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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: roking_nidhi223

that is not the end of the ff
it is the end of part 2

picture abhi baki hai



dats better !! 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3

recap: Shaurya ( to himself): pata nahi tum kaun ho? Tumhara naam kya hai?

Par jab fir milenge to bracelet bhi dedunga aur introduction bhi ho jayega.

NEXT DAY

Dia and janvi are talking near the classroom

Dia: janvi tumne uss larke se mafi mangi

Janvi: ( rolling her eyes) milega tab mafi mangugi na

They are talking when shaurya passes from near by

He sees dia and janvi talking

Dia: janvi tum meri baat kyon nahi manti.

Janvi: dia tu''..

excuse me

dia turns

shaurya is standing right behind him.

Janvi: oh no!

Shaurya : wo..

Janvi: han han mein janti hun tum yahan kyon aaye ho.

Shaurya: tum janti ho?

Janvi: or nahi to kya? Mein janti hun ki tum yahan aaye ho taaki tum mughe bata sako ki meine tumhe galat samgha.

Shaurya: ah.. haan ' haan ab yaad aya. Mein isiliye yahan aya hun taki mein tumhe sb bata sakun.

Janvi: arre bare ajjib bande ho. By the way dia ne mugh sak kuch bata dia hai.

Shaurya: dia?

Janvi: (pointing at dia) meri dost dia.

Aur haan I am sorry

Someone calls janvi

Janvi:chalo bye!

Dia was about to go

Shaurya: ruko

Dia: kya hua?

Shaurya: wo ( he takes the bracelet out of his pocket) tumhara ye bracelet court mein gir gaya tha.

Dia: oh.. thanx!( she takes away the bracelet)

Shaurya: hi! I am shaurya

Dia: dia(she says with a smile)

They have normal talk when shaurya asks dia about her parents

Shaurya: tumhare parents kya karte hai?

Dia stands still for some time then she turns away.

Tears were blooming from her eyes.

Dia: (in a low voice) mughein class ke liye jana hai .

She went away

Shaurya: arre isko kya hua?

IN THE LOCKER ROOM

Dia is crying silently

When janvi enters.

Janvi: dia..

Dia? Tu ro rahi hai.

Dia: ( wiping her tears) nahi to

Umm' janvi mughien aaj ghar jaldi jana hai . mein chalti hun.

As janvi sees dia going she questions herself

Janvi: asia kya ho gaya ki ye ro rahi hai?

Janvi is walkin near the canteen area

When she sees shaurya.

Janvi : tumne dia se kuch kaha?

Shaurya: nahi

Janvi: nahi? To usse kya ho gaya.

Shaurya: meine jaise hi usse uske parents ke bare mein pucha wo wahan

Se chali gayi.

Janvi: oh teri! Tabhi mein sochun.tumne usse asia sawal kyon puacha?

Shaurya: to issme galat kya hai?

janvi: arre dia ke parents nahi hai.

The end

SORRY GUYZ FOR THE LATE UPDATE.

Edited by roking_nidhi223 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
No need to be story..ur story is quite good..so finaly shaurya meets dia.. carry on with the rest of it
Edited by jinia018 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud update, carry on wid it 👍🏼 !! yeh dil maange more !! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4

Dia in her room

She is standing near her parents picture

Suddenly karan entered.

Karan: dia..

Dia: jee bhaiya

Karan: college mein koi baat hui kya, Jo tum itni gumsum lag rahi ho?

Dia: nahi bhaiya koi baat nahi hui.

Karan: pakka na

Dia: pakka.

Karan leaves

Dia remembers what happened.

Dia ( to herself): shaurya ki isme koi galti nahi thi, use kya pata tha ki mera parents nahi hai.

Next day

In the college

Janvi is talking to herself

Dia : janvi

Janvi: dia, tu aaj kal se jyada acche mood mein lag rahi hai.

Dia wo to hai. Accha mughien locker room jana hai,mein tumse class mein milti hun.

Dia is in the locker room when she hears a familiar voice calling her name.

Dia turns

Shaurya is standing there.

Dia: tum? Tum girls locker room mein kya kar rahe ho?

Shaurya: mein, to yaha tumhe sorry bolne aaya hun.

Dia: pehle tum yahan se bahar niklo.

Shaurya went outside

Dia also came outside

Shaurya: dekho mughien bilkol pata nahi tha ki tumhare parents..

Dia : tumhe kaise pata chala?

Shaurya: janvi ne..

Dia: janvi bhi na.

Shaurya: tum mughe meri koi baat khatam hi nahi karne deti.

Dia: accha sorry.mughien class ke liye deri ho rahi hai.

Dia went away.

Shaurya: ye bhi bari ajib hai. Kehna kuch aur chahti hai,kehti kuch aur hai,aur samaghti kuch aur hai.

In the class

Dia and janvi are sitting in the 2nd row

While shaurya and armaan are sitting in 3rd row.

Dia and janvi are laughing on something.

While shaurya is staring at dia.

Armaan sees shaurya .

Armman: oye mr romeo.

Shaurya: kya

Armaan: kya matlab? Tum tabse dia ko dekhe ja rahe hai aur agar jaldi se usse kuch nahi kaha to devdas ba jaoge.

Shaurya: tumhara matlab kya hai?

Armaan: dude, tum dia ko pasand karne lage ho .

Shaurya: nahi asi koi baat nahi hai.

Armaan: wo to hum dekh lenge.

The end

Edited by roking_nidhi223 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Loved it..nyc story..carry on..I'd luv to see what happens next 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5

Recap: armaan and shaurya have conversation on love.

Dia is in her garden.

Ragini enters

Dia: bhabhi aap?

Ragini: dia,janvi ka phone aya hai(handing her the phone).

On the phone

Janvi:hello, dia yaar wo jo naya assignment tha,wo humien groups mein karna hai

To mere group mein shaurya aur armaan hai, tu bhi humien join karle na plz.

Dia: thike.

Janvi: waise mugh se khud to kuch hone wala nahi hai.

Dia laughs.

Janvi: accha aaj sham ko mere ghar par aajana.

Dia: ok bye

Janvi: bye

At janvis house

The door bell rang

Janvi opened the door

Dia is standing outside.

Shaurya and armaan are already sitting inside.

Armaan: dekh teri juliet( in whisper).

Shaurya: chup kar.

Armaan:hi dia.

Dia: hi

Janvi:mein store room se saman leke aati hun.

Armaan: mein bhi aata hun.

They both went away.

Shaurya: mughien to kuch samagh mein hi nahi aa raha hai.

Dia: kya

Shaurya: ki iss assignment mein karna kya hai.

Dia starts explaining the project

While shaurya is stareing at her with sweet backgroun music playing.

Dia: ( after explaining) kuch samagh aya.

Shaurya dosent say anything he is just stareing at her.

Dia: shaurya.

Shaurya: haan kya?

Dia: arre tumhe ajank kya hua. Tum itna ajib kyon behave kar rahe ho?

Shaurya:mughien kya hua?mein to bas assie hi'

Dia: asie hi?

Shaurya: kuch nahi.

At night

Shaurya is on the bed and is still thinking about dia.

Shaurya: mein uske baare mein itna kyoun soch raha hun?

The end

sorry guyz i know this part is not very good, but i still hope u like it.

Edited by roking_nidhi223 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ nidhi : dont worry, it was nice !! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 6

Recap: shaurya is staring at dia

At the college

Janvi and dia

Dia: mein library ja rahi hun.

Janvi: fine

Dia wents away.

Armaan and shaurya

Armaan: meine dia ko library jate hue dekha.

Shaurya: to?

Armaan: tu bhi ja waise bhi wo akele hogi.

Armaan convinces shaurya to go to library.

Dia is in library sitting all alone.

Shaurya: hi

Dia: tum yahan( loudly)?

Librarian: shh

Shaurya: haan,mein kitab padhne aya hun.

He grabs a book and pretend like he is reading.

Dia:umm wo to thik hai par tumne kitab ulti pakri hai.

Shaurya looks at his book.

Dia: ab batao tum yahan kyon aye ho?

Shaurya: armaan ne bheja.

Dia:huh?

Shaurya: matlab usne kaha ki mein library ja kar kuch padh lun.

Dia:oh fine.

She started to go but her legs trip over something and shaurya catches her.

Dia: thanx (in a whisper)

And she went away.

Shaurya : what kind of feeling is this?

GUYZ I AM SORRY FOR SUCH A SMALL PART BUT I AM NOT WELL.

I WILL UPDATE THE NEXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

Edited by roking_nidhi223 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its ok dear..its nyc and cute..get well soon
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