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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ nidhi:
get well soon dear😊, i hv accepted ur frnd rqstπŸ˜ƒ !! & never mind d update, it was gud..thik hone ke baad ek lambi si update dena ok ?? πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 7

Recap: shaurya is confused

Shaurya is playing guitar and is remebring the moments

He had spent with dia

NEXT MORNING

Dia is in the garden of the college.

She is reading a book.

Shaurya passes by and notices dia.

He is looking at her costently.

When janvi comes.

Janvi: (eating a apple ) kya dekh rahe ho?

He dosent reply.

Janvi:shaurya? Shaurya,

Shaurya turns.

Janvi:oye kahan khoye rehte ho tum aaj kal? Pagal ho gaye ho?

Shaurya : mein pagal ho gaya,haan shayad se.

Janvi: what?

Shaurya: forget it.

After the class.

Shaurya is at the basketball and imagines dia is standing there.

He snaps out of his imagnation .

Shaurya:tu sach mein pagal ho gaya hai.bhukh bhi lagi hai,kahin ye sab mughien bhukh ke mare to nahi to dikh raha hai,chalo canteen ke darshan ho jaye.

At the canteen

Shaurya is standing at the counter.

Dia comes.

Dia : hi shaurya.

Shaurya: hi (in a whisper) koi baat nahi hota hai hota hai.ye to nakli hai.

Dia:kya?mein nakli hun?

Shaurya:huh kya?

dia: tum,tum pagal ho gaye ho?

Shaurya:umm,nahi mein pagal? Nahi to.

Dia:accha thike forget it. Ye lo deepti mam ne tumhara id card bheja hai.

(handing him the card)

Shaurya: thanks,waise tum kuch khao gi?

Dia:sure

After eating.

Dia:bye mein late ho rahi hun

Shaurya: bye

Shaurya was also about to go.

When he notices a diary on the table.

On the cover it is written RAGHAV SANGHWAN

The end.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
this part is really very nice!!!!!!!!!!
luv this one!! <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
@ nidhi :
d update was nice 😊, but do u mean to say dat dia carries her diary by her father everywhr , even in college ?? πŸ˜•
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
It is a kind of surprise for you guyz and i dont want to reveal it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
surprise!!
Wow!! waiting for it plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Wow..its so lovely and nicely written..continue with the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
very nice FF nidhi
excellent
bt i dindt like the part that a ball hit my cutie diya
dont make her hurt anytime
plll
pl continue n read my FF also if u get time
here's the link
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
do u like it
if yes pl post den only i will continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
@Nidhi and Shash please continue u r stories
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