Congratulations on your new story
Title sounds Interesting
Character Sketch is simply Fabulous
Looking forward to reading this story
Congratulations on your new story
Title sounds Interesting
Character Sketch is simply Fabulous
Looking forward to reading this story
Originally posted by: taahir004
Congratulations on your new story
Title sounds Interesting
Character Sketch is simply Fabulous
Looking forward to reading this story
Aww, thank you so much dear😳It will be up very soon❤️
PART 1 -
A lady is singing bhajan for Lord Krishna while doing aarti.
Everyone have joined their hands and praying. The lady completes her aarti and faces them, and she is Gopi. Later, she gives them the prasad.
Rohan - Mumma, I want to have two, as it's too tasty.
Jaggi - Even, I want two.
Gopi - Jaggi ji, you will only get one. You have high sugar.
Jaggi - Hmm!
They laughs. Jaggi after sometime leaves for his work in the diamond factory.
*****
Purvi is reading a book, when her best friend's Priya and Sudha came to meet her. They hugs each other. Just then, Gopi too came there, and greets her.
Priya & Sudha - Hello Aunty!
Gopi - Hello beta, how are you?
Priya & Sudha - We are good aunty.
Gopi - You two talk, I will send snacks.
Purvi - Oh, thank you Mom!
Gopi smiles and walks away from there.
They talks on trivial things, until Sudha nudges Priya to bring on the thing which they came for.
Priya - You were asking, why Riya is not coming to college from 2 weeks. I got to know why..
Purvi - Why so?
Priya - She got married two week's back.
Sudha - And..
Purvi - Oh, she didn't invite us not told us anything. And what Sudha?
Priya - Hmm! But we also got to know, something more shocking. I can't believe it still happens.
Sudha - Yes, it's very shocking but it's true.
Purvi - What?
Priya - Her groom bought her for 4 lakhs, and her parents only did her bidding.
Purvi - Oh my God! That's so horrible. Today also it happens! Her parents should be send behind the bars, let's call the cops. This is so bad, poor girl her life has been ruined completely. And what is her groom's age?
Priya - Yes, you are right! He is 10 year's elder than her.
Purvi - Oh my God!
She dials the number to call the cops, but Gopi takes her cell away.
Gopi - She has got married, and she is happy in her life. And you three, better concentrate on your final year exams, rather than talking about this nonsense.
Priya - But aunty, how can you..
Sudha - Aunty, we should voice it out..
Purvi - Yes, Mom this is so horrible and you are supporting it..
Gopi - This is not something new. It happens, and we have that ritual too. You better not fuss about it!
They doesn't say anything to her, as they are shocked, seeing Gopi so calmly supporting it. At that moment, Naina came there.
Naina - Hello di!
Priya & Sudha - Hey!
Gopi smiles.
Sudha - Anyways, we also came to tell you about the fair tomorrow. We are just so excited!
Purvi - Oh wow, that's really exciting.
'Oh, wow I am coming too di,' Kavya said coming there.
Naina - Cool, me too coming.
'We too,' Rohan and Preeti said together.
Gopi - Okay, okay, you all go but take care of the time.
Priya - Oh, wow thank you aunty!
Sudha - Thank you so much aunty!
Gopi - It's okay, beta!
*****
Gopi meets a Priest in a temple, who shows her some boy's pictures for Purvi, but she doesn't like anyone, who is suitable for her daughter.
Priest - Don't worry, in one or two day's I will have more prospective groom's pictures, according to the choice of your daughter.
Gopi smiles at him and thanks him.
Nice start dear
Loved it
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😌🙏🤗
Wow such a Fantastic Start
Nice family scene.poor jaggi is diabetic.Purvi is shocked n sad about the aged groom buying a girl.but I guess purvi will face the same situation.guess gopi wants to get purvi married soon.perfect pics.
Thank you so much dear😳Glad you loved it❤️Yeah surely, will update very soon😊
Originally posted by: taahir004
Wow such a Fantastic Start
Thank you so much dear😳
Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Nice family scene.poor jaggi is diabetic.Purvi is shocked n sad about the aged groom buying a girl.but I guess purvi will face the same situation.guess gopi wants to get purvi married soon.perfect pics.
Thank you so much😳Yes, she will soon be facing it too😭Gopi is finding a match for her😊
PART 2 -
Gopi, Jaggi, Purvi, Naina, Kavya, Preeti and Rohan are having dinner, when Gopi tells them about her meeting the priest, and he telling to find the best match for Purvi. Purvi blushes, as her younger siblings teases her.
Jaggi - I have another good news..
Kavya - What's that Dad?
Preeti - Yes Papa, what's it about?
Jaggi - It's about my increment.
Gopi : Wow, that's so cool, Jaggi ji! I am so happy for you!
Purvi - Yes Dad, that's such a happy news.
Rohan - Yes, and this calls for celebration.
Jaggi - Indeed, and I remember, we had planned a picnic but we couldn't go, that time, so this time we will go. Happy?
Naina - Yes, very happy Dad!
Kavya - But when?
Jaggi - We will go, day after tomorrow.
Preeti - Wow! I am so excited.
Purvi - Dad, can Priya and Sudha also come with us?
Jaggi - Off course they can!
Purvi - Thank you Dad!
Gopi - After a long time, happiness has come our way.
Everyone agrees with her.
******
Purvi, Priya, Sudha, Naina, Kavya, Preeti and Rohan have arrived at the fair, and are exploring it. They are very happy, as there are some games too, and a perfect opportunity to shop too. Pammi and Anita are also there.
Pammi - If you weren't Viren's best friend, I wouldn't have come here. Of all the place, you got this middle class place in the world.
Anita - Di, now that we are here, chill. And we are here to meet the priest, I have heard a lot about him, and so I talked to him about Viren, and now we can show him his kundli, and know when he will get married.
Pammi - Okay! I just hope, he agrees with us in this matter at least. Where's your priest?
Anita - Di, he is there. Let's go!
Pammi - Okay!
They goes to meet the priest.
Meanwhile,
Preeti and Rohan are very excited to play games, so Kavya takes them there, while Naina is checking some traditional bangles. Purvi, Sudha and Priya are clicking selfies, and then moves towards checking some clay pots. They wants to make it, and requests the vendor, and he immediately agrees and teaches them.
******
Naina makes a wish in the well wisher pond, and after making the wish, she turns to go, when she gets shocked seeing a guy clicking her picture. She gets very angry on him.
Thankfully, for her Purvi, Sudha and Priya are nearby, as they too notices it. Purvi takes his camera from him, and Priya slaps him. He tries to explain, but in vain. Purvi and Sudha sees it's only nature's pictures, and not ang girl's.
Sudha - We are sorry, please forgive us.
Naina - Yes, please, we didn't knew this.
Priya - Why you didn't said anything?
He - I tried, as you can see, but I was ignored.
Naina - Oh! We are sorry. By the way, what's your name?
He - Its okay, I am Ritesh!
Purvi - Thats so sweet name. But we never saw you before.
Ritesh - Yes, I returned 2 day's back from UK.
He looks at Purvi sweetly.
Priya - Oh, so you are from UK! How interesting.
Ritesh - Yeah!
Sudha - I knew you are not a bad guy, as you seem sweet.
Ritesh - That I am, thanks!
In a short span of time, he becomes their good friend, and they exchanges numbers.
******
Purvi, Sudha and Priya are walking towards the ice cream stall, as the other's are there too including Ritesh. They are talking and having fun, so they doesn't notice Pammi and Anita coming from the opposite direction. As expected, Pammi and Purvi clashes with each other, and Pammi's cell almost gets ruined. Only a minor scratch.
Pammi - Can't you see.
Purvi - I am sorry, I didn't saw you coming. I will fix it, give me.
Anita - We can accept your sorry, but you can't afford to fix it.
Pammi - Exactly! It's very expensive and I can bet, even if you give your entire salary, if any, then too you can't afford it. Middle class people.
She smirks, and goes from there, with Anita.
Purvi - How dare she to insult me! I will fix her..
Sudha - Purvi, let it be, we are no match for them.
Priya - Yes, they are rich people, and for them, don't ruin your mood. See, everyone is waiting for us.
Purvi forces a smile, though at the back of her mind, she is hurt.
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