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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: loveshaMya40

touching update!! cont soon :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: son_s

Interesting update. ..it's a different story line please continue soon :-)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Farwa60

Such a wonderfully written part... i could feel navyas pain... please continue soon!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariakutty991

Superb and emotional update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

CHAPTER TWO

"Navya I want to confess something to you." Anant said with a tensed as well as with an excited voice, he was sitting in his knees, that too in a crowded street. They both were visible to the public. Navya was tensed about what is going to come, she was anticipating something strange.

"I love you Navya, Will you marry me? Will you allow me to share your life?" Anant asked.

Navya got shocked. This is what she was waiting for from past one month. She loves him.

"Yes, Anant ... I love you too" an excited Navya replied and jumped to his arms.

He held her safely in his arms and twirled her. They both were so excited and happy. He then kissed her forehead just for assuring her that he will love and support her until eternity but he never cared about that.

"Navyyaaa" Anant's voice was with fear and anxiety.

He got up from his sleep in a jiffy. He then realizes that it was a dream. He was drenched in sweats. He was shivering.

That was one of the most beautiful moments of Navya's life and one of the bad moments of Anant's. One of the moments, which he do not like to remember. One of the moments, which she treasures forever.

Like last night he went to his window, he had forgot to close window before going to sleep, so some water drops were there in his room. He felt suffocated as if those were not raindrops; he felt it was someone's tears. He was feeling like his heart is thudding against his rib cage. It is even becoming difficult to breath. He needed freedom from this. He wanted to cool his mind. Only one thing can cool him now, DANCE. No one knows that he can dance other than Ritz. It is one of his hidden talents.

He then went to one of the empty rooms of his house to let out his frustration. Whatever he did was what he wanted but why was he feeling like this. If we do something, what we wanted then why is guilt feeling. That feeling was killing him. He hates feelings. Because he thinks feeling are for getting hurt.

He enters to his most favorite as well as private place of his house; no one dares to enter to this room. He does not like anyone invading his privacy. He then starts to let out his frustration. He was dancing like a wind. He was so powerful and his dance moves too. He was showing his hate, his frustrations, his dislikes and every emotions of him through his dance. He started to sweat again. He is tired now. However, not at all ready to stop the dance. He was dancing as if he is torturing himself for whatever he did. Nevertheless, that was what he wanted, right? Then why is this feeling? He not at all ready to stop his dancing, so he continues to torture his body.

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Navya was having breakfast with Appy. She was thinking about how her life took a U-turn. Where was she yesterday? Where is she now?

Everything has changed. Until yesterday, she was surrounded with happiness, love and care, but he never loved her, but at least he was there. Now no one is around her. Just emptiness and loneliness. She was an unwanted child and will always be.

Then she just turned towards the lawn; some small kids were playing there. Once she was like them. Small, small things made her happy in her childhood but now even small mere things are not able to make her smile. She has forgotten to smile. However, still there is one thing that makes her happy and lively, he and his name. Whenever she hears his name from anyone's mouth, a small smile appears her lips. She smiled at the mere thought of him.

"Navya..." Appy called when she saw Navya was smiling for the first time in this morning.

"Haa Appy" Navya replied with the same smile.

"Why are you smiling? Anyways please keep smiling Navya. You look beautiful while you smile." An excited Appy told. She was happy seeing Navya's smile.

"I'm not smiling" Navya replied in irritation. That tone was for defense. To save herself from Appy's questions.

"Ok" Appy did not talk more because she knows that, this is not the right time.

Navya went back to her thoughts. However, she was not going back to that weak Navya. Appy kept on looking at Navya and at her change of expressions. Then she went to the events which happened when she saw Navya in this morning at their "angel's heaven".

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Flash black (In Appy's POV)

I woke up from my sleep when I heard some noises outside my room. However, I neglected that just because I wanted to sleep again. Yesterday was a tiring day. Therefore, I went to sleep again.

"NAVYA" I heard someone called that, that voice was fearful.

That name alarmed me. Navya is here, at this time.

I just ran out of my room without caring about my incomplete sleep. My breath hitched at throat when I saw that sight in front of me. My Navya was lying lifelessly in the bed. Doctor was checking her.

Doctor: She is fine now. She has a fever. I think she got drenched in the rain last night. I have given medicines to her. She will be fine soon. Please take care of her. By the way, what is her name?

"Navya Bajpai" Doctor's face turned toward me when she heard me.

Doctor: You?

I am Appy, Her friend. I replied to doctor.

I sat near Navya in the bed, after everyone left us.

After some time she woke up. I helped her to sit properly.

"What happened to you Navya?"I asked her, I was really tensed about her. Therefore, I could not wait for a single second.

However, she did not reply. She was continuously looking at her palms, which were placed, on her knees.

I waited for 10 minutes. Finally, she replied in a whisper.

"My dreams again shattered Appy. The same person, who did it before, did the same thing again."

"Who" I was praying inside that she will not say it is HIM.

"The same, the great Mr. Anant Bajpai. He left me Appy. He told me to go away from his life; he told that he does not need me anymore. He told that he got everything, which he wanted. He does not want me anymore, he does not even like me, but I love him more than I love myself." Her words were breaking, she told that with lump in the throat. She was breaking inside.

I could not say or do anything, after some times of silence she shouted.

"MR ANANT BAJPAI LEFT MRS NAVYA BAJPAI". She shouted at my face holding my shoulders. However, her voice showed pure hurt. Her cheeks were soaked in tears. I tried to wipe them. But she stopped me and told

"From now I am not Navya Bajpai. It is only the simple Navya. Everything got over. I am free now."

She told that to herself more than to me.

"However, what did he do Navya? What happened?" I asked

Navya slowly stood up from the bed and told me everything, which happened in her life in past six months.

Whatever she told shocked me, it was unbelievable for me. I could not believe Anant can use and throw Navya.

[Flash back over]

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Ritz was searching Anant from morning when she could not find him in his room. She was continuously walking around the house searching him. When she heard some music from one of the rooms she realized he was dancing, she went there without making much noise because she knows her Bhai does not like someone disturbing him while he dances. She peeped inside to the room through the door, where he was lying in the floor flatly at his back; his eyes were covered with his hands. After lot of arguments with her mind and heart, Ritz decided to go inside and talk to her Bhai. However, before she enters to the room she saw that he was waking up. She could not stand there much she just ran to the next room. In addition, stood against the door, when she heard the sound of door being closed she came out and saw her Bhai was going to his room.

Ritz: Why Bhai? Why are you doing this? Why are you hurting you and Navya Too? I know you are hurt and you are feeling guilty but please Bhai repent your mistake before it will be too late. I do not think she will forgive you soon for your mistake. It will not be easy for you like last time.

Her thoughts were broken by one phone call. It was a call from Ranbir

Ritz: Hello

Ranbir: Hey Ritz did u talk to Anant about it?

Ritz: No, I could not. However, I tired only because you told me to talk to him last night.

Ranbir: Hmm ok, leave it now I will talk to him today at office.

Ritz: Ok.

Then Ritz was going to cut the call but he stopped her

Ranbir: Wait Ritz; did u try to talk to Navya?

Ritz: Yaa I did but she refused to talk to me

Ranbir: What?

Ritz: Appy told that Navya is not interested to talk to anyone whoever it is.

Ranbir: Ok. You take care of dad I will talk to Anant.

Then they both cut the call and Ranbir went to office to talk to Anant and Ritz went to her room.

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In Anant room:

He just came out of washroom after taking a shower, and stood in front of the mirror looking at his reflection and started to talk to himself.

Anant: What happened to you? Why are you thinking about Navya every time? It is only you who threw her out of your life. Please get a grip on your thoughts Anant. She does not deserve you. All girls are same; they only need money and fame. She will also leave one day when she will get whatever she wanted. Moreover, before she came with her dirty plans you send her from your life. Therefore, it is good for you.

"But she was with you for past six months" his mind opposed.

However, he did not give any importance to that. And continued to get ready for his work without knowing what is waiting for him there.

END


Thanku so much guys...

Here is the second part. i hope you guys liked this too


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Edited by --Keechu-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Wow!. Awesome update.. What all had happened between Anant and Navya that they are separated?.. Why did Anant marry Navya when he didn't even love her?.. Why did he propose to her?.. Will love ever blossom between them and will they ever be one?.. Uff!! So many questions I have in my mind.. Hope that they will get answered soon... You are such a wonderful writer!..this story is damn interesting... Please CONTINUE SOON :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
So sad to see navya's condition Why he did this to navya :( update regularly pls waiting for a week its too long =)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

OMG such an interesting updates really its heart wrenching to know navya was thrown out by anant. Curious to know what happened between navya and anant. Why he left her? Wanted to know more about them continue soon please.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Lovely update.. Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woww such a longgg update!! thnkuuu loved this intense update!! cont soon :))
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