Hillaa Luxji!!! 😲 A train accident and a suspense on whether something happened to the baby! As you have mentioned that this is a happy story, I am little relaxed here! 😊
And I really liked the way you wrote the accident explaining the things in a realistic way without much drama! That's really special and I enjoyed your writing being simple and straight forward without overrating the incident! 👏👍🏼
I don't want to predict or anticipate anything 'cos I am enjoying your flow of events and will keep it that way without any expectations!!! Keep it going dearie!!! 😃 And I am sure you will keep things neat and sweet without negativity! 🤗
Still cudn't help thinking!! This incident might give way for a close bonding between Mahesh's family and Megha, 'cos of her saving their little angel at any cost! What say??!! 😉 Or even better something to do with Megha being brought into their house for some reason as a thanksgiving 😳! Haai Haaiii!!! Your turn of events bring sweet imagination for me!!! As I said I will wait and watch the interesting turns in your own imagination! 😃
Edited by Senpoo - 11 years ago
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