Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada Rivanya FF Last part-pg79 - Page 11

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ritik has not told Shivanya that he got married again while Sheesha wants to get into his good books but it seems she dislikes taking care of Shivangi and the little girl misses her mother
Ritik spends time with Shivanya and tells her how he too felt as been dead but now that she is here he is living again
I wonder what he will do now
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Jasmine
lovely update dear
you have done fab job with Rivanya story
I am not a regular watcher of Naagin but I loved Arjun and mouni pair. And this story is nice to read with pictures.
Hate Shesha she is not even having courtesy of how to speak to a child. Ritik should come with come solution for this because he will playing with all the three people feelings.Loved Rivanya scenes so much
keep updating
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update...👍🏼...Sheesha is so cruel...😡😡...she is scaring Shivangi and using her for her own advantage...😭😭...Ritik meets Shivanya and they spend some time together...👏👏👏...oh no Ritik's dad comes to know that he's hiding something...😲...waiting to see Ritik's reply......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Rithik is playing with everyone's feelings...he is too weak to face the problems...If he loves Shivanya and Shivangi , then he should have the courage to deal with the truth and let everyone know...Sheesha and Rithik were friends , then he should have known that she is not going to accept Shivanya's daughter easily...he should have atleast made sure of Shivangi's safety first and foremost instead of going and romancing with Shivanya...he is neither a good father nor a good husband...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shesha is double faced.infront of ritik she is a different person.so ritik never imagined that she can be cruel to his daughter. Ritik Shesha fb will be shown.but not so soon


QUOTE=sanghita0000]Rithik is playing with everyone's feelings...he is too weak to face the problems...If he loves Shivanya and Shivangi , then he should have the courage to deal with the truth and let everyone know...Sheesha and Rithik were friends , then he should have known that she is not going to accept Shivanya's daughter easily...he should have atleast made sure of Shivangi's safety first and foremost instead of going and romancing with Shivanya...he is neither a good father nor a good husband...
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Posted: 7 years ago
I hate all these 😡
poor kid shivangi suffering a lot from all this drama 🥺
I so want to kill that bitch shesha for hurting shivangi 😡
why ritik not taking care of his daughter?
when he know shesha isn't got to shivangi
hope soon ritik will solve all this mess & bring shivanya back home
continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
Haii
Di
This ff is fantastic.
I just read it.
Very nice.

Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada...I have started living more than before..Part 5

I know that some of u are really pissed off with Ritik hiding the truth from all.But this story is about the problems caused by his hiding tendency.I expected this kind of reaction from u all as this FF needed such reaction from the readers.This story shows how people can land up in bigger troubles when they hide things with lies.And if Ritik had told the truth to everyone as soon as he got Shivanya back the story would have ended in 3-4 parts.



Ritik:Papa..I can't answer your question now.But I can assure you one thing that I am not doing anything wrong.
Ankush:I know my son very well.I know that you can't do anything wrong.But why are you hiding it from us?
Ritik:One day you will realize it papa.
Ritik walked away.Ankush did not know how to react.Yamini came:Ankushji..what are you thinking?
Ankush:Nothing Yamini.

Seeing Ritik coming suddenly Shesha made Shivangi sit on the bed.
Shesha:Sit there.
Shivangi:Why?
Shesha:Don't question me.Do what I say.
Shivangi sat.Shesha started telling her a story lovingly.Ritik who came there smiled seeing it.
After the story got over Shesha looked at Ritik.She smirked seeing him happy.
Shesha:Ritik..when did you come?
Ritik:Quite some time ago.You were engrossed in story telling.
Shesha:Shivangi loves my stories so much that she always tells me to narrate stories to her.
Ritik:Arre Shivangi beta...guess you like Shesha aunty's stories very much.
Shivangi gave him a pale smile.
Ritik:Thankyou Shesha for making Shivangi happy.
Shesha:No need to thank me Ritik.Shivangi is my daughter.A mother can do this much for her daughter.Right?
Ritik smiled.
Shivangi thought:Shesha aunty is doing all this only to show off papa.She is acting so well that no one can understand that it's acting.Unfortunately I can't even tell papa the truth.
Yamini and Ankush came.
Ankush:How are things going?
Shesha:Going well papa.
Yamini:That's nice.We are very happy to see all of you happy together.



Ritik and Shesha smiled.
Maa..you know one thing?Shivangi loves listening to Shesha's stories.
Yamini:Really?That's so nice.Ritik..tell Shivangi to call Shesha Maa.
Shivangi:Dadi..please don't force me to call her maa.For me my mumma is my mumma.
Ritik:Maa,Shivangi is right.Let her continue calling Shesha aunty.Because Shesha is not her mother.Shivangi's mother is only Shivanya.No one can take Shivanya's position in our lives.
Yamini did not know what to say.
She thought:May be Ritik is right.Even I can't give Shivanya's position to anyone else.Then how can Ritik and Shivangi do that?
Shesha was very angry.
She thought:I did so much to show Ritik that I care for Shivangi.Still Ritik is not able to accept me.Why always Shivanya?


The next day...
Shesha went near Ritik.Ritik...today is Sunday.It's a holiday.Shall we go out?
Rit:No Shesha.I have an important meeting.
Shesha:Meeting on Sunday?
Rit:Yes.They are coming from Dubai.Sunday is a working day for them.Only when they are available this meeting can be conducted.
Ritik left.
Shesha:Not even Sunday is free for him.

Ritik went to see Shivanya.She became happy to see him.
Rit:Today is free.So I could come here in the morning itself.
She smiled.
Shiva:But what excuse did you give your family?
Rit:I said I have meeting.
He rested his head on her shoulder:Today we will enjoy.
She smiled.


Shi:Ritik..I am bored of sitting at home.Can you take me out?Shall we go to beach?
Ritik:Beach?
Shi:Yes.You know naa I love beach a lot.Remember how we all used to go to beach together.
Ritik remembered one such day.

Flash back..
Ritik got ready to go to beach.Shivanya was dressing up baby Shivangi.
Rit:Hey Shivanya..we are going to beach.Shivangi too needs to get wet.So no need to dress her up so much.
Shi:How can I not dress up our pretty girl?
Ritik smiled:Shivanya..you longed for a girl to dress her up.Right?
Shivanya smiled.
Rit:You are simple.But you want your daughter to be grand.
She smiled:Girls' mothers prefer to dress up their daughter rather than dressing up themselves.
Ritik smiled.
Rit:By the way Shivanya..why are you wearing salwar suit now?Come on we are going to beach.So wear beach dress,not a salwar suit.
Shi:I can't wear such revealing dress.

Ritik pulled her closer:Hey wife..even I don't want you to wear revealing clothes as I don't like anyone else seeing your body.Only I have that right.

But I have bought a beach dress which is not bikini.You can wear that.Right?
She was silent.He took that dress and showed it to her.
Rit:Are you fine with it?
She smiled.
Rit:Oh..I am relieved that my money did'nt get wasted.
She gave a kick on shoulder with a smile.He laughed.Shivanya wore the beach dress.She was shy.
Rit:Wow..you look cool.I never thought that you will look so nice in this dress.
She smiled.

Ritik,Shivanya and baby Shivangi enjoyed a lot on beach .


Present...
Ritik came back to senses.
Rit:But Shivanya..if we go out people will see and they may recognize you.
Shivanya became sad:Ya..I forgot that.But I longed to go to beach as this house is near a beach.

Ritik felt sad seeing her sad face.
Rit:1 sec.I will come now.
Shi:Where are you going?
Rit:I will tell that after coming back.
He left.
Shivanya was confused:Where did Ritik go?
Ritik came back soon.
Shi:Ritik..where did you go?
Rit:I bought a burka from the near by textile shop.
Shi:But why burka?
Ritik took the burka and gave it to her:You wear this and come.
Shi:But why should I wear this?
Rit:If you wear this nobody will recognize you.So that we can roam around comfortably.
Shivanya smiled:Ritik..you are very clever.
He smiled.
Shivanya came wearing burka.

Ritik smiled:Now nobody will recognize you.
She smiled.They went to the beach.
They held their hands together and walked along the beach.They made their feet wet together.
Viren came there.
V:Wow..so nice to be here.
Suddenly his eyes fell on Ritik in the small snacks shop at the beach.Ritik bought some snacks and walked towards Shivanya and gave it to her.
V:What?Ritik with a burka lady?Will she be Shesha?Why should Shesha wear burka?
Viren dialed Shesha's number from the near by telephone booth.Shesha picked up the phone.
Shesha:Hello..hello..who is this?
Viren cut the call.He smirked:So she is not Shesha.Leaving his newly bride Shesha alone at home in the name of meetings Ritik is roaming around with his girl friend.Cool Ritik.In front of others he i still living in his late wife Shivanya's memories.But actually he is enjoying with his ex-girl friend.Great my dear brother in law.

Viren observed them secretly.Ritik and Shivanya fed snacks to each other.
After some time Ritik and Shivanya went back home.Without their knowledge Viren followed them in an auto.
V:Guess this is that burka lady's house.
Viren called a man who passed by.
V:Do you know who stays here?
He:Actually the house owner is not staying here.His relative one lady is staying here on rent.
V:Ok..she is staying here alone?
He:Ya.We heard that her husband is working in the Gulf.
Viren thought:In her husband's absence she is enjoying with her boy friend.Ritik has selected the right girl as his girl friend.

After Ritik reached home Viren went towards him.
V:Who was the lady in burka?
Ritik was shocked.
He stammered:Lady in burka?What are you asking?
Viren smirked:I saw you with a burka lady at the beach.
Ritik was shocked.He started sweating.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Again same thing Rithik...he can't see the pain that Shivangi is going through...why?? and even Shesha , though the way she treats shivangi is wrong but the point is that whay she wants ?? Only her husbands love and care na...then what's wrong in that...Rithik praises her and enlightens her hopes and then...breaks them...she would surely be angry na...I won't say anything about RiVanya scenes ,loved them but here to I found Rithik being selfish...he wants to be happy with Shivanya but doesn't understand her pain...well Shivanya is also acting a bit dumb...Now Viren is evil here too...what will he do now? Wish he exposes Rithik though I feel he'll blackmail him for money??...Lets see...Loved The flashback RiVanya scenes , atleast Rithik was good...just another thing , I don't find Rithik weak...I mean he is married to Shesha and Is completely avoiding her and supporting Shivanya in front of her...I found him selfish...because I suppose , he is only worried about money...please forgive if I hurt you...would wait for next episode and this is an SS , right?? Would be happy if it has some unexpected end...Love you...be happy...
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