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Posted: 13 years ago
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**FALLING IN LOVE**
GUYZ I AM WRITTING AN FF ON SAHURYA AND DIA.

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DIA SANGWAN
she is from a rich family and is very soft spoken.her parents died when she was one years old.her tauji and taaiji are like parents to her.she thinks that she will never find love.

SHAURYA SINGH
he is from a rich family.he is straight forward and is waiting for the right girl of his life.he is also very charming.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcum to d forum nidhi..keep posting !! 🤗& carry on wid d FF, it seems promising !! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1

A beautiful girl entered the college gate she was wearing salwar kameez and most of the boys were amused by her beauty.

Suddenly somebody tapped on her soldier . It was janvi waiting for her best friend dia.

Jahnvi : dia tu bhi na kitni late ayi hai.

Dia: jahnvi mughien bahot dar lag raha hai. Aaj mera pahla din hai, pata nahi sab kaise behave karenge.

Jahnvi : dia tu dar mat mein hoon na. (in sharukhan style)

They both walked towards there class.

As they sat down miss khanna entered

Miss khanna introduced dia to the class.

After the class ended both dia and jahvi went to the canteene to have some lunch.

Dia: aaj kuch khaas padai nahi hui na.

Jahnvi: accha tughe asia lagta hai mughe to laga ki sara course ek din mein hi khatam karva denge.

Dia : mein locker room se apni kitabe leke ati hun.

As she was heading towards the locker room ,she ran into someone.

She looked up and saw a handsome man with choclate brown eyes.

Kya aap dekh kar nahi chal sakti

He said without seeing her.

Dia: sorry'(in a low voice)

and headed towards the loker room.

He turned to see the girl but she was gone.

Shaurya'

Somebody called him

It was armaan his best buddy

Armaan: who was that girl?

Shaurya: I don't know.

Armaan: dude..! she was gorgous.

Shaurya: really! Meine to use nahi dekha par wo jo bhi hai

She cant resist my charm.

In the locker room

Dia to herself:oh god driver wait kar raha hoga ,ghar jaldi pahuchna hai.

AT DIA'S HOUSE

Dia was in her room .

Karan entered

Dia:bhaiya..

hugs him tightly

dia: aap dehradun se waps kab aaye?

Karan:bas abhi abhi, Chal dad tughe neeche dund rahe hai.

Dia rushed downstairs

Avtar (father of karan and aditya. Tauji of dia):dia tunhara college ka first din kaisa raha

Dia:accha tha aur aditya bhaiya aur ragini bhabhi kaha hein.

Avtar: wo to kisi kam se bahar gaye huien hein.

Next morning

At the college

Janvi and dia were in the locker room

Janvi: dia tu itna dar kyon rahi hai.ye tera hi nahi sabka college mein pehla saal hai.

Dia: looking at her book) hun'.

Janvi: class ke baad mughse basketball court mein milna

Dia: thike

AFTER THE CLASS

AT THE BASKETBALL COURT

Dia was walking when suddenly something hard fell on her head

She turned and recognized the guy

He was shaurya playing with his friends.

TH END

guyz tell me if i should continue writting

Edited by roking_nidhi223 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaar please continue i really wanna see the end
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Posted: 13 years ago
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carry on nidhi..it's quite gud !! 😃
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Part 2

Recap: Dia was walking when suddenly something hard fell on her head

She turned and recognized the guy

He was shaurya playing with his friends

Armman: (in a low voice) dude! This is the same girl yaar.

Shaurya: oh really!

Shaurya was about to say something

When janvi came running .

Janvi: dia kya hua?

Dia: janvi who'..

Janvi: (turning to shaurya) tum jo bhi ho..

Tum meri dost ko pareshan kar rahe the.

Shaurya: mein to'

Janvi: chup karo.(turning to dia)

Dia tu chal yaha sen. Inko to mein baad mein dekhti hun.

Janvi went away in anger.

Dia: I am sorry

Shaurya: it 'ok

Dia went away

Shaurya watched as dia went away

He was about to go when

He saw something on the ground.

It was a bracelet.

At the locker room

Janvi (dia came bursting in)

Dia: tum kuch to socha karo tum kya karti ho, kya bolti ho.

Janvi: meine kya kia?

Dia: accha tumhe yaad nahi hai tumne basketball cout mein kya kia

Janvi: ek to meine tughe us larke se bachaya, aur tu hai ki mugh pe chilla rahi hai.

( dia tells her every thing that happened )

Janvi: oh teri! Tu mughe tab nahi bata sakti thi

Dia: tum kisi ko bolne ka mauka dogi tab na.

Janvi: chal koi baat nahi milega to sorry keh dungi.

Dia: koi baat nahi matlab? Tumne use kitna kuch suna dia.

Janvi: oye hoye! Tughe itni fikr kyon ho rahi hai

Kahi like ' shike to nahi karne lagi na use.

Dia: ( crossing her arms) tum na kahi ka topic kahi aur hi lejati ho.

Shaurya sitting alone in the class

Holding the bracelet in his hands.

Shaurya ( to himself): pata nahi tum kaun ho? Tumhara naam kya hai?

Par jab fir milenge to bracelet bhi dedunga aur introduction bhi ho jayega.

The end

Edited by roking_nidhi223 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ nidhi :
yeh kya yar..kahani abhi shuru bhi nahi hui aur tum THE END keh diya ?? now dats absolutely not fair😡 !! put up d next part as soon as possible , it was quite gud !!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that is not the end of the ff
it is the end of part 2

picture abhi baki hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey fabulous story..waiting for the next part. 😊 carry on with ur work 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry double posted..nice story..keep it up
Edited by jinia018 - 13 years ago
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