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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 1

Austria

Far away in Austria...at night, there is a man sleeping...he is seeing some flashes of him running behind a women in a jungle...caught her and bring closer to him and he holds her cheeks and abt to kiss her when turns into a golden snake...there is jewel that shines and snakes protecting it...he sees lord shiva and a temple than it shifts to another scene in which another women with beautiful grey eyes has stabbed him and someone shouting 'Shantanav' while the man in the flashes falls down in pain looking at those pair of beautiful brown eyes fill with tears...suddenly a phone call wakes the man up who was sweating after seeing the dream...he wear his frameless spectacles and took the phone wiping his forehead and stubble cheeks that was sweating...on the otherside of the call...someone call him by his name Mr Ronav Nikanj...to remind him that he has a meeting with him...Ronav agrees to meet him at 10.00am...he disconnect the phone...he was feeling uneasy and has a headache after seeing the dream...Ronav wonders what is the dream all abt...who was the women he is running behind...he could only see her long wavy hair and her beautiful brown eyes that turns into green and wonders who is she?...why does he always sees her in his dream...why does he gets attracted to those beautiful pair of eyes...suddenly he began to wonder who was the women who was stabbing him...he tells himself who are this two womens?..what is his relationship with them?...Ronav gets down from his bed...takes a shower and wears his black formal suit with red tie...he wears his frameless glasses and drives his car to his office

Nikanj Industries Office

Ronav is having a meeting with Mr Shashank Garewal...he has given a contract to Nikanj Industries and he wants Ronav to handle it...since Nikanj Industries specialise in tyre business and Ronav is the managing director...Ronav was happy to hear it...they both shakes hands to confirm the deal...Ronav was abt to sign the contract after reading it when Mr Shashank Garewal stops him and says he has a condition...Ronav ask abt his condition...he tells Ronav that he wants the assignment to be complete in India...Ronav was taken aback...he starts thinking how will he complete the project in India when his family doesn't allow him to come back to India...he give a thought abt it...finally makes a firm decision and sign the contract...Mr Shashank Garewal leaves...Ronav is happy that soon he will spend his precious time with his family...he informs his secretary to book his tickets...he is going back to India

Nikanj House In London

It was hectic day of work...but Ronav has no sign of tiredness as he was excited to meet his family after long years...he came home...he change his formal suit...he wores a black shirt and purple blazer and pants...he wears his glasses and leaves his home with his bag n luggages...he puts it in his car and leaves to the airport...

Temple

Before going to the airport...he stops his car in a temple...he felt before going back to India...he wants to seek blessing of lord shiva...he went up to the temple...he prays to lord shiva saying after ages he is going back to his country...he is going to stay with his family...all he wants is his family's happiness...he further tells lord shiva that he doesn't know what relationship they share but deep down in his heart he feels that he has a connection with him and he doesn't know the reason...all he wants is his blessing...just then he collides with a lady...she sees his face and reads him...Ronav was abt to leave when she holds his hand and predict his future...the lady tells Ronav that this is his re-birth and he is being born again in the world for a motive...an incomplete love story and task has to be fulfill in this birth...she ask him to go back to his country...his fate and destiny is in India...someone is waiting for him since ages with love...passion and longing...Ronav ask who she is...the lady says the women has some love and poison in her...he is her destiny...she has been waiting for him to come back and unite with her...her love for him is unconditional...she is neither from this world nor that world...she is from some other world...a world that is beyond human imagination...Ronav is confused hearing abt it...the lady further caution that his own ones will backstab him...he has no family except for that women...she is his only family...there are lots of secrets to be unravel...you will know when you reach India...your love story is not a smooth one...but a forbidden one...there are lots of dangers ahead...believe in lord shiva and he will show you the right path...the lady bless Ronav and leaves...Ronav is confused...he sees the time and leaves for the airport...while the scene freeze on lord shiva idol with bells ringing

Airport

At the airport,Susanna was waiting for him...she is his secretary...she hands over the tickets to him...Ronav ask how is her mother since she went for a knee surgery...Susanna says she is fine and thank him for helping her sanction the loan...Ronav says its his duty...he told her if she can't pay the loan...he can waive it off but Susanna refused and says she can't take advantage of his kind heart...she will definitely pay the loan he gave her...they both hug each other and he ask her to take care of her mother and herself...Ronav leaves to board the plane...it was last calling for Mr Ronav Nikanj...Ronav enters the plane...he sat on his business class seat and began to wonder abt what the lady told him...the aircraft takes off...

the bgm says a forbidden and passion love story is abt to begin...Naagin music hums in the background


Edited by Mages - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Very nice update...
Thanks for the pm.
I m glad u updated. A small request please update long chapters. Plz..plz...
I loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kvrkdiwani

Very nice update...

Thanks for the pm.
I m glad u updated. A small request please update long chapters. Plz..plz...
I loved it


well i write stories based on my mind...
If there is a long chapter in mind...i will definitely update it..
currently this more of Ronav's introduction thus i make it small and sweet...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Brilliant chapter
Oops ronav having same dreams all the time that confused him
Wow ronav have to go back to India for his contract
Oops that lady told ronav abt his future that made him more confused
That lady is right ronav step mother will stab him
Just hope before to late he will get to know her real face
Continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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it was better to make kv Rocky. .but still no problem as ronav is similar to Rocky. so ronav sees a dream regularly and I guess that woman who turned into a snake is shivangi. the lady too said that he has taken rebirth and someone from another world is waiting for him.wow.waiting for ronav to meet shivangi.why does his family keep him away from India? mysterious.
please pm me when you update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 2

Arrival In India

Ronav had to arrive in India(Mumbai) at 9.30pm as his flight had a stopover in Hong Kong...Ronav arrives at the entrance with his luggage...but he never inform anyone back home...that he has arrive in Mumbai as he knows if his family knows that he is planning to come back home in India...they will not allow him thus Ronav hires a taxi back home

Nikanj House(Mumbai)

Ronav arrives at his home...he feels so relief and happy to be back home...its been 18 yrs since he has seen his home...his family...his siblings...his room...his temple...his Home...Ronav enters his home and he finds it empty and just then a servant came to him...Ronav touches his feet and greets him as Kaka who was a caretaker when he was a kid...Kaka was so happy to see him and hugs him...he welcomes Ronav with a hug and told him that he has missed him for 18 yrs...after long decades...Ronav-Kaka had a heartfelt conversation with each other...Ronav express his feelings how much he missed everyone and his home...further Ronav ask where has everyone went too...the house seems to be empty...Kaka told him that the entire family has went to Panchner Haveli...its Ronav's ancestor's palace...there is flashes shown in the background of lord shiva's temple and bells ringing...Panchner Haveli...a seshnaag temple in which naagmani shinning...a secret chest in the temple...Kaka says its Naag Panchnami where prayers are offered to lord shiva and there is a myths told that on the occasion of Naag Panchnami...naags/naagins does tandav and please lord shiva and they do this tandav on earth in lord shiva temple which is near Panchner Haveli...Ronav began to laugh and told Kaka that its 21st century and he is believing in naag/naagins myth...there is nothing call naag/naagin...people just makes stories...which Kaka says lord shiva has made this world...he has made animals...plants...ocean animals...wind...humans...insects...sun...moon...
planet...earth he has also made his protectors...whom are naag/naagins...Ronav ask what is the myth is all abt naag/naagins...Kaka tells him that naag/naagins are protectors of lord shiva and his naagmani...naagmani is the most powerful jewel in 3 worlds(earth...heaven and universe)...everyone has their eyes on that jewel because its very powerful...its so powerful that even a death person will become alive...every evil eyes are on that jewel and wants to steal it and write their own fate and rule the world if its goes to a evil hand...he/she will destroy the world...naag/naagins are protectors of this jewel naagmani which is a property belong to lord shiva and if anyone tries to touch or steal the naagmani the protector of naagmani either a naag or naagin will sentence the culprit to death...Kaka further tells the story of naagins...Ronav was listening carefully...Kaka says naag/naagins are protectors...they can shape-shift themselves into any form...there is a say that if a naagin witness someone harming her family or beloved...she captures the culprit image in her eyes and would seek revenge on the person and sentence him/her to death...and if she falls in love with someone be it a human or a naag...she will love him to death even after death and wait for his re-birth to unite with him...upon hearing this part...Ronav gets certain flash of his dreams...someone shouting and calling him "Shantanav"...Kaka brings him out from his trance by calling his name Ronav...Kaka asked him what happened...Ronav express to him abt his dreams...he ask Kaka since childhood he is seeing a dream and he doesn't know why...Kaka becomes uncomfortable abt his questions...Ronav ask him does he know anything abt his dreams...why he gets such dreams...why is he attracted towards a beautiful pair of brown eyes that emotes lots of emotions...who is she?...Kaka divert the question and says he doesn't know anything abt it...Ronav hugs Kaka and leaves the house...Kaka ask him where is he going?which Ronav replies to him that he is going to Panchner Haveli...Kaka is shocked as Ronav is not allowed to go there...Kaka was abt to stop him but Ronav leaves and told him not to inform his family that he is in India and back home...Kaka's fears arises and tells himself that Ronav's dreams is connected to the lord shiva temple near his Panchner Haveli...if he gets to know his past birth connection...his life will be in danger...Kaka prays to protect Ronav

Panchner Haveli-Nikanj Family

In Panchner Haveli, lord shiva idol has been decorated...everyone was getting ready for prayers...Romil tells Avni and Aaliyah how he wish Ronav was present with them for prayers...but the siblings came to reality and reminds each other Ronav has been staying in Austria for 18 yrs...they wonder why their father Ankush made Ronav lives in Austria for 18 yrs...during childhood Ronav used to live in his school/college hostel in Austria...its only when he starts to handle business...he lives in Nikanj House...in Austria...further Avni says that Ronav handles business in Austria alone with no help and brought Nikanj Industries to No 1 while she and Ankush handles the business in India...she wish for once she can work with Ronav...Aaliyah says she wish for once Ronav comes to India and she doesn't need to send Raksha Dhaaga to Austria while she can tie it personally on his hands and takes gifts from him...during Raksha Bandhan...Romil interupted and told Aaliyah that every year she has bankrupt him due to her gifts for Raksha Bandhan...he feels Ronav should come back so that his pocket money is saved...Ankush came in and told them that prayers is beginning soon and they should proceed to the hall...the siblings leaves...Ankush saw Ronav's photo...he took the photo and just stare at his photo with tears...he confess in his heart that he is a helpless father...he needs to save his son's life though its tough to stay away from his son...but tough decision has to be made...

Haveli Temple

The siblings come down to the hall...Yamini welcomes them with a smile and told them to stand in a row and pray for their future...Romil ask Yamini why is the prayers being held...which she replies that its Naag Panchami...if today he prays hard and ask anything from lord shiva...he will grant his wish...Romil says he wants to open a music academy...Yamini ask him to pray hard for it and strive hard to achieve it...Ankush came down and taunts Romil abt his music dreams...such dreams are wasted and will not lead him anywhere in life...he should join family business...Romil tells him straight on his face that he has no interest in business...he wants to open a music academy and teach guitar...he further says that there is Avni and Ronav to take care of his business...his business are in good hands...Ankush was about to argue with his son but Yamini stops the father-son as the prayer is abt to begin

Hurdle In Prayer

The prayer is abt to begin when Gurumaa enters the venue...Ankush-Yamini welcome her...the siblings takes her blessings...Gurumaa ask abt Ronav...Ankush says he is in Austria...Gurumaa says its good Ronav is staying in overseas...Gurumaa looks at Yamini-Ankush and reminds them whether they know why she is talking in such a way...Yamini-Ankush understands what she was trying to reveal abt Ronav...the prayers is beginning with lord shiva mantra and the scene cuts to Ronav driving to Panchner...the prayers is going full swing...when Ronav's car stops at Panchner due to breakdown and he sets his foot in Panchner...with Ronav setting his foot in Panchner...the prayers happening in Panchner Haveli with Nikanj Family is being affected...the winds starts to blow...the diyas which has been lighted for lord shiva becomes even more brighter...that it shines like a sun and the rays are affecting the eyes of gurumaa...Nikanj Family and relatives...on the other hand Ronav is trying to fix his car...while wind blows his side too...suddenly he hears the bell rings in lord shiva temple due to the winds...he gets attracted towards the temple...he sees flashes of his past birth with regards of the temple in where he sees a lord shiva idol...him doing pooja to lord shiva idol in his human naag attire with red-golden shawl wrapping his lean muscular bare body...he further sees something shinning on shiv lingam's head and he is praying to it and vows to protect it even after his death...no matter how many births he takes...Ronav comes out from his flashes and he take out his frameless glasses from his eyes and starts to wipe the sweat...he gets headache after going through a small journey of his past birth flashes...he quickly wears his frameless glasses and walks towards the temple...while in Nikanj Family the prayers is going through a hurdle...everyone wonders what is happening

Gurumaa's Prediction

Gurumaa's predicts and tells the Nikanj Family that something big is going to happen tonight...lord shiva has connected two souls who are yearning to unite are going to meet each other after a lifetime and going to be united in all births...deep down Ankush was thinking abt Ronav...did something happen to Ronav back in Austria due to his dreams?...Yamini ask Gurumaa what is her prediction has to do with Nikanj Family...which Gurumaa says her prediction has big connection with Nikanj Family...she will get to know the connection very soon...Nikanj Family are confused...the scene cut to Ronav taking slow steps on the stairs to reach the temple being in trance...while at Panchner Haveli...Ankush is praying hard to lord shiva to protect Ronav

Note: in chapter 3...Ronav-Shivangi will have their first meet...

Edited by Mages - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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ronav is getting all the dreams of his past birth now that too in flashes...but this dreams will stop when shivangi is married to ronav...she is the key n lock of ronav's dream even ronav's powers and rememberance of past birth comes from her...
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Chapter 3 will focus on Roshiv's first meet...Sesha's entry as business partner of Ankush and a close friend of Yamini and Shivangi joining Ronav's office as his secretary...
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Woow...u r really a great writer...
Keep updating soon...😊
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kaka explaining about naagmani was nice.so he also knows something about ronav's past birth and his life's danger.ankush seems to be a good father who wants his son to be safe.why with ronav's arrival Puja is getting disturbed?anyways glad that gurumaa hinted about roshiv's reunion.can't wait for it.ankush shouldn't say that music is a waste.each person's taste is different
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