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This is my take on how the events should take place
Raghav still thinking after his choti ma left about what she adcvised and thinking of all moments with Sia Scenes like when he first met sia, went to dinner at her house, prposed her and marriage comes to his mind.) Then he thinks of all the injustice done to her by him like not accepting her as his wife, mistreatment and the way she cared for him when he was unwell. The last thing he thinks is her getting shot. He gets up and walks towards Sia's room but stops near Sonali's. Sonali is misbehaving with Sia the nth time.
Then she asks Sia to put maang tika in her forehead.Sia takes the maang tika and starts remembering the way Rags had sent the maang tika to her a few days back and gets lost in his thoughts. Sonali snatches the maang tika from her hand and talks badly with Sia. Sia cannot bear her harsh words and runs off with tears in her eyes. On the ways she sees Raghav and both their eyes meet and Raghav looks very angry.
Raghav stands there thinking something when and decides something and suddenly his brothers come in to get him dressed for mantap. Raghav says he has some important work to do but Joginder tells him to do the work after his phera since very less time is left. With a heavy heart Raghav gets dressed and walks towards the mantap with his brothers.
Raghav goes on sits in the mantap and keeps looking around but cannot find Sia there. He gestures to Jhumar and tells something in her ears. Jhumar leaves from the place. Meanwhile Sonali comes all dressed up to the Mantap and sits next to him. Raghav looks very uncomfortable and Sonali observes this and thinks once we are married i will make him forget that naukrani Sia.
Ammaji tells punditji to start the wedding ceremony when Rags sees Jhumar coming with Sia and they stand near Sheela Chachi. Ammaji tells Sia to go and stand in side because she is a naukrani etc.
Pundit is about to start telling the mantra when Rags stands up and tells Sonali that he wants to tell her and the assembled people something. Sonali gets up from her mantap. Ammaji tells Rags that all talks can happen after the ceremony but Raghav says this is very important. He turns to Sonali and tells her that he does not love her and cannot marry her. He has loved only one person in life and thats his wife Sia and if ever anyone can be his wife in this life its Sia and he cannot live without her. Ammaji and Joginder get really wild at Rags. Ammaji tells him that he better marry Sonali and that he had only said yes to this wedding and he cannot backtrack now.
Raghav says he said yes only to make Sia confess her love for him and not because he liked Sonali. He says he had already conveyed before that he loves Sia and cannot marry Sonali. But this thing has gone too far and he has to stop it now. Joginder gets really angry and threatens him to not make tamaasha in front of the villagers and shut up and marry Sonali.
Ammaji tells taht she had a doubt that Rags was close to Sia but had never expected that he cared so much. She says she has let things go too much out of hand and tells her body gaurds to throw Sia out of the haveli right now. Rags warns the body gaurds to stay away from his wife. Joginder warns Raghav that he better behave with Ammaji's orders and in this house and Veerpur only Ammaji's writ runs. They have a big fight and Joginder raises his hand on Raghav.
Just when the fight is getting out of hand Sheela Chachi and Santosh come and stand with Raghav and say they also side with him. Joginder is furious with his wife and they have an argument and bout treatment of women in the house. Joginder raises his hand on Santosh and Raghav tells him to stop it.
Ammaji says that today she will end all this drama for ever and gets a gun to finish Sia but Raghav comes in between and is hurt. Jhumar rushes to aid Raghav but Raghav says that he does not need any treatment. Ammaji has still raised the gun towards Sia but Raghav says today he gona fight to death and she has to kill him first. Sheela, Santosh, stand come and stand near him. Ammaji gets upset and on seeing her fav son injured and also that many family members have sided with Raghav throws the gun below and walks off and closes her room. Joginder also looks angrily at Raghav and walks off. Sunheri and Gajender smile at each other. Sonali cries and runs upstair to her room and locks it up. All the villagers start leaving the house discussing what Rags had done that day.
Dheeraj goes off to get a doctor to the house. Sia, Jhumar and Santosh and Sheela help Rags back to his room. Avatar says he is very happy with Rags for what he had done and only if he hd the guts Chanda would still be his wife. Santosh comments that Ammaji is heartless to have injured her own son. Rags stops Santosh and says its ok because it was his fault to have said yes to the marriage. He understands that Ammaji is really angry with him and can understand her reaction. At this sentence everyone smirk. Santosh says Rags should have been born in Satyug and not this Kaliyug to be so loyal to his mother. She further wants to say something but doctor comes and they are asked to go out.
Doctor removes the bullet and tells Jhumar and all to take good care of him because it missed a main vein by whisker. Also he asks him to come to the main hospital tommorow for further treatment and leaves. Sia stays with Raghav for the night. Sia has not talked to him since the inciodence and is very quiet. Raghav asks her whether she is still and angry with him and tells her he knows that his mistake are unforgivable in this life but he will try to make up for his past errors. Sia cries and hugs him and says its her fault to. She never trusted him and thought he was doing one more natak with her. She asks him promise that from now on he should never do this because whether she admits openly or not she loves him.
Ammaji thinking of all these incidents is upset. She is thinking how to get Rags out of Sia's love. Santosh and Joginderr have one more argument and Santosh tells that Ammaji now does not mind killing her own son for her prestige is more than her sons happiness. Joginder walks off the room. Joginder meets Ammaji and asks her whether she is fine. He says he understands her pain but when own blood is agianst there is nothing much we can do. Ammaji says if we have to remove dust from eyes we have to do it very carefully. She goes to See Sonali and pacifies her but Sonali says she is leaving and Ammaji tells her bodygaurd to leave her.
Joginder comes to Rags room to check if he is fine and seeing him asleep just runs his hand on his head. Rags wakes up and tells his brother to sit with him and Joginder helps him to sit. Rags tells him sorry for yesterday's fight and that he listened to his heart. Joginder asks him sorry for raising his hand and Rags says he never felt bad because he respects him like a father. Joginder tells him to rest and take care of himself. Rags asks how Ammaji is, is she very angry with him. Joginder says parents are angry with children for a short time then goes off. When he goes out he sees Sia getting the coffee for Rags.
Rags is short form for Raghav.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I would like to clarify that i have not made Ammaji or Rags act very harshly with each other because they both are so close to each other it would look very unrealistic. So Rags revolt should be shown slowly and not a big revolt at once because it will look very unjustifies for Rags to go against his family for one event.
There will be many more events where he will revolt agianst his family but the major event which will truly change his life and his bond with Ammaji will be Jhumar's wedding with Dheeraj.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good going yeah. Kya Raghav itna karpayega??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well written dear..but its yet to be seen if raghav can really go against ammaji n his bro jogi..mazaa toh tab aayega jab humme yeh dekhne ko milega dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeah...CV's should read these articles atleast they will receive some good & sensible plots to shoot which will make the viewers happy.....😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice dear...bt i dont think raghav will be able 2 do lyk dis,standing agiant his ammaji,never...but very nice thoughts...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice post 👏👏......... It will be a dream come true ........... 😍 😍 😍 😍 but one more thing I want from Raghav to confess that he cheated Sia in front of everybody ........... this will pressurize her to trust him again .


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Nice story..I hope CV read your story ..If real happen in the drama...best twist
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Awesome post. Tumhare muh mein ghee shakkar. I really do hope it's just like that on Monday.
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cool post.............kuch bhi ho par yeh shaadi naho 😆
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