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Guyz its really disappointing to see
not many poeple voting...really sad
and rite now we have a tie for the runner-up so could could people please vote...
|Rab ne bana di jodi|
Today is Janvi & Dia's 19th birthday. All these 18 years, Dia had been all alone on her birthday, spending the day alone with no celebrations, no blessings or a loving word from Ammaji, Jogender tauji & Gajender tauji even on this one day. All of them held her responsible for her parent's death, specially Ammaji. It is true that the ladies of the house had been always sweet to her, & not to forget her dear Karan bhaiya & Avtar tauji, caring & protecting her in every situation, but even then they couldn't always protect her from Ammaji's wrath. Ammaji always used to taunt her & remind her of this fact & forced her to lament & condemn herself for her parent's death. Dia looked at the board above her table..the papers are fluttering in the air. " Mujhe apni paida hone ka afsosh hai"..On every birthday Ammaji forced her to write this & pin it up in her own room in front of her very eyes..Dia stood near it for a long time, then slowly raised her hand, picked up one paper she had written & pinned it last year.."ab mujhe iski koi zarurat nahi,aaj mujhe apni paida hone ka koi afsosh nahi", she thought to herself..she calmly rolled up the paper & threw it in the waste paper basket.
One by one Dia took the papers & one by one she threw them in the waste paper basket, with the same thought in her mind "mujhe apni paida hone ka koi afsosh nahi" . She paused for a moment, den looked around her. Janvi is not there in the room. This is the first time dat she will be sharing her birthday with her. She thought about Janvi, her sister, the one person who made this change possible in her life.. & in Ammaji's heart. She thought about the last 1 year, she met Janvi as a friend in college, then she became best friends with her & then one day she discovered that she is her dear sister, her own blood. Ammaji was determined not to let her in Krishna Nivas post Rajveer bhaiya's arrest but Janvi fought her way into the family, with a vow that she would conclude the struggle for justice in the family that was started by her two mothers. & she won. Or rather, they, Dia & Janvi, have won. Yes they have been tested again & again by destiny but they have stood it boldly & overcome it. Now after 1 year, they have emerged victorious. Ammaji is a greatly changed woman now.
Dia was about to go out looking for Janvi. But just at that moment the door opened & Janvi came in running, overwhelmed with joy ."Dia..Dia..woh Ammaji.."she stammered."Ammaji? Ammaji kya Janvi?" Dia couldn't understand anything."Dia who Ammaji ne.." "Ammaji ne kya Janvi?" Janvi grabbed Dia by the arm,"tu chal mere saath". Before she could say anything, Janvi dragged her out of her room, through the passages & then straight to the hall.."Yeh dekh..hai na lovely-shovely si baat, baata kaisi lagi tujhe?"
Dia stood in the hall, totally dumdfounded. The hall has been decorated for a party & already full of guests. Dia have seen many parties in the family till now, but today's party is different from all of them. For the first time ever, a party has been thrown for her..or rather, for them. "Arre yeese ki dekh reya hai tu ha, aare aah..dekh yee sab tere uur Janvi ki janamdin ki jashn maanane ki liya aaya se.." Ammaji came forward to receive Dia & Janvi. She brought them to the center of the hall & then turned to address the guests, "aur bhai aaj ki yoh jashn sirf mahri poti yo ki janamdin ki khusiya ke liya naa se, yoh isliya bhi kyuki mahri ghar ki ye do chhodiya aapni college ki pareeksha me bhi awwal aaya se.." & the hall broke out into a huge applause in Dia & Janvi's appreciation.
Janvi is totally ecstaculated. Dia still felt that all these are just a dream. There stood before her the lady who have mentally & psychologically abused her since her childhood, now praising her granddaughters in front of the guests. Suddenly she felt Janvi grabbing her arm again, "Dia, kaha kho gayi tu? Cake nahi kaatna kya?" Dia looked at Janvi.. "Cake?" Janvi nodded her head, "cake !!" & pointed to something. Dia looked in her direction, a beautifully decorated cake is waiting to be cut. Dia moved forward with Janvi towards the cake, & the entire family came forward too. Ammaji handed the knife to them, "yee le, ib jaldi se cake kaat le ". They held the knife together, & bent down to cut the cake amidst cheers & applauses. Dia cut out a big slice..it was for Janvi, she stood up to offer it to her sister, raised her eyes & moved a step back in amazement.."Tum??"
Shaurya is standing in front of her, & Janvi peeped from behind him, laughing heartily at Dia's amazement. The whole family joined in her laughter. "kyu, kaisi lagi meri lovely-shovely si surprise?" Dia has turned white by now. Suddenly she heard Ammaji's voice, "arre dekh ki rahi hai chhodi, chal ib fatafat cake khila isne".. "e ek minute Ammaji", Janvi interrupted," Dia akeli kyu khilayegi Shaurya ko ? Janamdin uski akele ki to nahi hai, humari bhi hai..hum bhi cake khilayenge aapne dost ko.." & together they stuffed the cake in Shaurya's mouth. "Aur sunno bhai, yoh chhoda (pointing to Shaurya ) mahri khandan ka honealla damad se, isliya isne bhi khub saara aashirwad do aap sab..Le chhori yee anguthi isne pehna de(handing a gold ring to Dia)..par yaad rakhiyo, byah to thari padhai poori hone ke baad hi hoga ha ..!!"
The engagement is over. Shaurya's parents have also come to the party. They are indeed happy to get a girl like Dia as their daughter-in-law. Dia didn't expect this. But one thing is clear to her now, Janvi knew everything. She smiled, "yeh Janvi bhi na, paata bhi nahi chalta kab kya kar jaati hai." She went out looking for Janvi. "kya hua Dia, kise dhund rahi ho?" Dia turned around, it's her dear Avtar tauji. "woh tauji, main to wah Janvi ko.." "Janvi ammaji ke saath hai, teri shaadi ki planning abhi se shuru kar di hai usne" , he smiles. " aur ek baat beta, tum dono ke liye ek aur khush khabri hai" Avtar said. Dia looked at him eagerly. "Ammaji tum dono ko parivar ke jaidaad ka hissa dene wali hai, aur unhone yeh bhi kaha hai ki Janvi ko uska hissa aaj hi milega uski janamdin ki bhet me par tujhe tera hissa who teri shaadi par degi, taufe ki taur par".
Dia came back to her room. Her eyes fell on d photos of her parents & Amba . She came near it & stood there silently. Suddenly someone placed a hand on her shoulder. It's Janvi. "Tu sab kuch jaanti thi na Janvi?" Janvi nodded her head."Haa, par tu itni hairaan kyu ho rahi hai? Maine to tujhe pehle bhi kaha tha, ki main teri khushiyo ke saath koi compromise nahi hone dungi". Both were silent for a moment. Then Janvi spoke up. "Par kuch bhi bol Dia, aaj hum akhir jeet hi gaye. Mom-dad aur Amba mamma ne jo sapna dekha tha, jo ladhai shuru kiya tha, aaj humne who pura kiya hai. Aaj unki aatma ko zaroor shanti mili hogi. Hai na mamma?" She gently touched Amba's photo while tears rolled down her cheeks. Dia is also crying but still she placed her hand on Janvi's shoulder trying to console her. The next moment, Janvi turned around & hiding her face in Dia's arms broke into weeping.
Raghav, Sia & Amba looked onto their children from their photos, happy & content , to witness the victory of good over evil & more than that, the strong bond of love & affection between the two sisters that have fought all the odds of the world & emerged victorious.
ENTRY#3Yeh Kahani hai char jawan dilo ki, doh pario ki doh deewano ki
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Diya," Jhanvi aaj hamara iss college mein phela din hai, mujhe toh bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai".
Jhanvi," D, chilla yaar...tuh bhi na be faltu bein darti rahti hai...dn't wrry yaar yahan ammaji nahi aane wali teri class lene ke liye, so just calm down kudiya."
The bell for the first period rings!!!
"Accha diya dehke teri aur meri first class same nahi hai, which is not very lovely shovely, chaal ab muche jana chaiya, aur thuje bhi, tu apne first day be late nahi hona chati hogi na, so a lovely shovely bye sis."
Diya and jhanvi hug and part ways to their different classes.
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Jhanvi was making her way to her class when she suddenly bumps into a guy and falls on the floor nd so does that guy nd all his books.
" Dehke nahi chal sakte, aaj mera phela din hai is college mein aur agar mein apne phele lecture ke liye late hogi toh meri waat lag jayagi." Says jhanvi while she is helping the guy pick up his pieces of paper.
" Tum mujhse sorry magne ke baaje mujhe lecture jaad rahi ho," says the guy. He shakes his head at her and takes his pieces of paper that are in jhanvi handa and walks off.
" Oh teri, yeh toh meri insult karke chaala gaya. Isse sadoo insaanko toh mein baad mein dehk loongi, ab mujhe class jana chaiya."...jhanvi walks off to her class.
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Meanwhile diya enters her classroom and is nervous, playing with the end of her duppata while the teacher introduces her to the class and tells that she is a new student.
Everyone stares at her and some guys at the back start laughing at her nervousness and at what she is wearing, which is an anarkali suit. The teacher tells her to go sit down. Diya searches for a seat but all the seats are taken except for one at the back, she goes and sits down there, while everyone stares at her shockingly.
Diya doesn't get why everyone is so shockingly looking at her.
After a few minutes a young handsome hunk enters her class with a hot looking babe...they are the popular and rick kids of the school shaurya and tammanna aka tammy. Noone ever interferes in their business not even the teachers.
They casually walk towards the back of the classroom and come to a halt where diya is sitting.
Shaurya clears his throat, " hmmm..."
Diya turns her head up and looks at his dark chocolate brown eyes and turns her head back down to stare at her notebook.
Tammy to shaurya, " did she just ignore you, how could she"
Tammy snaps her fingers in Diya's face nd says, " Excuse me. R u new or something. Don't you know that u r sitting in our seats"
Diya loks at tammy nd then shaurya nd says, " Um woh mujhe..."
Tammy," woh mujhe..., woh mujhe...kya?"
While all this is going on shaurya is just straring into the eyes of diya, nd is thinking...there is something about that innocence in her eyes...why do I feel attracted to her...?"
Shaurya,"Tammy ,plz yaar at least give her a chance to speak,"
Tammy just stares at shaurya, never in her life had shaurya ever cut her off like this...
Diya," Woh aaj mera phela din hai, aur mujhe nahi pata tha ki yeh seat ap dono ki hai. Actually aur koi seat available hi nahi thi, toh mein yaha bad gayi,"
Shaurya *thinks to himself*, she looks so cute when she is all nervous, nd gives a killer half smile.
Diya ," mein yahan se ut jati hoon" she picks up her books and is getting ready to leave, just then shaurya hold her her hand and pulls her back.
"Sweetheart, if there are no seats left then where are you going to sit?" askes shaurya.
" Woh ...mein...yeh...woh...yeh toh apki ki seat hai na...toh mein yahan..." says diya stumblingover her words mainly cause shaurya was still holding her hand.
"Just sit down," says shaurya after an eye lock moment with diya, he then lets go off her hand.
" Shaurya, r u feeling ok? A newbie is going to sit in ur seat?" says tammy not believing what shaurya had just done.
"Tammy, u sit I ur seat, I will sit next to abhi and Vicky. Said ahurya squeezing in next to his two best buddies just across the aisle from diya.
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Jhanvi sitting by herself at the front of the classroom, just cause she was late to her lecture and the front was the only seat available...god she hated the fornt...
Jhanvi was busy day dreaming when a knock on the door bought her back to the real world.
There was a guy at the classroom door...he seemed familiar, suddenly she realised that he was the same guy that she had bumped into earlier this morning.
"TUM! Tum toh wohai saddo ho na" jhanvi yells and stands up and walks towards him.
"Oh crap! She is in my class...great., "the guy whose name happens to be armaan mutters to himself quitely.
"Tum ne kuch kaha. Vaise tum yahan kya kar rahe hoh? Oh, I know tum yahan zaroor sorry bolne ke liye aaye hoge na, aaj subha ke liye." Says jhanvi...while the whole class is staring at the drama going on.
"Koi baath nahi mein thumae maaf kiya, sabse galti hoti hai, thumse bhi hogayi."
"Mein yahan tum se mafi magne nahi aaya, mein apni clas attend karne aaya hoon."
The whole class starts laughing at the embarrassment of jhanvi.
"Arrey tum aagaye...lagta hai ki thume jhanvi se phele mil chuke ho. Jhanvi ka aaj phela din hai aur mein chata hoon ki tum is ka aacha se dhyana rakho." Said the teacher
" sure sir" says armaan...he then walks pass jhanvi and goes sits down at the front seat where jhanvi happens to be sitting.
"Jhanvi goes and sits quietly next to him and puts her head into her hands and is cursing her life while armaan just stares at her and thinks * yeh ladki toh pagal lagti hai*.
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The bell rings for break time, diya is getting her stuff and is ready to leave.
Just when she trips over someone's legs and falls backwards and shaurya catches her.
They have a big eye lock session...where they just stare deep into each other's eyes.
Diya breakes out of the eyelock and gets back up on her own feets and muuters a thank you to shaurya and walks out of the class.
Shaurya thinks to himself," There is something about her which keeps on pulling me towards her. Her eyes, her silky hair over her fave, her lips, her shyness, I love it all. I think I am falling for her."
~Te Amo...song playes...~
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While jhanvi is about to get out of her classroom she notices that no one is left in the class room except for her and that stupid guy she met this morning (btw guyz jhanvi still doesn't know that his name is armaan).
Jhanvi is about to leave when armaan notices that jhanvi left her ipod at the desk. He Goes to stop her but accidently ends up ripping her dress from the back...
Jhanvi stops and turns and loks at him and runs towards the wall and leans against it to try and hide the rip.
"I am so sorry. I didn't mean for that to happen. I...U left ur Ipod...I am sorry ...I" says armaan walking towards jhanvi.
"Just get lost" Jhanvi says with her eyes filled with tears. "Plz just go away"
Armaan takes off his jacket and offers it to jhanvi, "Wear it! No will see the rip."
Jhanvi," Y should I? Hate you. Please just leave"
Armaan," Iook I am sorry for what happened. But you partly have no other way of walking out of the room without anyone seeing the rip."
Jhanvi realised that he was right, so she tok his jacket and wore it.
Armaan gets his things and is about to walk out of the room when he turns around and says, " mera naam tum ya saddo nahi hai, mera naam armaan hai."
Jhanvi just standes there and is lost in armaan's thoughts. "Armaan, itna bura naam bhi nahi hai."
~Saibo starts playing~
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Jhanvi and Diya meet at break...they tell each other about there day.
Jhanvi," Diya , lagta hai ki yeh college bahut hi lovely shovely hona wala hai."
Diya, " sayad jhanvi, lehkin yahan toh koi ham dono se baath bhi nhai kar raha hia."
Jhanvi, " Don't worry kudiyaan, ek din yeh pura college hame dono ko zaroor pucha ga."
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3 Months later
A lot had happened in the past 3 months, A new gang had been made in the college, there were two most favourite and hot Jodi in the college.
One was jhanvi and armaan and the other was Shaurya and diya.
These four had become the bestest friends ever along with tammy, Vicky and abhi...
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~Always kabhi kabhi and school ke din songs play at the end~
Originally posted by: polly_03
dunno which 1 to vote, nikita has eliminated d 2 stories dat i lyked. ok i need tym to decide.
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