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Posted: 7 years ago
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Episode 2 part 4
At the restaurant

Shivanya was busy managing the restaurant by instructing the waiting and the kitchen staff while Mr Kailash was attending the customers and guests. As the evening was going well the MC began with introduction and the rest of the presentation for the valentines day special event.

As everything was going smoothly Shivanya decided to take a moment of rest for herself and began to wonder about what happened earlier that evening. A moment later a waitress comes and informs her that one of their special desserts for the day had run out and a customer was insistently requesting it. Shivanya decides to personally apologise to customers hence she visits the table and apologises and gives them discount and complimentary meal coupons for their next visit.
As the issue got settled Shivanya noticed that one of the customers who was sitting at the next table had dropped his wallet. She pucks it up and goes after the customer to return it. The customer was a man who was dressed in a long brown coat and was heading towards his car just a few minutes away from the restaurant. She calls out to him " Excuse me sir, but you dropped your wallet at out restaurant"
As he was about to turn a power cut occurred in that area shrouding the entire place in pitch black darkness.
As Shivanya stepped forward she nearly tripped as she couldnt watch her steps but luckily she was supported by strong arms that prevented the fall which did obviously make her feel very awkward.
"Are you okay?" said thee strange yet very familiar voice but then dismissed it as she knew that a lot of people sound the same
"Yes I'm fine thanks" she answered with an awkward tone "Here's your wallet and I hope you had a great evening here" she continued
"Thank you, you've saved me from a lot of trouble, I truly appreciate it" he told her
"Its my pleasure" Shivanya replied back. As the customer had already unlocked the car's door he opened it and got inside while Shivanya was somehow managing to find her way back to the restaurant in the dark. As she was half way back the power cut had been fixed and the place which earlier shrouded in darkness was now brightly lit which in a way stunned her eyes. As her eyes adjusted to the darkness she heard the car start and at that very moment she realised that she had dropped her phone outside earlier while returning the customers wallet so she turned back to pick it up. But as she did so she saw something stunning, the customer whom she had helped earlier was now visible in the light from the window of his car's driving seat and to her awe he looked exactly like Rithik. However before she could call out to him he had already driven off from the road.
Shivanya couldn't believe what she had seen and was wondering if she was mistaken or if it was a dream. She picked up her phone and went back inside still recovering from what she had experienced.

To be continued in part 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Rein123

Episode 2 part 4

At the restaurant

Shivanya was busy managing the restaurant by instructing the waiting and the kitchen staff while Mr Kailash was attending the customers and guests. As the evening was going well the MC began with introduction and the rest of the presentation for the valentines day special event.

As everything was going smoothly Shivanya decided to take a moment of rest for herself and began to wonder about what happened earlier that evening. A moment later a waitress comes and informs her that one of their special desserts for the day had run out and a customer was insistently requesting it. Shivanya decides to personally apologise to customers hence she visits the table and apologises and gives them discount and complimentary meal coupons for their next visit.
As the issue got settled Shivanya noticed that one of the customers who was sitting at the next table had dropped his wallet. She pucks it up and goes after the customer to return it. The customer was a man who was dressed in a long brown coat and was heading towards his car just a few minutes away from the restaurant. She calls out to him " Excuse me sir, but you dropped your wallet at out restaurant"
As he was about to turn a power cut occurred in that area shrouding the entire place in pitch black darkness.
As Shivanya stepped forward she nearly tripped as she couldnt watch her steps but luckily she was supported by strong arms that prevented the fall which did obviously make her feel very awkward.
"Are you okay?" said thee strange yet very familiar voice but then dismissed it as she knew that a lot of people sound the same
"Yes I'm fine thanks" she answered with an awkward tone "Here's your wallet and I hope you had a great evening here" she continued
"Thank you, you've saved me from a lot of trouble, I truly appreciate it" he told her
"Its my pleasure" Shivanya replied back. As the customer had already unlocked the car's door he opened it and got inside while Shivanya was somehow managing to find her way back to the restaurant in the dark. As she was half way back the power cut had been fixed and the place which earlier shrouded in darkness was now brightly lit which in a way stunned her eyes. As her eyes adjusted to the darkness she heard the car start and at that very moment she realised that she had dropped her phone outside earlier while returning the customers wallet so she turned back to pick it up. But as she did so she saw something stunning, the customer whom she had helped earlier was now visible in the light from the window of his car's driving seat and to her awe he looked exactly like Rithik. However before she could call out to him he had already driven off from the road.
Shivanya couldn't believe what she had seen and was wondering if she was mistaken or if it was a dream. She picked up her phone and went back inside still recovering from what she had experienced.

To be continued in part 5

Nice loved it and i have posted my part 2 see that also
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
@sarveshjoshi Thanks! I already checked. I like the fact that you integrated all the good Raheja cousins in the story helping look after shivaangi. Its really nice and sweet.
Edited by Rein123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Rein123

@sarveshjoshi Thanks! I already checked. I like the fact that you integrated all the good Raheja cousins in the story helping look after shivaangi. Its really nice and sweet.

I need your suggestion which song should i use from these 3 songs for my ff and rain romance
1) tip tip barsa pani
2) Zindagi ban gaye ho
3) barsaat din aaye


Edited by sarveshjoshi42 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarveshjoshi42

I need your suggestion which song should i use from these 3 songs for my ff and rain romance

1) tip tip barsa pani
2) Zindagi ban gaye ho
3) barsaat din aaye


Hmm. Besides tip tip barsa pani I haven't any of the other songs mentioned above. I was wondering how about peen loon from Once upon a time in Mumbai or hum tum from the movie hum tum.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Seems ritik lost his memory...🥺
Any ways its interesting...Loving Rivanya again...
Feeling nice reading rivanya ff🤗 thanks fr update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Episode 2 part 5
As Shivanya entered the restaurant, Mr Kailash noticed that she looked pretty disturbed.
" what happened beti you look really tensed?" He asked Shivanya
" Baba I think I saw Rithik just a while back outside!" she told him
"Are you sure?" He asked her "I am not very sure but it did look like him, however I could be mistaken too" she answered
"Well if it had been him then he would have come and met us" he told her
"That's also there, it must have been someone else" she answered back
"Don't worry we'll find him eventually" he assured her " I hope we do so and do it soon" she muttered. And then they got back to work and were close to shutting the restaurant for the day.

At the valentines day party Shivani was attending

Shivaani and Ruhi were hanging out and chatting while Rocky had gone to fetch their drinks and snacks. Later they were all on the dance floor with Rocky and Shivaani dancing together.
As time passed Shivaani got a bit exhausted and decided to take a break while Rocky received a call and had to leave due to some urgent reason.
As Shivaani too was getting late she requested Ruhi to drop her back so they left for home together. While on the way the road appeared to be blocked due to a landslide
"Shoot! Now we'll have to take the detour" Ruhi cursed
Shivaani realised that the detour would be too much of a bother for Ruhi so she decided to get off right there
"Ruhi I think I'll get off from here as this would be faster for me and you wouldn't have to take big round after dropping me at the bus stop too" she told Ruhi
"Are you crazy! Look at the time and it pretty dark too what if you get lost?" Ruhi asked opposing the suggestion
" Don't worry I have my cellphone flashlight plus I know this forest too well to get lost, moreover the bus atop is just fifteen minutes away fro here so I'll be fine! Really"
Shivaani answered
"Even if you say so still, its not safe specially at this hour" Ruhi countered
"Ruhi you worry too much, I'm used to it and I'm sure I'll be fine plus you're getting late too,if you don't get home on time then your mom would definitely get annoyed" Shivaani told Ruhi
"Are you sure about this?" Ruhi asked with a lot of concern "yes I am and I'll be getting off now to avoid any further delays" Shivani answered back while getting off the car
" Alright then! Just take care and safe journey! Ruhi told Shivaani "I'm going home not for a vacation to another country" Shivaani said in a sarcastic tone
"I know but you never know when fifteen minutes could turn into more than an hour' Ruhi warned her "plus I'm still not convinced about you being fine going out alone at this hour"
"Chill I'll be fine and I'll be leaving now take care" Shivani assured Ruhi " OK then, bye! Ruhi replied and left shortly after that.

As Shivaani entered the forest area she switched on her phone's flash light and decided to take a route that happened to be shortest and quickest way back home however it was a hilly area and the path lied on the slightly steep slope of a hill leading back home which was obstructed by thick fog making it difficult to figure out where she was going. Fifteen minutes had passed and she was still wandering around in the forest until she heard the cry of a fox which caused her to panic. As cry got louder she began to rush her way down which caused to trip and nearly fall off a cliff, however she managed to get a hold of a branch that delayed her fall.
Shivaani was really scared and tried her best to climb back up however that risked the chances of the branch breaking off due to the excess pressure and her body weight. Afraid she began to cry for help, "HELP!! Is there anyone here!"
She knew it was useless as she knew no sane person would be strolling in the forest at this hour but still gave it a try. The branch she held on to was about to snap and break apart making her think that this was going to be her last moment alive to which she began to cry as she didn't want to die like this away without even seeing her mother specially after deceiving her that way and thought of it as a punishment for the same reason.
As the branch snapped she almost fell until she felt something or someone hold on to her arm. Shivaani opened her eyes and looked up to find a hand hold on to her arm while trying to pull her up
"Hold on and try to use your other hand as well to climb up" said a masculine voice
Shivaani did as she was instructed and held on to the strangers hands who pulled her as she began to climb back up. Once she was back up Shivaani took a deep breath and thanked God for helping her out. As she stood up she saw the stranger just walk away super fast before she even had the chance to thank him. She noticed that he had dropped his bracelet.
"Hey hold on you dropped your bracelet! Hello wait up! What's hurry?? Can you hear or are you deaf??"
She kept calling and following him but he didn't reply nor was she able to keep up with his speed until she finally lost him.
A while later she noticed that she found her way back home and gave up on pursuing the guy who helped her earlier.

The end episode 2

Edited by Rein123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Sweet-devil

Seems ritik lost his memory...🥺

Any ways its interesting...Loving Rivanya again...
Feeling nice reading rivanya ff🤗 thanks fr update

Your welcome 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Amazing parts😃
Ritik helped shivanya and shivani and disappeared. I hope ritik did not forgot them⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@sweetdevil and Nonie Rithik didn't forget anyone. He has his memories intact but he has his own reasons for avoiding his family.
@nonie Actually the person who saved shivaani from falling off the cliff was not Rithik. So if it wasn't Rithik you can guess who it wass...
Edited by Rein123 - 7 years ago
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