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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada...I have started living more than before..Part 2

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Ritik:Sometimes the circumstance makes us take such drastic steps beta.But I love your mumma a lot and I can love only her.
Ritik kissed Shivangi's forehead.

Flash back...

Ritik was bowled over seeing Shivanya in a green saree.He moved towards her and pulled her closer.
Shi:In a mood to romance?Naughty boy.

Rit:How can I not romance when I have a beautiful wife?
She blushed.


He moved towards her forehead to peck her.

She moved away her face.
Shi:Ritik..no..I am going to temple.
Rit:So what?Which God has restricted us from romancing?
Shi:Ritik...
He moved closer to her and caressed her face softly.Their eyes locked onto each other.They were lost in each other.


Suddenly Shivangi came:Mumma..papa..
They got embarrassed and moved away from each other.
Shi:Are you both going anywhere?
Shi:No beta.Mumma is going to temple.
Shivangi:Can I too come with you?
Shi:You are not feeling well.Right?So take rest.Papa will be there with you and dadu dadi will tell you good stories.I will come back immediately.Ok.
Shivangi:Ok..
Shivanya patted her cheek:Good girl.
She looked at Ritik:Bye bye Ritik.
Suddenly he held her hand.
Ritik:I don't know why Shivanya.I feel strange when you are going out today.

Slowly he cupped her face in his hands emotionally.
Shi:Nothing like that Ritik.You simply feel like that.I am going to pray.Lord Shiva will protect me.


Bye.
Rit:Bye.
Shivanya went out.Ritik too accompanied her till the car.
The driver was drunk.
Rit:Dirty smell.You are drunk.Right?
Driver:Sorry Sir.
Rit:Shivanya..don't go with him.I will drop you.
Shi:No need Ritik.You be with Shivangi.Otherwise she will feel bad.
Driver:Sir..though I am drunk I am in control.So I will drive well.You know that I am a good driver.
Shi:Don't worry Ritik.There will be no problem.
Rit:But Shivanya..
Shi:It's ok Ritik.
Shivanya got inside the car and the car was driven out by the driver.

The drunk driver could'nt drive properly and car was shaking.Shivanya got scared:Please be careful.
But due to his careful driving a truck hit the car and the car fell off the cliff.

Present...

Ritik's tears rolled down his cheeks.
Rit:Lord Shiva..Shivanya was your devotee.She was coming to meet you.Then why did'nt you save her?
Ritik's mother Yamini came and caressed him:Ritik..I know what you feel now.We too feel the same.We have not forgotten Shivanya yet and we will never give her place to anyone.But you know why we are forced to conduct this wedding.

Ritik's sister Chaya and brother in law Viren come.
Viren:How long can you live in Shivanya's memories Ritik?Move on man.If I was in your place I would have remarried long ago.
Ritik and Yamini felt upset.
Chaya took him to a corner and said :Virenj..why are you talking like this and making them more upset?


Viren:I just told a fact Chaya.If Ritik lives like this it will be doing injustice to Shesha.Right?


Chaya was silent.

Ritik sat on the mandap.Shesha was brought to the mandap.He felt that the bride was Shivanya and he became emotional.


Suddenly realizing that it was Shesha his heart pained.


Very painfully Ritik made Shesha his wife.Shesha was on cloud nine.

Shivangi shed tears seeing Ritik marrying Shesha.

Night..in the bedroom...

Shesha came closer to Ritik romantically.Suddenly they heard the door knock.
"Papa".It was Shivangi.
Rit:Shivangi..
Ritik opened the door.Shivangi hugged him.
Shivangi:Papa..I want to sleep with you.
Rit:Sure beta.You sleep with me.
Shesha got angry:Ritik..this is our first night and you are making Shivangi sleep with us?
Rit:Shivangi always sleeps besides me.
Shesha:But now I am your wife.How can Shivangi sleep with us?Tell Shivangi to go.
Shivangi pleaded:Papa..please don't send me out.

Shesha:Shivangi..can't you understand what I am saying?
Ritik got angry:Shesha..don't shout at my daughter.I don't like it.If Shivangi wants to be near me let her be with me.
Shes:But Ritik..
Yamini came:Shivangi beta..you are here?Come with dadi.
Shivan:No..I want to be with papa.
Yamini:Shivangi..you are a good girl.Right?
Shivangi nodded.
Yam:Then come and sleep with us.Your dadu is waiting to tell you some interesting stories.
Shivan:Really?
Yam:Yes.
Shivan:Then I will come with you.
Yamini:Good girl.


Ritik:But maa..
Yamini whispered to Ritik:Try to understand Ritik.It's not fair to make Shesha angry now.She is helping us financially.If we make her angry now everything will be in a mess.
Ritik became upset.
Yam:Shivangi...come..
Yamini went out of the room with Shivangi.
Shesha was relieved.She held Ritik's hand and smiled.
Shes:Finally you have become mine Ritik.It is my dream come true.
She caressed his face romantically.Ritik who felt uncomfortable walked away.
Rit:I feel head ache.Let me sleep.
Shesha became dull:Ritik..why don't you admit that you are avoiding me purposefully as you don't love me?You married me only because you needed my father;s financial support to save your falling business empire.Right?
Ritik kept quiet.


Shesha:But I challenge you that one day you will fall in love with me.
Ritik wept:I can't forget my Shivanya.
Shesha got angry and thought:Even after dying you are coming between me and Ritik Shivanya.I hate you.

Ritik was reminded of his first night with Shivanya.

Shivanya was sitting on the bed in bridal attire.Ritik sat near her.


They both looked at each other with a smile.


He caressed her

Tum Jo Paas Aa Gaye Hum Jo Sharamaa Gaye
Raaj Dil Paa Gaye


and Shivanya embraced him blushing.


Tum Bhi Pehle Pehel Hum Bhi Pehle Pehel


They were lost in each other.

Tum Bhi Pehle Pehel Hum Bhi Pehle Pehel

He removed her head veil


and caressed her romantically.

Jab Nigaahe Mili Dil Mein Kaliyaa Khili
Jaisaa Leharaa Gaye


She smiled.


The shy Shivanya tried to move away,

but Ritik pulled her and she fell over him.They shared a passionate eye lock.

Tum Bhi Pehle Pehel Hum Bhi Pehle Pehel


Slowly they came closer and melted in each other.

Tum Bhi Pehle Pehel Hum Bhi Pehle Pehel-Umrao Jaan

Present...

Ritik wiped his wet eyes.He saw Shesha sleeping.He went to the kitchen and drank water.He was sweating due to his mental pain.He heard a knock at the door.Nobody heard it as they all were in deep sleep.
Rit:Who has come at late night?
He walked towards the door and opened it.
He could'nt believe his eyes.His lips shivered:Shivanya!
Shivanya smiled emotionally:Yes Ritik.I am back.
They embraced each other emotionally.



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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
wow i guess i m the first... oh shivanya is dead ... and tats y ritvik is marrying shesha ... and still he loves shivayna... tats cute...
shesha's wedding night got spoiled by shivangi haha... tats nice...

shesha confronts him and he tells that he love shivanya which angers shesha...

and omg.. shivanya is back... now what will happen... ?? is that a dream or else real... waiting for next chappy
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved ririk shivanya fb. ritik married sheesha thinking his shivanya was no more. shivanya coming back was surprising. hope she solves this sheesha mystery.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Lovely update
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Part.😊
Ritik married Shesha thinking as Shivani,it was so sad.😭
It was Nice that Shivani was Back.😊
The Story is getting so interesting.😊
The Pics were so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow amazing update loved it thank you for pm.
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hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written
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#48
Omg ritik forced to marry shesha
Ritik lost in past
Didn't like one bit how that bi**h shesha talked to his daughter
Now shivanya is back what's gonna happen
Will his n sheshas marriage be void hope so
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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now I don't like this part at all as ritik married to shesha 😡
even when doesn't love her
now shivanya is back how she gonna react on ritik remarriage
continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A Surprising chapter

Ritik marries thinking his love is no more is it a dream that Shivanya is back
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