Originally posted by: mjht_one
nori babes shall read ur ff soon:) justgive me 15 mins an di will be bak to comment:)
Originally posted by: mjht_one
NORI...omg hun...never knew this hidden talent of yours...omg hun u r just amazing...i love u so much rite nw for writing this ff...
wow it just beyond words yaar...its just superb...amazing and ur english is just perfect...
omg i can't wait for the next chapter do update soon...dying to read it...
yeah i knw what u mean abt ammaji and her slang...they are just out of this world and hard to write...but none the less good job and just keep up the good wrk cause i love ur ff nd i think u shld keep on writing more and more
Originally posted by: darshana23
Nori, done with first part... I will read second part too and comment...
But I really wish first part would have been bit longer...😉
Never mind, u have given that in second part so I am all for it...
nice ff... update soon...
Originally posted by: darshana23
Nori, finished reading second part... I loved each and every moment you penned down... Karan's helplessness for his sister to Diya's concern. Rana, Kuldeep's and Param's thoughts... Most importantly Jhanvi and Surya's thoughts...😳
Everything is so beautifully convinced!! Keep writting girl... waiting for more now...
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