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Posted: 12 years ago
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I AM WRITING A OS OR THE 1ST TIME,SO SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES😳
part 1
vikram is in love with dia.he cannot miss a moment to see her.but hr was thinking that is it love or just liking? he gets a call
viki:helo..inspecter vikram ..kya?thekhe
he calls ammaji
avatar picks the phone
avatar:helo
viki:hrlo..avatar bhai..main vikram bol raha hu.
avatar:ha boliye inspecter ji
viki:wo aapse karan ke case ki sunai ki aat karni thi..karan ki bail agle hafte tak ho jaye gi..lekin uskeliye dia madam ko lagatar 7 in p.s aana ho ga
avatar:kyu?
viki:i,samjh liye ek formality ha
avatar:thekhe fir
viki;acha ji,ab phone rakhte hai
avatar tells ammaji about vikrams phone and she agrees..dia is going 2to the ps everday..as dia comes,viki use to just stare her..this proved that he loves her..but he did not new whats in dia' heart..he decided to propose dia after karans bail
A week is over
karan is out of the jail..ammaji with family and ispect viki are celebrating.vikram calls dia aside to propose her:
dia:kahiye,kye bulaye hume?
viki:wo mujhe aapse kuch baat karni ha
dia:boliye
viki:wo...
dia:wo?
viki:...
dia:zara jaldi boliye...humebahut sa kaam he
viki:wo
dia:ha..age to boliye
viki:...wo...wo
dia:sss...kabse wo-wo kiye ja rahe ho;abhi batayi warna hum ja rahe he
viki:wo
(dia turns away to go)
viki: I LOVE U
dia is shocked:))))))))
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by the ways guyz
my real name is shivani
i have 2 names..1 is shivanjali and 2 is shivani
all my accounts are with shivani name
but this is the first time i have used shivangi as my name
u can also follow me on FB
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100002267006859
and pl let me no if ur sending me req;also message me that i no u on if
coz i am bad in remembering names
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part 2
dia could not belive of what she heard..she could not have imagined to listn these words from other than shaurya...
viki:dia...mein tumse pyar kar ta hu aur tumseshadi karna chahta hu
dia...
viki:mein janta nahi ki aapke dil mein meri liye kya hai...lekin meri liye aapke dil mein sirf pyar hai...aur kuch nahi..
dia:hum itne jaldi aap ko jawab de de...hume thoda waqt chahiye
viki:acha to fir...kal shaym 4 baje gaon ke peeche ke khet mein mein aap ka intezar karunga...aap aapne jawab sab ke vichar kar ke lena
dia:agar hum ne na kaha to?
viki:na to koi baat nahi..ye zarrori to nahi ki jo mein chahu wo aap bhi chaho
just then tanisha comes and asks them " kya baatein ho rahi hai???someting serious?viki says"nahi aise kuch baat nahi ha...aap dia ji se puch lena>>>>just then ammaji calls viki"chore zara yaha to aa"
viki xomes followed by tanisha and then dia
ammaji:chore,,tere jitne bhi tarif karu,kam se...jo tune mare parivaar ke liye kiya se uske liye tera dhanyawad...tere ye ehsaan mein zindagi bhar na bhul saku
viki:ammaji,aap ye kaise baat kar rahe ho...aap mujhse bade ho aur aapka haq banata hai mujh par
ammaji:na chore,jo tune mere liye kiya se woh to koi aapna bhi nahi karta...toofa to tane lena hi hoga...bal kya chahiye tujhe?
viki:ammaji,mujhe aapse kuch nahi chahiye,jisese cahiye use milne ki ummed rakhta hu(sees dia)acha thekhe to ub mein chalta hu...
(while going sees dia and smiles at her and moves on)
as he goes dia falls on the groundand starts crying...tanisha sees her and goes to her...santosh,chanda,avatar and karan follow her...karan"kya hua dia"tanisha"dia,insepecter vikram ne tumsekuch bura kaha ki unke jane ke baad tum rona shuru kar di...kya hua? dia"insepecter vikiram humse pyar karte hai aur chahte he ki humunse shadi kar le:)))
hope u liked it
please do like and comment
pet name for vikram-dia
"vikia"
hahaha lol😆




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shivu I loved it! can't wait to read the next part!!! You're so good at this! 😛

nice idea about vik-ia but Shadia sound way better! That wasn't supposed to be offensive! Just a defending Shaurya! Sorry if I offended you...didn't mean too! But I have to defend Shaurya! vik-ia makes me feel sad 😭 😉 notice how I put a hyphen between vik-ia dont like their names together :(((( but i didnt put one between Shadia ;)

Write the next part soon pleeeasssee cant wait!! ayse part of the story me chordi ki ab yahi sochthe rahengey ki ab kya hoga? 😊 once again LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! once again: Go Girl!
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Asm !!!!! And u r Shivanjali gupta or something right??? Nw keeping pic of shaurya dia night scene i think u r already in my frnd list check Pooja Agarwal or Ashna Smehi
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Originally posted by: poojawal_Pooja_

Asm !!!!! And u r Shivanjali gupta or something right??? Nw keeping pic of shaurya dia night scene i think u r already in my frnd list check Pooja Agarwal or Ashna Smehi


Po!! Haven't talked to you in ages!! how are you babe!! Missing Shadia as much as me?? :(( ;)
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Originally posted by: poojawal_Pooja_

Asm !!!!! And u r Shivanjali gupta or something right??? Nw keeping pic of shaurya dia night scene i think u r already in my frnd list check Pooja Agarwal or Ashna Smehi


no...my accont name is Princess Shivani...shivanjali gupta is my frnd
ya,u r on my frnd list..as pooja..u have a grp Shaurya dia the legendary couple and a page called na ana iss desh laado young generation right?
u stay in dhanbad and ur pet name is cherry
am i right?
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THE NEXT PART WILL BE LITTLE TOUGH FOR ME TO WRITE..COZ IT WILL SHOW DIA TAKING DECESION...
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Originally posted by: shivusharma

THE NEXT PART WILL BE LITTLE TOUGH FOR ME TO WRITE..COZ IT WILL SHOW DIA TAKING DECESION...


your scaring me shivu! 😉 😲
but whateva your write will be awesome! i know that much!! 😊
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