Door hoke bhi paas ho tum - One Shot for ViDev

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This is an imaginary shot by me after the sudden transfer of Vidhi by Dev. Kindly read and give your views please πŸ™πŸ™

It was a Sunday and Dev was hanged out with Vidhi's thoughts.

Dev's view

Kya mera aise Vidhi kaa transfer karwana sahi thaa ? Branch office mein bas ek accountant hi chahiye tha toh koyi bhi ban sakta hein. Mein chahta thaa toh Manager se kehke kisi aur ko uss mein appoint bhi karwa sakta thaa. Par Vidhi kaa jiss tarah se mujhse coffee shop mein baat karna ....Kya sach mein usse lagta hein kee usse mujh jaise life partner...No...yeh kaise possible hein ? Pariwar, Samaj aur joh fark hein umra ke inn sabke uss paar woh khadi hein aur mein iss paar khada hoon. Mera toh aadhi umra hi kaafi struggles se guzare hein. Uss mein naadan see masoom see Vidhi ko kyun lawun ? Mujhe pata hein uske liye yeh bahut shocking hein. Bina kisi explanation deke achanak se transfer karna ....par agar woh poochegi toh kya kahun mein ? Mein usse milunga nahin, phone agar aa bhi Gaye toh udawunga nahin. Baar baar phone agar Karegi toh mein kahunga kee mein busy hun, bahut busy.....Mein uss se kabhi baat nahi karunga, kabhi nahi....Par abb toh har subah meri aankhein uski talash karti hein office mein. Sundays jab aate hein toh bhi mein sochta hoon kee yeh jaldi khatam ho jaaye aur kal subah jaldi aaye taaki mein Vidhi ko dekh sakun ....Nahin nahin...yeh kaise feelings aa rahe hain mujhe.....I guess mujhe kahun jaana chahiye..Aise khaali baithunga toh aur bhi tarah tarah ke khayal man mein aayenge... Yahin sahi hein kee mein kahin jawun..

Dev reached Baalghar with a thought that here he won't be hanged with Vidhi's thoughts..But to his surprise Vidhi was there. She was sitting at the floor πŸ˜” with teary eyes and her hand was placed on Rocky's forehead. Rocky who usually rushes near Dev whenever he arrives didn't reacted.

Dev : Vidhi !!!

Vidhi turned her face towards Dev.

Dev: Tum yahan!!

Vidhi didn't said anything...Dev went near Rocky and smiled. He bend down and looked Rocky.

Dev : Hey Champion, naye dost aate hi apne purane dost ko bhool gaye ho kya ?

Dev kept his palm at Rocky's forehead and while doing it slightly his fingers touched Vidhi's fingers. Vidhi quickly took her hand back and rolled her palm with the handkerchief. Dev observed his handkerchief was still in her hand and he recalled the way when he was advising her to think about Aakash's proposal. For a moment Dev was totally confused what to say. Rocky in between stood up from there and walked away. Vidhi and Dev stood up and they looked each other's face.

Dev : Vidhi !! Tum yahan !!

Vidhi: Sir kya aap mujhse nafrat karte hain?

Dev : Kya keh rahi ho tum Vidhi ? Mein kyun karunga Aisa ?

Vidhi: Agar aapko Mera yahan aana bhi theek nahin lagta toh mein yahan kabhi nahi awungi. Kaise bhool gayi mein kee Iss Baalghar mein bhi aapka haq hein....Aap maalik ho naa iske ....Jab marzi chahe apne staff pe gussa kar sakte ho , usse naukri se nikal sakte ho , jab chahe wapis bula sakte ho , jab chahe usse door bhej sakte ho...Aap boss hein aur mein...

Dev : Miss Vidhi

Vidhi ; Miss Vidhi yahi sunna baaki reh Gaya .... Professional ethics hein naa !! Mujhe woh paar nahi karni chahiye...Aap hi ne kaha thaa Naa mujhe...

Dev : Vidhi tum kaise baatein kar rahi ho ? Maine joh bhi Kiya uski ek wajah hein.

Vidhi; Kya wajah Sir ?

Dev : Yeh...

Vidhi : Aapne meri mangni kyun todi ? Kyun mujhe bachaye ? Hone dete naa woh rishta .....Yahi toh chahte hein naa aap kee mein aapse door jawun hamesha ke liye toh ussi din hone dete naa.....

Dev : Meri aankhon ke saamne ek masoom see ladki ki zindagi barbad ho rahi thi.Aur maine aisa naa hone se usse bachayi.... Tumhari jagah koyi aur hota naa tab bhi yahi karta mein....

Vidhi: Pata hein Sir....Par kya Sir kisi aur ladki ke kehne pe kya aap rukenge raat bhar uske ghar mein? Boliye naa Sir

Dev : Tumhare parents ke khatir ruka thaa mein....

Vidhi: Sir mujhse koyi galti huyi kya ? Aapne Mera transfer kyun karwaya ?

Dev : Miss Vidhi !! Dekho mein chahta hoon kee....

Dev looked Vidhi's eyes and thought: Kaash mein tumhein bata paata kee joh bhi armaan tumhare dil mein jage hein unn armaano ke liye meri zindagi mein koyi jagah nahi....Tum bahut khaas ho mere liye Vidhi, bahut khaas. Tum mujhse door ho jawo yeh mein bhi nahin chahta. Par tumhari aankhein mein mere liye joh bhi juzbaatein dikh rahe hein usse dekhkar bhi andekha karna pad raha hein mujhe. Kuch seemayein aisi hein jisse paar karna mushkil hein...Aur paar karne ki koshish bhi karun naa tab bhi raste mein jitne bhi kaatein bichoye hein woh chub jaayenge. Bahut dard hoga Vidhi, mein tumhein woh dard nahi Dena chahta hoon. Abhi joh dooriyan hein woh aansu denge tumhein, takleef hoga. Par agar maine aisa nahin kiya toh..

Vidhi: Sir aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahe hein? Please batayiye naa meri koyi galti hein?

Dev : Haan. Kayi baar tum office ...... Office late aati ho.....

Vidhi : Par Sir aapko pata hai kee mere Ghar ki haalat, pichli baar Chaachi roki thi..

Dev : Stop it Miss Vidhi..Har baar koyi Naa koyi excuse banake kaafi din late aayi ho tum....

Vidhi: Par Sir har din toh aisa nahin hota. Infact maine usko compensate karne ke liye ober time bhi kaam kee hein.....Sir mein aage se kabhi late nahin awungi. Milapini maa ki Kasam Sir...Aur mein office mein aapse koyi personal baar bhi nahin karungi...

Dev ; Miss Vidhi! ! !! Tum jaise imaandar accountant ki bahut zarurat hein Raichand group ke liye, mein tumhari honesty ki respect karta hoon ......Isliye mein chahta hoon kee tum hamare branch office mein bhi acche se kaam Karo aur...Aur...

Vidhi : Mein samajh gayi Sir. Aapko koyi explanation dene ki zarurat nahi....Sir aapko pata hein mere dil mein kya hein phir bhi aap chahte hein kee mein door ho jawun toh mein jaa rahi hun Sir .

Vidhi turned to leave.

Dev : Vidhi !! Tum bacchon se nahin miloge?

Vidhi: Bacchon ko kahani sunani padti hein Sir. Iss waqt meri kismat ki kya kahani hein woh bhi mujhe nahi pata toh mein kya sunawungi bacchon ko ? Ho sake toh aap sunayiyega kahani ....Bacche khush ho jaayenge....

Dev felt to held her hand and stop her.. But he folded his hand .

Vidhi: Thank you Sir . Meri zindagi mein aane ke liye, mujhe raah dikhane ke liye... Thank you

Saying this she walked from there wiping her tears with Dev's kerchief. Dev silently watched her and when she left the gate he ran towards the gate and turned his eyes. He screamed Vidhi in pain but she was not there to hear as already she had crossed the road. Dev bend down in knees and screamed Vidhi !!!! Rocky came behind and barked..Dev hugged Rocky tightly with teary eyes..

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Please read and drop your views

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Emotional 😭😭😭


You know I was imagining what if the story had a leap and Vidhi had a child....how interesting the story would have turned...

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Kya karun ? Show khatam ho chuke hain πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

But subah udte hi Dev Vidhi ki yaad aayi.

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Originally posted by: Revutty

Kya karun ? Show khatam ho chuke hain πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

But subah udte hi Dev Vidhi ki yaad aayi.

Same here! I can't watch the last two episodes. It'll make me even more sad. I'm waiting for a few more days.
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Hey revu!!! Kya kahe har baar ki tarah dhaye update. Bahut emotional tha.. pehle vale show ka feel aagayi . Uss time pe har ek din ek naya emotion hota tha scenes mein. Vo sab yaad dilaya and your ending dev falling on and screaming Vidhi will make a great impact on readers heart and it justifies og Dev’s internal struggle.

Ek kaam karte hai jo bhi interested writers daily ek scene pe apna version likhte hai

just an os. Like that forum will be active by creating new threads .

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Beautiful & emotional one.. ❀️❀️πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

Purane din yaad aa gye.. 🀧🀧 just loved it.. ❀️❀️

But plz xr do write more.. ab to in os ka hi sahara ha.. 🀧🀧 Already missing videv so much 😒😒😒

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I don't know what to do. Today is weekend and work is less. I tried reading your Chupke chupke .But once I started my eyes got teared and I felt I won't be able to give reviews. Then after hours again tried but not able to read because the emotions you showcased were so deep and the old episodes are running in my heart . I thought to write OS something romantic which may change my mood but that also didn't worked. This one didn't turned romantic. I tried reading Gaga's work too but seeing Dev's daughter, Vidhi's emotions there I stopped that one also in middle. If I won't give reviews then it may disappoint you guys. But I really can't get over from the emotional side of ViDev. It's so heart breaking to accept truth.

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Maddy 😭 missing them so much. It's so hard for me to write for them now. Whenever I writes ViDev just comes before me and the moments also . I miss show so much and chatting with our friends also.

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I tried reading your FF. But in between I cried a lot seeing Sejal, Vidhi and the way emotions are portrayed by you. So I thought may be after some hours I will be able to give reviews but again I read the same emotional rollercoaster stucked me so hard. I thought if I write an OS may be my mood will change. But it didn't turned romantic , kya karun 😭😭😭 I never thought this show has so much impact on me.

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