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Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada...I have started living more than before..Part 20

I dedicate this chapter to Piyali,Ajay who want Shesha to get true love.I dedicate this to Piyali who wants Shesha Shivangi friendship scene and also a positive Shesha.I dedicate this to Shakaib,Sanghita who want Kabir Shesha union.When I started this FF itself I had planned that Kabir Shesha will be a couple.

Thanks a lot for supporting my 1st Rivanya FF.This is a FF where the lead hero itself is grey.He was a coward who was forced to fool others because of lack of courage.So I know all of you hate Ritik.Ritik deserved it.Please write your favourite character and favourite scene and why you liked them.

One year later...

Ritik:Shivanya...are you not ready yet.
Shivanya came with Shivangi:Yes Ritik..I am ready.
Ritik was lost in her beauty.She blushed.

Shivangi:Papa..won't you look at me?You will look only at mumma?

Shivanya giggled.Ritik was embarrassed.
Ritiik carried her in his arms:No beta.You look like a Princess.
Shivangi smiled.
Shi:Of course..because I only dressed her up.
Rit:I know that your hobby is to dress up Shivangi.But my Shivangi is beautiful otherwise also.
Shi:Because she is my daughter.
Rit:She is my daughter too.
They both giggled.
Rit:Lets leave.We are getting late for the engagement function.
Shi:Ok.

Engagement party.A beautiful girl was sitting there.It was none other than Shesha.Her guy came and sat near her.It was Kabir.
Kab:True love always wins.That's why you realized my love and accepted me.
She smiled.

Shesha:Sorry Kabir..I was late in realizing the depth of your love.
Kabir smiled:No problem.Because what we get late is even more sweeter than what we get fast.So you are more sweeter than before for me.
She blushed seeing his romantic expressions.
She said in her mind: Kabir...from you I learnt a lesson that we should always marry the person who loves us.
Shesha:I love you Kabir.
He looked at her deeply:I love you too Shesha.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

They exchanged rings.
Samrat,Ritik and Shivanya:Congrats...
Kabir and Shesha were surprised to see them.They hugged each other happily.
Shesha:Thank you so much for coming.
Ritik:Why are you thanking us Shesha?We all are friends.
Shesha:But I troubled you all very much.I gave you so much of pain.
Ritik:But all the pain you have us was easily forgotten because of the great thing you did for us.
Shivanya:Yes Shesha.If you had not made me understand Ritik and I would never have been united.
Ritik:That moment I realized that I failed to see the heart good heart which was hidden.So I want to say sorry to all the rude words I uttered to you.
Shesha became emotional:I myself realized that I had a heart only when I saw yours and Shivanya's love for each other.
Shivangi gave her a wedding card:Shesha aunty...Kabir uncle...my engagement gift for you both.
Shesha-Kabir took it from her and looked at it.
It was a picture of a boy and girl drawn by Shivangi.
Kabir patted her:Thank you so much Shivangi baby..this is so cute.
Shesha became so emotional that she hugged Shivangi.
Shesha:I hurt you so much.Still you gave me such a wonderful gift?I am sorry beta...Thank you so much.
Shivangi wiped her tears.
Shivangi:Don't cry and spoil your make up on your engagement.
Shesha giggled.
Shivangi:And don't say sorry and thank you as there is no sorry and thank you in friendship.
Shesha smiled and held her hand:Ok my best friend.
They hugged each other.
Everyone smiled.
Kab:Ritik..Shivanya..since we are getting married please give us marriage tips.
Ritik smiled:The only way to have a successful marriage is love..love and love.
Shesha and Kabir smiled at each other romantically.

Music was played...

Kabir Shesha did a passionate sizzling sensual dance.


Kaise bataaye, kaise jataaye
Subah tak tujhme jeena chahein

Bheege labon ki, geeli hansi ko
Peene ka mausam hai peena chahein

Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai

Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Ritik Shivanya danced romantically.


Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara

Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha

Main toh tere rang mein
Rang chuka hoon

Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera(Bhaagi).
Samrat and his fiancee Gauri danced with cute romantic expressions.


Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon (x2)
Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
Viren:Hey...we are not below you all in romantic dance.

Chaya:Virenji..what are you saying?
Viren:Come darling..we will show them that we can also do romantic dance.
She blushed.
They did a passionate dance.


(Jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hai
Woh haal dil ka udhar ho raha hai
Jaan-e-jaan dilo pe pyaar ka
Ajab sa assar ho raha hai) - (2)-'Sarfarosh'.
Ankush Yamini came on stage.Ankush:We will prove that we are better than all of you in dance.Everybody laughed.Ank:We are noy bluffing.We were the best dancers of 80's.Yam:Yes..still we are the best.Ank:Of course..we are the best.They danced entertaining everyone.
Hai Jai Bolo Shiv Shankar Ki Jay
Hey Jai Jai Shiv Shankar Kanta Lage Na Kankar
Hey Jai Jai Shiv Shankar Kanta Lage Na Kankar
Ke Pyala Tere Nam Ka Piya
Ho O O Gir Jaoongi Main Mar Jaoongi
Jo Tune Mujhe Tham Na Liya, O Sau Rabadi
Hey Jai Jai Shiv Shankar Kanta Lage Na Kankar, Ke Pyala Tere Nam Ka Piya
Ho O O Gir Jaoongi Main Mar Jaoongi
Jo Tune Mujhe Tham Na Liya, O Sau Rabadi- Aap Ki Kasam.
Nachiket:Ankushji and Yaminiji proved that old couples are the better dancers.Give us also a chance to prove that.Everybody giggled:Sure sure.
Nachiket Ragini did a slow romantic dance.




Hmm..., ho...
Teri bindiya re, re aay haay, teri bindiya re -2
Sajan bindiya le legi teri nindiya
Re aay haay, teri bindiya re

Tere maathe lage hain yu, jaise chanda taara
Jiya mein chamke kabhi kabhi to, jaise koyi angaara
Tere maathe lage hain yu
Sajan nindiya...
Sajan nindiya le legi le legi le legi
Meri bindiya
Re aay haay, tera jhumka re -2
Chain lene na dega sajan tumka
Re aay haay mera jhumka re -Abhimaan
Shivanya:Neil uncle and Ragini aunty are so romantic in this age too.Neil looked at Ragini romantically:Yes..we are romantic as romance is always there on our air.Ragini was shy. Ritik:Too romantic.Prem:Not only him his son also knows how to romance.Ritik:Great Prem.Prem held Simar's hand.Simar was shy.Sim:Premji..what are you doing?Prem whispered:Simar..don't make others say that we are unromantic through your shyness.Simar stared at Prem:What?Prem smiled:Dance with me Simar.Simar smiled and they danced.
Panchhi baadal premi ke pagal
Hum kaun hain sathiya
O yaad nahi bhool gaya
O yaad nahi bhool gaya

Panchhi baadal premi ke pagal
Hum kaun hain sathiya



O yaad nahi bhool gaya
O yaad nahi bhool gaya

(Lamhe).


Samrat held his fiancee gauri closer:Not only the senior couples we young girls are also not back in dancing.
Samrat:Right darling.
Gauri:Yes samrat.No doubt.We will prove our dancing skills.

Ritik:We agree dear buddies.
Shesha:So come and put the stage on fire.
Samrat-Gauri dance together bringing smile to everyone's face.

Tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara
O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara-Rustom.

Neil:You are right samrat.You both too rocked.
Kabir held Shesha closer:But you guys are not as hot as us.
Everyone laughs.
Sailesh:On this happy occasion why doon;t have take a group photograph?
Ankush:Sure.
They all posed together and a group photograph was clicked.

The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
First of all , thanks a lot lot lot for dedicating this Epi to me and fulfilling all my wishes...this was amazing , 1 year leap , everything sorted out , Loved the cute family scenes of Shivanya-Shivangi and Rithik...beautiful...thanks a lto for making ShiBir a couple...I always wanted it and happy you did it...thanks alot lot lot...loved the scenes ShiBir , wish in show they had a longer last but Kabir was killed very fast but thanks for including beautiful scenes of their here...thanks a lot...Loved all the couple's performance , even Guari-Samrat...Mrunal was a really good choice...would be waiting for more RiVanya by you though please don't make Rithik grey again...I don't want to hate him more...favourite person -Simar and scenes , Shivangi-Sesha one...thanks a lot for that one too...Shivangi is also my favourite...though being a child but still such a great heart...in short , Loved thi ff and its end...waitng for more stories by you...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
thx a lot.But Kabir was not killed off very fast.He was there till the end.During the last track there were lots of kabir shesha scenes.


Originally posted by: .Piyali..

First of all , thanks a lot lot lot for dedicating this Epi to me and fulfilling all my wishes...this was amazing , 1 year leap , everything sorted out , Loved the cute family scenes of Shivanya-Shivangi and Rithik...beautiful...thanks a lto for making ShiBir a couple...I always wanted it and happy you did it...thanks alot lot lot...loved the scenes ShiBir , wish in show they had a longer last but Kabir was killed very fast but thanks for including beautiful scenes of their here...thanks a lot...Loved all the couple's performance , even Guari-Samrat...Mrunal was a really good choice...would be waiting for more RiVanya by you though please don't make Rithik grey again...I don't want to hate him more...favourite person -Simar and scenes , Shivangi-Sesha one...thanks a lot for that one too...Shivangi is also my favourite...though being a child but still such a great heart...in short , Loved thi ff and its end...waitng for more stories by you...πŸ˜ƒ

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Amazing love this. fabulous ending
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wonderful update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...so Sheesha got engaged with Kabir since she realised that he truly loved her...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...she understood that when you don't get the one you love you should marry the one who loves you......Rivanya are grateful to Sheesha for uniting them again...😎...little Shivangi also gifts a card to them and Sheesha-Shivangi become friends......all the couples danced...πŸ₯³...loved it...❀️❀️❀️...thank u 4 pm...πŸ˜ƒ...

fav scenes are when Prem and Simar unites, Shivanya gets to know the truth from Sheesha, Sheesha realises her mistakes, Sheesha-Shivangi last moment...

fav character is Shivanya coz she truly loved Ritik and for him she didn't marry Prem, she united Prem-Simar, she decided to sacrifice Ritik for Sheesha...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by Jayeeta_06 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Indeed that was a beautiful end
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Loved Rivanya scenes with Shivangi. Her scenes are very cute with Ritik & Shivanya. Good that sheesha is positive in this story. Her scenes with Kabir was very romantic. My favorite character is Shivangi. My favorite scene is Shivangi's scenes with her parents.
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb updates! well written!
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Awesome chapter JasmineπŸ˜ƒ
Lovely ending❀️
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Thank u so much for dedicating this to me...

I loved how u made Sheesha find her true love...And I was happy that Kabir waited for her for so long and accepted her truly...It was true that we should always get married to the person who love us...and now by marrying kabir , she did right...Ritik, Shivanya and Shivangi came and supported her in her big day which was a sweet surprise to Sheesha...I was happy that they all forgot their past and moved on , giving their relationships another chance...

favourite character and favourite scene:
Well , my favt character is Sheesha...The foremost reason is because I love grey characters...Her character has that layers , depth which kept me hooked to the story...And the best thing about her character was 'she did what she believed in'...When she saw Ritik and Shivanya together , she didn't come in between because she believed that Ritik was happy with Shivanya and so she was happy for him...But after her marriage with Ritik , she began plotting as she believed that being his wife , it was her right to get love of his husband by hook or by crook...She didn't want to spend her life by longing for her Ritik's love...So , she did what she felt right...And when she realized that Shivanya was alive , she didn't waste a moment to unite them by doing the right thing...And lastly when she realized that kabir loves her truly , she didn't waste a moment to accept him...So , she was one of the charming characters in ur FFs...


Favt scene is when Sheesha accepted her fault in front of Shivanya and told her the truth...
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