Hi guys,
I have recently started watching nbt. Still haven't completed watching it. But fell in love with this soap. And the bond shared by spiderman and chawanni is so magical that i became their deewani. So, I'm writing this os for them. This is set after 6 years, addu went missing and mohan left megha and navika.
So, let's start
Vyas nivas.
It's been 6 years addu went missing. And it's been 6 years mohan left in search of addu. But there is no information about any of them. It's like they have been vanished! Megha frequently visits Police station to know about any development in addu's case, but no luck. Same goes with mohan. After that fateful night there was no information about him too. He never called them. Never wrote any letters nor let them know about his whereabouts. After that night megha shifted to vyas nivas with nanhi much too renu's annoyance. Renu never leaved any chance to taunt them and hurt them. And slowly megha lost her hopes on mohan. It's been damn 6 years! It's not easy for her to listen all that awful words renu and her friends say about her. There is no strength left in her to fight against them or her own negative thoughts. So, she have now made her mind that mohan is not going to come back! But in all this chaos nanhi still believes that her spiderman will come back with addu. Let's see what is she doing now.
Navika aka nanhi now 16yrs old is standing in her terrace. Looking at her neighbourhood balcony which still has the bell which her spiderman tied for her, so that she can ring it and call him in her hour of need. Remembering all those happy moments with her spiderman, her best friend, she rang the bell once again with the little hope that her spiderman will come this time.
N: Spiderman, please suno na! Kal mera 17th birthday hai. Tum aaogena mujhe wish karne? Kitne din hogaya hai tumse baat kiye hue! Kya tumhe meri yaad nahi arahi? Please spiderman comeback soon.
Nanhi pleaded to her spiderman with crying voice. But as usual there was no response and she went down to her room with heavy heart.
When Clock stuck 12, megha wished nanhi, and she thanked her with a fake smile. Megha knew that nanhi is very sad but she kept quite not knowing how to cheer her up.
It's evening now and everyone in vyas family are waiting for nanhi to return from her school, they have planned a surprise party for her just with the family members.
And nanhi is walking to her house lost in her thoughts...from morning she is waiting for her spiderman.
She really wished that he return today. When she is leaving for school she imagined him saying from her behind, "Aye chawanni, sunna... Mere wish kiye bina hi tum ja rahi ho!" When she turned, she imagined him with open arms, smiling calling her for a hug. But when she went close he vanished like everytime. Brushing it off she started for her school. Well, this is not new for her. She sometimes imagines him and feel more sad when her illusion breaks that she is missing him but he is not and not even tried to contact her. And it even make her angry! To top it up today when she is on her way to home a guy had tried to misbehave with her! And he even commented that there is no one to protect her. Though navika gave him left and right, she is sad that her spiderman is not there to protect her like he promised. She always craved for a father figure when her father died. It was fulfilled by her spiderman but he too left her! That's why she is sad and angry.
Lost in her thoughts she reached her home where everyone surprised her. Though she was sad, she smiled for everyone's sake.
Tannu had started his recording when nanhi bent to take everyone's blessings. All wished her. She was about to cut her cake but stopped and looked at the camera and said,
N: Spiderman, I know tum jaha kahi bhi ho mujhe wish kar rahe honge. Par isse tumhari punishment kum nahi hogi! Mein sab kuch gin rahi hu, It's my 6th b'day after u went toh tumhe mere 6 cakes khane padenge n mujhe 6 gifts bhi dene padenge, samjhe? And tumhari punishment bhi badegi! And addu, tum ye mat sochna ki tum bach gaye! Tum se toh mein chun chunk e badla lungi! And I miss u both a lot, spiderman please jaldi addu ko lekar wapas aajao.(said it with tears in her eyes)
Though she tried to say it in a funny way, all had noticed her sad tone. And this was enough for megha to fire at nanhi and release all her frustration on her which was building in her from morning because of renu's taunts. She couldn't take it now. She went near nanhi, turned her by holding her shoulders and started shouting on her.
M: Kya, tumhe koi bhi baat ek baar mein samaj mein nahi aati? Kitni baar tumhe samjhana padega ki ab uss insaan ka hamere jindagi se koi lena dena nahi hai! Woh kabhi wapas nahi aayega.
Nanhi was already sad and also angry because of that unknown guy's comments. Now, she too couldn't hold back her temper , She removed megha's hands on her and replied firmly looking into her eyes.
N: Ma, mujhe spiderman par pura bharosa hai. Woh zarur lautega. Hamere addu ke saath who zarur wapas aayega.
Now megha's temper rose.
M: Tum kyu nahi samj rahe ho nanhi? Agar use ana hota toh who kab ka aachuka hota. Lekin sach yahi hai ki woh addu ko dundhna nahi chahta. Usike wajah se hamrara addu hum se door hai! Mein use kabhi maaf nahi karungi!
Now tears had started pour from megha's eyes and she turned her back to navika.
N: Lekin mein ne toh aap ko maaf kiya hai na ma?
Megha turned to her confused by her words.
N: Ha, ma. Aap ke wajah se mera spiderman chala gaya lekin mein toh aapko maaf kar rahi hu na? She asked her with choking voice.
M: Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? Asked her confusedly
N: Ha, ma. Spiderman apni marzi se nahi apki ki wajah se gaya tha na? Who addu ko yaha se bhi dund sakta tha, lekin who chala gaya. Aap ne use majbur kiya jana keliye. Aap ke baton ke wajah se uska dil tut gaya aur use jana pada! She said while sobbing.
M: Toh mein bhi kya karti nanhi? Apni bacche ki guneghar ko apne saamne dekhkar jeleti kya? Tumhe toh mujhe samajna chahiye na? She too is crying now.
N: Nahi ma mujhe nahi samajna aapko kyunki aap galat ho! All the anger n frustration she have in kept her for all the years is now coming out.
She continued while megha looked at her with wide eyes.
N: Addu, ke khone mein sirf spiderman ki hi nahi balki hum donon ke bhi galathi hai. Mein ne aap ko promise ki thi na ki mein aur spiderman milkar use shaadi keliye manayenge. Lekin mein ne usse spiderman ko papa ki roop mein accept karwanekeliye try kiya hi nahi! Aur aap ne bhi khoshish nahi kiya! Ek akela spiderman kya karta ma?
N: Aur aap spiderman ka chehra isliye dekhna nahi chahti thi kyunki aap guilty the! Guilty the ki aap addu ko mana nahi payi! Kyunki aap ki bhi galathi thi!
Megha looked at her shocked!
N: Aap ye nahi chahti ki koi aap pe ungli uthaye. Koi ye kahe ki aap apne khushi ke liye apni bte ko duhki kiya. Isiliye bade asani se sara blame spiderman pe daldiya!
This was too much for megha now, and she slapped nanhi yelling bas.
Nanhi replied looking into her eyes.
N: Aap ne abhi mujh pe haat uthaya. Aur iska aapke paas wajah job hi hai who sahi hai. Lekin jab spiderman ne addu pe haath uthaya toh who galat hai, hai na? Kyun? aap mere sagi hai aur who addu ka sautela hai isiliye? As she asked megha had covered her mouth in shock.
N: Aur mein ne bhi bina soche samjhe usse sautela keh kar usse bahut hurt kiya! Lekin kasam se ma, mein usse maafi mangne wali thi! Kya karti us din mujhe kuch samaj nahi aya aur meine us pe apna gussa utar diya, mein bhi toh bacchi thi na ma. Lekin aap toh bade thi. Aap toh thoda soch liya hota.
N: Lekin aap ne bhi sirf apni taraf se socha. Us pe kya beeth rahi thi who nahi socha. Aur jo man mein ayi hogi wahi keh diya hoga. Aur who jo aap se itna mohabbat karta hai ki chala gaya aap ke baat maan kar. Ye bhi nahi socha ki mein uske bina kaise rahugi? Kya karungi? She is sobbing now
N: Aur aap ko aisa kyun lagta hai ma, ki who addu ko nahi dund raha hai? Jab ki who aapko aur mujhe chod kar sirf isiliye gaya taki addu ko dund sake aur aap khush reh sake. Lekin aap ko uski kadar hi nahi hai!
N: Ek baat batayiye ma, sacch batayiye. Agar spiderman ki jagah papa hote toh? She asked megha holding by her shoulders.
N: Agar uski jagah papa ne addu pe haath uthaya hota, toh? Uski jagah addu papa pe naraz ho kar bhag gaya hota toh? Tab aap kya karti? Kya aap tab bhi papa se aise baat karti? Yahi kehthi ki unka chehra aap ko aapki bte ki dard ka ehsaas dilathi hai, aur isiliye who chale jay? Megha is crying and yelled nanhi!
N: Kyun ma aapko itni takleef kyun ho rahi hai? Jawab dijiye! Megha cried even more as nanhi asked her as she doesn't know how to answer her questions.
N: Aur spiderman bhi bina soche chala gaya! Usne bhi apna sautelapan dikhadiya!! Agar mein uski beti hoti toh kya who jata mujhe aisa chod kar? kum se kum mujhse contact mein toh rehta, aisa gayab nahi hota! Who bhi bina bye kahe. She said sobbing hard.
N: Aap donon ek baat bhul gaye, ma. Ye ki spiderman mere papa ban ne se pehle, matlab aap ke pati ban ne se pehle hi mera dost bana tha. Mera best friend. Aap ko koi haq nahi tha mujhe apne best friend se dur kar ne ka. Lekin aap ne kiya. Aur mein itne din chup isiliye thi kyun ki mein aap ko aur taqleef nahi dena chahti thi. Kyunki, mein aap ke taqleef samajthi hu. Lekin ab aur nahi ma. Aap ko bhi mera dard samaj na chahiye. Mein ab itna dard chupa nahi sakthi. She said closing her eyes while sobbing.
Megha knows that she is right, Nanhi is her support system after mohan left. And she was so engrossed in her own griefs that she neglected her daughter's sadness. Now she is ashamed of herself. And nanhi stromed out of her house while megha sat crying.
At the picnic spot.
Nanhi sat crying under the tree. The same tree on which she wrote,"Nanhi loves papa"
This place not only has her and her papa's memories. But it also has her and spiderman's memories.
She sat their talking to her father's photo.
N: Papa, mujhe pata hai ki spiderman ma se bahut pyar karta hai. Isiliye jab ma ne kaha ki usse dekh kar unhe takleef hoti hai, who chala gaya taki unhe koi takleef na ho. Aur phir addu ko dundna bhi toh uski responsibility hai na.
Lekin who mujhe kyun bhul gaya? Kya spiderman ko mujhse pyar nahi hai? Ya phir mein uski responsibility nahi hu kya? Who mujhe bina bye bole hi chala gaya, kyun? Mein ne usse papa nahi bhulaya na shayad isiliye usse laga hoga ki mein uski responsibility nahi hu? Lekin mein ne hamesha usse apna bestfriend mana hai, toh kya ek friend ki tarah hi sahi mujhse contact mein kyun nahi raha? Koi phone nahi, koi letter nahi! Who kaha hai kaisa hai kuch nahi pata! Kya usse meri yaad nahi aati?Agar mujhe uski zarurat padi toh? Waise mujhe toh hamesha se uski zarurat hai. Aap ke baad ek wahi toh hai jo mera best friend bana hai. Aur waise bhi, Wada toh usne ma se ki thina ki who jab tak addu ko nahi dundega tab tak unhe apna chehra nahi dikhaya, lekin mujhse toh nahi hai na? Kya mujhe spiderman par koi haq nahi hai? Atleast saal mein ek baar toh mujhse baat karleta, sirf ye jan ne keliye hi sahi mein kaisi hu, ma kaisi hai? Kya usse meri phikar nahi hai? Usne socha hoga ki apne chawanni hi toh hai, jab chahe tab wapas aakar "aye chawanni sunna" kahega toh maan jaungi!
Lekin aap dekhna papa, mein is baar itni asani se nahi manungi. Akhir che saal who mujhse dur raha hai solid punishment toh banti hai, hai na? Dekhlena Mr. Mohan Bhatnagar, aap ko mein kitna sataungi! Bas ek baar wapas aajaye phir dekhna kya karti hu. Dubara spiderman ko mujhe chod kar jana khayal hi nahi ayega!
Saying that, she leaned on to the tree and closed her eyes allowing her tears to fall, silently holding a knotted hanky in her hands. And the sky turned dark just to become bright next morning.
Ah, Finally its over! I'm sorry it became longer than expected. This os is my way to visualize how chawanni gradually became Ms. Navika. And how her anger turned into hatred for mohan bhatnagar. As, I said earlier I haven't watched any season completely. So, if u felt any thing out of character just let me know.
Well, this my first ever story to post. So, please feel free to express ur views honestly. And criticism is most welcomed.
Thanks for bearing me 😊
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