Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada Rivanya FF Last part-pg79 - Page 36

wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

How was my Prem Shivanya edit?😉

Oh Fish...I forgot about it , it was beautiful dear , seriously...hey the kind of relation you are portraying between Shivanya-Prem...I hope I don't end up requesting you to write on them as a couple...😛

Awesome update dear

hi thanks 4 da pm n great update! well written

Nice one
So sheshas friend was the doc
She faked everything
Like fact her plan backfired though as rithik still ain't accepting her n is even repaying his loan to her father
I can't wait for him to learn truth then he will be free of this part of the guilt at least
As for prems simar who is she
I take it my wish for it to be shesha was wrong ( sorry prem anything to get rid of her lol)
Hope shivanya can reunite them soon
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Interesting times are ahead. Shesha is very evil and her friend should be run from the medical association and not allowed to practice medicine again. I hope Shi and Rit will be able to unite Simar and Prem.

Love the way how you portrait every thing

Interesting

Ritik is gng down day by day,,,i mean the dialogue to Sehsa that I hate u for carrying my baby in ur womb is too much to say...for now, Sesha is playing games, ok..but what if d incident really happened??Does Sesha deserve that kind of husband??i hate this man,,instead of losing her sanctity by playing gams to get Ritik, Sesha should leave him for her own good.,Ritik is more slefish than Shivanys..he doesnt deserve anyone,,,,,Nd that he is repaying loan, what does he want to prove, that he only used Sesha for money??I doubt he loves Shivanya truly also...By his acts, it doesnt seem to be...Whatever good tat Simar will return nd is connected to Shivanya...excited for Simar track to open...Thanks for d PM...update soonish!!