI
JO HE ANSUNI
WO BAT KYA HE BATA
MITWA... KAHE DHADKAN HE TUJHSE PYAAR
MITWA... YE KHUDSE TO NA TU CHUPA
...
Next day navya was near notice board reading notice while anant was near her dreaming and singing.
JIVAN DAGAR ME PREM NAGAR ME
JIVAN DAGAR ME PREM NAGAR ME
AYA NAZAR ME JABSE KOI HE
She started walking while anant follow her
TU SOCHTA HE TU PUCHTA HE
JISKI KAMI THI KYA YE WOHI HE
Anant stopped and opens his arms and closed his eyes dreaming
HA YE WOHI HAI
HA YE WOHI HE
Navya looks at him and he also look at her
TU EK PYASA AUR YE NADI HE
KAHE NAHI ISKO TU KHULKE BATAYE
She smiled and left from there
JO HE ANKAHI
JO HE ANSUNI
WO BAT KYA HAI BATA
MITWA... KAHE DHADKAN HE TUJHSE PYAAR
MITWA... YE KHUDSE TO NA TU CHUPA
...
Anant was sitting near her classroom
TERI NIGAHE PA GAYI RAHE
PAR TU YE SOCHE JAU NA JAU
He leaned to the wall and closed his eyes
YE ZINDAGI JO HE NACHTI TO
KYU BEDIYO ME HE TERE PAV
Suddenly navya patted on his shoulder and gave him her hand. And they both started dancing
PRIT KI DHUN PAR NACH LE PAGAL
UDTA AGAR HE UDNE DE ACHAL
KAHE NAHI ISKO TU KHULKE BATAYE
JO HE ANKAHI
JO HE ANSUNI
WO BAT KYA HE BATA
Anant kneeled on his knees and was singing opening arms.
MITWA... KAHE DHADKAN HE TUJHSE PYAAR
MITWA... YE KHUDSE TO NA TU CHUPA
They both were staring each other. Anant was still kneeling infront of her while navya was having smiling face
ANANT - I love you navya
NAVYA - I love you too anant
Anant stand and they both hugs each other while the crowd surrounding them were clapping for them.
FLASHBACK ENDS...
Anant applied brakes and stops his car infront of their house. He closed his eyes and leaned to the seat.
ANANT - I really loved you navya. Itne salo se na me tumhe bhul paya hu aur na hi kabhi bhulunga. I really love you
A small tear fall from his eyes he wipes it and headed towards their home.
Next day it was Sunday. Navya was doing her work of cleaning house while ranbir was also helping her.
RANBIR - navya
NAVYA - hmm
RANBIR -Aaj kya din bhar safai hi karni hai?
NAVYA - matlab
Ranbir moves towards her
RANBIR - Sunday he. Common let's go for a movie
NAVYA - aaabbb wo movie
RANBIR - I don't want to listen anything today we both best friend will enjoy outside. Shopping movie and then dinner. What say?
Navya smiled lightly while agreeing with ranbir
RANBIR - I will book tickets
Saying he went from there when Navya's phone rang. Her face shows anger reading the name which is displayed. It was from her home. She picks the call.
DEEPAK - navya
She kept quiet while deepak was talking with her
DEEPAK - kaisi he meri bacchi? Khush to he na?
Navya shows no interest to talk with deepak. Here deepak looks sad towards meeta. While she took phone from him kept it on loudspeaker and talk with her.
MEETA - navi...
Navya's face gets little light up hearing meeta's voice
NAVYA - ma... Howz you?
MEETA - I am fine beta. Tu kaisi he?
NAVYA - Waise hi jaise 3 salo se hu
Meeta and deepak looks at each other while navya also look down sad
MEETA - damad ji kaise he thk he na
NAVYA - hmm
MEETA - navi when you will come home it's ages now you haven't came beside living in same city. Your dad is also missing you. Lo ek bar unse bat karlo
Deepak with a hope waited for navya to speak
NAVYA- ma I have lots of work. I will talk to you later
Saying navya cuts the call while deepak looks sad
MEETA - aap q tension le rahe he. Give her some time
DEEPAK - I am waiting from last 3 years meeta
Deepak gets emotional while meeta makes him understand
MEETA - isliye me aapse bol rahi thi let do her what she wanted. But you didn't...
She stop seeing tears in deepak 's eyes. She patted his shoulder while he goes in thoughts...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww cute updt... Loved it Anya scn awsm tha ...cont sooon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -meru-

Awww cute updt... Loved it Anya scn awsm tha ...cont sooon

Thank you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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At evening, in a mall. Navya was searching a top for her when her eyes fall on a black color top. She was about to touch it when at the same time one more hand tried to touch it. Navya looks at the lady beside her. She was ritika.
NAVYA - so sorry. You have a look at it
Ritika smiled and took the dress in her hand.
RITIKA - isn't it amazing. Hum dono ki choice ek hi he. We both like the same thing
They both share a smile. Navya started searching for another one when ritika looks at navya and then at the dress
RITIKA - excuse me
Navya looks at her when she called her
RITIKA - you keep this with you
NAVYA - no... Me kaise...
RITIKA - believe me ye apke sath jyada achi lagegi
Saying this ritika gave her the dress and she took it while anant watched this from distance. He goes towards them
NAVYA - thank you
Smiled navya
ANANT - hi navya
Navya looks at him and so as he. They both had an eye lock while ritika watched both of them
RANBIR - navya
Their eye lock broke by ranbir
RANBIR - hey anant
RITIKA - you all know each other?
Asked ritika curiously
ANANT - ritika wo ye Mr ranbir and ye navya.. Mene tumhe bataya tha na that accident
RITIKA - ohh to aap he Navya. Jisne mere pati k hosh udaye he
Navya looks at her in amusement and so as anant. While ranbir look in confusion
RITIKA - I mean accident ke bat se anant usi ke bare me sochte rehte he. Waise howz you now?
NAVYA - I am fine
ANANT - she is ritika... My.. Wife
Said anant looking at navya while she also looks at him. And he looks elsewhere.
RANBIR - nice to meet you Mrs bajpayee. Waise you are very lucky to have him. He is a great man
RITIKA - you are lucky either Mr Singh. Navya you are so beautiful. Jab anant ne mjhe apke bare me bataya tab hi me Jan gayi thi aap me zarur kuch hai
They all share a light moment while navya and anant looks elsewhere
ANANT - ritika we should leave now
RITIKA - ok
RANBIR - nice to meet you. Bye
Ranbir and navya goes from one side while anant and ritika goes from other. Anant looks back at navya and so as she. They wanted to talk with each other but they couldn't.
After some days anant was working in his office.
PEON - sir
Anant looks at the peon who was standing at the entrance.
PEON - aapse milne koi aya he
Anant looks confused
ANANT - kon
PEON - Koi ranbir Singh he
Anant gets surprised hearing this
ANANT - unhe andar bhejo
The peon went from there and in some time ranbir enters
RANBIR - hello anant kaise ho
ANANT - fine and you
RANBIR - me too
ANANT - have a sit
They both sat. Ranbir looks here and there while anant was confused as why he was here.
ANANT - from where did you get my office address
RANBIR - bas mil gaya. You never know what we will get and what not
Joke ranbir while anant smiled
RANBIR - actually purposely aya hu. This coming Saturday navya is celebrating her birthday. I have kept a small party just relatives and some friends. So I cordially invite you and your wife.
ANANT - ha navya ka birthday araha he na
Anant goes in thoughts when ranbir disturb him
RANBIR - anant I don't want any excuses you and ritika ji have to come
ANANT - sure. Aaabbb ranbir take my card. If you want any help then please let me know
RANBIR - definitely
Anant gave him the card and he except it
RANBIR - I should leave now. Bohot se kam baki hai. But feel free to come. OK
ANANT - sure
Ranbir goes from there while anant thought about navya
At evening navya and ranbir was doing arrangements of party
NAVYA - ranbir. Tumhe nahi lagta insab ki sachme zarurat nahi thi
RANBIR - common navya. Birthday sal me ek baar ata hai. And you don't want to celebrate it. How boring?
NAVYA - am I a small kid to celebrate my birthday? Ye sab
RANBIR - sshh no arguments. Concentrate on your work
Navya nodded in disbelief. Suddenly her eyes falls on card which was kept on table. She picks it up. She was shocked to learn that it was Anant's card.
NAVYA - ranbir ye
RANBIR - ohh that. Actually anant told me that if I need any help then we can contact him
Navya smiled looking at Anant's courtesy.
RANBIR - navya
Called ranbir for which she came out of her thoughts.
RANBIR - ye guests ki list he check it once
He gave the list to navya and she started reading it. She stopped reading when her eyes fall on deepak name. She looks angrily towards ranbir
NAVYA - why did you invited papa?
RANBIR - navya what you saying?
NAVYA - you very well know ranbir I don't talk to him. Then why you called him?
RANBIR - first of all navya they are your parents. And secondly mujhe nahi pata kyu tum papa se naraz ho to jahir si bat he I will invite him
Navya looks elsewhere
RANBIR - navya he is your dad. I don't know what had happened between you both but... You should respect him.
Saying ranbir goes from there while navya think about the past...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woww navya's bday :p I wish aik chotu sa romantic Anya scn mile :p in next updt.. Loved it cont soon plss
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -meru-

Woww navya's bday :p I wish aik chotu sa romantic Anya scn mile :p in next updt.. Loved it cont soon plss

Sure dear romantic scenes honge but you have to wait for it. Till then enjoy my ongoing track. Thank you so much
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