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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oooppsss ritika anant ki wife aur ranbir navya ka husband :D good one cont soon
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Hey that was really unexpected
ritika is anant's wife
but they all are not happy
with each other but
update was awesome
plz cont asap dear
will eagerly wait for the next...
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Uff Anant married Ritika and NAvya with Ranbir?? interesting waiting for more updates
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Thank you so much guys. CONTINUED
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Some days later navya was recovered from her injury now. She was a working woman and hence was now at her office. It was evening navya left from office to reach home when her cell phone rang.
NAVYA - ha ranbir
RANBIR - navya.. You right?
NAVYA - ya don't worry
RANBIR - I told you to rest but you don't listen me.
NAVYA - come on ranbir. Ab me thk hu aur kitna chutti lungi office se. You don't worry I will be back home soon.
Saying she cut the call. She was searching for taxi when suddenly a car stands infront of her. She became surprise to look at the driver's seat. He was anant. He came towards her. They both looks at each other shockingly. Words were far away emotions were close. They want to cry their eyes were telling this. But looking at the situation they look away controlling their emotions.
ANANT - hi navya
She wipes her tears.
NAVYA - hi
ANANT - kaisi ho?
NAVYA - kya lagta he tumhe anant
They look into each other eyes. Navya looks away.
NAVYA - I am alright. What about you?
ANANT - fine
They were searching for words to talk. Finally navya broke the silence.
NAVYA - thank you anant.
ANANT - thanks? For what
NAVYA - if you wouldn't save my life that day then don't know what...
ANANT - navya please. Don't make me feel ashamed by saying thanks
They again looked elsewhere and were silent.
ANANT - bohot time bad mile he na hum
Said anant looking elsewhere while navya smile lightly
NAVYA - 3 saal baad
ANANT - 3 saal 7 mahine 13 dino bad.
As soon as anant said this navya looks with a jerk towards him. He remembered everything - she thought. They were looking at each other.
NAVYA - I should leave now
ANANT - hmm.. Your husband must be waiting for you
NAVYA - and so as your wife
Said navya quietly.
NAVYA - bye
She was about to leave when he stop her
ANANT - bhul gayi tum kya kehti thi Navya. Bye kehne se agli bar milne ka chance khatam ho jata hai. So never say bye.
She looks at him with teary eyes.
NAVYA - hamare milne ka chance to 3 saal pehle hi khatam hogaya tha anant.
They were silent. Finally navya left from there while anant was also having little tears. She took taxi and sat there leaning her head at back. Getting flashback before 6 years when they were in their college days...
FLASHBACK
It was a normal middle class house in one of the area in Mumbai. Meeta was working in kitchen making breakfast while deepak was sitting in hall reading morning newspaper. The Wall clock makes sound when it shows 7.
MEETA - navya...
Called meeta from kitchen
In her bedroom the beauty was sleeping quietly. As soon as the alarm rang she gets up having a smiling face. She was beautiful long hair sharp eyes rossy lips and innocent beauty. Meeta enters there
MEETA - navya
NAVYA - good morning ma
MEETA - morning beta. Common be quick. Otherwise you will get late for your college
NAVYA - ma kya aap b. Kabhi to kuch aur bola karo
Meeta smiled and came near her
MEETA - ok. Bolti hu. Common be quick. Otherwise you will get late for your first day in college.
Laugh both of them. Then navya hugs meeta while she lovingly caresses her head.
MEETA - navi. Aajse tu college jayegi. Teri zindagi ka ye naya safar shuru hone jaraha hai
NAVYA - yes ma. And I am very much excited for this.
Meeta sits beside her
MEETA - navya it's good that you are excited for this. But don't forget one thing. Tumhe college padhne k liye bheja ja raha he na hi... Na hi kisi aur...
Meeta stopped as a small tear fall from her eyes. Navya makes her understand
NAVYA - ma please
MEETA - Whatever renu did navi I don't want you to repeat it. Renu ko college me pyar hua aur use wo ladka humse jyada important laga. Aur Hum sabko chodkar wo us ladke ke sath bhag gayi.
NAVYA - she was in love ma
MEETA - navya... You don't know your dad or what. You know very well how much your dad hate love and love marriages.
Navya looks sad while meeta wipes her tears.
MEETA - yad rakhna navya renu ki wajah se already tumhare papa ko bohot taklif hui hai please you don't do anything like that.
DEEPAK - meeta
Deepak called her from hall
MEETA - me ati hu. You get ready for college.
Smile navya while meeta left from there.
At college navya reached there. She was looking immensely beautiful in white color chudidar kurti with open hair and silver jhumke and bangles. Every guy there was looking at this beautiful while she was nervous searching for her friend.
APPY - haaawww...
She gets frightened when appy comes there from her behind. Appy was her best friend.
NAVYA - kya tu bhi. Me kabse tera wait kar rahi hu
APPY - sorry darling. You know na mjhse subah jaldi utha nahi jata
NAVYA - college ke pehele din bhi
APPY - uffo navya leave it na. Common let's see our class
They both were heading towards notice board when their eyes falls on some group of people. Some boys were sitting on benches and few people were giving their introduction to them.
BOY - give your full intro
Said the boy to other
RAJ - raj dixit
BOY - eyes down and voice high
Ordered the boy again and he followed. They were taking ragging. Navya was not able to see the boy as he was sitting and many people were standing ahead of him. She was now tired and was about to leave when he stopped him.
BOY - Ruko
She stopped. She gets little frightened. She looks back to see at him. There he was anant bajpayee. Both were looking at each other and were lost in each other's eyes. The cool breeze around makes them freeze. If that was the love at first sight then yes they were feeling the same. He moves towards her.
ANANT - name
NAVYA - navya. Navya mishra
ANANT - new admission
NAVYA - ji
ANANT - year?
NAVYA - first... First year
ANANT - hmm. Hello... I am anant bajpayee second year aur apka senior.
He moved his hand forward. Navya looks at his hand
ANANT - ghabrao mat.. Hath mang nahi raha hu milane ke liye bol raha hu
He smirk for which she looks down feeling shy. She puts her hand forward and they feel good for their first touch
FLASHBACK ENDS.
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CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww cute updt ...loved it a lot ... Plsss cont asap thanks a lot for lovely updts
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Fantabulous update
their road meeting was nice
but there were so many
unsaid things between them
the flashback was really awesome
in start I thought their first meeting
will be the same as in serial
but it's different that was great
totally loving this story
plz cont as soon as possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
plz update soon...its very nice story
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nice updates. curious to know what happen between navya and anant
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Anant closed his diary. He was having smiling face. That all memories got refresh in his mind reading his diary. His thoughts broken up by the knock on door. Ritika enters carrying a glass of milk.
RITIKA - wo... I have brought milk for you.
ANANT - thanks
Smiled anant little. She gave him the milk.
RITIKA - anant
ANANT - hmm
RITIKA - wo... Aap kuch tension me lag rahe he.. Any problem?
Anant looks at her straight. He gets up while ritika gets worried.
ANANT - ritika.. You are my friend. Manta hu me tumhe patni banne ka haq nahi de paya hu par iska matlab ye nahi ki me apne pati ke jimmedariyo se piche hat jau
Ritika gets confused. Anant smiled little.
ANANT - mera pati hone ka haq ye kehta he ki I should keep you happy without giving you tension
She also smiles
ANANT - don't worry. Kuch hoga to I will definitely tell you. Ab tum jakar sojao.
RITIKA - hmm ok.. Good night
ANANT - good night
Saying ritika went from there and anant also went to sleep.
Here navya was thinking about anant sitting infront of mirror. Ranbir enters and gets back to her senses.
RANBIR - ye lo. Your medicine
She took it. She drank water which ranbir gave
RANBIR - so how was your day?
NAVYA - nice
Navya again goes in thoughts.
RANBIR - kya hua? You look so tired
NAVYA - ha ranbir.. Wo.. After so many days I went office so feeling little tired
RANBIR - ok no problem. Tum sojao take rest
Saying ranbir went from there.
NAVYA - he bhagwan. Anant ke bare me soch kar ye me kya kar rahi hu? Tune ma se promise kiya tha navya ki tu tere past ko tere present aur future me nahi ane degi. Please bhagwan hosake to anant ko mjhse dobara mat milana
She prayed silently having little tears in eyes.
Next day anant was having a meeting in a hotel at juhu. His boss have sent him for the deal finalisation.
ANANT - thank you so much Mr verma. We will start the project soon
After the meeting anant was about to leave from there when someone called him
RANBIR - excuse me
He turned around to see ranbir. He became surprise
RANBIR - pehechana?
ANANT - ofcourse. How can I forget you?
RANBIR - ya... You here?
ANANT - office meeting.. And you?
RANBIR - with friends
ANANT - ohh nice. Waise how is... Navya?
RANBIR - ya she is good and all thanks to you
ANANT - oh please ranbir don't say like that. It was my... My duty
They were having normal talks
RANBIR - aapse dobara milne ka bohot man tha. Apko ache se thanks nahi kar paya isliye. Aur navya.. Wo b aapse milna chahti thi
Anant gets little alert when ranbir said this. He smiled lightly
ANANT - sure. If life permits then I and navya will definitely meet
Said anant for which ranbir scrunched his eyebrows
RANBIR - ji?
ANANT - na.. Nothing
RANBIR - ok but now you have to come with me. I am heading home and you have to also
ANANT - nahi... Nahi ranbir.. Not now
RANBIR - no no. I don't want to listen anything you are coming with me and that is final.
Ranbir insists anant for which he have to listen to him
Ting tong.. The door bell rang. Navya goes and opens the door. She became surprise looking at anant standing infront of her. Their eyes met again. They were staring each other when their eye lock broke by ranbir who came there. Navya looks down.
RANBIR - navya.. See who is there. Inse milo ye he anant bajpayee
Anant and navya said hello to each other and ranbir makes him seat on sofa. Anant looks at their whole house. It was a normal modern facilities house. It was all what navya liked and he know her taste. His eyes fall on ranbir and navya marriage photo. He can feel how unhappy was navya at that time. He can feel her pain
RANBIR - so.. This is our house
Said ranbir looking at navya for which anant feel little sad and jealous.
NAVYA - I will be back
Navya excuse herself and move towards kitchen. She was feeling uncomfortable. She was praying that she should not be able to see anant again but god was again against her. Without thinking much she wiped her tears and started doing her work. In hall anant and ranbir were having a talk.
RANBIR - I am very thankful anant that we are meeting again
ANANT - hmm
Navya enters having tea and some snacks with her. She gave it to anant. Anant looks at her and so as she. Soon she moved towards ranbir and sat beside him. They had a normal talk. When suddenly Anant's cell rang. It was ritika
ANANT - I think I should leave now
RANBIR - ha agar ghar se biwi ka phone aye to nikalna hi padta he
Laugh ranbir while anant and navya smiles. Anant gets up to leave.
RANBIR - acha anant. Zindagi ne chaha to dobara zarur milenge
ANANT - aksar zindagi jo chahti he waisa hota kaha he
Anant and navya both looks at each other. Anant took a leave from there while navya goes inside in her room. Anant gets into his car and started driving. He gets a flashback...
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Woww amazing one.. Itna late updt na kiya karoo cont asap plsssoooi
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